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Omg fucking Elliot, I swear to God— Alexis was right, but I don’t blame Connor at all for being so naïve. He’s such a sweetheart. But Elliot can go fucking die in a hole. I am so angry at him, and worried for Connor, and I feel so much for how I know Alexis will be when he discovers what’s happened. You’re a goddamn genius, I swear. An evil genius, but a genius nonetheless. Every time I come on here, I check your story to see if it’s updated. I love it so much. So, so much. <3 EDIT: I can’t seem to log in or leave reviews on the main site right now but once I can I’ll transfer this over.

Hey folx! I’m looking for some people to beta read the first in my new original m/m series, loosely titled ‘The Invader Episodics’. It follows the non-con/dub-con love story of Kolbu, a huge Murkuri berserker chosen to inherit an army, and Fray, a slender Elbiyan nobleman with a rape fetish who can’t seem to stop getting captured. The entire story arc spans a decade, from when Fray is 19 and Kolbu is 23 to when they are both in positions of power among their people. But the first novella is just their first encounter. Over time the power balance shifts to a more equal one and there is romance, as well as some action/adventure and intrigue. I’m not sure how long the series will be yet but I have two written and at least three more planned. Tags: rape, master/slave, humiliation, Stockholm syndrome, dubious consent, violence, angst, hurt/comfort, anal, m/m, fingering, oral, bondage, romance Each novella is around 10k words, 7 chapters. Here’s how it’ll work: You link me an example of your writing I send you a link to the first chapter you read it if you like it then you leave feedback on it and I send the other 6 you read those and answer the questions I provide, and give me your own thoughts that aren’t covered if you so desire if you don’t like it, I thank you for your time and you go on your merry way If you’re interested, reply here or shoot me a DM, or an email at eden(dot)blythe(dot)author(at)gmail.com Ideally I’m looking to find some people to beta the entire series out of this thread, but even if you just do the first one I will be glad of your help. Full disclosure, I’m aiming to publish these on the ‘Zon (along with an erotic art Patreon), but I will post the first novella on AFF and it does work as a stand-alone. If you’d like to get a sense of my writing style before you take the plunge, here’s a link to my M/F story containing similar kinks and themes, published without any betas: The Price of Himself Thanks for reading and hope to hear from you soon.

Author: Eden Blythe Title: The Price of Himself Summary: Tobias is a virgin, raised in a puritanical society that segregates men and women from a young age. His country is at war with its polar opposite; a sex-loving, largely polyamorous nation who are conquering their foe with alarming speed. After a surprise ambush, Tobias is taken as a sex slave by an enemy soldier. Much to his surprise, she does not rape and murder him on the spot, but instead sets out to break down all his walls and seduce him at any cost. This is a Stockholm syndrome fantasy set in a fictional medieval world. As of this post, it is one chapter shy of complete and will have its final update next Sunday. Feedback: Feedback and constructive criticism welcome, especially on how the story flows as a whole, and if/where you lost interest. My next story could be more of the similar, or much more rapey, depends on what you guys want. Fandom: Original Pairing: N/A Warnings: FemDom, Slave, Humil, Ms, Oral, SH, Solo, Voy, Violence, Bond, Ds, Fingering, HJ, Hum, Virgin, Abuse, MF, Hurt/Comfort, Angst, Stockholm Syndrome Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered – 20 in total URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109251 Review Reply thread: I don’t have one for this story but I will for future stories – review replies are in author notes after most chapters.