CrossroadsMk2

It looks like we're back after the site went down. Great news! I was worried I'd have to find another site to post on. LHunt, that's a LOT of suggestions. I'm probably not going to use any one idea in it's entirety, but you'll see elements used.

Thanks to everyone who replied (and anyone who replied in the future). I'm going to paste your suggestions into a word document so I can refer back while I'm writing and deciding which direction to go.

Chapter 6 has just posted. Here is my outline for the rest of the story: Sarah is on a mission to turn Lara back into the person she was before she became obsessed with fame and celebrity. To that end, she wants to show Lara how much of a bitch she’s been to the people who do care about her (her staff and Sarah), and how all of the people that she’s been obsessed with sucking up to and winning approval from (other aristocrats and high society people) don’t actually care about her and didn’t hesitate to take part in humiliating her while she was down. The story will be split between several themes: The Charity Dinners – these will get progressively more embarrassing. The next dinner will be a Halloween fancy dress party, with Lara attending as Lady Godiva (greeting the guests naked on horseback), followed by a more demeaning version of the outfit (naked on a broomstick horse) inside the manor, while serving the guests dinner. The final dinner will see Lara performing a live sex show with four well-hung black pornstars, while the party guests get to request different sexual positions etc, which Lara will have to obey. QUESTION 1 – Do you think it would be hotter to have Lara perform in another room, with her performance unknowingly being watched by all of the guests on a large TV screen (Lara is then humiliated when she emerges and realises that they’ve seen everything)? OR Do you think it would be hotter for her to have to perform in front of them, and be forced to look at their faces while they mock and ridicule her, while she performs for their amusement? The Tomb Raider’s Public Image – I really liked the idea of the Japanese Sex Gameshow. The culmination of the gameshow will be Lara being forced to get the same tattoos as her Tomb Raider character, based upon the Wildeer Studios version of Lara Croft (Tribal garter tattoo on her upper thigh, script on her ribcage, probably a tramp stamp of some kind and something on her hip or near her crotch). QUESTION 2 – Any other suggestions for Tomb Raider PR stuff that Lara could do? Sex events arranged by Sarah – Sarah will arrange for several sex events, leading up to the final Charity Dinner. I like the idea of Lara not knowing who is using her, so at each of these orgies, Lara will be wearing opaque contact lenses, which make it look like she staring through a frosted shower screen (she can see shapes and colours close up, but can’t recognise faces). This will make it more embarrassing for her, as her imagination runs wild. Events planned: Girls party with Lara doing pet-play as a puppy. Her arms and legs will be bound, so that she has to walk around on her knees and elbows, with a butt plug tail up her ass. The women make her play fetch and go down on them. She’s spanked whenever she tries to speak, because she lost the privilege of speech when she became and animal, and she’s forced to eat out of a doggy bowl and pea on the lawn outside the manor, in front of everyone. In the end, the women fuck her ass with massively oversized strap-on dildos. Boys party, with Lara forced to walk around as a stripper. She puts on a live sex show with another female stripper, who fuck each other with a long double-ended dildo, while the men throw money. Then Lara has to ride a massive dildo, while the other stripper uses a vibrator to make her cum. Lara then walks around the room giving lap dances, which inevitably end in sex. QUESTION 3 – I feel like Lara’s pussy should remain off-limits except for specific occasions, because it belongs to Sarah. What do you guys think? QUESTION 4 – Any other ideas for sex events with Sarah? Lara’s relationship with the staff and her life at Croft Manor – I feel like this part of the story will just continue on a low simmer. Unless you guys can think of anything else the staff could be doing with her. I was thinking that Sarah would invite Lara’s friends over and make her serve them, which would be very embarrassing for her, and distressing when they all start treating her like a lowly maid. Later on, Sarah will have Lara trained as a masseuse and make her give massages to her female friends. She’ll be distressed to discover that they’ve all signed non-disclosure agreements and she has to give them all happy endings, which they’re all eager to get. I’m thinking of reintroducing two old frenemies from my other stories here (Mary and Sybil), who will get some double fisting action with Lara, while Sarah films it). This will be turned into yet another artwork, but Sarah makes sure that both women’s faces will be visible in it. Later, Mary and Sybil try to blackmail Lara, but are thwarted when Sarah shows them the painting, since they know it will ruin their reputations as well. Question 5 – What do you think of the masseuse idea, or do you think something else would be better? Question 6 – Any other ideas for stuff that Lara should be doing with her staff (Winston, Allister, Zip and Tori)? That’s about it from me. Let me know what you guys think.

Hi GhostOfCovid, I'm doing the final proofread of chapter 6 tonight after work and will be posting it right after. I really like the idea of the Japanese gameshow. I'm not really familiar with them, so I'd have to do some research. Anything particular you'd recommend for inspiration? Hi LHunt, thanks for all of the suggestions. You're spot on about Sarah trying to teach Lara humility. Everything Sarah is doing is to show Lara that: 1) she treated her staff and especially Sarah like a bitch in the past and needs to make amends. 2) the people she's been sucking up to (other aristocrats, wealthy socialites etc) don't actually care about her and never did. They were only too eager to take part in humiliating her and she needs to stop trying to win their approval. Sarah wants to bring back the old Lara that she fell in love with at school, before she became obsessed with fame and celebrity. I do plan a happy ending with Lara and Sarah ending up together, but I'll go into more detail after the next chapter is posted. Again, I'll take a vote from you guys on what ideas are most popular.

Hi TR_FAN, send the first batch of your comic and I'll get to it when I can. Hi LHunt, no plans for animal stuff in this story (since I've done it in all of the other ones). The rugby stadium idea is interesting. I want to do something involving sex games like that, although probably not that exact idea but something similar. Once I post the next chapter, I'll outline my plans for the remainder of the story and I'll be taking suggestions then, so feel free to put forward any ideas you have.

Hi Lhunt, thanks for posting and I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Hello everyone, just a quick apology. I've run out of time to finish proofreading the next chapter (life got in the way), so I won't be posting it today. It should be up early next week. After that, I'll post a general outline on where I want the story to go and ideas for individual chapters/scenes, and take feedback and suggestions from you guys. Then I'll disappear for a few months and write the second half of the story.

Hi Canosan, thanks for the review and I'm happy you're enjoying my stories.

Hi Extreme, glad you're enjoying my writing style, chapter length etc.

Hi TR_FAN, without giving anything away, the next chapter will have some new clothing for you. Once I've posted it, I'll outline my plans for the rest of the story and take suggestions. Regarding the club one, it was called BDSM Raider, and I plan to finish that story after this one is done.

Hi TR_FAN, always happy to proofread your comics. Regarding the descriptions of Lara's day, it's always a fine line between going into too much detail on the one hand and telling the reader something rather than showing them, and thus skimming over details they wanted to know. The early chapters were always going to be more detailed to set the scene, but now that's done, I feel like I can summarise some aspects moving forward, so it doesn't get repetitive, and focus on other things. The next chapter will be the first where Lara leaves Croft Manor, and the story's focus will shift away from the staff using her and pivot to her interactions with her former social circle. No plans for any overseas adventures - I'll save that for future Supernatural Adventures chapters. I feel like the chapter length is about right (roughly 10,000 words) but I'll listen to feedback from everyone else. If enough people want shorter, then I'll go in that direction for future stories.

Hi Extreme, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Winston is always the most challenging person to explain taking advantage of Lara, since he's her oldest friend and helped raise her after her parents died. In previous stories I've used drugs (Natla's Revenge) and magic (Supernatural Adventures), but this time I wanted to try something more rooted in reality - and I figured everyone has a secret fetish for something, so why not straight laced old Winston? It's the main reason I created the character of Shaun, Sarah's personal chef and an old war buddy of Winston's. I needed someone to act as the devil on Winston's shoulder, whispering advice into his ear. Just two more chapters to go and then I'll outline my plans for the second half of the story, and start taking suggestions for things you guys would like to see.

Hi Extreme, I'm happy you're enjoying the story so far. Regarding Winston and Shaun, yes. This story is focusing a lot more on Lara's interpersonal relationships, rather than just having random sexual encounters. It's a slower buildup than I've done previously, but hopefully the payoff will be a more interesting and compelling story.

Hi SailorNemesis, thanks for the positive reviews. I think you're going to like where this story is going.

Hi GhostOfCovid, the last Natla's Revenge ending is the Sybil one. Lara's ancestral home and title get sold to Sybil, her rival, and Lara is blackmailed into becoming a pornstar on Onlyfans.

Hi Mr Dead, this will not be another "Loses Everything" ending - I think I've done that to death in the Natla's Revenge endings. Also, I always find myself secretly rooting for Lara and I feel bad if things end too badly for her

Hi Extreme, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Don't want to give away too much yet, but I will take suggestions and ideas for the second half of the story, once the first 6 chapters are posted (aside from the ending, which is already planned).

Hi WillowDarkling, I don't accept money in any form (commissions, donations, support etc). I don't want any legal problems for AFF, or myself. I just write for fun. The only thing I do accept is story suggestions and feedback.

Hi GhostOfCovid, glad you're enjoying the new story. It sounds like my intro to Tomb Raider was the same as yours - Angelina Jolie movies, then some of the books. You're very perceptive about Lara's Title, but I won't give anything away (as I have a tendency of doing).

Hi everyone, I would have replied sooner but for some reason no notifications have been emailing through to tell me anyone was posting here. I only checked because I thought it was weird that no one was posting anything - I though maybe everyone had left the website. Anyway, it was nice to be missed. I just needed a break re: family commitments, but I promise to leave this forum topic up (even if I'm not writing for a bit) so we can keep in touch. You can also message me through the AFF forum's message function. Regarding this story, it's one that I've wanted to write properly for a while. Unfortunately no animal stuff planned in this one, but since animal stuff has been in most of my other stories, I'll think you'll survive. Regarding any suggestions for this story, I'd recommend you wait until the first 6 chapters are all posted, so you get a feel for where the story is going. Anyhow, I just posted Chapter 2, and I'll be posting a new chapter every Thursday/Friday for the next 4 weeks. Then there'll be a bit of a pause while I write the next lot of chapters, to be posted towards the end of the year.

Hi TR_FAN, always happy to help. I started a new AFF topic for updates as well (not sure if you saw the older Post).

Hi Farcry, I'm glad you enjoyed the Mary ending. I probably won't be starting the Sybil ending until next year. I want to finish the current story (still deciding on a title) and BDSM Raider first.

Hi Darcy, I do intend to write the last ending for Natla's Revenge, but as far as I'm aware, the only ending I have left to do is the Sybil pornstar ending. You said two chapters, so what's the second one?

Hi all, Crossroadsmk2 here: I shut down the last thread because it was specifically for new story ideas and for the immediate future I'm not looking to start anything new - rather I just want to finish writing the stuff I already have planned. I also wanted to take a bit of a break from everything. However, I became aware that a few of you were asking about me on some of the other threads (thanks for the interest), so I'm taking Extreme's advice and starting another thread here, so we can keep in touch. Current update: I'm 4 chapters into my next story, which is a re-write of the very first story I ever posted to AFF under my original username Crossroads Daemon. I subsequently deleted that story because the plot was a bit of a mess and I wasn't happy with it. The story will be about 10 chapters long, but I won't be posting it until the whole thing is finished - then I'll post one chapter per week. Owing to family commitments, I don't have time to write regularly at the moment, and I don't want to have month long gaps between chapters. After that story is done (I'm aiming to have it finished around the middle of the year), I'm going to finish BDSM Raider - approximately 5 to 6 chapters planned length for that one.

Hi Extreme, Yeah, I should probably make a new thread, since I don't want to hijack this one. I shut down the last one for a break and because it's title said new story ideas and I'm not looking to start any new stories - just finishing the stuff I already have planned. I'll take your suggestion and start a thread called Crossroadsmk2 Updates.