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  1. http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=26 "pulling her sobbing fintointo her arms and rocking her" - "face into" ? --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=27 "had felt more like fifteen forlow.low" - "for Willow" "was at the moment, but nothing enedened" - ??? "And how'd younk ink it would go" - "you think" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=28 "I'm staying there too to make sure he d't d't do anything" - "doesn't" "k, Ik, I appreciate the concern" - ??? "he was indeed slee on on the couch" - "sleeping" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=29 "and raking heils ils down his back" - "her nails" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=30 "the dark haired rushrushed upstairs" - "man rushed" ? "bringing doctond nnd nurses in with a rush" - "doctors and" "The others tri tried to convince him to go home" - "had" "hoping for a better shos its it was he couldn’t risk going" - ??? "but she’s not humaot aot anymore" - "human ????" "And on gon god’s green earth would I trust" - "why on" "Her sole concern was filloillow" - "for Willow" "but the moment it fell across her d skd skin" - ??? "he asked as hs cos coming through the door" - ??? --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=31 "that she could tear his chepen pen and hold that" - "chest open" "against her abd as as she made her way" - "abdomen"? "more passio as as Willow closed her eyes" - "passionate" "He pushed her milky hs fhs farther apart" - "thighs" "Drusilla and Spike had hung bsomesome whi while the pale redhead was ill" - ??? "Giles returned shortly befsunssunset" - "before sunset" "Willow felt as if she might ll all again" - "be ill"
  2. http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=23 "acquired a multitude of spell books while she was overs A f A few of the more valuable ones" - "overseas." "Spike, huh? restresting name" - "Interesting" "That's where's she's beenockeocked away in some nuthouse" - "been!? Locked" "All of youe wae was your friend" - "you! She" "Xander yelled in their def, th, the whole time" - "defence" "imagined anything like this hapng tng to her" - "happening" "that it was impossible to convinr. ar. and Mrs. Rosenberg" - "convince Mr." "Xander esteested several times that the group of them try to brher her out" - "insisted" ?, "break" "This deon, on, and Buffy's agreement with her watcher" - "decision" "He beenbeen a fool to trust that her family" - "had been" "Thtenttention of the group was brought back to the detective" - "The attention" "So, I'll try to be brief and saat Iat I cannot confirm or deny" - "say that" "I may have no more quons ons at this time" - "questions" "heading for ther, lr, leaving the vampire" - "the door" "He knew full well hat hat moment that if he didn't get out" - "at that" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=24 "Umm, Coia, ia, let's talk about something else" - "Cordelia" "gulpinwn twn the blood convulsively" - "gulping down" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=25 "cast a spell that would turm inm into something cute" - "turn him" "no way he was going to apologiz fro front of his" - "apologize in" "You You were willing enough when Spike" - ??? "I thought I was in lov'm n'm not that naive girl anymore" - "love. I'm" "After all, whuldnuldn't he have moved on" - "wouldn't"??? "starting to cut into her h and and screamed" - ??? "Bufas eas everything that Willow was not" - "Buffy was" "the memory of the heartache Willow halt, lt, and part of it was new pain" - "had felt"
  3. http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=16 "was to be her most importaessoesson of all, the one to determine whether" - "important lesson" "giving a p ofp of victory" - ??? --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=17 |she had been able to sleep restfullhe mhe might have been" - "restfully she" "After the way she had trd hid him last night" - ??? "only able to focn hen her former tormentor" - "focus on" "only to discover her hair and eyes had gjet jet k. Ak. Again she traced her hands" - "gone jet black." "she could ser fer fun was nearing its end" - "see her" "I’m nyingying. I’ll tell you" - "not lying" "but not unt’m d’m done with you" - "until I'm" "be able to sleny tny time soon" - "sleep any" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=18 "could have privacy for a e ore or else he would have said something" - ??? "Willow foundirtyirty coffee cup by an even dirtier sink" - "found a dirty" "before lifting the cup to her . He." - "lips." "with her mot The The older woman" - "mother." "just to be sure thaose ose people were" - "that those" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=19 "He wavingving a bath" - "was having" "Willow walthrothrough the door of their Paris flat" - "walked through" "but it was a mpoinpoint now anyway" - ??? "It was almost daand and the trio pulled" - "dawn," --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=20 "her breath cg ing in pants" - "coming" "from the much needentacntact" - "needed contact"
  4. Kinda like wordord... http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=16 Not entirely sure what happened there. And again, same chapter.
  5. http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=11 "and rushedsee see what was wrong" - "rushed to" "and when Pete called the hospital, it turned out tha. An. Andersen was out of town" - "that Dr." "Now it's time to push, pushsh…"sh…" - "push, push..." "the doctored aed angrily once they were out of the room" - "doctor asked" "She kshe she should be scared" - "knew" "Letm frm fry her brain" - "Let them" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=12 "taka bia bite of her sandwich" - "taking a" "sensitive skin with her ue aue and gentle nips" - "tongue" "ran it up Drusilla'isteistening slit" - "Drucilla's glistening" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=13 "felt like a friged ced child as she saw the" - "frightened" "exact time that Dr. Scholten w be be leaving" - "will" "drawing frightened but impressed gafromfrom the on looking crowd" - ??? "I know you think I'm c, bu, but I'm NOT" - "crazy" "He was having that dream agaHe hHe had it so often now" - "again. He" "but he waughtught up in the sensation of her" - "was caught" "Fucking bad,' d" - ??? --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=14 "They said soeopleople had been murdered" - "some people" "Are you sure is Wis Willow" - "it was" "and I killed a bunf pef people while I was breaking" - "bunch of" "unnatural to be launcheto tto the air like a bird" - "launched into" "having to adjust to new innovns. ns" - "innovations" "stripped off her clothes cra crawled into" - "and" "The truth was he likhe lhe little witch" - "liked the" "ignoring Drr thr the moment" - "for" "swirling his [/b]tonguoundound[/b] Willow's" - "tongue around" "and she was nobodyroperoperty" - "nobody's property" "before Angegrabgrabbed him from behind" - "Angelus grabbed" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=15 "Darla was never interested in hShe She never braided Drusilla’s hair" - "her."
  6. http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...3&chapter=6 "It felt asshe she had taken a shot of liquid fire" - "as if" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...3&chapter=7 "he could spendrnitrnity pleasing her" - "spend eternity" "back to California to accommodatr fer feeding habits" - "accommodate her" "he vhe vampire world, blood was everything" - "In the" "becausen men making minions" - "because when" "she seemed t lot lost" - "to be" "and fed their future sire’s blood dailytil til they were" - "daily until" "plenty of time for him reparepare" - "re-prepare" "Two nights before she had nearly been killed bfledfledgling" - "by a fledgling" "Ok, I came as fast as I co So, So, what’s the dire" - "could. So" "Tan Ian I spoke to on the phone" - "The man" "George was showing his usefulness again, by hng Sng Spike tie his tie" - ??? "Of course , I’, I’m a good looking fellow" - "I do" "day day you’re going to be very powerful pet" - "One" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...3&chapter=8 "that her soul would be sto hto hell for willingly giving" - "sent to" "and Doyle had ded thd that his would be better spent drinking" - "decided" "Oh Jesus, Willow, what hI doI done" - "have I" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...3&chapter=9 "as she raised hip hips high" - "her" "he cn’t n’t remember but he was" - "couldn't" "eyeseyes closing" - "her eyes" "but luckily freezwatewater still had some effect" - "freezing water" "Angel had not allowedselfself to be alone with her" - "allowed himself"
  7. http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=10 http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=16 http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=17 http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=21 http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=29 http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=35
  8. I'm glad that I came back here.
  9. Zimarah

    I Have Never....

    Reading or writing? I have in both cases. I have never learned to stop starting new stories before I finished writing the old ones.
  10. Not guilty. G/NG: Slept with someone without knowing their name beforehand.
  11. So... much... wordord... http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=14223 "But what was really pissBuffBuffy off was" - "pissed Buffy" ? "the apprehensive way she eyeieyeing his" - "was eyeing" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...3&chapter=2 "snapped the filter off the cigarettforefore lighting it" - "cigarette before" "reing ing the temptation to slide it into" - "resisting" "He listened carefully to heart art beat" - "her heart" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...3&chapter=3 "he looked down at Willow’s palem, wm, with her head" - ??? "Geney a y a newly risen vampire will strike out " - "Generally" -- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...3&chapter=4 "homesick while as sas sleeping" - "he was" "but their obvious lack of concfor for her" - "concern" "She was tiof aof always having to be good and dependable" - ??? "k, dk, drive safe, the sun will be up soon" - ??? "Angel was checking onew lew lead tonight" - "one new" "years in the name of l The The countless" - "love." ? "she spatk ask as she headed to the bathroom" - "spat back" "Willow’sappeappearance was tearing Buffy apart" - "Willow's disappearance" "when he lost soulsoul temporarily the year before" - "his soul" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...3&chapter=5 "Apparently she had moved beyond having t rat rambling thoughts" - ??? "getting any ideas about Red beftheythey were properly trained" - "before they" "had been a family emecy acy and that" - "emergency" "He found her dozing sy afy after apparently kicking" - ??? "“I’d loo,” o,” she said with out hesitation" - "love to" "she perepered in his ear" - "whispered" "and she told ho. o." - "him so." "right where he wanted her tho thought as he retrieved" - ??? "Alright pet, you want your plee,” e" - "pleasure" "Wait a minuteo sao said that" - "minute, you" "her to yell out in protest asrs ors of frustration" - ??? "once she tur turned he would be able" - "was"
  12. http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=14219 "giving each oneirm irm pinch" - "one a hard" ? --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...9&chapter=2 "The gang was already breag dog down her neck" - "breathing" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...9&chapter=3 "and drifting int alm almost coma-like state" - "into an" "a [/b]leathtraptrap[/b]" - "leather strap" "in the pasut hut he was always" - "past, but" "holy water burned his pale s Spi Spike’s eyes flew open" - "skin," "her hthrothrown back in rapture" - "head thrown" "By the time he was finishedssinssing" - "finished dressing" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...9&chapter=4 "He watched her pinnguengue run across her rosy lips" - ??? "She relented in hopes that he woueaveeave her alone" - "would leave" "However, ha had no idea" - "he" "He was finally going to be able to posses helly,lly, light and dark" - ??? --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...9&chapter=5 "but if you want another roommate, und understand" - "I'd" "Don’t be silly, Willst tst think of it as" - "Will, just" "same sugar like subce ice into his eyes" - "substance" "During tim time Spike did his best" - ??? --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...9&chapter=6 "As they descendee ste stairs to Giles’ courtyard" - "descended the" "pai pain in his head not even comparing" - "the" "sobbeobbed, slumping to the ground" - "she sobbed" ", th, the good news is" - "Well" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...9&chapter=7 "but she was still too ashamo foo forgive herself" - "ashamed to" "outweighing his fear of rejon. on" - "rejection" ", ap, apparently the last time someone" - "Well" "would never hbackbacked down" - "have backed" "Willow was en ien in shock" - ??? "she replied throughazehaze of lust" - "through a haze" "Willow let a t a low moan" - "out"
  13. http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=6587 "Sng, ng, she peeled off each piece of clothing" - "Sighing" "get the mud aloodlood stains out of these" - "and blood" "and little bitshumahuman blood as well" - "bits of human" "Willow decided she deserv lon long, hot shower" - "deserved a" "I'm on my way back toominoming a human again" - "to becoming" "Willow reveled in the combion ion of scents" - "combination" "nearly twenty minutes r, Wr, Willow exhaled" - ??? "locking the [/b]doorind ind[/b] her" - "door behind" "THAT side of Red beforewoulwouldn't mind another peek" - ??? "Trut tol told, I think Spike could straighten out" - "Truth be" "I'm just stating thcts cts out here" - "the facts" "ourselves for the momenty noy not have some 'naked time'" - "moment, why" "make it ea for for him to" - "easier" "Willow'ngerngers were shaking as she" - "Willow's fingers" "And we thought you were a les, Lu, Luv" - "lesbian" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=10882 "too much one-on-one wher her vibrator" - "with" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=14212 "If tel tell anyone" - "you" "I jusnt ent everything to be, ummm, a surprise" - "just want" "moment of the young red’s l’s life" - "redhead's" "into her tight openingd hid his eyes rolled" - ??? "but this is Willow’s big day. ou dou do anything" - "Do not" "never actually talkio Spo Spike" - "talking to"
  14. http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=6006 Currently in Spike(William)/Willow, but it should be in Buffy/Xander
  15. http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...0&chapter=6 "Spike parked thSotoSoto rather cavalierly outside" - "the DeSoto" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...0&chapter=7 "Spike d cad cautiously down from the stacks and towards" - ??? -- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=13 "Con. on. If we're late, it'll get cold." - "Come on." --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=14 "Adults on If If you're under the age of 18" - "only." "her eyes darting around sto store" - "the" "they'd really suit S.' S." - "Spike" "and started to look he lhe leather clothing nearby" - "at the" "Now carry these and come with We" - "me." "Herhesehese should fit" - "Here, these" --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=6006 "By God, we found it. Magnificent! Simply magnifi!" !" - "magnificent" "bury his shoulder in thepirepire's stomach" - "the vampire's" "Go ahead and do layelayer" - "it Slayer" "the Craylock letheitheir eggs unhatched after a certain period" - "leave their" "Xander said smiling at Awho who just gave him" - "Anya" "Buffy's worst nightmare being Daryinrying to get her driver's license" - ??? "Anya and Xander until the day before Thgivigiving" - "Thanksgiving" "they d'vd've been all the way over there" - ??? "oursourse, having on a new skirt probably didn't hurt matters" - "Of course" "She wasted little time as she quicspunspun around and kicked the vamp" - "quickly spun" "He ducked a ireire's clutches, and Buffy and Xander were both off guard" - ??? "I don't think we're g to to run into any more trouble tonight" - ??? "just above her nipple ahen hen he flicked his tongue slightly" - "and then"
  16. http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=5 "Xa spe spent the entire afternoon telling me how stupid I was" - "Xander" "She thinks of herselfthe the ugly duckling." - "herself as" ""When?" I say,ot sot sure really." - "say, "not" "I get us sodas again.offeoffered to bring blood for him next time" - "again. I offered" "I'm standing in my closet looking at the ces. es." - "clothes." --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...0&chapter=2 ""Remember Giles, a crabby watcher is a careless war!" r!"" - "watcher!"
  17. Continuing on... http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=26910 ""I usey thy things to give him orgasms."" - "use many" "ike ike was still in shock." - "Spike" ""I wiall all you all tomorrow," Tara said" - "will see"? ""Mary, come to daddyAlexAlex, come to daddy."" - ??? --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=13734 "that the Scoobies had closed rangaingainst her."- ??? "finally approached SpikHe dHe didn't look any better" - "Spike. He" "wrapping wouldn't help much in this case.e moe most effective thing to do" - "case. The" "Spike hadn't been wearing any s ans and logic dictated" - "socks" "she pl the the bloody knife on the empty page." - "placed" "burn some incense an>voi>voila: magically healed vampire. " - ??? "and facing the reality tha mat matter" - "that no" "slide off his frame over the pastr anr and wondered if" - ??? "She studied herest est and dearest friend." - ??? ""Hey, Will?w's w's Anya?" Xander asked" - "Will? Where's" ? "but he pulled Willow into a fierce. ". "Where's Dawn?"" - "fierce hug." ? "Willow relaxed into his embr "G "Giles took her to his apartment."" - "embrace"
  18. http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=29242 "Occasionally his too-overt groping of a breast or roam of hands de de her clothing would cause a small squeal of outrage" - Probably "under" "but for everything he'd recently lost, the man without a cou he' he'd so quickly and unexpectedly become." - Not sure. --- http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=29240 "he just knew he was, a fact that neatly summed up his relatiop wip with every woman he had ever found important in his entire life." - Probably "relationship" "The curtain of Tara's hair was working doutimetime" - Probably "double time" "w dow do you know what I am?" she accused." - Not sure. "Spike could smell its syrupy tang ahe whe way across the room." - Probably "all the" "Spike, out of the billions of creatures roaming the earth right then, truly knew dea death was." - Not sure "obliviously thought she was worthless.founfound himself suddenly" - Not sure "Do what ever wan want to, as long as it harms no one, including yourself." - Probably "you" "Itn'tn't enough for my--" - Probably "It isn't" "But if you agree with it," heled led sympathetically," - Not sure "squirming under the laser focus of Spike's e, be, but eventually" - Probably "eyes" "She stared at it a minute, sniffed it, then took a careful. T." - Probably "sip." ""No, not 'breaking things'," he said a b a bit of forced patience" - Not sure ""You gonna start wearing tanks ans and stuff, show off your new ink?"" - Probably "tank tops" "Would be a shame not to see that bird itanktank top sometime." - Probably "in a tank" "She rround thd the pile to check on his safety" - Not sure "Between that and he{ingying hair, she couldn't have been able to see much." - Not sure. "her flying"? " Her obviously tiring arms waved the bat in ever morratrratic arcs." - "More erratic" ""Leave us alone," she told the le mle man" - "little "Tara's demeanor changed into a type of steel formerly unn ton to either of them." - "unknown" ""Whatsa matter, Spi" go" goaded Xander." - "Spike" ""Think yoow eow everything!" - "you know" "Tara and Dpullpulled frantically" - "Dawn pulled" "something to do with mixp fep feelings of gratitude." - "mixed up" "The years of quietr anr and bitterness" - Not sure "quiet rage"? "had been reason enough to live as boldly ascoulcould manage" - "As he could"? "For a hot, a sec second, he wished she'd hand it over." - Not sure "He'd lost any foot he dhe door" - Not sure "Until then sh hol hold him and stroke his hair." - Not sure "sizesize=1 noshade color="#BFC6D7">" - Random code And the last part of the fic probably isn't supposed to be in italics.
  19. http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...mp;no=544181279 While the story wasn't great, I think review #2035438578 takes it a bit too far. Other reviews are questionable as well.
  20. I don't read too many books these days, but right now I'm working through the Vampire Chronicles by Anne Rice. For cosplay purposes.
  21. Black. And close runner ups would be red, blue, and purple.
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