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Hi LHunt, without giving too much away, Lara will not know that Sam is the one filming her in the African village. I haven't decided whether Sam will wear a disguise (African head mask etc) or film remotely (drones and spy cams etc), but the first Lara will know about Sam's involvement is when she sees herself on the big screen at Croft Manor, when Sam unveils her latest film to the guests. It'll let me explore a lot of competing emotions for Lara - embarassment, shame, betrayal...

Hi Extreme, glad you're enjoying the story. It's good to be back. Hi LHunt, you read my intent correctly. Once I decided to include Sam in the story, I needed a realistic way of making Sam join in the fun, despite her loyalty to Lara. I thought the best way was to make Sam believe Lara was willingly consenting to what was happening to her, regardless of what Lara says. The Sex Documentary, later filming Lara getting gangbanged in the African village, and finally using Lara in the sex dungeon (with Lara unaware it's Sam and begging for more), will convince Sam not to hold back and go all in.

Hi LHunt, glad you liked the plot twist. Jonah definitely going to be looking for some payback next chapter.

Hello all. I've posted Chapter 11. I probably won't have chapter 12 finished for a few weeks, so that'll have to tide you over until then. Hi, Mr Dead, plenty more Sam action planned. She'll be filming Lara's African gangbang, and later attending a Charity dinner to unveil it to the guests (at which point Lara knows that her shameful secret is out). Sam will also video some party events I have planned for Lara and the guests - Sam will resume her role in chronicling Lara's adventures, despite Lara's protests. But before then, Sam will get many opportunities to satisfy her curiosity about Lara's new lifestyle in Croft Manor's new sex dungeon, with fisting and oversized strap-ons. Lara won't know it's Sam (I plan for her to either wear a blindfold or opaque contact lenses until she finds out that everyone in the Charity knows what she's doing and have taken turns using her in the dungeon). When she finally finds out that Sam knows, it'll too late for her to convince Sam that she's not into it (since she'll cum multiple times and beg for more while Sam's using her.

Hi LaraCunt, thanks for compliment and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I often go to R34 and R34 Video for inspiration (and because I'm a guy). Funny to see the inspo going in the other direction, completing the circle, so to speak.

Hi HappyReader, the next two Chapters are set in the Siberian prison, with the African chapter to follow after that. This will be the end of overseas parts and the rest of the story will take place at Croft Manor. I'll be posting the next chapter on Thursday night, as I'm working the entire weekend and won't have time to do it later. Hi TR_FAN, thanks for the compliment. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I've found that 10,000 to 11,000 words seems to work well for chapter length (which equates to about 20 pages at size 11 font on Word). Some of the Natla's Revenge endings were 30,000 to 40,000 words, which I think was way too long.

Hi LHunt, glad you liked it. The next chapter will reveal more about Sarah's true motives for manipulating Lara into signing the contract. We learn that Lara is a fly trapped in Sarah's web.

Hallelujah, the site is working again! I've just posted Chapter 10. I'll post Chapter 11 towards the end of next week and I'm about half way through writing Chapter 12. Thanks to everyone who's been patient and stuck around.

Sorry, I got caught up in all the excitement of the site coming back online. I'll keep waiting for updates.

I'll try posting once I get home from work - ETA 4 hours.

I am able to log in but on my old password. I thought we needed to change those to keep the site secure.

Hello all. I despise Google Docs, so that definitely won't be happening. With regard to Hentai Foundry (I'm not familiar with AO3), I did consider it but their website layout is optimised for pictures and doesn't really work well for stories - especially long format ones. I'm not ready to give up on AFF, so please be patient. Besides, you haven't really missed out on much anyway - since the site's been down, I've only had time to finish 2 more chapters and started a third.

Same. The PayPal donations go through to Jennie Salva (which I assume is one of the real people responsible for making the site run).

The site got hacked and they kept getting inundated with fishing emails, links to dodgy websites in the Forums, people posting scam business opportunities etc. So AFF didn't want to open the site up again until they fixed the vulnerabilities in their code.

That's awesome news about the site. I'll post the next chapter as soon as it's back up and running.

Hi MorbidFantasy, I don't think Deviant art allows sexually explicit stuff, but Hentai Foundry might be good.

Hi MorbidFantasy, I doubt there is an IT department as such - AFF is a fan site with people volunteering their time, rather than a professional website. I wouldn't expect them to be working through Christmas/New years.

Hi GhostOfCovid, my thoughts as well. Hopefully when it's back up, it'll be fixed once and for all, so the hacks end and life can return to normal.

Hi everyone, hope you all had a good Christmas. Just a quick update: Chapter 11 (Part 1 of the Siberian prison) is finished and I'm about to start proofreading. After that, I'll start on Chapter 12. When the site is finally back up and running, I'll post all of the new chapters one week apart, like I did for the first 5 chapters.

Merry Christmas everyone!

Hi SailorNemesis, not posting anywhere else at this stage. I'm just waiting for the site to come back online and writing in the background. If it drags on for months, I might have to reassess, but at the moment I'll just be patient and wait (and cross my fingers).

Hi Donkingkong, really busy with work and family at the moment, so struggling to find any free time to write. I also hope the site gets back up and running.

Cool. No more spoilers.

Hi Donkingkong, I think I have an idea to make that work. I was wondering, rather than introduce another character to fight Lara, how would you feel if Konstantin did it? He's got the motive (Lara did stab him and his sister is dead), and he's a legit badass (he's a professional soldier who pushed his thumbs through a man's eyes for failure - and all of his men are afraid of him). While he's not ridiculously massive, he's still a big guy who is much stronger than Lara and would easily outclass her physically, and he'd probably have superior unarmed combat skills as well. I can imagine a point towards the end of the first fight where he picks up Lara by the head and holds his thumbs against her eyes and threatens to blind her (which she's seen him do before) at which point Lara loses all composure and wets herself. Konstantin can force her to participate in rematches throughout the week, with Lara fighting more and more defensively, until eventually she's just trying to run/climb/crawl away from him, and has to be dragged back screaming/begging/crying.

Hi Donkingkong, I just read your email. Thanks for the suggestions - I'll give the videos a look. A round 2 probably won't fit in with the story, but I'll make sure to give you a very thorough and detailed fight scene.