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Okay, because I usually do it to show that there are more chapters coming up and the complete to know there’s not. However, if it’s not a requirement, I suppose I could just leave it the way it is. Unless a reader wants me to be more clear.

Chapter 2 is up Sleeping Arrangements Summary: Betty comes out of the shower to find Veronica alone in her bedroom. They decide to have some fun together while figuring out the sleeping arrangements. https://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600100016&chapter=2

Chapter 2 is up Sleeping Arrangements Summary: Betty comes out of the shower to find Veronica alone in her bedroom. They decide to have some fun together while figuring out the sleeping arrangements. https://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600100016&chapter=2

Thank you, also, I forgot to add a “WIP” tag to my newest story in Television. Should I have that added or should I just wait to have it complete?

Yeah, I think I can reasonably say that it should be clear. Essentially, in chapter 1 it says that the villain took over a business from a particular character in the past from the perspective of chapter 1. Then in chapter 2, it features the character who the villain took over the business from and explores the reasons why they decided to allow the villain to do it. So I think that will be clear.

Hey @BronxWench, Would you or one of the other mods please change the tags on this story to complete? Assuming I can’t do it myself.

Queen of the Serpents Chapter 10, the final chapter is up Summary: Betty has just been chosen by Jughead as his Serpent Queen, but this still has to be signed off on by some of the female serpents before it goes ahead. https://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600099980&chapter=10

Queen of the Serpents Chapter 10, the final chapter is up Summary: Betty has just been chosen by Jughead as his Serpent Queen, but this still has to be signed off on by some of the female serpents before it goes ahead. https://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600099980&chapter=10

For the most part, yes. There are a few places where things transition from one room to another or other things. So in theory it works as a transition point.

Well my story is not getting that close at the moment. Right now it’s about 25k words for this chapter and probably won’t top 30k words at most based on where I’m at in the story structure. But it’s the same story I was asking about regarding “Character driven non-linear” stories. Because it’s all one character’s journey, it feels right to create the story in a single chapter. I’m noticing though that I could probably break it up into about 10 pages a chapter. It’s going to make the story have a lot more. Almost every 10-15 pages there’s a transition of sorts into something new. That wasn’t necessarily intentional on my part but it seems to have worked out that way.

That makes a certain amount of sense. Especially the moderators reactions. This is definitely not that. The story is each chapter represents for the most part a single night experience. A bunch of stuff happens in that one night so I’m writing it as a single chapter. I thought it would be a much shorter chapter but I’m having too much fun with the story. I’m on the last part of the evening but it’s looking like at least 45 pages long if not closer to 50. Which is why I asked.

Yeah, that’s where I’m leaning especially as it got much longer. I couldn’t really do that with my gangbang series one shots. At least not the individual chapters. Do you know how long some of the longest chapters are? I’m just trying to get a sense of how this one compares.

I’ve been writing probably the longest chapter I’ve written so far. It’s up into 40 pages and over 20k words. So I’m worried that I have a chapter that’s too long for the archive and I should break the chapter up into smaller chapters. There’s a bunch of breaks I could put in but I am curious if I should. Suggestions?

Indeed, and I’m curious to know how people react.

I’m hopeful that I can make it work. Although I’m still relatively new to the fandom, in terms of writing for the fandom. Been a fan of the series since the beginning. So I’m trying to navigate exactly what people like and don’t like. But I’ve read a bunch of stories here on AFF and I think my story is fairly consistent with some of the other stuff in the same fandom. It’s definitely really smutty though in terms of what happens.