Goddess of Passion

For myself and for the fangirls of course! Thank you so much answering! If I ever get flamed again on one of those flamer pages I'll take it as free publicity.

N: Nana (by: Emile Zola)

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Thank you, you are right, of course. I don't feel ashamed for that story, not any more. It was my first one, though, so of course it was far from being perfect. No need to publish a piece of writing practice... I still like the idea of rewriting it or writing a similar scene with a better characterization and less logic errors.

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Thank you for your answers. I might rewrite it.

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Well, now it's about time to unveil that I have been here already, using another name. After my story had been flamed I quit and deleted all my posts. Said story was really horrible. Well, the language was OK, I guess. After I have read many forum posts as well as stories I have found out: 1. What people tell that they want to read differs from what they read. 2. Some published books contain a lot of stuff which I was told never to write, especially in fanfiction. 3. When I write, my first intention is to create just that one story I want to read which no one else has written yet. From this, I concluded that I still should take constructive criticism and ponder about it, but otherwise I should write what I want! F*** the flamers. Now to the question. Once, I had a story here, a badfic. I only hope that my writing has improved since then, especially characterization and logic... still, if I would post it again, it would be a sign to the flamers/sporkers, that they didn't get me. On the other hand, the story WAS bad... What would you do in my place? Should I upload the badfic again?

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Breaking up is the only way if you don't want to live a lie. You might feel bad breaking up with her for another girl but wouldn't betraying her be much worse?

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