I have started on my original story and I need some feedback to help me make it the best it can be. I haven't been getting a whole lot of constructive reviews for my fan fiction so I'm hoping ya'll will be willing to read what I've got on the new one and give me some constructive critism.
I trust all of your opinions and frankly I don't think I'm good enough yet to be completely confident in my writing style. I would appreciate any help you can give me. (Does begging for your expertise work?)
Here's the link to the story - thanks in advance.
The Great Battle