Lotus

I am working on an original peice consisting of a M/F relationship with bondage, slavery, etc in it. This is my first time writing a story like this, and thus I have quite a few detail issues and plot holes that I can't quite catch myself. I have written 4 chapters so far, and would like someone to help me proofread and edit my story. The first four chapters are Here. I need someone to help me expand my ideas and basically support me throughout the process. Thank you!