George Glass' Review Responses -- Original Fiction

[Thundercloud]

2 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:

From Thundercloud on June 18, 2019

That's fair. Part of why I added the material about the details that Mia wished she could remember was to give readers who are into the rapey stuff a few more tidbits so they wouldn't feel entirely cheated (as well as to give Mia a reason to feel guilty). But I also didn't want to freak out other readers by getting crazy explicit. 

I very much liked her brutal thoughts afterward and thinks it felt very in character.

2 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:

In any case, the next (and final) chapter will come back to Mia's usual brand of naughtiness -- with a bit of a twist.

I am looking forward to it.

Maybe you can save my idea for sexual torment for the future story.  I think you would make great use of fermones going haywire.

[GeorgeGlass]

I have actually written a "pheromones gone wild" story before: It's a Loud House fanfic called "Whoops," in which Lisa accidentally releases a synthetic pheromone in the house, causing all the girls to start madly lusting after Lincoln.

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi, it’s me, and this is my review for the final chapter of ‘Little Rose’ so I hope you like it and let me know what you think of it  So, first off, I want to say how shocked I am at how much time has passed since you first announced that you were working on this story, it’s like what happened with ‘The More, the Merrier’, I am really surprised at how much progress you have made with this story  The next thing is into the final chapter itself, so I was excited when I started reading the chapter, one of the big surprises of this chapter was that Opal and Evie has a dog, and I was wondering if it there would be a part of the story where it would be like Midas having sex with one of the girls in ‘The More, the Merrier’ and it turns out I was right  The next thing I loved was when Rose’s dad told Opal about how he began to have sex with Rose and how Opal appeared to be turned on by this, I thought it was great that he met someone who enjoys listening to something very sexual like that  Next is one my favorite parts of this chapter and story in general, when Rose’s dad has sex with Evie, I thought it was really hot and sweet that he fucked another little girl, and I liked how Opal played with Rose, while they watched  the next part that I loved was when Rose had sex with Buddy, I thought that was really hot and when Evie started to kiss Rose after that, I thought that was really hot and sweet  The next thing is another one of my favorite parts of this story, is when Rose’s dad and Opal have sex doggystyle while Rose and Evie watch, I thought that was really hot, my only disappointment was that there wasn’t a more extensive scene when the two had sex, I would liked to see what Rose’s dad and Opal thought while they had sex. The next thing is I love how Rose’s dad teaches Opal and Evie ‘The egg game’ and I love they have lots of sex when visiting each other and I also loved it when they had normal fun as well, instead of just sex,  and then one of my absolute favorite parts of this whole story is when Rose’s dad asked Opal to marry him, I nearly squealed in delight, and I was so happy for them, this is what I love about your stories, they are not only hot but full of heartwarming moments and this definitely is a heartwarming moment. And now, the end, I love how they spend their honeymoon together with Rose, Evie, and Buddy in the cabin home having non-stop sex with other  and the very ending part where Opal reveals to Rose’s dad that they don’t have to stop at having two kids and how Rose’s dad then stated that they all lived happily ever after, that was such a sweet and beautiful ending to this amazing, hot, heartwarming story which now I can confirm to my opinion that this is my number one favorite of all of your ‘Original fiction’ stories  So I hope that you have enjoyed reading this review, and let me know what you think of it when you can, anyway, hope you’re doing well, good luck with your stories, and Hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a nice day  

[GeorgeGlass]

On 6/30/2019 at 5:22 PM, Guest Star Wars player 1 said:

Hi, it’s me, and this is my review for the final chapter of ‘Little Rose’ so I hope you like it and let me know what you think of it  So, first off, I want to say how shocked I am at how much time has passed since you first announced that you were working on this story, it’s like what happened with ‘The More, the Merrier’, I am really surprised at how much progress you have made with this story  

It does blow my mind how long it takes me to complete some of these multi-chapter stories. Little Rose took a year – which actually makes it one of the faster ones! I’ve been working on Country Summer since August 2015, and let’s not even get into Delta Delta Delta.

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The next thing is into the final chapter itself, so I was excited when I started reading the chapter, one of the big surprises of this chapter was that Opal and Evie has a dog, and I was wondering if it there would be a part of the story where it would be like Midas having sex with one of the girls in ‘The More, the Merrier’ and it turns out I was right  

After that bit in one of the earlier chapters where Rose gets excited by the idea of being fucked by men, boys, AND dogs at the beach, I really wanted to pay that off. 

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The next thing I loved was when Rose’s dad told Opal about how he began to have sex with Rose and how Opal appeared to be turned on by this, I thought it was great that he met someone who enjoys listening to something very sexual like that  Next is one my favorite parts of this chapter and story in general, when Rose’s dad has sex with Evie, I thought it was really hot and sweet that he fucked another little girl, and I liked how Opal played with Rose, while they watched  the next part that I loved was when Rose had sex with Buddy, I thought that was really hot and when Evie started to kiss Rose after that, I thought that was really hot and sweet  The next thing is another one of my favorite parts of this story, is when Rose’s dad and Opal have sex doggystyle while Rose and Evie watch, I thought that was really hot,

Having additional participants in the sexcapades creates a lot of new opportunities, especially for voyeurism. I wanted them all to be having a good time, and an easy way to do that was to make them all enjoy watching one another while taking breaks from their own sexual activities.

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my only disappointment was that there wasn’t a more extensive scene when the two had sex, I would liked to see what Rose’s dad and Opal thought while they had sex.

When I wrote this chapter, I had a lot of trouble at first because I couldn’t decide exactly what ought to be in it. Then I asked myself what the essential sex acts in this chapter would be, and I decided on Randy fucking Evie and Rose getting dog-fucked. Everything else was pretty much meant as gravy, because I didn’t want to get so far into it that it made the chapter as long as all eight preceding chapters combined.

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The next thing is I love how Rose’s dad teaches Opal and Evie ‘The egg game’ and I love they have lots of sex when visiting each other and I also loved it when they had normal fun as well, instead of just sex,  and then one of my absolute favorite parts of this whole story is when Rose’s dad asked Opal to marry him, I nearly squealed in delight, and I was so happy for them, this is what I love about your stories, they are not only hot but full of heartwarming moments and this definitely is a heartwarming moment. And now, the end, I love how they spend their honeymoon together with Rose, Evie, and Buddy in the cabin home having non-stop sex with other  and the very ending part where Opal reveals to Rose’s dad that they don’t have to stop at having two kids and how Rose’s dad then stated that they all lived happily ever after, that was such a sweet and beautiful ending to this amazing, hot, heartwarming story which now I can confirm to my opinion that this is my number one favorite of all of your ‘Original fiction’ stories  

Thank you! When I was trying to figure out how this story was going to end (which I did not do before I started writing it), I tried to think of what could give Randy and Rose’s relationship a new direction and new possibilities for the future. Having them meet two kindred spirits – plus a dog – seemed like a good way to do that. Plus I wanted Randy to have another loli to fuck.

In any case, I’m very glad you enjoyed Little Rose, and I thank you for all of your comments. 

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: Little Rose

From FlutteringWings on July 01, 2019

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Obviously, I loved this last chapter. It's probably my fav! Thanks for updating and finishing this delicious story. I wasn't sure how I felt about Opal and Evie when they first appeared in the story but I'm so glad they joined the family and brought their dog along with them. That was so hot and I can understand why Rose was so happy. The f/f scenes were yummy as well. Opal and Evie teaching Rose how to pleasure a woman....well worth it.

I knew it was a bit of a risk adding two new major characters so late in the story, because it could be seen as jumping the shark. But I felt that in order to give Randy and Rose a direction for the future and a way to live happily ever after, they needed to find some kindred spirits. Plus a bonus dog.

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I can just imagine all the fun this family will have when Opal is pregnant and horny or when daddy 'accidentally' knocks up his little girls.

Aw, don’t go putting sequel ideas in my head. I’ve got more story ideas than I can write up as it is.

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Wonderful family. I'm jealous.

Me too. Sadly, being their creator doesn’t mean that I get to join in their games.

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Thanks for sharing yet another great story with us!

You’re welcome. Thank you for the review!

Edited July 2, 2019 by GeorgeGlass

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: Little Rose

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From Metamorphic on July 01, 2019

A nice happy ending

Glad you liked it.

Edited July 2, 2019 by GeorgeGlass

[Guest MiaLover69]

Hi,

Just want to say i’m loving all the different stories you do.

Also i’m wondering when roughly the last chapter of Mia the dickgirl will be released?

Thank you and keep up the good work!

[GeorgeGlass]

MiaLover69, glad you’re enjoying the story. The sixth and final chapter is in the works, but I really have no idea when it will be ready, because with the 20 stories I’m always working on at any given time, I have to go where inspiration takes me. So it could be next week, or it could be three months from now. 

In any case, thanks for the comment!

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: Country Summer

From FlutteringWings on July 02, 2019

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Fun story! There's a bit of everything here. Love that. 

Thanks! I started writing this story with absolutely no plan except that I wanted there to be a great variety of sexual activities.

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I especially liked chapter 3. There's just something about two boys...brothers...getting down to business. So sexy but oh so taboo (unfortunately). 

I don't write a lot of m/m stuff, but when I do it's usually furry and always involves young characters. 

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Geraldine and Uncle Jeph....that was spicy. A big, older man having sex with a young girl always gets me going. 

Yeah, uber-masculine man fucking young girl does it for me, too.

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Another part of the story that I enjoyed (surprisingly enough since I hadn't paid this character much attention up until now) was Aunt Maisy pulling down her panties for Ben. The fact that an older woman can also get her needs met by a teen boy was sweet. I'm glad Ben wanted it just as much as she did and was able to give her what she clearly needed. I would love to see more Maisy action in future chapters. I could easily picture Aunt Maisy bending over for her sons or even Geraldine (since the little miss seems to like girl on girl action so much all of a sudden). 

From the beginning, I was uncertain about whether and how I wanted to involve Maisy in the action. By the time I got to this chapter (the third-to-last), I realized that if I was going to do anything sexual with Maisy, I'd better get to it. And then the idea of her scene with Ben came to me.

FYI, as most country people do, Maisy has mixed feelings about incest. Like Jeph, she's probably only fucked the boys a couple of times each. 

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Franny was an interesting addition, along with Bobby Joe. It's a pity Bobby Joe wasn't invited to Franny's birthday party. I'm sure all the teenage boys would have loved a piece of his young ass. Although, from the last chapter, it seems like they will already have their hands full with Franny. 

Which is pretty much why Bobby Joe wasn't invited. Can't have anyone competing with the birthday girl for anal attention.

I'm imagining this bit of dialogue:
Earnest: Think we oughta invite Bobby Joe?
Mike: Not unless he’s suddenly learned to ‘preciate the supply side of ass-fuckin', no.

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She seems very slutty and outgoing. Geraldine will probably learn a lot from her and loosen up even more. Just reading about these two girls making out was very sensual, so I can only imagine how hot and carnal it would be if they actually had more alone time together. 

Well, then, stay tuned.

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Looking forward to the next chapter (Miss Franny's birthday gangbang or orgy) and would be more than happy to see even more of Aunt Maisy and Bobby Joe in future chapters, along with more Mike + Earnest action. 

We're done with Bobby Joe, but there might be a teensy bit of Maisy-action in the last chapter. And definitely some Mike + Earnest-action. And a bunch of Mike + Earnest + Geraldine action.

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Thanks for updating! Your stories are the best. So kinky and taboo....just what I love!

Thank you, and thanks for the review!

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “You Get What You Pay For”

From InkHeart17 on July 08, 2019

Before I begin responding to your comments, let me thank you for being the first person brave enough and/or pervy enough to review this story.

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Okay from a fantasy aspect of really fucked up sex, I adore your stories. I revisit your page all the time. 

Thank you! "Fucked up sex" is definitely among my favorite literary genres, and I'm happy to share my stories with others who enjoy it.

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This story should not be sexy, but it is. 

I feel that way about a lot of my stories.

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Pete mentioning his own childhood escapades with his sister and neighbor girl are really the cherry on top as he watches his offspring follow in his "hoofsteps." 

I love writing a porn-story within a porn-story. It adds more eroticism while simultaneously revealing something about the character who is telling the story.

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My clit is pulsing from this. 

As I always say, an involuntary physiological response is the sincerest form of flattery.

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Can we see a second chapter where Pete and Brian organize a playdate for Harry with the aforementioned cousin and little Trina both at once? Camera included, of course.

Oooh, that's not a bad idea. I'm pretty tied up with other stories right now, but I wouldn't rule out the possibility of revisiting this one.

FYI, forthcoming stories that might particularly interest you are "Goldilocked" and "The Ball Pit." I expect to post “The Ball Pit” some time this week.

[Guest BigBen93]

Hello,

I love your work and every detail you put in.

I know your busy with all the different stories your working on right now, but I was wondering when the final chapter of Mia will be released?

Thank you.

 

[GeorgeGlass]

Glad you like my stuff. I hope to finish chapter 6 of Mia in the next 2-3 months. I know that sounds like a while, but I have several other stories that have gone longer without an update than Mia has. On the other hand, it’s always possible that inspiration will strike and I’ll binge-write the rest of the chapter in a night.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: Wishful

From Jomahawk2694 on July 26, 2019

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Wow. Wow wow wow!!! That was so perfect and even better than I imagined! Having the bunnies be the castle entertainment was a brilliant addition!!

When you said that the rabbits would "finish each other's sentences," it made me think of the Dee Dees (Harley Quinn's granddaughters) from Batman Beyond. That gave me the idea of making them clowns and acrobats. 

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ok, I’ll stop yelling now. But seriously, thank you! This is coming along so much better than I ever hoped. 

Joma

I'm so glad! Hope you'll like the next chapter just as well.  

Edited July 27, 2019 by GeorgeGlass

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: Wishful

From JayDee on July 26, 2019

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Part 3 –

That was pretty fuckin’ furry. I liked it! The way you did the dialogue with the sisters was cool, definitely had a different-from-usual-human feel to it, which makes sense with their nature. I really liked their playfulness during the sex, too, with that whole trying to get to their turn idea.

I had to give each sister something to do when Jace was fucking the other one, and since the bunnies were literally born and bred to be performers, I figured they'd each put on a show to keep things moving along.

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That Cottontail Special, well, I don’t think I can recall reading anything quite like that in 20+ years of internet porn. Really well executed and the money shot build up was hot as hell.

Jomahawk, for whom I'm writing this story as a thank-you for all his beta reading, gets the credit for that idea. I just came up with the name.

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Final thought was the ending... holy shit! Gonna be interesting to see where that goes

I sure hope so.

Thanks for the review!

Edited July 27, 2019 by GeorgeGlass

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi, it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I’ve just read chapter 3 of ‘Wishful’ and I really loved it, it’s been a while since I’ve read this story but I was wondering when a new chapter was going to be released, So on to the chapter, I loved the hot scene where Jace has sex with the two bunny girls, I thought that was really hot  and I was really excited about the ending, I wonder what’s gonna happen with Jace and his mom in the next chapter  Anyway, I hope your doing well, oh and I have a question or two if you don’t mind, 1. How are you doing with ‘The More, the Merrier’ ? I’m really excited to what happens with Coltrane and the Hiranos and Everyone else but no rush  2. What was up with the whole ‘Your Password is Hacked’ thing? I hope you’re password wasn’t hacked or anything, if it is hacked, maybe you can fix it by rebooting it ? Let me know when you have the time, anyway, hope you’re doing well, good luck with your stories, and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night.

[JayDee]

1 hour ago, GeorgeGlass said:

Jomahawk, for whom I'm writing this story as a thank-you for all his beta reading, gets the credit for that idea. I just came up with the name.

Well well done to them then!

Edited July 27, 2019 by JayDee

[GeorgeGlass]

On 7/26/2019 at 10:51 PM, Guest Star Wars player 1 said:

Hi, it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I’ve just read chapter 3 of ‘Wishful’ and I really loved it, it’s been a while since I’ve read this story but I was wondering when a new chapter was going to be released, So on to the chapter, I loved the hot scene where Jace has sex with the two bunny girls, I thought that was really hot  and I was really excited about the ending, I wonder what’s gonna happen with Jace and his mom in the next chapter  Anyway, I hope your doing well, oh and I have a question or two if you don’t mind, 1. How are you doing with ‘The More, the Merrier’ ? I’m really excited to what happens with Coltrane and the Hiranos and Everyone else but no rush  2. What was up with the whole ‘Your Password is Hacked’ thing? I hope you’re password wasn’t hacked or anything, if it is hacked, maybe you can fix it by rebooting it ? Let me know when you have the time, anyway, hope you’re doing well, good luck with your stories, and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night.

Glad you enjoyed chapter 3 of “Wishful.” I had some fun writing it. 

Not making a huge amount of progress with TMTM, to be honest. The chapter is going to be about 6000 words, and I’ve written a little more than 2000. I need to get into a groove with it – at least with the Coltrane/Hirano girls scene, on which I’ve made the least progress. I’d also really like to make some headway with the final chapter of Auntie’s Home, since that’s the story that has gone the longest without an update. Plus, if I can finish that story, then I’ll allow myself to start finishing and posting chapters of Enter the Sandboy. 

The password thing was a phishing attempt that several people here have been targeted by. Somebody hacked AFF last year and got a bunch of usernames and passwords, then sent a bunch of auto-emails claiming to have hacked your whole life when all they had were those 2 pieces of info. (If they really had anything of value, they would have emailed me at one of my RL email accounts.) I’ve changed my passwords and deleted the emails and am no longer worrying about it. 

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Oh, okay, thanks for replying and answering my questions, I also can’t wait for the final chapter of ‘Auntie’s Home’ anyway, hope you’re doing well, good luck with your stories and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “The Ball Pit”

From Metamorphic on August 19, 2019

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Nice story as always

Thanks! And thanks for being the first reader to comment on this story.

[Guest Ganon29]

Love your stories.

When do you think the final chapter of Mia will be released?

Thank You

[GeorgeGlass]

16 hours ago, Guest Ganon29 said:

Love your stories.

When do you think the final chapter of Mia will be released?

Thank You

Glad you like my stuff. I expect to have the chapter of Mia ready for beta in the next couple of weeks. 

[GeorgeGlass]

From Lady Freelove on August 22, 2019

First, let me thank you for reading and commenting on so many of my stories. You are quite the voracious reader!

Re: “Excuses”

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I really like this. The images it evokes are powerful. So hot and yet so beautiful at the same time.

Thanks! This is one of the few stories that I drafted almost entirely in one sitting because I got so caught up in writing it.

Re: “Some Girl”

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Beautiful! Wonderful description of sibling sexual exploration and love. I really enjoyed it!

Thanks! I really enjoyed writing this one.

Re: “Fireworks”

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This is fantastic! The whole sibling love concept is so hot and the way you portray it, it's so beautiful and natural. Bravo!

*bows*

Thanks very much. A friend who liked the Valentine's Day theme of "Some Girl" suggest that I do a sequel based on another holiday, and then ideas just started to come. 

Re: “Satisfaction”

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That was so incredibly beautiful, I had tears in my eyes! The love the three of them shared was beyond expresssion. I love your stories of family love and sex.

Thanks! This one was originally intended to be a short story -- that is, chapter 1 was to be the whole story -- but after I posted it, I realized that I didn't want to stop there, because there was so much more that could be done with the characters and their evolving relationship.
 

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “The Happiest Place”

From Lady Freelove on August 30, 2019

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LOL I love it! 

Thank you!

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Kids dancing to "It's a sex world after all!" My kids would love shows like that! Hee hee!

And those animatronic children would look a lot better naked than in those cheesy faux-Dutch costumes.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Little Rose”

From Lady Freelove on August 30, 2019

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I really liked this one.

Thank you.

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I found the evolution of the inevitable sexual relationship between Rose and her father to be both hot and beautiful at the same time.

Sometimes I really like writing slow-burn stories like this. I think the gradual rise in how far things go adds realism while whetting the reader’s appetite for more. Of course, not every reader has the patience for that. (Sometimes I don’t either, which is how I end up writing straight-into-the-action stories like “The Small Hours” and “May’s Family.”)

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The loving, sexual relationship between father and daughter is one of my favoriite story lines. and you do it so well.

Thank you.  Obviously, it’s one of my favorites, too. 

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That they found kindred spirits in Opal and Evie made it just that much more special. Good job!

Thanks! Adding Opal and Evie just seemed like the best route to a happy ending for Rose and Randy.

Edited September 1, 2019 by GeorgeGlass

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Mommy’s Home”

From Lady Freelove on August 30, 2019

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This is a wonderful story.

Thanks!

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This story plays to my second favorite story line (See my review of Little Rose). I love reading about the special love and strong sexual bond between a mother and son.

One of my fetishes is family members expressing their love for each other sexually, whatever their familial relationship may be.

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I would love to read more stories like this one and "Little Rose." I'm going to read "Auntie's Home next.

 

Be warned that “Auntie’s Home” has a somewhat different tenor, because there’s a whole dom/sub angle.

BTW, I know you read “Some Girl” and “Fireworks”; there’s a third story in that trilogy, titled “Comfort and Joy,” if you’re interested. You might also like “May’s Family,” which has a retrospective angle, like parts of “Regina.”