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    Wilde_Guess reacted to Desiderius Price in Is there an archive limit on chapter size?   
    On the practical side, I’d suggest against super long chapters too.  I’ve tried that on my potter fanfic years ago, reorganized/rewrote thinking it was a “good thing” with my highest being like 107k… nope!  Not only did I lose some details in that consolidation, I also lost focus to the chapter too.  Small details/scenes were now one/two sentences in basically a wall of text.  (Which it became as FFN.net somehow seemingly lost all my carriage returns, so it was one big “blob”; and a fast re-insert of them is how I uncovered FFN’s new 65k max per chapter limit.)
    I’m still pulling that 107k old chapter apart right now with my “rewrite” … though I’ve now got at least 121 in its place, which is probably close to 1M words itself as I now hover around the 6-7k words per chapter average, and if the chapter nears the 10kword mark, I seek to break it up.  Even in my Jefferey episodic story, I’ll effectively do “part 1” and “part 2”.
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    Wilde_Guess reacted to BronxWench in Is there an archive limit on chapter size?   
    I think most of the very long “chapters” in the archive are actually entire multi-chapter stories posted on AFF after another site changed its policies regarding certain types of content (think Hentai Foundry and FFN here). The posters uploaded entire stories as one chapter, and moderators who had to review the new postings for ToS issues were heard to whimper in the corners.  
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    Wilde_Guess reacted to Desiderius Price in Is there an archive limit on chapter size?   
    The technical limit would be a @manta2g or @DemonGoddess type of question, and it’d be in bytes, not words. 
    I know we’ve had some of the annual halloween/holiday round-robin submissions where it’s 50k max for the rules, but that’s more of a reader tolerance limit IMO.  In comparison, AO3 limits it to 500k characters, and FFN limits your documents to 5MB (and will stop adding to the word count at 65k words).
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    Wilde_Guess got a reaction from BronxWench in READ ME: Validation/Password Reset Issues   
    Thanks, @BronxWench.  It works as advertised, and I uploaded a chapter.
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    Wilde_Guess reacted to BronxWench in READ ME: Validation/Password Reset Issues   
    I’ve activated the account. It should work for you now.
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    Wilde_Guess reacted to Desiderius Price in Mentioning characters you don't plan to use?   
    Simple, have a quick conversation chapter one of the sequel.
    “Where’s Joe?”
    “Six years in prison, because when they say NO PARKING, the really mean NO PARKING.” or
    “Got transferred to far, far, away.” or
    “He learned why there’s safety bars on woodchippers.  Coroner estimated they recovered 60% of the remains.”
    And if you want the villain to be a surprise, have his whereabouts accounted/dismissed for in this conversation too.
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    Wilde_Guess reacted to Thundercloud in Character driven non-linear stories?   
    My take is that brilliant non-linear stories you here talk about get their fame from being good despite not being linear.

    A possible comparison is the Westworld tv-show season 1 that had a big reveal when you realized what you had been watching. In season 2 they wanted to repeat the trick and made things just as non-linear and in the end it was barely watchable. I have avoided the later seasons like plague.

    My point is that for every successful non-linear storytelling there are many more trainwreck attempts. Doing non-linear storytelling that manage to capture the reader is seriously difficult.
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    Wilde_Guess reacted to Seaman in Always fascinated and wrote about wrong pairings. What's your ultimate wrong pairing?   
    Oof – poor Neville.
    Umbridge and one of the centaurs I could get behind.  Very much NC, of course.
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    Wilde_Guess reacted to JayDee in Always fascinated and wrote about wrong pairings. What's your ultimate wrong pairing?   
    The Monster Under The Bed x My Sleep Paralysis Demon (Those fucking squelching noises, I swear, it’s grim folks, grim).
     
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    Wilde_Guess reacted to InvidiaRed in Always fascinated and wrote about wrong pairings. What's your ultimate wrong pairing?   
    I think the most messed up one I found was Umbridge X Neville. 
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    Wilde_Guess reacted to BronxWench in What are this site's content restrictions?   
    We permit content with fictional characters who are 15, and as @Desiderius Price notes, the appropriate tag is Minor2 for characters aged 14 to 18, and Minor1 for characters under 14.
    The only area where characters under the age of 18 are not permitted is Celebrity Fiction/Real Person fiction. Legally, we can’t allow that sort of story. However, original work with fictional characters under the age of 18 is allowed, as long as the story is properly tagged.
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    Wilde_Guess reacted to Desiderius Price in What are this site's content restrictions?   
    Tag for teenagers is minor2 (14 and older).  Tag for younger is minor1.
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    Wilde_Guess got a reaction from BronxWench in Always fascinated and wrote about wrong pairings. What's your ultimate wrong pairing?   
    Hi, all.
    For truly “wrong” romantic/erotic parings, I tend to go towards dark humor.  So, Dipper/Mabel isn’t quite a “wrong” pairing, though it raises the question that if they married in Kentucky and divorced in Arkansas, would they still be fraternal twins.  I’m thinking more along the lines of Mr. Ed/receptive Wilbur, Granny/Mr. Drysdale, Uncle Joe/every female over the age of consent, etc.
    Cheers!
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    Wilde_Guess got a reaction from GeorgeGlass in Always fascinated and wrote about wrong pairings. What's your ultimate wrong pairing?   
    Hi, all.
    For truly “wrong” romantic/erotic parings, I tend to go towards dark humor.  So, Dipper/Mabel isn’t quite a “wrong” pairing, though it raises the question that if they married in Kentucky and divorced in Arkansas, would they still be fraternal twins.  I’m thinking more along the lines of Mr. Ed/receptive Wilbur, Granny/Mr. Drysdale, Uncle Joe/every female over the age of consent, etc.
    Cheers!
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    Wilde_Guess reacted to GeorgeGlass in Character driven non-linear stories?   
    IMO, a nonlinear story can work IF you make it clear when the events of each chapter are happening. You could use a literal timestamp (eg, starting each chapter with the date) or a figurative one (“Iggy was exhausted from training, but the championship was only two weeks away”). Or a narrator could explain it (“Now that I’ve told you ____, let me tell you how it all began”).  
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    Wilde_Guess reacted to Deadman in Character driven non-linear stories?   
    Indeed, and I’m curious to know how people react.
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    Wilde_Guess reacted to Desiderius Price in Character driven non-linear stories?   
    Fanfiction *is* a spot to experiment with writing, so try it out, and see if it works!
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    Wilde_Guess reacted to Deadman in Character driven non-linear stories?   
    I’m hopeful that I can make it work. Although I’m still relatively new to the fandom, in terms of writing for the fandom. Been a fan of the series since the beginning. So I’m trying to navigate exactly what people like and don’t like. But I’ve read a bunch of stories here on AFF and I think my story is fairly consistent with some of the other stuff in the same fandom. It’s definitely really smutty though in terms of what happens.
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    Wilde_Guess got a reaction from Deadman in Character driven non-linear stories?   
    Hi, Deadman and all.
    Deadman, you’re making sense in how you describe the story structure you want to follow.  Now, writing it “good enough” to persuade a reader to read past Chapter Two will be a hell of a challenge.  Many people prefer the stories they read to mostly move in a linear manner.  If your writing is good enough, you might be able to persuade them to keep reading a non-linear story.  But, the “betting money” is that they will quickly abandon your work mostly unread.
    Of course, if your smut is “smutty enough,” they’ll read it for a wank-o-thon, and won’t give two shits about the plot or anything else.
    Just my two cents worth.
    Good luck.
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    Wilde_Guess reacted to Desiderius Price in Character driven non-linear stories?   
    Another idea, maybe this is what you’re going for.  First chapter is a scene  of that party (or whatever it is), with your last lines being “This is their stories.”  And your next chapter be like “A year before that party, the awkward Name was sitting in the library.”  Making it abundantly clear to the (typical) reader what you’re up to here, because as you noted, readers generally expect chronological (or near chronological) order.
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    Wilde_Guess reacted to Desiderius Price in Character driven non-linear stories?   
    It’s still backstory if it’s “for context.”  Maybe better done as separate oneshots, or an episodic serial?  Out-of-order is going to confuse the reader IMO, (and in my case, myself too.) This is especially true if there’s something where a character dies, and now you’re talking if they’re alive.  Another slight exception here is when I’m doing multiple POVs, so I want to cover character “A” in a dedicated chapter, and “B” in the next (but, the events should be sufficiently disassociated/separate for that to make sense).  To me, the strong “out-of-order” means there’s a structural issue to the story, maybe you’re starting in the wrong spot/incident?  Hope I’m making sense here.
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    Wilde_Guess reacted to Deadman in On top or on bottom?   
    Well, I think within the context for the story, this isn’t the first time it would’ve happened. So they probably planned for it to be reinforced enough. Initially when I was thinking of it this was more in the sense of a dance rather than a sex act. Though the difference might not be all that much.
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    Wilde_Guess got a reaction from Deadman in On top or on bottom?   
    Hi, Deadman and all.
    How big and how strong is the table.  If the table is big enough and strong enough to support two adult women performing a sex act without breaking, or if you want the table’s failure to be a feature of your story, then they use the table.  Otherwise, they use the floor in front of the booth.  While some furniture in some strip clubs is heavily reinforced, most of it is the exact same furniture you would buy to furnish a Denny’s or a Waffle House.  So, the girls will likely be using the floor unless you mention in passing that the table was up to it, or that the ladies started on the table and ended up on the floor.
    Cheers!
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    Wilde_Guess reacted to Desiderius Price in Character driven non-linear stories?   
    If you’re a time-traveling story… SURE!  Outside of that, you’ll probably confuse the readers if it’s extensive.  (Aside from short flashbacks, or a brief start near the climax along with “two years earlier...”)  This confusion is the main reason I broke up my first story I posted here, I was trying to cram in backstory into chapters as well, and came to realize I basically had multiple stories instead.  (Which, while I’ve yet to really write that first story, I’ve been busy on the others.)
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