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  1. 1 vote for business women Hi LHunt, thanks for voting. Whichever ends up winning, I'll be going for a new money / old money dynamic. Women who were excluded from high society because they didn't go to the right school or have the right surname, sick of being looked down on and now able to take their frustrations out on a member of the aristocracy. And Lara, because of her posh upbringing, will feel that serving them is beneath her, which will add to her humiliation.
  2. Hi everyone, looking for some opinions. I've decided not to use the maids for the foot fetish scene. Instead I'll be using them for a fantasy gangbang scene for Lara's Onlyfans. The scene will be staged in front of the greenscreen. Lara is in a tomb and is captured by a tribe of futa goblins. Maids dressed in green body paint, loincloths, masks and strap-ons. Airtight fun ensues. For the foot fetish scene, Lara is going to be attending a rich country club as a masseuse (specifically a foot masseuse, as this group of women have a fetish for that). They recognise her and want to know why she's working there. She has to explain that she's massively in debt and all her Onlyfans money is going to pay off her loans, and she had to get a second job to support her lifestyle. Mary will be giving her instructions in an earpiece. She makes Lara tell the women that she's willing to perform extra services for more money, like using her mouth and tongue to massage their feet, and offering to give them happy endings. The women think it's hilarious that Lara has been reduced to prostituting herself for a few hundred pounds and eagerly take her up on her offer, even going so far as to offer her more money if she'll stoop even lower (masturbating herself on their feet, letting them foot-fuck her pussy and ass etc). Question - Do you think it would be better with dominant business women or bitchy arrogant footballer's wives?
  3. Hi Winkey, the "bad ending" you describe would probably fit in better as an alternative ending for Natla's Revenge. I've done a Natla, Mary and Sam ending, so I'd probably use that for the Sybil Ending. I teased Lara having her Title and Estate stolen from her by Sybil in the other endings, so it would be perfect here. The original idea was for Sybil to be the new Countess of Abingdon and Lara forced to live her her old house, but as Sybil's maid. That's essentially what most of Voluntary Enslavement is about, hence why I haven't bothered to do the last ending for Natla's Revenge up til now; but I like the idea of Lara becoming property, because bitchy Sybil thinks that even indentured servitude is too good for Lara. She wants Lara to be her property! Also, unlike this story, that story had forced bestiality in it (see the Sam ending and the Mary ending), so Sybil could get Lara some friends to play with. I want to finish the current story first, but I'll get to writing the Natla's Revenge alternative ending next. Good idea - cheers!
  4. Hi Wonky, glad you liked the chapter. I already did the puppy dog thing in Chapter 22, but I do have a pony girl scene planned for later. Thanks for the good wishes.
  5. Hi Lara's Special Stallion, glad you're enjoying the story.
  6. Hi LHunt, glad you liked the new chapter. All of the setup is finished. A lot of it felt like admin - describing Lara's daily routine and her changing mental state (a bit monotonous at times, but necessary to flesh out the story) Now I can finally focus on the fun stuff.
  7. Hi everyone, I hope you're all doing well. I finally found time to finish the next chapter. If you're still here, thanks for being patient.
  8. HiABigFan, twins doing great. Their mum and I are both still very sleep deprived, as the babies are still waking up every 3 to 4 hours for a feed. It'll get better once we get them down to just one feed overnight.
  9. Hi SetV, unfortunately no updates. I'm about halfway through the next chapter, but I simply can't find any spare time (or mental energy) to finish it. I'm hoping to finish it once things settle down a bit and I have some free time again.
  10. Hi Edyrn, the return of Lara's Title is all part of Sarah normalising Lara's behaviour and making the changes permanent. In the next chapter (not really a spoiler, because it's not a major plot point), we see Lara a few weeks later attending regular Charity dinners once a week. These are smaller (not as much turnout since they're not sexual), with the guests being everyone who's used her in the playroom that week. So she is literally fucking some of these people a couple of hours earlier and then socialising with them as if nothing happened. All done to feed Lara's sexual addiction and gaslight her into believing everything is normal. When it's all over, Lara will be presented with a fait accompli - she'll never be able to return to a regular sex life or vanilla relationships, and her reputation will be so ruined that she couldn't do so, even if she tried. I'm not a foot person either, but I'm happy to try writing something different and see how it turns out.
  11. Hi LHunt, I think it's thickness rather than length in this case - since she'll have to get past the heel.
  12. I think the maids have won! According to the internet, the average women's shoe size in Vietnam is only a US 5.
  13. Hi LHunt, if the maids, as you've suggested above. Hidden cameras to film with faces of everyone but Lara blurred out (so it can later be posted to her Onlyfans for content). Mary giving Lara instructions through an earpiece. If business women, it would be offsite. Sarah wouldn't be involved. I think the filming would be problematic here, as I don't think business women would want to be filmed and filming them in secret could have legal ramifications for Sarah. That's why I'm leaning towards the maids.
  14. One vote for maids and one vote for business women. I'm leaning towards maids, but I'll wait to see how the voting goes.
  15. Hi everyone, I've started the next chapter (which is slow going because of a lot less free time). I'm going to be doing the foot fetish thing this chapter (I won't give away any spoilers about the other stuff happening, leading up to that). Question for you guys: I'm thinking of doing it with the Vietnamese maids instead of wealthy business women, since I haven't used them for anything yet. The activities will be directed by Mary. I'm picturing the maids sitting around in Croft Manor drinking champagne, while Lara's crawling between them on her hands and knees, giving them foot massages, which escalate into her licking and sucking on their feet and oral sex - and finally the foot-fisting. I thought it might be hot because of the enmity between Lara and the maids. What do you guys think? Stick with the business women or go with the maids?
  16. Hi Extreme, glad your surgery went well. Lara will eventually become aware of what's been done to her, but not until the end, and once it's far too late to do anything about it. What you're suggesting is how I plan to play it - Lara initially kicks Sarah out, but eventually returns to her - like a an emotionally damaged girlfriend who keeps returning to her bad boy ex, despite saying he's narcissistic, toxic, abusive etc... because no one else gives her the same tingles and she gets bored easily and is addicted to the drama.
  17. Hi LHunt, I think acceptance would be the 5th stage, after everything is over and Lara rebuilds her life (I have a plan for a "one year later" chapter to be the final one in the series). I see this stage as more like Lara as a domestic violence victim. Her life is fucked up, everyone else can see it's fucked up, but Lara has been gaslit into believing it's normal.
  18. Thanks ABigFan!
  19. Hi LHunt, glad you enjoyed reading the chapter. The next chapter will start with Sarah explaining the stages of her plan to the reader, to fill in the gaps. Stage 1 - Isolation (the cornerstone of every good cult brainwashing. Isolate her from friends and broader society, so no one can give her support or a second opinion to counteract the gaslighting) Stage 2 - Demoralization (Undermine her confidence, destroy her pride and sense of self worth. Tear her down to make her easier to rebuild) Stage 3 - Destabilization (turn her old life upside down. Push her past her breaking point, so she hits rock bottom. Get her addicted to new behaviours) Stage 4 - Normalisation (Establish new routines and habits to replace the ones from her old life and reinforce her new habits. Gaslight her into thinking that everything is normal, so there's no reason to question her new life).
  20. This makes three, so definitely no more! 😂
  21. Twins came last night - two boys. Both they and mum are doing well. Have a great day everyone!
  22. Hi everyone, Chapter 22 has posted. It's another long one, because there was a lot of plot stuff I wanted to cover, to explain the changes to Lara's personality. I hope you enjoy reading it. Hi LHunt, thanks for the good wishes. My wife is doing fine - twins not here yet, but the obstetrician says they'll be coming sometime in the next week. So life's about to get a lot more complicated!
  23. Hi everyone, sorry for the lack of updates recently - my personal life has been a bit hectic at the moment. The next chapter is finished and I'm in the process of proofreading it (in between doing other stuff). I'm going to try and make a push over the next couple of days to finish the proofreading and get it posted. Thanks for your patience.
  24. Hi Ibex, thanks for reading and commenting. Yeah, the next chapter is going to be crucial for explaining Lara's transformation from reluctant participant to insatiable slut.
  25. Hi Edyrn, no need to apologise. Thanks for taking the time to read!
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