Thundercloud Posted Saturday at 09:43 AM Report Posted Saturday at 09:43 AM 14 hours ago, JayDee said: Hot Dog! By @Thundercloud Thank you for the review! With those circa 1000 word flashfics could be kinda hard getting much character in, so nice that one worked for ya. I tended to find with writing those I’d end up having to cut bits out to make the limit, It’s been a few years but I may well have just not had room for extra jokes. Would definitely be some good gag options though! As for the words… well, obstreperous is probably most common, especially as obstreperousness, will more often feature in broadsheet newspapers or more journal-like magazine articles, while oblation and oakum are probably best known/used in much more niche categories, although you probably wouldn’t be too surprised to find them in fantasy works either. All three words probably count as more common than some of the prompts we used to get! Thank you again. I totally get the limitations of the flashfic format (one of the reasons I don’t dabble in those myself) so the comment was more meant as encouragement that maybe you should consider revisit the topic. Considering that dog has a male name I think there is a lot of potential for gags. The best joke is of course in the title of the story that you already used. It is good that we live in the english speaking part of the world so Zell loves hot dogs. Having the title of the story as Bretzel or Flavored Bread would not been as fitting. 🙂 JayDee 1 Quote
JayDee Posted yesterday at 08:58 AM Author Report Posted yesterday at 08:58 AM Oh, yeah, got lucky with that one! I think if I ever go back to the FF universe, it’ll be for twink Cloud getting railed by futa Tifa. There’s not a lot of demand for it, I grant you. Quote
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