George Glass' Review Responses -- Original Fiction

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl”

From JayDee on September 02, 2019

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Since part 6 is the final chapter - COMPLETE tag needed? :p - I'll go for a 100% spoiler free review.

Good catch! I added the tag.

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Fuckin' loved it. Great finale to end on. I'm sure some readers guesed where it was going, but I didn't!

I love the little ways you've tied this in with the previous parts and the way the story of the best day of Mia's life relies on a past part.

I really tried to connect this chapter to the previous ones to give it that “culmination of everything” feel.

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The sex is incredibly hot, helped on hugely by the dialogue and also for the main central scene the overriding theme of what's happening and to who.

I liked the idea of Mia finding herself turned on by something unexpected, given how well she normally understands herself in that sense.

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Finally, the proper actual ending is just all kinds of gooey sweet and not in a smutty way. I loved it!

Great work there GeorgeGlass.

 

Thank you! I didn’t want to end in a “and then it just kept going on like that” kind of way; given that the penultimate chapter was about her worst day, which was pretty terrible, I wanted her best day to be correspondingly great. 

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Flesh”

From ToddHoward on September 10, 2019

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Could have been better if the ages for the girls was younger,

I see where you’re coming from, but I’m going for a young-boy-dominates-older-girls/women thing in this story. 

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though I would have settled for making this furry porn. 

This story is meant to be scifi, rather than straight-up otherworldly.

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Speaking of though, do you ever plan to make another furry incest minor fic like a Daughters Duty? You know, that one where a little anthro bear girls gets groomed to be fucked by her father who is in a rut and stuff? That was like your best fic and really hot.

Thank you! I don’t have anything exactly like that planned, but you might like one of my upcoming stories (working title “Buy One, Get One Free”), in which a guy starts dating a woman with a cute little daughter who is gradually drawn into the couple’s sexual activities.

Edited September 12, 2019 by GeorgeGlass

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Flesh”

From InvidiaRed on September 11, 2019

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Interesting concept. <3

Thanks!

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Had a similar one . Might write on it eventually.

Hmm...

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Goldilocked”

From JayDee on September 15, 2019

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I love that this doesn't have any ages more closely defined than teenage, because I read it through and envisioned her a least 16 and whatever that is in bear years for Baby. 

That was deliberate. I wanted readers to be able to decide for themselves where in the "teen" range Amber falls.

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I also love that it's a brilliantly written morally repugnant (best part!) take on the old fairy tale. 

Thank you!

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The physical descriptions are just fantastic, with some really rough detailed description that's so hot, especially when Daddy is earning the story that Anal tag for the first time. 

Glad you liked that bit and didn't mind that I didn't describe that part in great detail. I felt that doing so would make the story too repetitive.

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Also little details like what they leave her with at the end, and her thoughts about her name, 

Thanks! I wanted it to be clear that while Amber is free, she'll never really be free again.

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and the way she is fed, and like the possibility of pregnancy (I assume half human/half bear would come out looking like Seth Rogan). 

*rifles through Seth Rogan's garbage for a DNA sample*

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I did at one point imagine Daddy Bear humming the 'bear necessities" song. 

'kay.

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Any negatives? I guess that Mama Bear didn't get a little more physical fun/involvement, but the balance was probably about right.

I couldn't come up with anything Mama Bear might do that would top her almost smothering Amber to death with her pussy.

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I'd say it was well worth the 4 years work!

Thanks again!

[GeorgeGlass]

From Mamacita on September 15, 2019

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Great writing! Made the story even more fun to read.

Thank you! Quality is important to me, especially when I’m writing about anthro-on-human gang rape.

[JayDee]

4 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:

Re: “Goldilocked”

From JayDee on September 15, 2019

That was deliberate. I wanted readers to be able to decide for themselves where in the "teen" range Amber falls.

Works great! I’m sure some folks had very different mental images to mine, but we can all enjoy it in our own ways

[Guest MiaLover69]

On 9/2/2019 at 5:07 PM, GeorgeGlass said:

Re: “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl”

From JayDee on September 02, 2019

Good catch! I added the tag.

I really tried to connect this chapter to the previous ones to give it that “culmination of everything” feel.

I liked the idea of Mia finding herself turned on by something unexpected, given how well she normally understands herself in that sense.

Thank you! I didn’t want to end in a “and then it just kept going on like that” kind of way; given that the penultimate chapter was about her worst day, which was pretty terrible, I wanted her best day to be correspondingly great. 

It was a fantastic story in it’s entirety. 

I just want to know if a possible sequel will be made?

Thank you

[Guest MiaLover69]

On 9/2/2019 at 5:07 PM, GeorgeGlass said:

Re: “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl”

From JayDee on September 02, 2019

Good catch! I added the tag.

I really tried to connect this chapter to the previous ones to give it that “culmination of everything” feel.

I liked the idea of Mia finding herself turned on by something unexpected, given how well she normally understands herself in that sense.

Thank you! I didn’t want to end in a “and then it just kept going on like that” kind of way; given that the penultimate chapter was about her worst day, which was pretty terrible, I wanted her best day to be correspondingly great. 

It was a fantastic story in it’s entirety. 

I just want to know if a possible sequel will be made?

Thank you

[GeorgeGlass]

20 hours ago, Guest MiaLover69 said:

It was a fantastic story in it’s entirety. 

Thanks!

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I just want to know if a possible sequel will be made?

Thank you

 

I don’t have any immediate plans for a sequel, but if I’m ever struck by a great idea for one, I might use it.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Auntie’s Home”

From Metamorphic on October 01, 2019

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I love this ending and how he took his friend mother

Thanks! I got that idea from another reader, Hungry-Orange-Squirrel, who wrote “Soon he's not going to be satisfied with just two milfs, Calvin's mom might become his next victim.”

[GeorgeGlass]

From The World's Concubine on October 15, 2019

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I really liked this. I loved the sexual symbiosis between the boy, his mother and his aunt. 

Thanks! It did work out rather well for all of them, didn’t it?

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I have to ask, though, who was exploiting who? The boy obviously thought he was in control but, given that the female libido is so much more powerful and demanding to be satisfied, the women seemd to be exploiting him more than the other way around!

Well, that’s the interesting thing about dom-sub relationships: It’s never entirely clear who is really in control. Which is a theme I enjoy playing with.

Thanks for the comments!

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Wild Side”

From Lady Freelove on October 26, 2019

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This is such a beautiful, special story! I love a good father/daughter story!

Thanks! I really enjoy writing these two characters.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Everything She Needs”

From Lady Freelove on October 26, 2019

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There is something so special about the love between a father and daughter. I love the beautiful way you portray it here. 

Thank you!

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I try to express my philosopy, my lifestyle and my own beliefs about life, sex and love in my work, but you have a way with expressing these things that eludes me. My husband says I'm too critical of my own writing but when I read stories like this, I can see that I have much to learn about writing stories.

I think a lot of it is (a) practice and (b) experimenting with new ideas. When I thought about writing “Wild Side,” I tried to think of what would make it more than just another father-daughter story, and then I thought about their having two levels of communication – the things they say, and the meaning beneath them. It was an experiment, but I think it worked.

Thanks for the review. And keep on writing!

Edited October 28, 2019 by GeorgeGlass

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Wishful”

From Jomahawk2694 on November 20, 2019

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And thus it begins to bleed into the real world, like an X-Rated Assassin's Creed

Never played that, but I'll take your word for it.

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Both the Snowdrift and Alice lemons were hot as hell. 

Thanks! Writing each half was a very different experience from the other. With Neva's part, there was the constant challenge of figuring out exactly what she would and could do to please Jace with her feet and legs. Writing Alice's part, in contrast, was just pure salacious fun.

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Really really glad this WASN'T one of those hentais where the girl is reluctant the entire time. 

That's not really going to be a thing in this story.

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It's really nice to see both parties, Jace and Alice,totally into the act of fucking each other into a puddle despite being relatives.

I see Alice as someone who considers introspection and facing her own issues to be an important part of learning to become a therapist. So she's aware of her own incestuous desires and has made peace with them. 

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And HOLY FUCK you pushed every button I had with the Neva leg workout

So glad you liked that. 

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Already can't wait for the next one!

Well, you're going to have to wait a bit; as usual, I've got nineteen -- okay, twenty right now -- other stories that are clamoring for my attention, too. (Did I mention that one of them has the working title of "Waltney World"?)

Edited November 21, 2019 by GeorgeGlass

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Wishful”

From Fairy-Slayer on November 20, 2019

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First off, even once the magic began to bloom I was still miffed that Mrs. Vogel had stiffed Jace on that job; however after the latter half of chapter 4 I think he made out like a bandit. (If Emmaline shows up in his kingdom I'm sure he will thank her properly…) Oddly enough, I'm nearly as happy for his personal business successes in the real world as for the fun he's been having in the other world, but this last encounter blows all that away. (And for a while I thought the only side effect would be that the women in his life would be impressed at how much happier he was to see them all the time now.)

The side effects have only begun. The question now is, how much can the Wishful bleed into the real world? 

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So yes, starting off with his real-world life was a great way to lead into the more exceptional adventures in the other land, especially with the hints of desire that apparently already existed in his home life. Adding a bit of extra spark with Rosemary and her apparent snobbishness played out well, both for discovering the real-world truth and also remembering how Lady Aliss also helped convince Duchess Rose of her brother's immense capabilities – ample opportunity for more blending of worlds, or at the very least an excellent tease.

I had a ton of fun writing that chapter. There's no substitute for hog-wild male fantasy.

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Of course there are still issues of state to deal with, though apparently a lot of that gets done when Jace is in the real world, and though "It's good to be the king!" rings true more and more with every chapter, I'm pretty sure your skill with political tension (demonstrated in other stories) will add plenty of interest as well. 

We'll be seeing a good bit of politics in the next chapter.

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Oh, not that the deliciously written sex scenes aren't pretty darned awesome enough, and that you make great light use of various fetishes without overdoing any of them. 

Some of the fetish stuff is not what I would come up with on my own. But stretching my limits is part of why I do the odd request story.

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Even the half-animal characters are plenty human even with their striking physical and cultural traits.

I'm enjoying the cultural stuff. I imagine the kain living in loose bands like the Comanches, humans living in discrete kingdoms like medieval Europeans, and the Benata having a vast bureaucracy like the feudal Chinese. And bunnies in warrens.

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BTW, the mechanics of Jace's world-shifting reminds me a lot of the 2009 miniseries version of The Prisoner. Any chance that had an influence on this tale? 

They remade The Prisoner? This is the first I've heard of it. It can't be weirder than the original, can it?

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Regardless, thanks for all the wonderfully sexy fun.

Thanks for the review!

Edited November 21, 2019 by GeorgeGlass

[FairySlayer]

1 hour ago, GeorgeGlass said:

They remade The Prisoner? This is the first I've heard of it. It can't be weirder than the original, can it?

The 2009 version. was actually less stupid-weird but perhaps a bit more creepy, though it still was heavy on the jarring aspects at times (especially at first, IIRC). The battle of wills between Ian McKellen and Jim Caviezel played out great throughout. Best of all, while still bizarre, it had a satisfying conclusion that actually made sense (in the realm of the show). I actually liked it a lot.

…but then again I also really liked Rubicon and Perception, so take any of my TV recommendations with a grain of salt. Also it's probably not great as fanfic source material because all the balloon fetishists will complain if you don't do enough with Rover.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Wishful”

From Sithlordshades on November 21, 2019

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Now that confessions of a dickgirl is done as well as country summer this story is the one have been following closest.  

Actually, “Country Summer” has one chapter left to go. But I have a lot of writing to do on it.

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Love the way the character is developing and the way the story is going.  Can't wait for the next installment.

Glad you’re enjoying it. Thanks for the comments!

[GeorgeGlass]

From JayDee on November 21, 2019

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Chapter 4 -

Ok, I've been really curious about the approach you'd take with the dog and it didn't disappoint, but then you followed it up with the hottest scene so far. Holy fuck that was a good ending. There's one line there spoken to Jace that is one of the best lines I've seen in porn, it's kinda simple but just works so well. (it's the one where he reacts with an idiotic grin/sounds good).

 

I had a lot of fun writing the Jace/Alice scene. As soon as I had the idea of Alice daring Jace to figure out what turns her on, I felt like I really had a lock on the whole scene..

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Back from that after the approach with the antho bunnies I figured something similar with the dog, but the way you handled it with Neva's way of viewing him and personal admiration/love for him was really quite sweet. The way she shows her emotions with actions rather than having the words and that.

On a non sexual content thing, the little story near the start of how they got the rescue Snowdrift in the first place and got her treated and that was also pretty darn sweet.

 

The idea of Snowdrift being a rescue dog and therefore eternally grateful to Jace came from Jomahawk. Then I had the fun job of figuring out how what the Wishful equivalent of that relationship would be.

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Great stuff!

Thank you, and thanks for the review!

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi, it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and ask how are you doing. I also wanted to let you know that I’ve read chapter 4 of ‘Wishful’ and I really loved it, I really loved the part where Jace dreams about Nova, I thought that was really hot  I also loved the part where he and Alice have sex with each other, I can’t wait to see what happens next, and I also wonder who that was climbing up the stairs. Anyway, hope you’re doing well, good luck with your stories and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night  

[GeorgeGlass]

Thanks, SWP1. Glad you liked it. 

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Conscious Sedation”

From toddhoward314 on November 23, 2019

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"The hem of her long blue dress is millimeters..."

Boo! This story has an American medical professional in a non-professional situation honestly using the metric system! This is the worst stroke story ever! Unsubscribed! DX 

 

If that’s the biggest criticism you can come up with for this story, I will take that as a compliment.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Conscious Sedation”

From Fairy-Slayer on November 23, 2019

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HOW DARE YOU! Mixing metric and imperial units in the same story…! Actually, using millimeters to specify very tiny distances and inches for longer things makes perfect sense. 

Yeah; "a sixteenth of an inch" doesn't seem to carry quite the same weight.

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(Full disclosure: I intentionally used both systems in a certain Ruby Gloom story once, but for much weirder reasons.)

Ruby Gloom is a fly, right? You'd think they'd take advantage of every tiny unit of measure.

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In any case this is a fantastically sexy yet scary story: The visual and even tactile imagery are amazing and make it easy to understand why the doctor would want to pay such special attention to his little patients; but then its scary to think of what can happen when you or a loved one has to trust so deeply in a stranger who may turn out to be your friendly neighborhood psychopath. 

Yup. IMO, in just about every profession, there are people there for the right reasons, and people there for the wrong ones.

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Then that little exchange at the end suggests just how many like-minded types have risen to positions of such trust.

Indeed.

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(Heh, and most people are only worried about the hospital billing & insurance fucking them up the ass.)

"They fuck you in the hospital!" --Leo Getz

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BTW, was the use of Frozen panties a paid product placement for just-released sequel? Otherwise just be glad you didn't ask me to beta this because I'd have added him crying out, “Let it go - Let it GOooOH GOD!” as he ejaculated. (Not really, because he probably stopped watching the movie after the girls had grown up.)

If Bob Iger knew what I've been doing with his company's intellectual property, he'd probably make me disappear.

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Anyway, thanks for another fun and really interesting exploration of sexual deviancy as this professional explores his patient's openings.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[FairySlayer]

8 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:

Ruby Gloom is a fly, right?

Nope. Ruby Gloom is the happiest girl in the world: an odd yet sweet little redhead who lives in a big house with her friends: a Goth Loli banshee, a loli cyclops, a two-headed boy(s), a skeleton, a raven, a bat, her pet kitty, and her favorite doll. She's quite a doll herself… especially according to one popular fan theory.

Maybe you're thinking of The Buzz on Maggie?

[GeorgeGlass]

On 11/24/2019 at 4:50 PM, FairySlayer said:

Nope. Ruby Gloom is the happiest girl in the world: an odd yet sweet little redhead who lives in a big house with her friends: a Goth Loli banshee, a loli cyclops, a two-headed boy(s), a skeleton, a raven, a bat, her pet kitty, and her favorite doll. She's quite a doll herself… especially according to one popular fan theory.

Maybe you're thinking of The Buzz on Maggie?

Maybe. But Ruby Gloom suddenly sounds much more interesting to me. May have to go looking for it sometime. 

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “The Ball Pit”

From Lady Freelove on November 26, 2019

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This story is very disturbing.

Yes; it’s really meant as erotic horror. Honestly, I’m surprised you read this one.