Velvet D Coolette

If my parents found out I go to fetish nightclubs, they'd disown me (and I'd never have to talk to their crazy asses again!!)

OW!! Stop it! Look, now I've got blue chalk all over me! What's my boyfriend going to say?? Pokes the person below her with a pointing hand sculpted out of butter.

Because we all want to be reassured that other people are wierder than us. It's part of our inherent need to feel included. If someone else is freakier than you, you can't be the outcast, ken? Why does my arthritic dog want to spend all day outside?

I catch the chocolate cake with blue frosting and go in horror as it falls apart leaving nothing but a handful of indescribably hideous larvae. I chuck... a living Pacman, about the size of a tennis ball.

I have never done a cartwheel.

Roland Rat

Hallo, my name is Satine. I've got a small number of fics written and thoroughly enjoying it. Good to have found such a busy site for adult fanfictions.

Um, hallo all, Just a question: what on earth are naughty points?? S'cuse my being very quick with this message, I know I've not taken the time to integrate properly and all that - yet - but I will do, I promise!

Hello everyone, I know we all want to be critiqued on here, but I'd like to for a special reason: it would appear that a great deal of the adult fanfics, especially homosexual ones based on any of the Sonic universes exploit people's sexual curiosity about lesian and gay relationships, whereas in mine I would prefer to explore primarily the other aspects of homosexuality: the general paranoia, the loneliness, the determination to succeed that it can foster, the tactical thinking that goes into integrating oneself into a community, etc. Therefore, I would love a critique or 10 to know how I have handled this issue in my first homosexual fic, Soul Control. You don't have to be gay to review, but a review from somebody who knows what it is like would be helpful! Soul Control is accessable from my profile.

Hallo Lurker, I'm new here and would also like a beta-reader. Care to beta-read eachother? Same as you, my two fanfics so far are on my profile, but I'd particularly like a beta-read of Soul Control. What'cha say?