Lotus Posted September 7, 2011 Report Share Posted September 7, 2011 I am working on an original peice consisting of a M/F relationship with bondage, slavery, etc in it. This is my first time writing a story like this, and thus I have quite a few detail issues and plot holes that I can't quite catch myself. I have written 4 chapters so far, and would like someone to help me proofread and edit my story. The first four chapters are Here. I need someone to help me expand my ideas and basically support me throughout the process. Thank you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asexual Biped Posted November 9, 2011 Report Share Posted November 9, 2011 I can be your beta if you don't mind my hectic life schedule. I've just read chapter 1 and found things that I can help you with. I'm generally a blunt beta, but I don't try to intentionally insult your writing/story. If you can handle that, I can give you a detailed list of things that need fixing through PM here on the forums. It would probably be better to reply your denial or consent through my PM. I'll probably lose track of this thread. That tends to happen to me. ._.; Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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