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Passion, Proof, Power - Review Responses and Discussion
Windrider Shiva replied to Windrider Shiva's topic in Slash
From: LockedBox This is a very compelling story, and it has a lot more to offer than the summary suggests. It’s instantly unique for it’s use of the metal genre, Canadian setting and Finnish main character, which is a very far cry from the usual rock star fic fair. While the metal genre is a major plot point your flowing writing style and relatable characters stop people unfamiliar with metal, Finnish or Canadian cultures from feeling isolated by it. Sammi is a very well written main character, his frank attitude, open and honest personality, unfussed appearance and full gamut of emotions make him very relatable. I particularly loved his emotions during and after his one night stands, the way that for a little while he’s on the top of the world, but after only a few minuted the weight of his loneliness and sense of isolation comes crashing down on is head. It’s incredibly human really tugs the heartstrings. Not to mention that it made me want to punch his exboyfriend somewhere very painful. The supporting characters are very strong too, at first I really disliked Ieva and Kevin due to their overly clinical business sense and arrogance respectively but you do such a good job of fleshing them out and reminding us that beyond what Sammi is allowed to perceive, they are just as human and capable of empathy as he. The plot is very interesting as well, it’s open and full of potential, and you wonder which of the many avenues it will wander down. The twist at the end of chapter 7 was not expected at all and I really look forwards to seeing how it will be handled and where it will take us. Thankyou for writing and posting this here, it’s a great breath of fresh air for the genre and I’m eagerly looking forward to more! Wow, thank you! I huh... really don't know what to say XD. I'm really glad people relate to Sammi, because with his personality and at times, his metal music background, I was more or less sure it would happen. Especially since the metal scene deal isn't over yet XD. I still haven't brought the whole band in on top of it all. Ieva definitely needs more fleshing out, but she's a hard one - I've worked some things out... but there's a side to her I haven't dabbled in yet. Will be dealt with in due time ^^. Same with his ex-boyfriend, and Ryan as well. But the thing I really love, is that people can't see it coming *cackles evilly*. I have to admit that I am not a fan of predictable stories. I like the unexpected... as long as it makes sense. And that's a feeling I hope I convey well. It also helps that this is from Sammi's POV - it's what he sees and feels, and what he understands and not. (And his personality plays a lot on that, of course XD). ~ From: Lisa Oh poor Sammi. I'm surprised his mom was able to keep it together the way she had. I enjoyed reading about the dinner with Ryan, but even after he found out Ryan's age, he's STILL going after him? lol I kinda relate from experience with Sammi's mom. My own father passed away back in 2004, and my mom was way calmer than I was - I'm the one who ran out of the room when the artificial heart was unplugged (at our request, but one is never, ever fully prepared for that moment where it's all over) while she was the one who took everything in charge. For Sammi's mom, there's going to be more than that, but, as usual, all explained in due time ^^. And yep, Sammi's still going after Ryan. XD -
Seasons Unite by Orphaned Land
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Qoth the Raven by Eluveitie
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Hi hi! Clear lack of COB fanfics here - or rather, pretty much everywhere - has led me to post this short-ish, borderline PWP slashfic. The fandom needs more love! Author: WindriderShiva Title: Some Assembly Required Summary: Finding all the right pieces and completing a jigsaw puzzle takes time... but fifteen years to put two pieces together might be a new record. Feedback: Concrit very welcome! Fandom: Children of Bodom Pairing: Janne/Alexi Warnings: Anal, COMPLETE, Fingering, M/M, Oneshot, PWP Solo story or chaptered story: Solo URL: http://celeb.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094255 Thanks for reading!
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Passion, Proof, Power - Review Responses and Discussion
Windrider Shiva replied to Windrider Shiva's topic in Slash
From: Lisa I think Sammi's getting too wound up in the whole date thing. Ryan is his boss now & that should come 1st. I am curious as to why Ryan wants to meet a/Sammi though. Hope he's not leading Sammi on. Lol Sammi's getting wound up alright XD. But he gets wound up in about just anything~. As for Ryan... I don't wanna spoil anything! ^^ -
Odal by Agalloch
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Angry Dice Jealously Utters Statement To Mean Electrical New Team A P R I C O T
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Majesty by Blind Guardian
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Ted Harms Edward's Sombrero And Uses Ruth's Unicolor Shoes P O T A T O
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[Children of Bodom] Alexi Laiho slash
Windrider Shiva replied to Windrider Shiva's topic in Singers/Bands
Here's some challenges and ideas I've accumulated over a while, because plunnies won't leave me alone and who knows, this might get people to write. Also, sharing is caring! Unless noted as a requirement, I don't mind pairing choices (as long as it's slash - hell, even crossovers... anyone else picture Finntroll's Mathias Lillmans with him? XD), so some of them are just to give ideas. Same for length, plot devices, titles, etc. I'll also note if I'm working on something similar, though I'd like to see what other people come up with. Just don't be surprised when you see my name with a similar plot XD;. For the sake of this last bit, don't be afraid to PM me! ~ More, More, More Requirements: Alexi begging for 'more' I just had this flash while listening to COB's cover of Billy Idol's Rebel Yell. I can totally see Alexi screaming for 'More!' in bed, or something similar. He's pretty vocal everywhere else after all O_o. For some reason, Henkka's wormed his way in mind for this one... but wouldn't mind seeing another guy. ~ Handset microphone Requirements: Janne/Alexi; backstage loud sex with a handset mic still on With the amount of movements on stage... sometimes I'd almost expect to see Alexi with a handset mic. But what if there was a legit reason for not having that? Such as maybe having forgotten said mic on while having sex backstage or in a lobby... and having the rest of the venue hearing it. Of course, everyone else is either dying of laughter, dumbfounded, drunk, too tired to care, not paying attention, used to it, <insert more reasons here as to no why would bother them>. Bonus points for humor. (I've never stated these ideas made sense, btw XD) ~ Accident-prone Requirement: Janne/Alexi; Hurt/comfort related to some injury/sickness; no death Seems like there's something going on with Alexi getting hurt or sick during tours (or outside of tours O_o). And who winds up taking care of him? Why not Janne? Doesn't have to be a life-threatening injury at all, but I'd like to see Janne's reactions to an injured Allu. I'm pretty sure there's plenty material to work with by default (he did fall off his bunk on tour... and the fall off the car roof that lead to Are You Dead Yet?, and the bowling alley injury *shudder*, plus last year in Oslo when he was admitted for a stomach infection... poor thing has had his share of pain DX). Not going to object to some angst either! Happy ending preferred. ~ Children of Moresome Requirement: Fivesome with the whole band To quote Alexi, when asked if he would have sex with one of his band members, and in which position: "I have two holes and two hands... if you can't fill out the rest..." Yeah I know it's more of a joke than anything, but damn, I can't get that picture out of my head. Just include the whole band together in one fivesome, and we're good. I have absolutely no plot idea for that. Then again, does it really need a plot? XD ~ On your knees! Requirement: Jaska/Alexi, Janne+Jaska/Alexi; Janne walks in on Alexi sucking Jaska off and is offered to join up; they must be 18 or over I have no clue how this wound up in my mind, but I'm not gonna question it and just write it down for the sake of my sanity (wait, what's sanity?). The basic idea I had for this is set in their early-ish days (make them 18, I'm not kidding. Legal reasons, check the RP Fiction guidelines). So Janne walks in on Alexi, on his knees, who's too busy giving Jaska a blowjob to notice him. Surprise surprise, Jaska invites Janne to join them up. To add to insanity, I kinda picture Henkka and Alexander sitting nearby, not minding the man-on-man action some odd feet away from them. Bonus points if someone can work this up. ~ Blame THOSE pictures... Requirement: Janne/Alexi; ageplay; no scat/watersports Indeed, blame the pics with Alexi and a pacifier for that one... oh and the ones where he's hugging stuffed animals. And taking naps everywhere. I can't be the only one thinking that's a good candidate for ageplay, AB/DL and so on, no? I'd like to see ageplay imagery; baby bottles, onesies, plushies, etc... Feel free to include some reluctance, dub-con even: might be a bit awkward to give into your lover's fantasies. Make it a little realistic I guess (as realistic as it can be with those two O_o) ("Fuck no, I'm not wearing this!... ... *glares* ... okay okay, fine... damn...") -
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