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So that's 3 votes for African tribesmen. I might even recycle my character of King Ajola from Idol of Hathor (Supernatural Adventures). It could be a fun way to Lara to attone for stealing their sacred Idol, although I'll stay away from the supernatural stuff - in this version, it'll just be an ordinary treasure that she stole.

Hi Donkingkong, Sam won't know it's Lara and will think it's a non-English-speaking native, so she'll talk freely to her while they have sex. She'll tell that native that she reminds her of Lara, and then let Lara know what she really thinks of her. It's more psychological torture for Lara - being used by a close friend, who she learns doesn't like her very much anymore, because of her bitchy personality, and the constant fear of discovery. Lara meanwhile will be too embarrassed to let Sam know it's really her. I haven't decided whether to leave it at that, or to have a future schapter where Sarah shows Sam a video of Lara being "made up" to play the role of temple whore. That could lead to Sam feeling deceived by Lara, which would then be grounds for her to use Lara to film her sex documentary with internal views from Dildo cameras.

The Siberian prison beatdown will happen after this (I haven't forgotten - the Siberian story will get 2 full chapters). I had to change the order because Lara will end up getting tattoos at the end of it - making her too recognisable for the public sex in the tribal chapter.

Hello all, I'm about half way done writing the gameshow chapter, but I'll need to set-up the next chapter too, so I'm looking for opinions. Please vote below: I've decided that Lara will visit a primitive tribe and as part of a local religious custom, become the temple whore. Sam will be at the location filming a documentary, but won't recognise Lara because of her disguise. However, Sam will feel unconsciously drawn to the enigmatic new temple whore, following her around and filming her activities, before finally giving into temptation herself and relieving some subconscious sexual urges. Option 1: Paititi, South America Lara is given a full-body henna tattoo, covering every inch of skin, so that Sam would never in a million years guess that it's actually Lara under there. Option 2: Africa Tribal Village Lara will be given an advanced Henna-based fake tan that turns every inch of her skin completely black, and hair will be tied into long dreadlocks, so she looks like a fine-boned native. For either option, I'll add religiously appropriate body and face paint, along with golden hoops through her ears and septum to disguise her features even further. I'm just undecided on which location to use.

Hi LHunt, some horse dildo stuff is planned for when Lara's back at the Manor, but like I said, I'm focussed on the away chapters for now.

Hi GhostOfCovid, I'll try not to disappoint. Hi LHunt, lots of ideas for when Lara's back at the Manor. For now I'll be focusing on the next 4 chapters when Lara's away.

Hi Donkingkong, life's fine - busy with work, but I'll have some free time in the next week, so I'll make an effort to finish the next chapter. My aim will be to post it in the next 2 weeks. Then I'll give an update regarding the next few chapters. Now that I've decided Lara will be getting her tattoos done in Siberia, there are some scenes, like her less than triumphant return to Paititi, that will have to happen before then, but I'll go into that more once this chapter is complete.

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Hi Donkingkong, I've just started Chapter 9 (the Japanese gameshow). I usually try to write little bits here and there, if I have a free hour in the evenings, but I probably won't have time to finish it for about 2 weeks or so.

Hi LHunt, thanks for the ideas. I think I'll invent something. I'm going to lean heavily on symbology for the tattoos. For example, the Wildeer Lara has a garter belt tattoo - which was traditionally a symbol worn by European prostitutes to identify themselves. I plan to give all of Lara's tattoos a similar treatment, maybe with symbols from other cultures as well. The tattoos will look interesting and cool to normies, but to anyone in the know, Lara will basically be a walking billboard advertising that she's a whore. I want this revealed to Lara later on, either by attending an exhibition or lecture and seeing versions of her tattoos on display, with written explanations. However, I'll be concentrating on wrapping up the Tokyo gameshow chapter next, before I worry to much about that.

Hi LHunt, probably not that obvious. I'd like to make it something that could be innocent unless you know the hidden meaning (like Queen of Spades tattoo).

Hi LHunt, no Sarah won't despise Lara. At it's core, this is a love story (albeit a pretty fucked up one), with Sarah trying to show Lara how she's become a narcissist and then trying to change her back into who she was before.

Hi LHunt, just watched the wipeout video. I was thinking an obstacle course for game number 2, but with all of the girls running at the same time, like a race. Seems the perfect place to have the other girls gang up on Lara, after her dominant performance in game number 1.

Hi Extreme, I'm relying on Lara not knowing exactly what Sarah told Takamoto and her fear of being punished if she is caught disobeying Sarah's instructions. In the next few chapters, I'm going to build on that and slowly alter the way Lara thinks about herself and Sarah. Eventually, Lara will internally think of Sarah as "Lady Sarah", while her own previous life as the Countess of Abingdon will feel like a distant dream.

Hi LHunt, as usual thanks for the ideas.

Hi LHunt, so in the Gameshow each round will eliminate one contestant. So there'll be 6 for the first game, 5 for the second, 4 for the third etc. until the last 2 girls standing compete in game 5. For the game ideas, I don't want anything as overt as live sex acts (like masturbating with fruit, getting poked by dildos). I want the Gameshow to feel like something that could actually be on TV, rather than a porn parody gameshow. The nudity will be accidental (bikinis slipping off or getting yanked by another contestant) rather than scripted. That way it gives the highly competitive Lara a choice. Imagine in a water obstacle course (an idea I'll probably use) where Lara belly flops into the water and her bikini top is knocked off, exposing her breasts. Does she waste time to go back for it and risk losing too much time, or does she complete the rest of the obstacle course topless? Like I said, more of a softcore gameshow than an overtly hardcore one. Also with only female contestants. Regarding the tramp stamp tattoo, I feel like any words (NO HOLES BARRED) are too obvious. I want it to be a picture or symbol design with a hidden meaning (like how swingers use pineapple tattoos to identify each other at parties). I think I'll just have to invent something, because my research has come up empty.

Hi Donkingkong, no plans for extreme tatts in intimate areas, as I think I did that to death in Natla's Revenge. This is more about embarassment and psychological warfare against Lara - she prides herself on being posh and sophisticated, she's always hated visible tattoos because she thinks they make a girl look cheap and slutty. Now she'll have some, so in her mind, what does that make her? That said, I would like to find a tramp stamp tattoo that implies sexual activity but isn't overly sexual (No SLUT or WHORE tattoos). Think something like the Queen of Spades tattoo (means a girl is into black guys), but instead one that signals that Lara is into anal sex or gangbangs. I'm not having much luck finding any tattoos like that though, so I might just have to invent one for the story.

Hi Donkingkong, I'm conflicted about the prison tattoo idea, because I wanted to give Lara the same tattoos as her rebooted Tomb Raider character in the adult version of the game - basically similar to the Wildeer Studios tattoos with some tweaks: garter tattoo on left thigh, some sort of tramp stamp on lower back, text on ribs etc. I'm happy to have her agree to receive some tattoos at the prison (after she's broken and will agree to anything just to get out) but I would want it professionally done. I feel like a rough tattoo given by prisoners would detract from her eventual look, which I want to mirror her XXX game.

Hi Donkingkong, leave it with me and don't worry - not too bloody and no being knocked unconscious. This will be Chapter 10, with Chapter 9 being the Japanese Gameshow. Hi LHunt, I'll consider adding Lara's uncle to a BDSM scene in the new sex dungeon that Sarah's building in the basement of Croft Manor. Regarding the Gameshow, I'm looking for game suggestions. It can't be anything overtly sexual (no gangbangs etc.), but more focussed on opportunities for embarassment. Ideas so far: Game 1 - Electric bumper cars with built in Sybians, where the faster the women drive, the faster their Sybian seat vibrates, and if they hit anything or get rammed, it vibrates at maximum. I foresee many cross-eyed crashes. Game 2 - Human lawn bowls. The girls (wearing bikinis and covered in lubricant jelly) launch themselves down a shallow ramp towards a bullseye and try to land as close as possible. Like lawn bowls, knocking another girl out of the circle is allowed. Many opportunities for nip slips and accidental exhibitionism. I'm looking for some other ideas for the other 3 elimination games. I want Lara to win but get more and more embarrassed. Just no wrestling, since Chapter 10 will have a big fight scene (and honestly, an Instagram model wouldn't stand a chance against Lara anyway).

Hi Donkingkong, I'm picking up what you're putting down. It should fit in well with the story, since Sarah is trying to strip Lara of her arrogance. Some themes I'm thinking of for the scene: - hard punches to the SAR plexus, really painful and knocking the wind out of Lara, but her attacker refusing to give her the mercy of knocking her out. More of a psychological and emotional to blow make Lara quit and tap out. - hard slaps to the face, breasts and ass, again intended more for pain than injury. - dragged across the ground by the hair. - finally pisses herself at the prospect of more pain and ends up crying and begging. Loses all pride and agrees to anything just to make it stop. Let me know if you have any specific ideas for stuff you'd like to see. In terms of injury, I'll probably just leave it at a blood nose, red marks etc, as I don't want her too injured to participate in later scenes.

Hi Donkingkong, glad you enjoyed it. I think the Siberian chapter will actually be faster paced - i.e. sex with guards and then prisoners straight off the bat. It's a prison camp, so not much need for buildup or explanation there.

Hi Mr Dead, don't worry - I don't take anything personally. Voluntary Enslavement was always going to rehash some previous stuff, because it's a rewrite of my first ever story, but done properly. After I get it done, I'll be ready to move onto new things.

Hi Mr Dead, sorry to hear you're bored with the current story, but I understand that it's not going to be for everyone. This story definitely has a slower pace and more of a gradual buildup than my previous ones. Regarding your own story, I wish you all the best and look forward to reading it when it's done.

Chapter 8 has posted. I was going to have the Japanese events be one chapter, but I decided to expand upon the dinner scene and make Lara's encounter with Takamoto a gangbang instead, so I'll be doing the gameshow next chapter instead.

Hi LHunt, sorry not really into the trans thing, so no plans for it in this story. The fashion show angle is kind of interesting, but I'll have to see where it fits. The next charity dinner will be a fancy dress ball, with Lara appearing as Lady Godiva. The final Charity dinner will be a full-on gangbang with Lara being publicly outed as a slut and all of the guests using her. I might have an in-between dinner, if I can think of a theme that bridges the gap between forced nudity and full-on sex, but the main idea of the charity Dinners is to show a steady escalation in events until Lara's public and private lives collide. Hi Donkingkong, first the update. Chapter 8 should be ready towards the end of the week, if I get time to finish proofreading. Regarding the beatdown, I think I can make it fit into the Siberian gulag chapter. I'll make Lara fight a hugely muscled prisoner or guard (think Zangief from Street Fighter). Rules are simple - if she wins, she gets to go home. If she loses, she has to serve the prison's occupants.