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Hi Donkingkong, glad you liked the chapter. Yes, I will be doing BDSM stuff like the Squale666 stuff. Lara's roadtrip is to get her out of Croft Manor for a few weeks, so Sarah can make some "renovations" to the basement level. Let me know if there are any particular things you'd like to see. My knowledge of BDSM is pretty limited, so I'm happy to take suggestions/requests.

Hi Extreme, I haven't decided yet (still a long way to go), but I was leaning towards him and Shaun leaving, with Tori taking over his duties and hiring some new staff to help run the manor (a pair of lesbian maids to dominate Lara and pair of well-hung horny gardeners etc).

Hi Extreme, glad you liked the latest chapter. Regarding the ending, you're right that things have gone too far to go completely back to normal. I see Lara having a self realisation about how self-obsessed and narcissistic she's become, and try to make amends. She'll admit she had feelings for Sarah back in school, but was too worried about what other people would think and turned on her; she'll admit what a teasing bitch she was to her staff etc. After the year is out, Lara will get her Title back, but won't have anything to do with English upper society after seeing their true colours. Sarah and Lara get engaged and stay living together at Croft Manor. The maid stuff ends, as Lara really hates menial labour, although Lara agrees to continue limited sexual slavery (probably 1 week per month), including by the staff. When asked why not more often, she'll answer that it wouldn't be special if it happened every day. Lara is still a tease, but the staff don't mind because they know they'll get to punish her for it later each month. Winston retires. Tori takes over his role as Butler/head housekeeper, running Croft Manor. Zip and Alister get more credit for Lara's discoveries. I see the story ending with Lara off to raid another tomb, with a butt plug secretly stuck up her ass. So, the same but also not, if that makes sense?

Hi LHunt. Thanks for the positive feedback. Glad you're enjoying it.

Chapter 7 has posted. Next chapter, Lara will be heading to Tokyo for a sexy gameshow appearance and some naked sushi modelling.

Hi Donkingkong, you have excellent taste. This was one of my favourites as well, along with the Cunt Raider series by Meik Dirks, although I haven't looked at it in years. Thanks for the trip down memory - lots of inspiration for the "Red Room" sex dungeon that Sarah will be constructing in the basement level of Croft Manor, while Lara is busy on her road trip. To everyone - I've decided to post the chapters as I finish them. Chapter 7 is about 80% done and will then need to be proof read, so I'll hopefully get time to finish and post it in the next week or two.

Hi GhostOfCovid, I'm planning to release them as a batch towards the end of the year (one per week like the first lot), but I'm open to releasing them as I finish them (if that's what you guys would prefer. The downside of that is I won't be able to post with any sort of regularity (e.g. one chapter per month etc) as my writing time is a bit all over the place, and entirely depends on where I can fit it in around work and family commitments.

Hi LHunt, I'll probably go with an art auction at one of the final Charity Dinners, towards the end of Lara's year of slavery - once her full debauchery is revealed to her social peers. I was thinking about leaving the artworks at Croft Manor, but I think it would be more embarrassing for Lara knowing that they were out in the world, where anyone could see them. The staff will be generously compensated to sell the paintings they've been gifted, and a Cindy of sale might be that they can't be resold on the open market for 30 years. None of the winners would want to sell anyway, as they are both a status symbol and in investment which will only increase in value when the artist finally dies.

Hi LHunt, the issue with a lot of your ideas is they're too big and involve too many people (no way to keep it secret). There's no way anyone would trust all 90 members of a Bikie gang not to brag about it. That's not to say that I won't use some elements of your ideas, but not the whole thing. That's why I'm breaking the story into distinct sections. The stuff where Lara is being used openly is entirely in private and involves other members of high society (who have their own reputations at stake and can therefore be trusted to only gossip with other members of their social circle, but not the media or the peasants). The stuff involving her being lent out will only involve a feeling trusted individuals, or with Lara's identity being concealed. The openly public stuff (like the gaming convention) will mostly involve humiliation and forced exhibitionism. So far, this is the plan for the upcoming chapters: (7) More extreme anal play with the staff (horse dildo, triple anal) and Lara serving at her second Charity Dinner. The artist that has been painting Lara's sex portraits is going to be doing a life drawing exhibition after dinner. Unfortunately, the nude model cancelled at the last minute. It looks like the show won't go ahead until Lara is convinced to fill in and pose naked in front of everyone. (8) Lara travels to Tokyo. She'll appear on a wild Japanese gameshow to promote her new game. No firm events yet, except that all contestants will wear bikinis and there's going to be a lot of Sybian/vibrator play. Afterwards, Lara is a nyotaimori model (eating sushi off a naked woman), with Takamoto and Nishimura both in attendance (and later humiliating sexual encounters with each, where she has to seduce them to further Sarah's business interests, but neither will know about the contract and will just think Lara's a slut). (9) Lara spends a week in Siberia with Konstantin (who survived) in his gulag prison. Lots of scope to be used by the guards and then given to the prisoners when her cooperation isn't enthusiastic enough. I think I can leave her face uncovered for this one, as the guards will all be loyal to Konstantin, while the prisoners will never escape to tell anyone. (10) Lara travels back to the hidden city of Paititi and has to help Dominguez open a hidden tomb. The key to unlocking the doors will be Lara taking progressively larger stone phalluses attached to different animal statues. It will probably end with a gangbang involving Dominguez and his men. (11) Maybe something with Sam. I'm thinking I want it to involve Sam being a documentary film maker. Maybe Sam wants to film a groundbreaking sex documentary, and wants to use Lara as the model (with her face blurred). It could involve a clear glass dildo with a HD camera mounted in the tip, giving the first ever internal view of sex (vaginal, oral, anal etc). That's the plan, anyway. I just need to find the time to execute it.

Hi LHunt, no animal stuff for this story. I would like to include Sam, but I'm having trouble thinking of what kinky stuff she might be into. It can't just be a lesbian thing, because it'll be too similar to what Lara is already doing with Sarah and Tori.

Thanks everyone for your suggestions. Now I need to find time to write it up. I've started chapter 7, and like I said previously, I want to finish another 4 or 5 and then post them together, rather than posting them as I finish them, so they are more coherent and consistent. But feel free to contact me with suggestions or requests for updates (just don't expect too much before the later part of the year). Thanks.

Hi Donkingkong, the plan will be to finish 4 or 5 chapters and then post them all one week apart, like for the first 6. I think this will make the story more consistent, since I've got a lot less time for writing at the moment, and there are long gaps between sessions. So probably nothing new will be posted until the end of the year. Question for everyone - From any Tomb Raider game (original, reboot etc) who is your favourite villain or other characters that you'd like to see make an appearance in Voluntary Enslavement? It doesn't matter if they die in game, as I can write around that. The reason I ask is I'm going to have the Yakuza gangster Takamoto and her old ally Nishimura make an appearance after Lara travels to Tokyo to appear on a gameshow (for some naked sushi eating afterwards). I need Lara on a bit of a roadtrip, so that Sarah can complete some "renovations" to Croft Manor.

It looks like we're back after the site went down. Great news! I was worried I'd have to find another site to post on. LHunt, that's a LOT of suggestions. I'm probably not going to use any one idea in it's entirety, but you'll see elements used.

Thanks to everyone who replied (and anyone who replied in the future). I'm going to paste your suggestions into a word document so I can refer back while I'm writing and deciding which direction to go.

Chapter 6 has just posted. Here is my outline for the rest of the story: Sarah is on a mission to turn Lara back into the person she was before she became obsessed with fame and celebrity. To that end, she wants to show Lara how much of a bitch she’s been to the people who do care about her (her staff and Sarah), and how all of the people that she’s been obsessed with sucking up to and winning approval from (other aristocrats and high society people) don’t actually care about her and didn’t hesitate to take part in humiliating her while she was down. The story will be split between several themes: The Charity Dinners – these will get progressively more embarrassing. The next dinner will be a Halloween fancy dress party, with Lara attending as Lady Godiva (greeting the guests naked on horseback), followed by a more demeaning version of the outfit (naked on a broomstick horse) inside the manor, while serving the guests dinner. The final dinner will see Lara performing a live sex show with four well-hung black pornstars, while the party guests get to request different sexual positions etc, which Lara will have to obey. QUESTION 1 – Do you think it would be hotter to have Lara perform in another room, with her performance unknowingly being watched by all of the guests on a large TV screen (Lara is then humiliated when she emerges and realises that they’ve seen everything)? OR Do you think it would be hotter for her to have to perform in front of them, and be forced to look at their faces while they mock and ridicule her, while she performs for their amusement? The Tomb Raider’s Public Image – I really liked the idea of the Japanese Sex Gameshow. The culmination of the gameshow will be Lara being forced to get the same tattoos as her Tomb Raider character, based upon the Wildeer Studios version of Lara Croft (Tribal garter tattoo on her upper thigh, script on her ribcage, probably a tramp stamp of some kind and something on her hip or near her crotch). QUESTION 2 – Any other suggestions for Tomb Raider PR stuff that Lara could do? Sex events arranged by Sarah – Sarah will arrange for several sex events, leading up to the final Charity Dinner. I like the idea of Lara not knowing who is using her, so at each of these orgies, Lara will be wearing opaque contact lenses, which make it look like she staring through a frosted shower screen (she can see shapes and colours close up, but can’t recognise faces). This will make it more embarrassing for her, as her imagination runs wild. Events planned: Girls party with Lara doing pet-play as a puppy. Her arms and legs will be bound, so that she has to walk around on her knees and elbows, with a butt plug tail up her ass. The women make her play fetch and go down on them. She’s spanked whenever she tries to speak, because she lost the privilege of speech when she became and animal, and she’s forced to eat out of a doggy bowl and pea on the lawn outside the manor, in front of everyone. In the end, the women fuck her ass with massively oversized strap-on dildos. Boys party, with Lara forced to walk around as a stripper. She puts on a live sex show with another female stripper, who fuck each other with a long double-ended dildo, while the men throw money. Then Lara has to ride a massive dildo, while the other stripper uses a vibrator to make her cum. Lara then walks around the room giving lap dances, which inevitably end in sex. QUESTION 3 – I feel like Lara’s pussy should remain off-limits except for specific occasions, because it belongs to Sarah. What do you guys think? QUESTION 4 – Any other ideas for sex events with Sarah? Lara’s relationship with the staff and her life at Croft Manor – I feel like this part of the story will just continue on a low simmer. Unless you guys can think of anything else the staff could be doing with her. I was thinking that Sarah would invite Lara’s friends over and make her serve them, which would be very embarrassing for her, and distressing when they all start treating her like a lowly maid. Later on, Sarah will have Lara trained as a masseuse and make her give massages to her female friends. She’ll be distressed to discover that they’ve all signed non-disclosure agreements and she has to give them all happy endings, which they’re all eager to get. I’m thinking of reintroducing two old frenemies from my other stories here (Mary and Sybil), who will get some double fisting action with Lara, while Sarah films it). This will be turned into yet another artwork, but Sarah makes sure that both women’s faces will be visible in it. Later, Mary and Sybil try to blackmail Lara, but are thwarted when Sarah shows them the painting, since they know it will ruin their reputations as well. Question 5 – What do you think of the masseuse idea, or do you think something else would be better? Question 6 – Any other ideas for stuff that Lara should be doing with her staff (Winston, Allister, Zip and Tori)? That’s about it from me. Let me know what you guys think.

Hi GhostOfCovid, I'm doing the final proofread of chapter 6 tonight after work and will be posting it right after. I really like the idea of the Japanese gameshow. I'm not really familiar with them, so I'd have to do some research. Anything particular you'd recommend for inspiration? Hi LHunt, thanks for all of the suggestions. You're spot on about Sarah trying to teach Lara humility. Everything Sarah is doing is to show Lara that: 1) she treated her staff and especially Sarah like a bitch in the past and needs to make amends. 2) the people she's been sucking up to (other aristocrats, wealthy socialites etc) don't actually care about her and never did. They were only too eager to take part in humiliating her and she needs to stop trying to win their approval. Sarah wants to bring back the old Lara that she fell in love with at school, before she became obsessed with fame and celebrity. I do plan a happy ending with Lara and Sarah ending up together, but I'll go into more detail after the next chapter is posted. Again, I'll take a vote from you guys on what ideas are most popular.

Hi TR_FAN, send the first batch of your comic and I'll get to it when I can. Hi LHunt, no plans for animal stuff in this story (since I've done it in all of the other ones). The rugby stadium idea is interesting. I want to do something involving sex games like that, although probably not that exact idea but something similar. Once I post the next chapter, I'll outline my plans for the remainder of the story and I'll be taking suggestions then, so feel free to put forward any ideas you have.

Hi Lhunt, thanks for posting and I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Hello everyone, just a quick apology. I've run out of time to finish proofreading the next chapter (life got in the way), so I won't be posting it today. It should be up early next week. After that, I'll post a general outline on where I want the story to go and ideas for individual chapters/scenes, and take feedback and suggestions from you guys. Then I'll disappear for a few months and write the second half of the story.

Hi Canosan, thanks for the review and I'm happy you're enjoying my stories.

Hi Extreme, glad you're enjoying my writing style, chapter length etc.

Hi TR_FAN, without giving anything away, the next chapter will have some new clothing for you. Once I've posted it, I'll outline my plans for the rest of the story and take suggestions. Regarding the club one, it was called BDSM Raider, and I plan to finish that story after this one is done.

Hi TR_FAN, always happy to proofread your comics. Regarding the descriptions of Lara's day, it's always a fine line between going into too much detail on the one hand and telling the reader something rather than showing them, and thus skimming over details they wanted to know. The early chapters were always going to be more detailed to set the scene, but now that's done, I feel like I can summarise some aspects moving forward, so it doesn't get repetitive, and focus on other things. The next chapter will be the first where Lara leaves Croft Manor, and the story's focus will shift away from the staff using her and pivot to her interactions with her former social circle. No plans for any overseas adventures - I'll save that for future Supernatural Adventures chapters. I feel like the chapter length is about right (roughly 10,000 words) but I'll listen to feedback from everyone else. If enough people want shorter, then I'll go in that direction for future stories.

Hi Extreme, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Winston is always the most challenging person to explain taking advantage of Lara, since he's her oldest friend and helped raise her after her parents died. In previous stories I've used drugs (Natla's Revenge) and magic (Supernatural Adventures), but this time I wanted to try something more rooted in reality - and I figured everyone has a secret fetish for something, so why not straight laced old Winston? It's the main reason I created the character of Shaun, Sarah's personal chef and an old war buddy of Winston's. I needed someone to act as the devil on Winston's shoulder, whispering advice into his ear. Just two more chapters to go and then I'll outline my plans for the second half of the story, and start taking suggestions for things you guys would like to see.

Hi Extreme, I'm happy you're enjoying the story so far. Regarding Winston and Shaun, yes. This story is focusing a lot more on Lara's interpersonal relationships, rather than just having random sexual encounters. It's a slower buildup than I've done previously, but hopefully the payoff will be a more interesting and compelling story.