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Okay, great. I guess it’s working then. I’ll make some changes in the other stories.

Okay, I think I’m able to change things. Maybe check my Buffy stories because I’ve made changes to them. Just wanna make sure that I’m not the only one seeing it.

Okay, how does one do that? I put some tags based on what’s already available. A few pieces I put it in the pairings in the summary, but if I can add it to the tags, I would do that.

I happened to see a story in which the tags seem to be different than the traditional ones. Did I miss that ability or do I have to request this from a mod/admin? Not sure I would actually change anything about my current stories. Just curious about being able to do this thing.

I just published the piece that I kinda needed to ask this question for, in case you’re curious: https://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600100016&chapter=3

Chapter 3 is up Veronica’s Lesson Summary: Veronica wakes up in the morning to find that Betty is giving Archie a blowjob. She decides to give Betty a lesson on the right way to please her man. https://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600100016&chapter=3

Chapter 3 is up Veronica’s Lesson Summary: Veronica wakes up in the morning to find that Betty is giving Archie a blowjob. She decides to give Betty a lesson on the right way to please her man. https://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600100016&chapter=3

I may just consider it. If it were consistent across chapters I feel like it would be a choice. The fact that they corrected it in future chapter makes me think it wasn’t.

Sounds like a lot of fun. I’ve played in sandboxes like that in the past though not in this story specifically. No alternate realities or dimensional travel in this one. Just in the sense that the story isn’t told “correctly”.

This is more of an issue for me on the reader side of things. There was a story I was curious about which I kinda wanted to read but the formatting of the first couple chapters is off. I looked at some of the later chapters and they seem to fix it later but I’m a little put off by the first several chapters. Would it be considered bad of me to point this out to the author? I feel it’s probably better to do one on one but I’m not sure how to go about doing that. Rather than get a moderator or admin involved in it directly. I could write a review but that feels too public and somewhat mean.

I guess I’ve gotten into your head? My bad.

You’re definitely right and I think I’ve done an okay job so far. I’m pretty far into chapter 2 or what might be considered character 2 of a story and I think I’ve come up with an interesting way to do it. Basically, each character has their own somewhat different relationship to the main villain character and I’m telling the story of different ways they came to be taken over by the villain. Kinda built around similar themes. So for instance, character 1 has resisted many things about the villain all throughout the narrative. Their story is all about kinda finally giving in to everything. However, with character 2, it’s more of a twisted love story where they think the villain is in love with them only to realize once it’s too late that isn’t their dynamic at all. I’m also sorta outlining character 3 and this one is more about the character’s ego and how the villain metaphorically strokes it for their own purposes. Whereas character 4 it’s a mystery they’re trying to unravel. At least that’s how it’s kinda playing out story wise. We follow the characters at different stages and how this lead to their downfall.

No problem, appreciate it.

Okay, because I usually do it to show that there are more chapters coming up and the complete to know there’s not. However, if it’s not a requirement, I suppose I could just leave it the way it is. Unless a reader wants me to be more clear.

Chapter 2 is up Sleeping Arrangements Summary: Betty comes out of the shower to find Veronica alone in her bedroom. They decide to have some fun together while figuring out the sleeping arrangements. https://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600100016&chapter=2

Chapter 2 is up Sleeping Arrangements Summary: Betty comes out of the shower to find Veronica alone in her bedroom. They decide to have some fun together while figuring out the sleeping arrangements. https://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600100016&chapter=2

Thank you, also, I forgot to add a “WIP” tag to my newest story in Television. Should I have that added or should I just wait to have it complete?

Yeah, I think I can reasonably say that it should be clear. Essentially, in chapter 1 it says that the villain took over a business from a particular character in the past from the perspective of chapter 1. Then in chapter 2, it features the character who the villain took over the business from and explores the reasons why they decided to allow the villain to do it. So I think that will be clear.

Hey @BronxWench, Would you or one of the other mods please change the tags on this story to complete? Assuming I can’t do it myself.

Queen of the Serpents Chapter 10, the final chapter is up Summary: Betty has just been chosen by Jughead as his Serpent Queen, but this still has to be signed off on by some of the female serpents before it goes ahead. https://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600099980&chapter=10

Queen of the Serpents Chapter 10, the final chapter is up Summary: Betty has just been chosen by Jughead as his Serpent Queen, but this still has to be signed off on by some of the female serpents before it goes ahead. https://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600099980&chapter=10

For the most part, yes. There are a few places where things transition from one room to another or other things. So in theory it works as a transition point.

Well my story is not getting that close at the moment. Right now it’s about 25k words for this chapter and probably won’t top 30k words at most based on where I’m at in the story structure. But it’s the same story I was asking about regarding “Character driven non-linear” stories. Because it’s all one character’s journey, it feels right to create the story in a single chapter. I’m noticing though that I could probably break it up into about 10 pages a chapter. It’s going to make the story have a lot more. Almost every 10-15 pages there’s a transition of sorts into something new. That wasn’t necessarily intentional on my part but it seems to have worked out that way.

That makes a certain amount of sense. Especially the moderators reactions. This is definitely not that. The story is each chapter represents for the most part a single night experience. A bunch of stuff happens in that one night so I’m writing it as a single chapter. I thought it would be a much shorter chapter but I’m having too much fun with the story. I’m on the last part of the evening but it’s looking like at least 45 pages long if not closer to 50. Which is why I asked.

Yeah, that’s where I’m leaning especially as it got much longer. I couldn’t really do that with my gangbang series one shots. At least not the individual chapters. Do you know how long some of the longest chapters are? I’m just trying to get a sense of how this one compares.