Rescue25 Posted January 20, 2015 Report Posted January 20, 2015 Boy you give them a chapter and they're still not satisfied. Bunch of bibliomaniacs. Only because he's so good and we had to wait so long for the last one. B Quote
Rescue25 Posted January 20, 2015 Report Posted January 20, 2015 @angeldust just read your latest on Skylar - I'll say the same to you as to mangus MORE PLEASE. B Quote
Rescue25 Posted January 20, 2015 Report Posted January 20, 2015 Bunch of bibliomaniacs. Damn right! But only to the good stuff. B Quote
angeldust Posted January 20, 2015 Report Posted January 20, 2015 I am writing another Reluctant Hero too as fangface inquired about it and because he asked I did to him what I did to a writer at xnx, I 'incorporated' some ripoffs of his characters into it. The damn things though won't allow me to end it as early as I wanted. :sigh: Quote
magusfang Posted January 20, 2015 Author Report Posted January 20, 2015 So I'm writing the next chapter and deciding if they get Gerald and Joanne back together or if the just flush the bitch and adopt him... Quote
Guest major marioc Posted January 20, 2015 Report Posted January 20, 2015 So I'm writing the next chapter and deciding if they get Gerald and Joanne back together or if the just flush the bitch and adopt him... Dont forget she did things to Evan as well and I'm really hopeimg David is who he says he is ie Cynthia related to June max and David but max not related to David sort of thing Quote
that-one-guy Posted January 20, 2015 Report Posted January 20, 2015 So I'm writing the next chapter and deciding if they get Gerald and Joanne back together or if the just flush the bitch and adopt him... Get rid off her in an 'accidental way' Quote
angeldust Posted January 20, 2015 Report Posted January 20, 2015 Hey there you go, accidently flush her down the toilet. COJimmyV 1 Quote
Rescue25 Posted January 20, 2015 Report Posted January 20, 2015 (edited) Dont forget she did things to Evan as well and I'm really hopeimg David is who he says he is ie Cynthia related to June max and David but max not related to David sort of thing Am I missing something here? I thought it had already been established that the "David" they rescued was not Max's dad but a rogue agent. B Edited January 20, 2015 by Rescue25 Quote
Rescue25 Posted January 20, 2015 Report Posted January 20, 2015 So I'm writing the next chapter and deciding if they get Gerald and Joanne back together or if the just flush the bitch and adopt him... How about they work with Gerald and get him enough balls to tell Joanne her "fun" is over and she gets mad and bails on her own? Only problem you have to solve is here memory of some of the "secrets" she has been exposed to. B Quote
that-one-guy Posted January 20, 2015 Report Posted January 20, 2015 Am I missing something here? I thought it had already been established that the "David" they rescued was not Max's dad but a rouge agent, B i think what they mean is he is cynthia's dad, but june was with someone else when max was concieved Quote
BigMan7307 Posted January 20, 2015 Report Posted January 20, 2015 Flush the bitch.... or maybe show her just how submissive she really is. Have Samantha as the "dom" in the relationship, one with a good heart, similar to how Jenna has been with Evan. Rescue25 1 Quote
magusfang Posted January 20, 2015 Author Report Posted January 20, 2015 i think what they mean is he is cynthia's dad, but june was with someone else when max was concieved Pell already identified "David" Quote
Guest major marioc Posted January 20, 2015 Report Posted January 20, 2015 Pell already identified "David"I bet agent pell would of identified Thomas Hart and Peter Umstead on the same watch lists also during ricks story about him knowing Davis he had no kids so is a small chance she identified David after a greenlight by the nonexistent brance of the CIA Quote
angeldust Posted January 20, 2015 Report Posted January 20, 2015 or maybe Rick is really David after govt. work on his face and identity. "How about they work with Gerald and get him enough balls to tell Joanne her "fun" is over and she gets mad and bails on her own? Only problem you have to solve is here memory of some of the "secrets" she has been exposed to. B" The secrets could be kept by having the Hit that Volstoy put out being executed before she could talk.(and the crowd goes wild & screams) Quote
COJimmyV Posted January 21, 2015 Report Posted January 21, 2015 (edited) I say flush Joanne. I don't think there's any changing that evil. It's not like she was an inherently good person who was brainwashed. Then again, maybe it should be left up to Gerald and Evan, AFTER they regain their spines. Getting back to David, perhaps he was always Peter Umstead to the government but David Johanson was an alias for secrecy sake. Maybe he's Cynthia's father but Rick is really Max's father. Only our evil genius knows for sure. Edited January 21, 2015 by COJimmyV Quote
Guest Bankers Trust Posted January 21, 2015 Report Posted January 21, 2015 Just a thought..... Now there are so many "families" involved, including the likes of Stella and Carol, Rick and Suzy plus, Marge and her daughters, Cynthia has now turned up, etc., together with all the children that have been adopted, would it be time to change to "Families in the Grass"? No difference from changing from BITG to GITG. Quote
Guest Missyg Posted January 21, 2015 Report Posted January 21, 2015 I have been following these two series from the start. They started out really good, but lately you have too many story lines going at one time. Mind you I like the story lines but I think it would be better if each chapter concentrated on one story line at a time. This bouncing back and forth between story lines takes away from your fantastic writing. Its just a thought. Quote
Rescue25 Posted January 22, 2015 Report Posted January 22, 2015 I have been following these two series from the start. They started out really good, but lately you have too many story lines going at one time. Mind you I like the story lines but I think it would be better if each chapter concentrated on one story line at a time. This bouncing back and forth between story lines takes away from your fantastic writing. Its just a thought. But that would take the fun out of it. Unless you, "I", get a little of it in each chapter I loose track of the players and relationships. B Quote
magusfang Posted January 22, 2015 Author Report Posted January 22, 2015 Don't worry, everything will start coming to a head soon, I see the resolution in about ten chapters. A lot of the characters will fall by the wayside as the story ends and before the next book starts, as that crappy movie said "There will be blood!"t Quote
magusfang Posted January 22, 2015 Author Report Posted January 22, 2015 Ok, chapter 40 is up for GITG Rescue25 1 Quote
that-one-guy Posted January 22, 2015 Report Posted January 22, 2015 Ok, chapter 40 is up for GITG God damnit, i have school now :'( Quote
COJimmyV Posted January 22, 2015 Report Posted January 22, 2015 Nice! Glad to see Cynthia is really Max's sister but not sure I like Amy getting a hold of her so soon! Like the backstory on Gerald and Joanne but I still want to flush her, unless she actually DOES have redeeming qualities that none of us can see. Quote
angeldust Posted January 22, 2015 Report Posted January 22, 2015 Maybe they will be amongst the 'by the waysiders'and 'blood letting'. Quote
that-one-guy Posted January 22, 2015 Report Posted January 22, 2015 Great chapter, cant wait to see how Cynthia developes Quote
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