CrossroadsMk2

Hi Extreme, Boxes it is. I'll have time to start writing in about a week. It'll be the same deal as BDSM Raider - probably 3 chapters and about 30,000 to 35,000 words. It'll probably take 2 months to finish, given the way my work and family commitments are at the moment.

Hi Extreme, thanks for the videos - they came up right away in Google. I think I'll have Lara gingerly crawl from tent to tent (or cardboard box to cardboard box) at first, having sex with homeless men, before word spreads and it turns into a full blown gangbang.

Hi ABigFan, thanks! I'll have to keep an eye out on Netflix.

Hi all, since Donkingkong started this whole thing off, I'm inclined to go with his suggestion of 1 and 4. It'll also work well with LHunt's suggested villain, since Jonathan Reiss, since he's in the business of making biological weapons, so a designer drug would be right up his alley. The homeless scene will probably happen early on, to teach Lara a lesson in the consequences of defiance. I also want to have a scene like this later on, when Reiss is demonstrating his drug's effects for perspective buyers: https://xhamster.com/videos/jennifer-connelly-ass2ass-extended-hd-4349598 I have no idea what movie this is from, but Jennifer Connelly is hot as fuck.

Hi ABigFan, I don't think the craving filth thing would work with it being an aphrodisiac drug. If I was going to do that, I'd go with a different sort of drug. There's a part of the brain called the pregenual anterior cingulate cortex that is responsible for us feeling shame and embarassment. It triggers the fight or flight response and releases epinephrine and dopamine, which speeds the heart rate, makes us feel anxious and is generally unpleasant. But what if instead the brain is slowly rewired so that in response to feeling shame or embarassment, the brain releases dopamine and endorphins, making it feel really good. That would explain Lara eventually seeking out more and more shameful activities (and thereby craving dirty smelly homeless men etc). it's another idea, but I'll leave it up to the forum members to vote on which idea they like best - Aphrodisiac drug or Shameful pleasure drug.

3 votes for Number 4. I'll wait a few more days to give anyone else who want to a chance to give their opinion, then I'll begin (I'm still not in the right frame of mind to tackle the second half on Voluntary Enslavement yet, so another short story will be a nice distraction). What you guys think about a combination of 1 and 4? Lara is kidnapped and addicted to a drug that acts like an aphrodisiac. She hates what the drug makes her do, but she's addicted and when she starts suffering withdrawal, she has to crawl back to her enemy for another hit. In this version, I wouldn't need blackmail. I figure her enemy would use the drug itself to make Lara do stuff. Example - Lara goes to her enemy desperate for more of the drug. Enemy makes her dress in her fanciest designer shoes, gown and jewellery. He/she drives Lara to a homeless camp, gives her the aphrodisiac drug and then kicks her out of the car. Beautiful and horny woman surrounded by dirty horny homeless men - nature takes its course. Maybe her enemy hangs around to film it or pays someone else to do it. It'll depend who I use as her enemy. I can also use ABigFan's idea of the drug heightening Lara's sense of smell. So, for the example above, she's hyper aware of the stench of the homeless men, which eclipses the delicate scent of her expensive perfume. She's disgusted by it, but so aroused by the drug that she's powerless to do anything about it. When the arousal effects of the drug wears of, the hyperactive sense of smell persists, leaving Lara feeling self loathing, as her nostrils are filled with the stench of her own body, stinking of dirt, sweat and cum from what she's done. Just spitballing ideas. Let me know what you guys think.

Hi Donkingkong, glad you enjoyed the story. The drug idea sounds interesting. I think if the drug is an aphrodisiac that makes Lara I credibly horny, it'll make her want to have sex all the time, so blackmailing her for sex is a bit redundant. Here are some alternatives I've thought of: 1) Lara's enemy infects her with a genetically engineered virus that makes her sex drive go into overdrive (same effects you described for the aphrodisiac). The twist is that the drug is the antidote, but the effects are only temporary, and then she has to crawl back to her enemy and beg for another dose. 2) Reverse it. Lara is infected with a virus that will kill her (very slowly and painfully), unless she receives regular doses of the antidote, which temporarily counteracts the virus. The side effect of the antidote is that it acts like an aphrodisiac. 3) Lara is drugged with the aphrodisiac and then filmed while doing unspeakable acts under it's influence (sex with dogs or something like that). She is later blackmailed into taking more of the drug and submitting to the sexual demands of her enemy. 4) Lose the aphrodisiac angle, since it'll be very similar to the Idol of Hathor storyline, and the blackmail would be more humiliating for Lara if she doesn't want to do those things, but then has to force a smile and do them anyway. Lara's enemy kidnaps her and gets her addicted to a new designer drug. After being released, she goes through withdrawal and is willing to do anything to get another hit. A Countess to crack-whore story. 5) Something a bit left field - maybe the drug gives Lara a supernatural ability, like it lets her know the history of an artifact just by touching it. The druggies just think they're hallucinations, but Lara knows the truth and she needs more of the drug to make more discoveries. Or maybe (Retcon version) Lara isn't really intelligent at all, and the drug is like the one from the movie Limitless, which increases her intelligence and deductive skills. One of Lara's enemies finds out and cuts off her supply, and then blackmails her into doing things if she wants more. I guess it depends whether you want Lara reluctantly blackmailed into acting like a whore, or whether you want the drug to make her act like a whore.

Hi ABigFan, thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Hi Extreme, regarding part 2, the plan is that the tribe will use her in order of social status - King and Royal Family again, then veteran warriors, then young unproven warriors, then the outcasts and beggars. Lara only has from dawn til dusk to sleep with every man in the village - I figure around 240 for the stated village size of 700 to 800 inhabitants, with the rest being women and children. I also plan on Lara requesting to put on a lesbian show with a young priestess (usually forbidden but Lara is the chosen one) just prior to to dawn to get the men in the mood, since Lara wants the men filled with lust, so they finish as quickly as possible. Hi GhostOfCovid, I'm going a different direction with the new staff, to make Lara feel humiliated all over again. Sarah will tell Lara that they're regular staff that she uses in her other homes, so they won't be involved in any sexual stuff. They also won't know that Green Manor was Lara's former home. They'll just be told that Lara is the daughter of a friend of Sarah's that she's given a job to as a favour. Only the head housekeeper will know the truth. Lara's maid dress will be even shorter, but Lara is ordered to tell the new housekeeper that she thinks the regular maid outfits are boring and she prefers this one. Lara does as she's told, out of fear of being sent back to Konstantin for punishment. Lara's butt plug will be swapped out for a vibrating egg in her pussy that will keep her constantly on edge, but won't provide enough stimulation to cum. The butt plug won't be needed anymore, as with constant sex in the new dungeon, her main issue will be keeping her ass shut. I also want the staff to see her constantly flashing her thong. Lara is given all the shitty jobs she hates, like cleaning bathrooms and toilets. Zip has rigged the manor with cameras prior to departing to work at one of Sarah's companies for 10x what Lara was paying him. Every time Lara sneaks away to get some relief from the vibrating egg, the housekeeper will direct a staff member into that room so that Lara gets caught masturbating. Lara will have to endure the humiliation the staff complaining about her to the housekeeper, calling her a lazy slut who plays with herself instead of working. And the housekeeper telling her that she's a disgrace and doesn't deserve the kindness of a great lady like Countess Green. All of this drives Lara into the arms of Sam to do photoshoots for the website to escape the drudgery and humiliation of being a maid. Sarah tells Lara that her time is more valuable promoting the Tomb Raider brand, and if she follows all of Sam's instructions and uploads daily content, she only has to perform server duties at Charity dinners, but will be relieved of her other duties.

Hi LHunt, I've got some ideas for the staff, but I'll be focusing on part 2 of the African village chapter before I start worrying about the details.

Hi LHunt, I've always thought that men use abuse women physically, whereas with women it also has a physical element, but it'll be psychological and emotional as well. That's the angle I plan to take for Voluntary Enslavement. I've also decided to change things up at Croft Manor. When Lara gets back, she'll find her former staff gone. Winston has been given an all expenses paid around the world Holiday to ease him into retirement and the others have all been given jobs with companies Sarah owns, at far higher salary. One of the things narcissists do in codependent relationships is separate the other party from friends and family. I also think Lara's already experienced peak humiliation from them, so there's nothing more to add. I'm planning on an all female staff - either Asian or Africa - since it'll be humiliating for Lara to be ordered around by foreigners in her own home. They'll treat Lara terribly for a few weeks, at which point Sarah will offer her a way out of her maid, if she agrees to do some photo shoots with Sam for the website.

Hi LHunt, glad you liked it. I haven't written much bondage stuff, so I wanted to see what worked and what didn't for when I write the dungeon scenes in Voluntary Enslavement.

Hi everyone, BDSM Raider has posted (all parts). Let me know what you think. Thanks for being patient. Hopefully I made worth the wait.

Thanks! I remember reading a very early story of his years ago. I'll have to check out his newer stuff.

Hi Donkingkong, definitely in the next couple of days. The story is going to be just under 35,000 words, spread over 3 chapters. The first 2 chapters are completely finished and proofread. I set aside today to finish the last chapter. As soon as it's done and proofread, I'll post the whole story.

Hi GhostOfCovid, normally when I write, I get excited about what I'm writing, so if it starts to feel like a grind and I'm just going through the motions and forcing it, I know it's time for a break. I'm not a professional, so I have the luxury of not having to write something mediocre that I'm not happy with, just to meet a deadline. Plus, the new story has let me experiment writing some bondage and BDSM scenes, since I haven't used that much in my stories. Since that'll be a big part of the sex dungeon in Voluntary Enslavement, it's a good opportunity to get feedback about what worked well and what missed the mark. Moving forward, short 2 to 3 chapter stories will let me write some stories that don't fit well into my longer 10 chapter plus stories

I wasn't ready to finish it at the time and I hate leaving a job unfinished - call it OCD I guess.

I've written BDSM Raider with a young Tomb Raider (19) starting out on her career. We often wonder how attractive and intelligent women wind up with and continually go back to douchebag ex's, but women love a bad boy. Lara falls hard for devilishly handsome sex club owner, Dante, who's confident, charismatic and much more experienced than her. No blackmail in this story. - Lara does it all to herself, as she finds herself so smitten and desperate to win Dante's affection that she behaves in ways that a well brought-up young Countess definitely shouldn't. She's about to discover that even strong and independent women can lose themselves in codependent relationships, as she is gradually seduced and finally corrupted - becoming Dante's pet and the club bicycle.

Hi Donkingkong, going fine. Hope everything's good with you as well. It's a bit of a struggle at the moment to find time to write, but I'm almost finished a side project - 3 chapter short story that I'll try to post in it's entirety in the next week.

Hi everyone, just a quick announcement. LHunt commissioned some artwork on Hentai Foundry for my Voluntary Enslavement story. It's a sneak peak of some stuff that'll be happening in future chapters in Croft Manor's newly renovated sex dungeon. Thanks to LHunt. Link below. https://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/Ethevian/1055435/Isnt-that-too-big-for-Lara--Commission

Hi Extreme, I had to take a few weeks off writing, as the whole family's gotten COVID, then gastro and then the flu (just for something different). Your idea won't really work because Lara won't be talking to any of the tribesmen, as she doesn't speak their language. As I said in our email, I'll look at doing a homeless gangbang in a later story. With regard to the next chapter of Voluntary Enslavement, I've decided to take a break. Writing was becoming a bit of a grind, so I'm finishing another short story at the moment, and then will come back to it later. I'll be posting all parts of the short story together when it's finished.

Hi Extreme, glad you're enjoying the story so far. Part 2 will be Lara's biggest challenge yet - in order to prove her worthiness to remove the Idol, the High Priestess will set Lara an impossible task (John Wick style, since at this point Lara's body count is getting up there). Lara has from sunrise to sunset to satisfy all 270 adult males in the village. With an average 13 hour day, that works out at about 22 an hour, so she'll need to get creative to stay on schedule. Or I might do from dusk till dawn and have the gangbang in the courtyard, illuminated by firelight - could also be hot. I just know I want her under time constraints, so she has to go above and beyond.

Hi LHunt, the mental conditioning will be a big part of the second half of the story - feeding Lara's addiction for attention, validation and sexual gratification, while at the same time slowly shifting her window for what she perceives as acceptable behaviour. It'll be my attempt to show the path that a lot of Instagram models seem to follow, as the go down the rabbit hole. First it's just sexy workout pics, then some suggestive lingerie shots, then they start an Onlyfans and start showing partial nudes, then full nudes, then masturbating with toys - until eventually they're doing hardcore porn, and they're completely unrecognisable from the innocent girl they started out as.

Hi LHunt, just the part 2 to go for Africa and then the rest of the story will be back at Croft/Green Manor. Lots of fun planned in the new sex dungeon with all of the charity members using Lara without her knowing (Lara will be wearing a sensory deprivation helmet to literally keep her in the dark), Lara will unknowingly get an Onlyfans managed by Sam (the public website Sarah alluded to), and the Charity Dinners will slowly get more and more embarrassing for Lara (as all the guests know her secret, although Lara is unaware), until eventually all is revealed but by then it's too late for Lara to turn back.