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Hello again everyone!
Well its that time again. I know it almost kind of feels like a long time since my last post, but it has actually only been just over a month. I know I usually post a little faster than this, but I have been very busy with some side projects. Most notably this includes a short chaptered story I’ve been working on staring Dove Cameron. I plan to have this project out by the end of the month or maybe early in May. It is a very dark and twisted story .So those of you who like some of the darker content tags should really enjoy it. I don’t want to go into too much detail on what its about, but suffice it to say I had to ask the moderators if there was any content tags (other than minor stuff, obviously. I don’t do minor stuff anyway) that wouldn’t be allowed to be posted if paired up with a celebrity or real person if you prefer. With the green light, I began working on it. This is a story I’ve had in mind for a long time. I was originally going to write it with Sabrina Carpenter, but after working with Dove in BDH I decided I wanted to do something dark with her so I swapped her in. I don’t know if any of your remember me mentioning a “House of a Thousand Corpses” style story I said I might write a long time back, but this is that story. Don’t worry though, one of the other things I’m not really into is murder and gore. I more meant the feel of it being dark and twisted, you know really fucked up and without the gore
. Anyway, the story is called “Becoming Bitch” and you can look for it I’d say sometime in the next 3-4 weeks.
Now, on to Billion Dollar Harem chapter 41. This chapter picks up right after the fast forward that ended chapter 40, and contains the beginning of the end of Taylor Swift’s long ongoing chastity belt punishment. I don’t want to spoil anything here, but I do want to say that I finally set events in motion to write the fan selected scene involving Ariana Grande, Emma Watson and our Intrepid hero, Alexander Whitley! That scene should come in a chapter very soon, but as the title to chapter 41 states, this is going to be a two part chapter. After that, I’m not sure if the fan selected scene will be chapter 43 or if it’ll come a little later, as I also want to catch up with how some of the ladies are dealing with events that took place in the fast-forward. Specifically those with Bella and Dove and with Margot and Felicity and of course at least a little more to do with Alex’s mysterious visitor… All that said, I also plan to announce the final two ladies sometime in or around chapter 48-50. Once I’ve announced them, I will shortly there after post a poll so you guys can vote on the sex competition.
Finally, I want to thank you all again for reading along. I don’t know if you’ve seen, but BDH is now up over 160,000 dragon prints. In light of that, I want to make one more announcement. If and when BDH hits 250,000 prints I plan to announce a very special poll. I know its a long way off, but think about this. in one month BDH saw over 10k views. The more chapters it gains and the more popularity it sees and that number will only go up. Ok, so this poll will give you, my readers, a lot of power. But, this time not over BDH. As BDH ramps up towards the end, I can’t really allow randomness to interfere with how I want the story to culminate. Therefore I will create a poll designed to let you guys set the parameters of a new one chapter story for me to write. Most likely the poll will list 5 to 10 celebrities, allow you guys to vote on 2 or maybe 3 then list a host of content tags and allow you guys to again vote on 1 or two of those. I’ll then write a story tailor made with those choices in mind! Hopefully, it’ll be a lot of fun, and a way to show you guys my appreciation of you following along with my work.
That’s it for now,
Till next time,
-Mal
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Hello again everyone!
Well its that time again. I know it almost kind of feels like a long time since my last post, but it has actually only been just over a month. I know I usually post a little faster than this, but I have been very busy with some side projects. Most notably this includes a short chaptered story I’ve been working on staring Dove Cameron. I plan to have this project out by the end of the month or maybe early in May. It is a very dark and twisted story .So those of you who like some of the darker content tags should really enjoy it. I don’t want to go into too much detail on what its about, but suffice it to say I had to ask the moderators if there was any content tags (other than minor stuff, obviously. I don’t do minor stuff anyway) that wouldn’t be allowed to be posted if paired up with a celebrity or real person if you prefer. With the green light, I began working on it. This is a story I’ve had in mind for a long time. I was originally going to write it with Sabrina Carpenter, but after working with Dove in BDH I decided I wanted to do something dark with her so I swapped her in. I don’t know if any of your remember me mentioning a “House of a Thousand Corpses” style story I said I might write a long time back, but this is that story. Don’t worry though, one of the other things I’m not really into is murder and gore. I more meant the feel of it being dark and twisted, you know really fucked up and without the gore
. Anyway, the story is called “Becoming Bitch” and you can look for it I’d say sometime in the next 3-4 weeks.
Now, on to Billion Dollar Harem chapter 41. This chapter picks up right after the fast forward that ended chapter 40, and contains the beginning of the end of Taylor Swift’s long ongoing chastity belt punishment. I don’t want to spoil anything here, but I do want to say that I finally set events in motion to write the fan selected scene involving Ariana Grande, Emma Watson and our Intrepid hero, Alexander Whitley! That scene should come in a chapter very soon, but as the title to chapter 41 states, this is going to be a two part chapter. After that, I’m not sure if the fan selected scene will be chapter 43 or if it’ll come a little later, as I also want to catch up with how some of the ladies are dealing with events that took place in the fast-forward. Specifically those with Bella and Dove and with Margot and Felicity and of course at least a little more to do with Alex’s mysterious visitor… All that said, I also plan to announce the final two ladies sometime in or around chapter 48-50. Once I’ve announced them, I will shortly there after post a poll so you guys can vote on the sex competition.
Finally, I want to thank you all again for reading along. I don’t know if you’ve seen, but BDH is now up over 160,000 dragon prints. In light of that, I want to make one more announcement. If and when BDH hits 250,000 prints I plan to announce a very special poll. I know its a long way off, but think about this. in one month BDH saw over 10k views. The more chapters it gains and the more popularity it sees and that number will only go up. Ok, so this poll will give you, my readers, a lot of power. But, this time not over BDH. As BDH ramps up towards the end, I can’t really allow randomness to interfere with how I want the story to culminate. Therefore I will create a poll designed to let you guys set the parameters of a new one chapter story for me to write. Most likely the poll will list 5 to 10 celebrities, allow you guys to vote on 2 or maybe 3 then list a host of content tags and allow you guys to again vote on 1 or two of those. I’ll then write a story tailor made with those choices in mind! Hopefully, it’ll be a lot of fun, and a way to show you guys my appreciation of you following along with my work.
Ok, before I sign off let me see if I can address your comments and questions:
Lazyninjas: I’m actually pretty excited about the sex competition. I think I have some fun ideas for how it will take shape and I think the randomness of it will be a lot of fun. I know its kind of a long way off yet. But I am still anxious to work on it.
Juan: An Ari centric chapter could be a lot of fun. The problem with it is mostly in how her movement is potentially limited. Like if the sex doesn’t involve her, unless she’s in the room where its taking place she wouldn’t be able to see it. I may put some thought into it and see if I can come up with an idea to make it work, even if its only part of or most of a chapter it should still be pretty interesting to get that input straight from the diva-cat!
Sazbi: The thing with the Chloe, Alex, Ari orgasm thing is that scene was part of a fast forward. I didn’t really put enough detail into it but I would imagine Alex gave his permission. The main point of that rule is, at least for the time being, Alex doesn’t want his little girl getting off without his or Emma’s permission. If one of them is present, its safe to assume if Chloe came they gave it. But it is a good point that Ari doesn’t count for a lot of rules because she is a cat. I hope you enjoy part 1 of Taylor’s punishment finale. I can’t really say much about the visitor or the final two girls yet, but I hope you won’t be disappointed.
Joe: I remembered the costumes. I hope to put at least one or two of them to use soon. As to your final point, after these next two chapters, you guys will see just how much sluttier the girls are and that yes it will open up a whole new world of kinky stuff for them to do.
Well: Yes, I agree at this point, especially after seeing her in this and knowing what will be in the next chapter, Taylor is possibly the biggest slut in the world, or at least in Alex’s world! As to your question about Alex and knowing about Bella being on drugs. If you remember there was a line at the start of one of the chapters, I think it was chapter 36, Alex tells one of the guards to initiate project Arcadia. It is then revealed that a box in the guards storage room up in the mansion is labeled Arcadia. So yes, not only does he know, but, he also ordered it.
Ok guys, I think that’s everything. I am very much looking forward to your comments on chapter 41 and I hope you all like it!
Till next time,
-Mal
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Hey guys, I just wanted to pop on and give the results of the poll. Unfortunately, this poll didn’t receive nearly as many votes as those I’ve done in the past but, at least there was a clear winner.
Yes, the sex competition has won the vote. Obviously at this point I cannot yet post the poll to determine the random pairings as I have yet to introduce the final two girls to the harem. But, once I bring them in I will post the new poll. Remember, the pairings will be determined randomly by dice roll and then you guys will be allowed to vote on the winner. The runners up will receive a short summery of their actions while the winner will receive a complete work up of not only what they did to win, but also of what happens when Alex later joins them. Anyway, I will let you know when I am ready to post this new poll but for now, thank you so much to those of you who did participate and I hope to have a larger turn out for the random parings vote.
Finally, I wanted to point out that since the story hit 150,000 dragon prints just 30 days ago, Billion Dollar Harem has had nearly 7000 more views! That is simply unbelievable. Therefore, I wanted to thank you all again for all the support and I hope that you’ll continue to read along. Chapter 41 is now in the works, and I plan to have it ready by mid April so please check back in around then.
Till next time,
-Mal
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Hello again gang!
Well, its that time of the month again! So soon you ask? Well, I had two reasons for wanting to get this chapter out quickly. 1) I’m on vacation this week and wanted to get it posted before I sit around and do nothing for a week. (Well, nothing besides going to see Captain Marvel that is.) and 2) Because I’m soooo excited about getting to work on chapter 41. (More on 41 later, but its going to be bananas) Ok, so lets talk chapter 40. This chapter is nearly 20 pages, and mostly concerns itself with advancing the timeline by 3 days. This time skip is necessary in order to advance us to the point where Taylor’s punishment can finally come to an end. There is a lot of stuff jammed into this summery section of the chapter, but don’t worry, I plan to revisit a lot what happens when I focus on advancing the plots which develop during this time. The rest of chapter 40 (about 10 pages worth) deals with getting a long time harem member to finally “join the team.” I won’t spoil it, but I hope you guys find this scene as hot as I think it is. Getting this character on board, is also a necessary step to the finale of Taylor’s punishment, which we’ll see in chapter 41.
Speaking of which, lets talk 41. As I said, 41 will finally show the climactic conclusion of Taylor’s punishment. This scene is going to be epic. I obviously won’t go into details, but I fully expect this scene to take up nearly all of the 15 pages of the next chapter. I hope to be able to work in some advancement which will I’ll be able to use to finally get in the last fan selected poll between Emma, Ariana and Alex into the next chapter. If not, I may have to do some finagling to put everything together for 42… I guess we’l just have to see how it all works out. Needless to say, I hope this scene will measure up against some of the great classics like Taylor’s initial breaking, or the pool party, or Margot and Felicity’s epic punishment room scene. That’s a tall bar I know, I hope I don’t let you guys down. Starting after 41 though, I plan to resolve many of the developments in the fast forward and set things up so that I can introduce the final two ladies. I’m hoping this will take no more than 5-6 chapters but again my writing is very unpredictable and often leads me to places I wasn’t expecting.
As always, I’d love to hear more of your thoughts, ideas, questions and criticisms. If you’d like to make your voice heard, please drop by my thread here in this site’s forum. You can find it in the Het-Male/Female section of the Celebrity heading in the All Other Subdomains group. Please do drop on by and let me know you think.
Till next time,
-Mal
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Hello again gang!
Well, its that time of the month again! So soon you ask? Well, I had two reasons for wanting to get this chapter out quickly. 1) I’m on vacation this week and wanted to get it posted before I sit around and do nothing for a week. (Well, nothing besides going to see Captain Marvel that is.) and 2) Because I’m soooo excited about getting to work on chapter 41. (More on 41 later, but its going to be bananas) Ok, so lets talk chapter 40. This chapter is nearly 20 pages, and mostly concerns itself with advancing the timeline by 3 days. This time skip is necessary in order to advance us to the point where Taylor’s punishment can finally come to an end. There is a lot of stuff jammed into this summery section of the chapter, but don’t worry, I plan to revisit a lot what happens when I focus on advancing the plots which develop during this time. The rest of chapter 40 (about 10 pages worth) deals with getting a long time harem member to finally “join the team.” I won’t spoil it, but I hope you guys find this scene as hot as I think it is. Getting this character on board, is also a necessary step to the finale of Taylor’s punishment, which we’ll see in chapter 41.
Speaking of which, lets talk 41. As I said, 41 will finally show the climactic conclusion of Taylor’s punishment. This scene is going to be epic. I obviously won’t go into details, but I fully expect this scene to take up nearly all of the 15 pages of the next chapter. I hope to be able to work in some advancement which will I’ll be able to use to finally get in the last fan selected poll between Emma, Ariana and Alex into the next chapter. If not, I may have to do some finagling to put everything together for 42… I guess we’l just have to see how it all works out. Needless to say, I hope this scene will measure up against some of the great classics like Taylor’s initial breaking, or the pool party, or Margot and Felicity’s epic punishment room scene. That’s a tall bar I know, I hope I don’t let you guys down. Starting after 41 though, I plan to resolve many of the developments in the fast forward and set things up so that I can introduce the final two ladies. I’m hoping this will take no more than 5-6 chapters but again my writing is very unpredictable and often leads me to places I wasn’t expecting.
Next on the list, I don’t know if you guys noticed, but Billion Dollar Harem sailed past 150,000 Dragon Prints just a few days after I posted chapter 39. (As of this post, its at well over 152k!) But, I wanted to do something special for this milestone so I thought I’d do another poll. However, due to the excitement around lazyninjas post, I first wanted to give you guys an opportunity to choose that option. Here are the details of that post and of the first vote:
On 2/21/2019 at 8:06 AM, Mal said:Now, here is my plan for the new poll. Since it seems at least some of you really like lazyninjas idea, and I know I think its pretty cool, I want to try and incorporate it. But, here is the caveat, there is no way I could write a smut scene(s) depicting the entire sex competition. Mostly, this is because it would probably take 2-3 chapters just for that one thing. With 5 pairings, then the grand finale that right there is a serious page commitment. I’m simply not willing to commit that much of my time for what would basically amount to a small side plot. But, I want to stay true to what lazyninjas proposed. So, here is my idea.
- I will generate 5 random pairings (this won’t occur until after the final two ladies are announced. Which will, by the way, delay the implementation of this poll at least until a few chapters after all the ladies have arrived in the harem. Which could right there mean that this scene won’t happen for 8 or 9 maybe even 12 chapters... (Random pairings will be determined by me using dice)
- I’ll have you guys vote on which pairing should win the competition. (Those pairs which didn’t win will receive a much shorter synopsis of their attempt to seduce Alex, which I would feature as part of a different chapter.)
- The winning pair will get a featured section of a chapter where I detail how/what they did to win. Then that lucky couple will be included in a second scene with Alex being more intimately involved. I would imagine this scenario right here would take one entire chapter to put together.
Alternatively, if you guys don’t want to wait that long for the next poll to be featured in the story, I could create some different scenarios similar to those I’ve created in the past and just have you guys vote on those. So, for the first stage of this poll, here is what I want you guys to vote on:
- Sex Competition (assuming the caveats I’ve detailed above)
- Standard Poll created by me
In a month or so, I’ll announce the winner and then create a poll for you guys to vote on. (keep in mind if option 1 is selected, this poll will not be posted to the forum until after the final two girls are announced). As always, please do email me with your votes if you don’t feel comfortable posting them here in the forum. If you have any questions, email me or post them to the forum. I will be more active here this next month in an attempt to resolve this poll.
Please, if you’re interested in voting between the sex competition and the standard poll do so by 3/21. I will close the poll that night and post a new poll (if the standard poll wins) or begin working on how the sex competition poll will come together once I’ve announced the final two girls.
It doesn’t seem like there are any comments for me to address. Other than for me to say I can’t tell you what Project Arcadia is yet, but rest assured that bomb is getting ready to drop soon! Everything else is votes or congrats on hitting 150. So thanks again everyone this was a great milestone and I hope we can surge forward to 200k!
As always, if you have any questions or comments please let me know.
Till next time,
-Mal
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Hey there gang! I just wanted to pop on real quick because, as Joe pointed out, Billion Dollar Harem has just hit 150,000 dragon prints! I won’t go into a lot of mushy stuff this time around, but, I do want to thank all of you guys for reading along and offering up your comments, criticisms and suggestions over these past few years. I also want to especially give a shout out and a huge thank you to my editor, you know who you are! Thanks so much, my friend!
I also wanted to announce there will be a fan poll in the works for hitting this milestone! But, before that, I thought I should clear up the resolution to the last poll. I never officially announced it, but I closed the voting on it a while back after it seemed most of you had cast your votes.I wanted to quickly share those results with you guys.
The winners are:
Newcomer: Ariana Grande (by one vote!)
Veteran: Emma Watson (won by 3 votes)
Scene: The winner was scene 5 (by an overwhelming 11 votes!) Just a reminder, scene 5 was: As a gift to their master, the veteran asks the newcomer for their help giving him a present he’ll never forget in a scene featuring a “moderate” to “hard” fetish of my choosing.
I can’t of course say how long it will take to work this scene into the story, but I honestly could see it happening within just a few chapters, depending on how long it takes to wrap up the current day/events… My guess would be within 3-4 chapters.
Now, here is my plan for the new poll. Since it seems at least some of you really like lazyninjas idea, and I know I think its pretty cool, I want to try and incorporate it. But, here is the caveat, there is no way I could write a smut scene(s) depicting the entire sex competition. Mostly, this is because it would probably take 2-3 chapters just for that one thing. With 5 pairings, then the grand finale that right there is a serious page commitment. I’m simply not willing to commit that much of my time for what would basically amount to a small side plot. But, I want to stay true to what lazyninjas proposed. So, here is my idea.
- I will generate 5 random pairings (this won’t occur until after the final two ladies are announced. Which will, by the way, delay the implementation of this poll at least until a few chapters after all the ladies have arrived in the harem. Which could right there mean that this scene won’t happen for 8 or 9 maybe even 12 chapters... (Random pairings will be determined by me using dice)
- I’ll have you guys vote on which pairing should win the competition. (Those pairs which didn’t win will receive a much shorter synopsis of their attempt to seduce Alex, which I would feature as part of a different chapter.)
- The winning pair will get a featured section of a chapter where I detail how/what they did to win. Then that lucky couple will be included in a second scene with Alex being more intimately involved. I would imagine this scenario right here would take one entire chapter to put together.
Alternatively, if you guys don’t want to wait that long for the next poll to be featured in the story, I could create some different scenarios similar to those I’ve created in the past and just have you guys vote on those. So, for the first stage of this poll, here is what I want you guys to vote on:
- Sex Competition (assuming the caveats I’ve detailed above)
- Standard Poll created by me
In a month or so, I’ll announce the winner and then create a poll for you guys to vote on. (keep in mind if option 1 is selected, this poll will not be posted to the forum until after the final two girls are announced). As always, please do email me with your votes if you don’t feel comfortable posting them here in the forum. If you have any questions, email me or post them to the forum. I will be more active here this next month in an attempt to resolve this poll.
Once again, thank you guys so much for 150,000 dragon prints! You guys mean the world to me and have fun with the voting!
Till next time,
-Mal
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This isn’t an official reply. I just wanted to pop on to address a concern that apparently a bunch of you guys had. When Ari said to Dove, “I am...kitten.” She wasn’t calling herself a kitten, she was playfully referring to Dove as a kitten. I guess that wasn’t clear, so I apologize for that, and I hope this clears things up...
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I was hoping one of our moderators could answer a couple of questions I have about the rules, specifically rules involving celebrity, or real person fiction and posting stories to the archive and about the forum itself.
First, I am currently in the middle of working on a very dark, very twisted tale involving a celebrity. I won’t go into the details unless you need me to. But, I’m curious to know if there are there any content tags which are not allowed to be posted in your celebrity archive? I realize the depiction of minors is not allowed. Frankly, I’ve never really been into writing about underage girls, but so far as I am aware, that is the only content tag that isn’t allowed in your archive. Am I correct in this assumption, or are there other content tags which are either not allowed, or that are frowned upon?
My second question is about the forum itself. I plan to post this new story on a different web sight, especially if it is not allowed in your archive. My question is, since I have a small following of readers who visit my thread. Would I be allowed to post a link to that story, or at least mention the site on which it is posted in the event that I am not allowed to post it here?
That is all for now,
Thanks in advance for answering my questions,
-Mal
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Hello again, Multiverse!
Good news everyone, Chapter 39 is here! The new chapter exactly meets my new page goal at 15 pages. This is mostly because it only details one girl’s events. It picks up at the very beginning of day 41 and covers just a tiny fraction of the day. I won’t give away which celeb is featured in this chapter, but I hope you like her, cause this chapter is all about her. Only one other celeb gets any page time, and that, is very limited. It was necessary to do the chapter this way to establish the next phase of this celebs journey. The smut in this chapter may be a little vanilla, but I think that just opens it up for all sorts of depravity to come in the future.
I plan to start chapter 40 sometime soon. I’m debating however, on page length. As it stands now, chapter 40 could either have no sex and hit the 15 pages, or, to include some smut, it would likely have to go significantly over the limit, which could inhibit the time it takes me to get it done. I haven’t really decided yet what I’m’ going to do. In someways hitting 40 chapters is a big deal, and I’d like that hallmark to be a chapter to remember. But I also don’t really want to write a 25-30 page chapter just to include some smut… I suppose we’ll just have to see how things turn out. Either way, I’m planning some time soon to include a time jump. I plan to fast forward at least 2 days. Other things I see coming soon (in the next chapter or 2-3) is Taylor’s punishment coming to an end, Margot and Felicity relationship continuing to evolve, and hopefully, the second fan selected smut scene that you guys voted on in the middle of last year. It might take 3 or 4 chapters to get all this in. But once I do, I’ll be looking to finally bring in the final two celebs, and that promises to be a very memorable moment!
Till next time,
-Mal
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Hello again, Multiverse!
Good news everyone, Chapter 39 is here! The new chapter exactly meets my new page goal at 15 pages. This is mostly because it only details one girl’s events. It picks up at the very beginning of day 41 and covers just a tiny fraction of the day. I won’t give away which celeb is featured in this chapter, but I hope you like her, cause this chapter is all about her. Only one other celeb gets any page time, and that, is very limited. It was necessary to do the chapter this way to establish the next phase of this celebs journey. The smut in this chapter may be a little vanilla, but I think that just opens it up for all sorts of depravity to come in the future.
I plan to start chapter 40 sometime soon. I’m debating however, on page length. As it stands now, chapter 40 could either have no sex and hit the 15 pages, or, to include some smut, it would likely have to go significantly over the limit, which could inhibit the time it takes me to get it done. I haven’t really decided yet what I’m’ going to do. In someways hitting 40 chapters is a big deal, and I’d like that hallmark to be a chapter to remember. But I also don’t really want to write a 25-30 page chapter just to include some smut… I suppose we’ll just have to see how things turn out. Either way, I’m planning some time soon to include a time jump. I plan to fast forward at least 2 days. Other things I see coming soon (in the next chapter or 2-3) is Taylor’s punishment coming to an end, Margot and Felicity relationship continuing to evolve, and hopefully, the second fan selected smut scene that you guys voted on in the middle of last year. It might take 3 or 4 chapters to get all this in. But once I do, I’ll be looking to finally bring in the final two celebs, and that promises to be a very memorable moment!
Alright, let me then just quickly move onto you guys:
Joe: I hope two chapters at once wasn’t more “content” than you could handle.
I’m glad you like the BDSM scene. I was kind of worried that there had been so much Mdom at this point that a switch up could really turn people off. But honestly, I’ve had a ton of positive feedback about Alex getting lightly domed, so I may bring it back again at some point. As for the Bella/Coke/Depravity comment, all I can say to that is that I really hope you guys like what I have planned for Bella. My gut tells me you guys will either love it or hate it….
lazyninjas: Hey man! Its great to see that you’re still following along. Its been so long since you chimed in I thought maybe you’d given up on me.
On the one hand I love your idea. I think it would be truly fucking awesome to see pairs of unlikely girls pair up / team up and put on a show. I think it would be super fun to write, and really fucking hot to see play out on the page. On the other hand, I don’t think a contest like this is at all Alex’s style. First off all, outside of the punishment room, he is all about free will. So I don’t think he would ever directly force the girls to pair up, let alone with someone they didn’t want to be with. Second, Alex is a fairly measured guy. Meaning, I don’t think he would just willy nilly take power from Emma (someone who earned the right to lead through her action and her attitude) just because someone else won a contest. Last and probably least, there are two more girls on the way in (either Gal Gadot or Alexandra Daddario, and an as of yet unannounced surprise celeb) meaning there will be a total of 11 girls. Now, Emma could sit out and there would be 10, but I just really don’t see Alex forcing the girls to do this. The only way it could work would be if they freely signed up for it and chose their partners, or signed up for it knowing that they would be assigned a random partner. If I did decide to do this, that would be the way I would have to set it up and the prize would have to be different I might have to give some thought to what the winners would get. Maybe what I’ll do is set this scenario in motion for the next fan selected vote project with clearly defined voting parameters. I’ll give is some thought, because I do think it would be fun to pair up unlikely girls… Overall this is a great idea!
Juan: Glad you enjoyed the chapter. More Taylor torment on the way! But… maybe soon she’ll be back in action…. you’ll just have to wait and see.
Romavictrix: Glad you too enjoyed the chapter. I plan on taking lazyninja’s idea under consideration, though likely, as I said above in a modified way. The book...is thus far not coming along as well as I would like. I have only made a little progress, and I keep second guessing where the many different ideas I have should go… Perhaps this month will see more progress there…. Valentines day? Not so much, as Sazbi said, February is a very long way off. I will say this though. Although I did not do it on purpose I think this chapter (39) is kind of romantic in a twisted girl succumbing to Stockholm Syndrome kind of way…
So maybe that counts as a Valentines day Chapter…. I’ll leave that up to you to decide.
Sazbi: I too am looking forward to the new Chloe’s interactions. I think there is a lot of potential there, especially in one of the rules Alex gave her. I’m thinking specifically of the rule where he said she has to “obey” all the grown ups in the harem… that could be very fun to play with… This is a question I can answer for once! When Taylor’s punishment ends, she does not go back to being a level 4. Once a girl is demoted, the only way to get back to that level is to earn it. (I may have ignored that rule one time, I can’t remember for sure), but for the most part once demoted, you have to earn you previous potion over again. I really hope you all like what I have planned for the final two girls. Not only do I hope you like my selections, but I hope you find the way I plan to bring them in believable and exciting… we’ll see!
Well: I’m not quite sure I understand what you mean by put a collar on all of them. All of who, every girl in the harem?
One last thing before I go. I am currently working on something. A very dark project with a very questionable fetish… (I won’t go into detail yet, but it has nothing to do with snuff or underage celebs) I am unsure if, when finished, that I will post it here on AFF because of the dark themes and demented fetish. (although I am unaware if AFF disallows certain types of content when it comes to real people) I will say this though. The story stars Dove Cameron, and I will post it on a different site even if it doesn’t go up here. I will let you know when it is done either way, and, if I don’t post it here, I will give you guys a link or someway to find it… I’m not sure if that violates this forums rules… I will have to look into that. But rest assured, if you are interested in reading it, I will find a way to get it to you.
Ok gang,
I’m Back to the Black,
-Mal
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Hello again everyone!
I promised a short turn around and I aim to please! So here we are, chapter 38 is now up on the site exactly one week later! I doubt things like this will happen very often, but I had some very unexpected downtime in December and January and as such, was able to get a lot of work done. This chapter went a little over my new 15 page goal at 20 pages, but I think the extra length was justified to properly finish up the much anticipated BDSM / Alex / Emma / Cara scene that you folks voted on in what I’m sure seems like forever ago to most of you. But, I try to keep my word, and I have delivered the much promised scene and well I think it turned out pretty freaking incredible. I honestly can’t wait to hear what you guys think as its done in a way I’ve never tried before, I’m sure you guys will have no trouble picking up on how its different. Aside from the BDSM scene, this chapter furthers the Margot / Felicity stuff that was teased in the previous chapter, as well as has some stuff with and Taylor. It also features a little hint of something to come for one of our newcomers in the next chapter!
Speaking of which, I’m about 5-6 pages into chapter 39 as of right now I expect it will be ready for publishing by the end of the month or early in February we’ll just have to see. I am also working on my book, and a new secret project here and there so how quickly 39 gets done will depend greatly on how much of a diversion those two things prove to be. But 39 promises to be a lighter affair as our newbies begin to become more comfortable in their new home. By the way, I haven’t forgotten the other scene poll. If I remember correctly, (I don’t have the info in front of my atm), but I believe Ariana and Emma in a present to Alex scene were the winners. I have plans to put that scene in probably in 40 but we’ll have to see how much some of the other side plots distract from that. Other than that, 39 will mostly be about furthering the developing plots as we get closer to the announcement of the final two celebrities. (I’ll announce them in the story before I put it up here...) I expect it will be at least 3 chapters maybe 4 before I’m ready to announce them Oh, and fyi this will be an entirely new… that’s right NEW method of introduction!
Ok, enough of that. I’m out!
Till next time,
-Mal
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Hello again everyone!
I promised a short turn around and I aim to please! So here we are, chapter 38 is now up on the site exactly one week later! I doubt things like this will happen very often, but I had some very unexpected downtime in December and January and as such, was able to get a lot of work done. This chapter went a little over my new 15 page goal at 20 pages, but I think the extra length was justified to properly finish up the much anticipated BDSM / Alex / Emma / Cara scene that you folks voted on in what I’m sure seems like forever ago to most of you. But, I try to keep my word, and I have delivered the much promised scene and well I think it turned out pretty freaking incredible. I honestly can’t wait to hear what you guys think as its done in a way I’ve never tried before, I’m sure you guys will have no trouble picking up on how its different. Aside from the BDSM scene, this chapter furthers the Margot / Felicity stuff that was teased in the previous chapter, as well as has some stuff with and Taylor. It also features a little hint of something to come for one of our newcomers in the next chapter!
Speaking of which, I’m about 5-6 pages into chapter 39 as of right now I expect it will be ready for publishing by the end of the month or early in February we’ll just have to see. I am also working on my book, and a new secret project here and there so how quickly 39 gets done will depend greatly on how much of a diversion those two things prove to be. But 39 promises to be a lighter affair as our newbies begin to become more comfortable in their new home. By the way, I haven’t forgotten the other scene poll. If I remember correctly, (I don’t have the info in front of my atm), but I believe Ariana and Emma in a present to Alex scene were the winners. I have plans to put that scene in probably in 40 but we’ll have to see how much some of the other side plots distract from that. Other than that, 39 will mostly be about furthering the developing plots as we get closer to the announcement of the final two celebrities. (I’ll announce them in the story before I put it up here...) I expect it will be at least 3 chapters maybe 4 before I’m ready to announce them Oh, and fyi this will be an entirely new… that’s right NEW method of introduction!
Ok, enough of that, on to you folks then I’m out!
Sazbi: I hope it was a pleasant surprise for you! The DD/lg fetish is one I’ve been wanting to write and incorporate into BDH for quite sometime. It was just a matter of bringing it in the right way and with the right celeb. Personally, I think I nailed it! I’m not sure what you mean about Margot’s being upset with Emma’s reaction, it was Emma who turned Chloe into Toy and Margot was just as upset with that as she was with Ari’s transformation… As to the RIP to Toy, I would say that is a safe assumption. The DD/lg fetish is very likely here to stay. I obviously can’t speak to Bella or project Arcadian, but I will say that plot line is far from resolved…. <queue the dramatic music!>
Juan: You mean like Chloe making her own sexy music video while dressed in a Catholic school girl’s uniform… Hmmmm a Catholic school girl’s uniform… I wonder if that could somehow be incorporated into the DD/lg fetish…. hmmmm very interesting <grin> If you like where Bella is now, I can’t wait for you to see just how far I’ll push it! We’ve barely scratched the surface of Project Arcadia.
ArcherNexus: Thank you for the very kind words, good Sir or Madam. They are very much appreciated. I do what I can to keep the story fresh and interesting!
Well: First off thank you. It feels very good to feel so much better. I hate feeling that way and unfortunately I have to live with knowing that feeling will likely return. But as long as I stay positive, and have things to help bring me back from it, I also know that I can banish that feeling and go on with my life. I’m glad you like Chloe’s outfit. I have plans for her to wear all kinds of little girl stuff maybe even… a school girls uniform… I’m not sure what you mean by your “put all of them” question. And, if everything works out with Cara, Bella and Taylor won’t have to share a room, which I know could have been fun, but I guess you’ll just have to read on to see.
Ellen Degenerate: I’m very glad that my little story inspired you to create an account and more importantly to add your voice to the discussion of that story. I am always very excited to hear what my fans have to say about the story, and to try and answer their questions. Please do feel free to chime in whenever you like, I try to respond to everyone whenever I post a new chapter. Also, I very much appreciate the compliment. As I’ve said on numerous occasions, I do this story just as much for you guys as I do for myself so in a way I’d be doing it a disservice by not being dedicated and trying my absolute best to put out a great story. As to CSSA, there are a couple of reasons I didn’t like posting there. 1) Once posted, you have no power over your story. So if I wanted to make a small change or correct a small mistake, I can’t edit it. (I try not to make big edits once posted because I feel that it could impact too much of what has already occurred). It also means that if I ever for some reason wanted to remove my stories from there that I would be unable to do so. And 2) The quality of submissions there wildly varies and the time lapse between when you submit a story to be posted and it actually going online is sometimes ridiculous. I think it has been over six months since the site has been updated at this point… When I finish a piece, I want it up right away, not six months later… Lets see, I plan to add two more girls. Those will be the last two, but I seriously hope you won’t be disappointed when you see one of them in particular fall from grace… should be pretty awesome! (I can’t say who they will be, but it is unlikely one of them will be Beyonce….) Finally, if you are new to the thread, you might not know that I created a hand drawn map of the complex which I’ve offered to share with anyone who sends me an email. If this is something you’d be interested in, simply drop me an email and I’ll pass it along.
Ok gang, that’s it for now. Hope you all enjoy the new chapter!
Till next time,
-Mal
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Hey gang!
I have great news for everyone, I’m publishing chapter 37 of Billion Dollar Harem right now! This chapter definitely falls with in the guidelines of my newer shorter chapter format. Its only 16 pages in Word. But, don’t let that get you down. It is still chalked full of smut and interesting plot development. In this chapter that mostly takes the form of Chloe getting a “LITTLE” adjustment. I found this chapter particularly… engaging… yeah that’s the best word for it. The chapter was extremely engaging lol! In addition to Chloe, we get to see the full reaction of the Harem to Ari, and a little sneak peak of things to come for Bella. I really hope you like this chapter, I honestly think its one of my favorites as it features a fetish I’ve been dying to write for… well for a very long time. I can’t wait to hear what you guys think.
In other good news. Because of some very unexpected down time, chapter 38 is almost done! I don’t want to spoil anything of what is to come. I’ll simply say that my days of putting off writing the Alex, Emma, Cara, BDSM scene, you know, the one you guys voted on like forever ago are finally over! I can’t say for certain when I’ll get it posted up. It still needs a bit of work, but I would imagine the turn around will be very short. Probably a week or so, so please do look back soon! After I get 38 posted up, I plan to put in some much needed work on my E-book, and probably won’t begin work on chapter 39 till nearer to the end of the month. I hope to have 39 done and posted by maybe 2/15 or so… Lastly, I mentioned a while back that I was on a roughly 50 chapter time table to finishing Billion Dollar Harem. Well, I going to revamp that a little. Since going to this new shorter format, and not being at a point yet where I can introduce the final two ladies, I think it only right that I up the count. By my guess, it’ll take around 60 chapters or so to finish this story up. So good news for you is plenty of BDH yet to come!
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Hey gang!
I have great news for everyone who commented anything along the lines of “can’t wait for the next chapter.” Because, that day is here! That’s right folks, I’m publishing chapter 37 onto the site right now! This chapter definitely falls with in the guidelines of my newer shorter chapter format. Its only 16 pages in Word. But, don’t let that get you down. It is still chalked full of smut and interesting plot development. In this chapter that mostly takes the form of Chloe getting a “LITTLE” adjustment. I found this chapter particularly… engaging… yeah that’s the best word for it. The chapter was extremely engaging lol! In addition to Chloe, we get to see the full reaction of the Harem to Ari, and a little sneak peak of things to come for Bella. I really hope you like this chapter, I honestly think its one of my favorites as it features a fetish I’ve been dying to write for… well for a very long time. I can’t wait to hear what you guys think.
In other good news. Because of some very unexpected down time, chapter 38 is almost done! I don’t want to spoil anything of what is to come. I’ll simply say that my days of putting off writing the Alex, Emma, Cara, BDSM scene, you know, the one you guys voted on like forever ago are finally over! I can’t say for certain when I’ll get it posted up. It still needs a bit of work, but I would imagine the turn around will be very short. Probably a week or so, so please do look back soon! After I get 38 posted up, I plan to put in some much needed work on my E-book, and probably won’t begin work on chapter 39 till nearer to the end of the month. I hope to have 39 done and posted by maybe 2/15 or so… Lastly, I mentioned a while back that I was on a roughly 50 chapter time table to finishing Billion Dollar Harem. Well, I going to revamp that a little. Since going to this new shorter format, and not being at a point yet where I can introduce the final two ladies, I think it only right that I up the count. By my guess, it’ll take around 60 chapters or so to finish this story up. So good news for you is plenty of BDH yet to come!
Finally, I wanted to thank everyone who took the opportunity to wish me happy holidays. I really appreciated it. Mostly, I spent my holiday at work. But that honestly worked out for me because it also gave me lots of time to work on my stories.
Now I’ll just address a few of the comments that were directed at the story:
Joe: I enjoyed your comment. I haven’t seen that movie, or is it a TV show… Its Disney something right. (But then again what isn’t Disney at this point?) Thank you for the comment, and you’ll be happy to hear the writing is going very well and I’m very excited to be back at it!
Steel: Thanks! Its good to be back here in the Black. Now I just need to find a nice Alliance friendly bar on U day! (P.S. if you don’t get the reference, a, shame on all of you, and b, you must watch Firefly like today!)
Juan: Margot and Emma you know, sometimes I feel the same way. Like why can’t I just get these two chicks into bed. Then… I wake up and remember why… lol! On a serious note though, I do have things planned for them. I can’t tell you unfortunately whether those plans include them hooking back up. But I, like you am rooting for those two crazy kids!
Sazbi: If you didn’t see Chloe’s reaction coming, I know you won’t see whats in store for her in this chapter. Hint: Its just a LITTLE adjustment!
Romavictrix: I look forward to writing those new chapters. and I’ll try to give you guys progress reports on the e-book as it proceeds.
Alrighty guys, that’s about it for now. Remember to check back soon for chapter 38!
I’m Back to the Black,
-Mal
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Hey guys! I know it feels like forever, but I’m back.
deja vu anyone?
It really has been a while, like 4 months! I am sorry for my absence. For the full update on that please see my post in the Billion Dollar Harem thread here on the site. Its emotional, and I don’t really feel like repeating myself.
Anyway, chapter 36 is here. You might notice its a little bit shorter. Its all part of my plan to slightly reduce my soft page limit in order to work on a very exciting side project. For further update on that you can also see my thread…. 36 picks up on day 40, the very next morning after chapter 35. Mostly this chapter features a lot of groundwork for upcoming chapters. It does see Bella’s release from the punishment potty and a brief reaction to the harem’s new pet as well as a tiny teaser for upcoming things for Chloe. I didn’t quite get to the much promised scene with Emma and Cara… I know, I know, I suck…. Hopefully that will be in the next chapter.
That’s it for now guys, short and sweet….
Till next time,
I’m Back to the Black,
-Mal
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Well guys, as I sit down to write this update, I almost don’t even know where to start its been so long since we talked. I guess the first and most obvious thing, is that I’ve just posted Billion Dollar Harem chapter 36! So, yay for BDH not being dead! 36 picks up on day 40, or the very next day where chapter 35 left off. I don’t want to give to much away in the forum, but several big things get set in motion. Things which will play out in upcoming chapters. It sees an end to Bella’s session in the punishment potty, a new form of corruption, a potential rekindling of an old romance, a brief glimpse at the harem’s reaction to having a new pet, and a teaser for upcoming things with Chloe. I didn’t quite get to the much much much promised scene with Emma and Cara, but I promise it will happen soon. I plan for it to be in the next chapter, but I’ve said that before…. However, this time I’m going to try really really really hard to mean it lol….
Well that’s enough about chapter 36, I guess its on to me… First off, I want to apologize for my extended absence. There were several contributing factors that I’d like to share with you guys. As I talked about in my past couple posts for a while there, things at work were pretty crazy. There for a couple months I was working a ton of hours and being put into some stressful situations and I found it hard to concentrate on writing even when I had the time to do so. More than that though, since right about the time I posted chapter 35 I was struggling with depression. For me this is a problem that comes and goes I’ll go long periods where I feel fine, and then I’m stricken with it and will be almost immobilized for weeks on weeks. Its not really something I like to talk about, but it effects my confidence and my drive to work on anything, much less my writing. Anyway, this bout was particularly tough for me to overcome as things in my RL, (not just work) weren’t exactly great and I just sort of felt very underappreciated in everything I was doing. In addition to my mental health, I was also struggling financially and considered giving up BDH in order to work on writing that I might be able to make money off of. I worked briefly on that Hogwarts Harem project while I thought about my options… In the end though, I started to feel better and decided why not do both? I began working on an e-book. For the past two months or so I’ve been brainstorming and sample chapter writing ideas for a short novel that I could market on Amazon. This story would, of course, feature original characters and a brand new storyline with brand new characters and some brand new, for me at least, fetishes to play around with. Right now, that book is in its very early stages and I plan to give some brief updates as progress on it advances. In the mean time I don’t really want to let you guys down, I did after all promise to finish Billion Dollar Harem. So, as of right now, I’m moving forward with the following plan. I’m going to try to put out 1 chapter of BDH every month, although from here on out I’ll be aiming for a soft chapter page limit of around 15 pages instead of 20. If I can write a shorten chapter in 2 weeks, that will leave me 2 weeks to work on my e-book. Its my hope, that in a year or so I’ll have BDH finished, and an e-book ready for publishing. Now, I’m notorious for missing deadlines, so that timeline is definitely not set in stone. But I’m a man who likes to have a plan...and for now that is it lol!
Lastly, I’d like to take a moment to thank everyone who wished me well or who thought about me over the holidays, or who reread a chapter of Billion Dollar Harem (or any of my stories really) while they waited for my return! You guys are so amazing and as I’ve said on multiple occasions the reason this story even exists as it does today. Without all of you I would have given up a long time ago. I won’t address individual comments, but I wanted to assure you all, everyone who made them, I saw them and they helped me when things were hard for me. They gave me a little light to help move forward and I’m not sure I would have found my way out if not for knowing you all would be here to support me on the other side! Billion Dollar Harem is your story as much as it is mine and I look forward to finishing it for all of us! Its not quite the new year yet, but, I’m raising a glass (Diet Pepsi, not liquor, I don’t drink) to all of you for a great year ahead and to not looking back on the failures of the past. Thanks to all of you!
I’m out!
Till next time,
-Mal
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<peeks up from the void>
Hey there BDH fans… A little birdy told me that Santa might be coming early this year…
Be sure to watch the forums and the Celebrity archive in the next week or so for a little Christmas gift from me, Mal…
<P.S>
I’ll be responding to your comments and giving you guys a heads up about where I’ve been and what I’ve been doing very soon.
<slinks back into the void>
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Hey everyone. I’m sorry if this response is short and leaves many of you frustrated but, the long and the short of it is I’m just not feeling it right now. I haven’t been working on BDH throughout much of September because 1) Things at work have still been pretty crazy. Just this past weekend I worked back to back 14 hour shifts and got run ragged the entire time I was there. So my stress level has been super high. And, 2) I just haven’t been feeling, emotionally that great. I’ve been having small bouts of depression and the mental prospect of working on BDH has just been too much.
Bottom line is I’m taking a break from the story. I can’t say when I’ll be back. I hope in a month, maybe two I’ll have the bug again to finish up Alex’s story, but as things stand right now I just am not feeling it… I’m terribly sorry if this upsets some of you.
If you’re itching for my work though, I have been tinkering with a Harry Potter AU story on the CHOYA site (its called Hogwarts Harem). Its not very big, just something I’ve been fooling around with in whatever spare time I’ve had for writing this past month. I finally got enough material to feel comfortable publishing it, and its now up on the site. Please check it out if you enjoy HP or the thought of innocent witches becoming degraded cum slaves to dirty old magic teachers…
Anyway, I hope you’ll all forgive me for this break from BDH but as of right now, I’m just not feeling it. I really hope you’ll all come back to the story when I get around to working on it again. In the mean time checkout Hogwarts Harem on CHOYA.
Till next time,
-Mal
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Hey Steel, I’m glad you brought this up. I very much did take into account the hours Ariana would have to sleep when I came up with this schedule. As well as Alex’s feelings around keeping the girls healthy. The way I look at it is pretty simple. As a cat, Ari doesn’t have chores. She does her exercise and make up when the other girls are asleep and doesn’t have to go to weigh in in the traditional way. (I plan to detail how she is inspected as to weight, hygiene and so on in a later chapter). Because of this, it frees up her entire day (the time she spends in the main dorm), to be a cat. Now, I don’t know if you’ve ever owned a cat, but what I’ve noticed about cats, is that they spend at least 30% of the day cat napping. When Alex devised her schedule he very much took into account that he expected part of her cat-like behavior to be sleeping in the main dorm during the day. So, assuming Ariana sleeps 5 hours in her room at night and spends 30% of her time in the main dorm cat napping, she will actually get almost 9 hours of sleep each day. Now this could obviously fluctuate some, especially in the beginning while Ari is adjusting to her new life and the girls are spending time playing with their new cat, but I figure that for the most part it will work out to Ariana getting more than enough healthy sleep each day.
One a side note, I woke up with my laptop fully charged. Now, I have no idea why it wasn’t charging last night while I was finishing up the chapter and getting it posted. But, for now, at least, it seems like it is still capable of charging which leads me to believe it is more likely a problem with the charging cable than with the battery so that is very good news. (FYI I do 100% of my writing on that laptop, so if it were to die unexpectedly, time between chapters would likely increase dramatically). So here is to hoping its just the cable!
Alright guys, till next time. I hope you keep reading and I can’t wait to hear more thoughts on the new chapter. I have to say after looking it over again today that it is one of my favorites…
I’m Back to the Black,
-Mal
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Hey guys, I know it feels like forever, but I’m back.
First off, I just want to say I’m sorry this chapter was a little longer in coming than I would have liked. There were a number of problems that conspired against me getting to you guys as soon as I would have liked. The first, being that this is the longest chapter yet, at 24 pages in word. The second being that there were a number of continuity problems, caught by my editor that had to be addressed before I could post it. Finally, and perhaps most importantly, is, and basically there is no other way I can put this, THINGS HAVE BEEN A GODDAMNED NIGHTMARE AT WORK! (sorry for the all caps assault.) This is the busiest time of year for me at work and it just simply makes it harder to find the time and motivation to work. Also, and I’m very sorry to say this, but its likely things won’t get much better in the next month / month and a half. Which is another way of me saying that chapter 35 is here, but it might be just as long before chapter 36 is up. (I’m officially putting Emma Watson’s Blowbang Spectacular on hold till things slow back down at work.) I want to do my very best to deliver one chapter of BDH every month and right now I just don’t know that I can do both. (I’m not even sure I’ll have 36 done before September is over. (But, it should be close either way.) And that’s not to say that things at my job could slow down earlier, and I’ll have more time and motivation, making it possible 36 will come faster…. Its just too hard to say right now. (I HAVE A VERY UNPREDICTABLE JOB!)
Ok! Lets talk 35. This chapter, as promised has a ton of plot for upcoming stuff in it. Plenty of harem politics, new friendships, old friendships and even a touch of the unexpected… Overall, I think this chapter is one of my best from a writing perspective. We get to see Alex continue to work with his new kitty cat. We also get to see Emma really beginning to thrive as harem mistress as she goes above and beyond to bring people together. As for the smut scene, it should be (at least I think) a very pleasant surprise, and, if I do say so myself, exceedingly hot. I won’t spoil the surprise of who’s in it and how things go down, but I really hope you guys enjoy it. Finally, as I’m sure some of you will notice, I’ve laid all the ground work I’ needed to finally include the first fan selected smut scene. If everything goes as planned, it will be in chapter 36.
As I’ve said, I plan to only work on chapter 36 this month. I have some big things planned for this chapter. Lets see, well first off, as I just said will be the inclusion of the first fan selected smut scene. To those of you who voted it should be no surprise as to who will be in it or at least part of what it will contain so I won’t say more about that. We also should see an end to the Bella-potty and the Ari-cat’s introduction as well as some surprise torment involving (section deleted). The only other thing I really have planned right now for 36 is to continue to build on relationships and plots that have begun to develop in 35. I’m not quite sure yet just how that will take shape though.
I’d like to offer a big shout out to my editor. It was just over a year ago on August 14 2017 that I started working with him. He has had an immeasurable impact on this story and my writing, and I can’t imagine this story taking shape without his influence. So, THANKS BUDDY, YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE! I really really hope you guys will take the time to thank him as well. Without him I guarantee this story would be very different, and not for the better. If you want to thank him for all his hard work, just please add a #THANKS to any posts you make. I’m quite sure he will appreciate it and I will too.
Lets move on to you guys:
ArcherNexus: All I can say to that comment is that there is a reason I write. I have all these fucked up fantasies and I think the very best way to get them out is to write them down. That way no one gets hurt, and ideally, I can entertain some people in the process. As to your Ariana fanfic, I really enjoyed your Emma Watson fic, so my advice would be to write it down. Ariana is smoking hot and in my opinion doesn’t have enough stories. Anything you write would be welcomed I’m sure. There is more Ariana training stuff in this chapter (admittedly, though not as hardcore) for you to enjoy and plenty of Emma, although I don’t know that she could be described as bitchy in this chapter…
Niveral: I’m really glad you enjoyed 34. I hope you like 35 as well. as I said, I think its very good. But then again, sometimes I really like a chapter and it ends up getting like zero feedback so...who knows… I also hope you enjoy the short little Emma/Margot scene in this chapter and I should say that your comment in no way influenced the way their interaction went down. I’ve had an end game in mind for those two well… basically since almost the very start so… I can’t wait to get you guys there. As for your suggestion about Chloe…. hmmm what can I say without giving anything away…. I think all I can say is that big, no, little… yeah… little things are in the works for her
Sazbi: Ariana’s intro will have to wait till the next chapter… unfortunately. I just didn’t have enough space in this one. But, you will get to see her official kitty uniform. I hope you guys like it! Also, Alex goes over some of the logistics of her being a cat, so that should answer some of your other questions / concerns. And, there is a conclusion, of sorts, to the Margot / Cara problem. It is my hope that after BDH, that I will continue to produce fiction. Now, what form that will take I have yet to decide. But, I started this with the intention of practicing my writing, and I think I’ve grown by leaps and bounds. If you don’t believe me, just re-read chapter 1… wow is that a mess. I do have a few ideas about what will come after BDH ends but I’m just not ready to share them yet. As to your plot to smut ratio concerns… we’ll just have to see how that goes down. When I say I want them in by chapter 40, I hope to have them in and ready by 40 not announced and in transit…. (hint that means an in story announcement will be coming soon)
Juan: As I said above, there’s more Ariana stuff in this chapter and its much lighter fair so you should really enjoy it… its logistical rather than sexual, but the build up is half the fun...right... and I completely agree with your assessment. One of the main reasons Ariana’s initiation was so rough was so that it would be believable that she would fall in to this new role and do so without much rebellion. As for your question about whether I always intended Emma to be in charge. The simple answer is yes. From chapter 1 I knew that Emma was going to be the level 5. Now, back then, I had a much different vision of what that would look like. In the beginning, I pictured Emma behaving more like Margot behaves now. Someone who cared and nurtured for the girls and always tried to protect them. That obviously evolved. I wouldn’t say that other plots crossed my mind… I always had a general direction I wanted the story to go. What has changed and therefore changed how the plot developed was how the character of the different ladies evolved. When Emma becomes a dom and Chloe a sub for example. Those weren’t things I knew would happen when I started, so as they came to pass through the organic way that I write it created subtle changes in how the plot developed around them. I hope that answers your question…
Ambien: Glad to see you back and glad you’re enjoying the story again! Sounds like this next chapter will be right up your alley. There is stuff with Ariana, and more harem politics… lots of interactions between the ladies and one hot smut scene that evolves from those interactions. I can’t wait to hear what you think.
Zoetrope: Glad you like the kitty stuff. There’s plenty more where that came from, but just a taste of how far I plan to push it in this upcoming chapter. But, stay tuned, I’ve got things planned for “meow.”
Reader: Glad your liking the kitty stuff! I have some big things planned for (section deleted) that I bet your going to love along the lines of your comments. I don’t know how much of it will come in 36 but I expect it to be fully in the works by 37...so stayed tuned and keep reading along!
Backerton: Again, sorry for the delay in the chapter. But, its here now! No latex mask, but you will get the fully kitty suit in this chapter… happy reading. (Your vote has been tallied)
Well: Glad you like the kitty stuff. There’s plenty more of it in the works. Sorry there probably won’t be any cat fights… its just not really my thing. As to BDH, the story might be ending, but I won’t be going away. When I decide exactly what I’ll be doing next, you can bet I’ll be posting it here so you guys will all know the plan.
Ok, I’m out. My battery is dying, and for some reason my lap top isn’t charging…. This could be a very bad thing…. Hopefully not….
Thanks as always for reading along,
Till next time,
-Mal
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Hey guys, I know it feels like forever, but I’m back.
First off, I just want to say I’m sorry this chapter was a little longer in coming than I would have liked. There were a number of problems that conspired against me getting to you guys as soon as I would have liked. The first, being that this is the longest chapter yet, at 24 pages in word. The second being that there were a number of continuity problems, caught by my editor that had to be addressed before I could post it. Finally, and perhaps most importantly, is, and basically there is no other way I can put this, THINGS HAVE BEEN A GODDAMNED NIGHTMARE AT WORK! (sorry for the all caps assault.) This is the busiest time of year for me at work and it just simply makes it harder to find the time and motivation to work. Also, and I’m very sorry to say this, but its likely things won’t get much better in the next month / month and a half. Which is another way of me saying that chapter 35 is here, but it might be just as long before chapter 36 is up. (I’m officially putting Emma Watson’s Blowbang Spectacular on hold till things slow back down at work.) I want to do my very best to deliver one chapter of BDH every month and right now I just don’t know that I can do both. (I’m not even sure I’ll have 36 done before September is over. (But, it should be close either way.) And that’s not to say that things at my job could slow down earlier, and I’ll have more time and motivation, making it possible 36 will come faster…. Its just too hard to say right now. (I HAVE A VERY UNPREDICTABLE JOB!)
Ok! Lets talk 35. This chapter, as promised has a ton of plot for upcoming stuff in it. Plenty of harem politics, new friendships, old friendships and even a touch of the unexpected… Overall, I think this chapter is one of my best from a writing perspective. We get to see Alex continue to work with his new kitty cat. We also get to see Emma really beginning to thrive as harem mistress as she goes above and beyond to bring people together. As for the smut scene, it should be (at least I think) a very pleasant surprise, and, if I do say so myself, exceedingly hot. I won’t spoil the surprise of who’s in it and how things go down, but I really hope you guys enjoy it. Finally, as I’m sure some of you will notice, I’ve laid all the ground work I’ needed to finally include the first fan selected smut scene. If everything goes as planned, it will be in chapter 36.
As I’ve said, I plan to only work on chapter 36 this month. I have some big things planned for this chapter. Lets see, well first off, as I just said will be the inclusion of the first fan selected smut scene. To those of you who voted it should be no surprise as to who will be in it or at least part of what it will contain so I won’t say more about that. We also should see an end to the Bella-potty and the Ari-cat’s introduction as well as some surprise torment involving (section deleted). The only other thing I really have planned right now for 36 is to continue to build on relationships and plots that have begun to develop in 35. I’m not quite sure yet just how that will take shape though.
Finally, I’d like to offer a big shout out to my editor. It was just over a year ago on August 14 2017 that I started working with him. He has had an immeasurable impact on this story and my writing, and I can’t imagine this story taking shape without his influence. So, THANKS BUDDY, YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE!
Till next time,
I’m Back to the Black,
-Mal
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Hey everyone! I just thought you guys might like to know that Chapter 34 is now up! I don’t plan on going into a lot of detail around what is contained in the chapter, I’m sure you guys will read it. I will just say, that is about 90% smut! There are two big sex scenes along with a few conversations between Emma and Dove, Emma and Margot and Emma and Chloe. These talks will begin to develop the things I have planned for the next few chapters. Speaking of the next chapter, I think I’m going to go to work on Chapter 35 right away and push off the next chapter of Emma Watson’s Blowbang Spectacular till next time. The next chapter will likely contain a lot more plot than smut. I have scenes planned with Taylor and Bella, Taylor and Cara, as well as a possible scene with Taylor and ***** (section deleted). I also plan to wrap up the on going punishments (mostly through summery) because I want to get moving onto the next thing. I haven’t decided yet what, or more specifically who will be featured in the smut scene for this chapter, but I don’t imagine the scene will be plot related (other than how it will further develop the relationship of those involved). Lastly, the chapter will see Ariana’s introduction to the other girls of the harem. So as you can see, that is a lot to pack into one chapter...honestly it might not all fit...we’ll just have to see. But that doesn’t bring me to my last bit of news. I have made a decision around the future of Billion Dollar Harem. BDH will, I repeat WILL becoming to an end. Not anytime soon mind you. But I have begun to diagram out a rough outline for bringing the story to its ultimate conclusion. This timeline will revolve roughly around 50 chapters and will likely see the inclusion of the final ladies somewhere around chapter 40. As I don’t have it all planned out yet, I can’t say for sure that will be how everything comes out. Its just what I have in mind right now. Don’t be too sad, I do have a few ideas in mind for what I might work on next, but they aren’t really far enough along yet for me to share em with you guys.
Ok, remember guys, there is still a poll going on for us reaching the 100k milestone! If you haven’t yet voted, please do so. Here once again are the parameters.
Remember please chose once for each category:
On 7/1/2018 at 11:56 PM, Mal said:- Newcomers: Please choose EITHER Ariana Grande or Dove Cameron
- The Veterans: Please choose ONE of the original five girls: Emma Watson, Margot Robbie, Taylor Swift, Chloe Moretz, or Bella Thorne
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The Scene: Please choose ONE of the following scenarios:
- Alex and the Veteran teach the newcomer the ropes in a consensual scene featuring a “light” fetish tag of my choosing.
- The Newcomer and the Veteran explore one another in a passionate lesbian scene featuring a “light” to “moderate” fetish tag of my choosing.
- As part of a bonus for a job well done, one or more of the guards (please offer a number between 1 and 5) are given a night with the Newcomer and the Veteran in a scene featuring a “hard” to “moderate” fetish tag of my choosing.
- Alex and the Veteran instruct the newcomer in proper blowjob technique in a consensual scene featuring the oral and rim fetishes.
- As a gift to their master, the veteran asks the newcomer for their help giving him a present he’ll never forget in a scene featuring a “moderate” to “hard” fetish of my choosing.
There it is gang, the parameters of the poll. Please vote once for each category and formulate your votes as such:
- Your favorite newcomer
- Your favorite veteran
- the number of the scene you’d like to see (i.e. 1-5)
Finally, I’ll just take a quick second to respond to some of the comments… I cant hardly even believe how many there were! I won’t directly address those who’s post is just a vote, but I will say thanks as always for voting. Your vote has been recorded and please keep reading along!
Admiral General Aladeen: First off thank you so much for the kind words and the compliment to my work. It means a great deal to me to hear such positive feedback. But, as it was stated by someone a little further down, I am not bringing any other ladies (besides the two ladies around which the 2nd poll revolved) into the story. Unfortunately, none of the ladies I am considering were the ones you mentioned in your impassioned plea. But, I do thank you for voting and please continued to read along.
SWSam: Your vote has been recorded, and Google equals Magic
Time of Angels: Wow, bud, you’re forum posts are starting to look like mine lol. Lets see, so much to address here.1) If you liked Ariana’s responses in 33, you should love what happens to her in 34. 2) Sorry if you found the time jumps weird, but I wanted a way to include the content in a way that didn’t slow the plot, still allowed for surprise, and yet gave the readers all the info they’d need moving forward. 3) I thought Bella’s punishment was especially fitting. I have some fun things planned for her moving forward, and who doesn’t love a little chick with dick action...ok admittedly it may not be for everyone, but I like some funtanari action on occasion myself. 4) Yeah, I can’t explain it myself, I’ve just always been much more attracted to slender and petite or tall and skinny body types… 5) I have to admit, if I were Rory, I would have some real problems with Amy’s behavior. But, that sexy ass and those long fucking legs wrapped around my waist would likely keep me around regardless
. 6) & 7) um… sports yeah… I don’t get it… 8) I was actually referring to FIFA the video game… never played it, but you can’t really go to college without hearing someone talking about it. 9) Ariana will ***** (section deleted) As to the some women don’t reach orgasm during sex thing… I’d say that’s mostly if the guy/girl they are with doesn’t know what he/she is doing or isn’t putting their all into it. Not always mind you but you can force someone to have an orgasm against their will, especially if you really know what you’re doing, like Alex does. (btw that conclusion wasn’t reached through experience but rather opinion and research). 10) I kind of agree that scene 3 is a little implausible. But consider the fact that Alex also often rewards the guards with fucking the girls who are in the punishment room. Its not that much of a stretch (especially if there were extenuating circumstances) that he might do so for another reason. 11) I agree, BJ scenes are a favorite of mine (as you might have noticed if you read Emma Watson’s Blowbang Spectacular lol). As it seems like scene 5 is going to be a runaway winner, I very well might do a version of scene 4 with different stars… we’ll just have to see.
Joe: Kitty Ariana? Hmmm… that’s a really good idea lol! Ariana will most definitely ***** (section deleted). I probably did say that Alex wouldn’t give the girls away like treats. But I also didn’t plan for scene 3 to go down exactly like that. I never pictured Alex tossing the girls into a room and telling his guards have at it… I was going to set it up in a more consensual way… Its honestly kind a mute point as it looks like scene 5 is going to run away with the votes. Finally, as to the other combos idea… that is certainly a possibility.
Well: Do you really think there will be a fight… especially one with Bella after what she just went through for punishment. Honestly at this point I’m not sure any of the girls would ever consider violence ever again.
Artillery Rambo 141: First, I really do appreciate your high praise. However, I find myself trying to calculate the odds of you not being the same guy who logged in with the Admiral General Aladeen login name… Either way, as was stated by above, I am not bringing in any additional ladies to the story.
There was one more thing I wanted to point out before I take off. On July 1st, Billion Dollar Harem hit 100,000 dragon prints! I know that’s a bit of old news, but I am still blown away by it. But here, now, I was looking at the count. As of today (7/27) less than a month later, the count is up to 105990. That means in just a few weeks time the story count has grown by nearly 6k! How freaking amazing is that! Thanks again, as always for your support. I really do appreciate it guys.
Ok gang, that looks like everything. I look forward to hearing all your thoughts on chapter 34 as I move forward on chapter 35.
Till next time,
I’m Back to the Black
-Mal
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I’m back again, everyone!
Chapter 34 is here. I wish I could have gotten this chapter to you guys a little faster, I know a lot of you have been anxiously waiting for it so you could learn what happens to Ariana. Well, I’m won’t give anything away, but I am happy to report that no less than 12 of this chapters’s 22 pages is devoted to her punishment room scene. I think those of you who were excited about this scene will not be disappointed. I don’t want to say too much about the content of this chapter here, I’d rather you read it. But I will say, this chapter is about 90% smut. It contains two action packed scenes.. One with Ariana, Alex and the guards in the punishment room, then one between Emma and her little Toy, Chloe. The rest of the chapter begins to develop some relationships and some new plot points as Emma talks some with Dove, with Margot and with Chloe.
I’m strongly considering going to work on chapter 35 right away and putting off the next chapter of Emma Watson’s Blowbang Spectacular for now. The reason for this is, because I’m anxious to get Ariana settled in and to resolve the two ongoing punishments. There are also several interactions in need of detailing that will be crucial to up coming plot points. As Taylor and Cara need to talk about what happened between them and how they plan to move forward. Taylor and Bella need to have a similar conversation. I have a feeling that chapter 35 is going to be more heavily focused on plot development than smut, but I do plan on there being some kind of sex scene sprinkled in there for good measure.
One last thing I’d like to add. Billion Dollar Harem hit 100,000 dragon prints on July first, (which again, I can’t thank you guys enough for) But now, here, listen to this. As of right now (7/27), its at 105,990! That means in less than one month, my story has had nearly 6,000 views. That is almost as incredible news as hitting 100k. I just can’t believe how popular this story has become and its all thanks to you guys! Please continue to read along and please let me know what you think by dropping by my thread on the forum. Its located in the All Other SubDomains category under the Celebrity heading in the Het-Mal/Female section. Look for Billion Dollar Harem! Oh, and right now, you can vote on a smut scene that will appear in an upcoming chapter! See you there.
Till next time,
I’m Back to the Black,
-Mal
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I woke up this morning with what I think is a very intriguing question for the awesome group of readers and writers here at AFF. So here goes: Recently TV shows like HBO’s Westworld, and video games such as Bethesda’s Fallout have been exploring themes such as AI (artificial intelligence) and synthetic robots that are fully capable of emulating human behavior and appearance. This morning, I had the thought what if the protagonist from my story, Billion Dollar Harem, an eccentric billionaire, was also a genius with advanced degrees in programming and robotics. He then used his brilliance to instead of kidnapping celebrities used it to build a synthetic robot harem with androids who were designed to look like and were programmed to believe they were celebrities. So, instead of capturing and imprisoning someone like Emma Watson, he built a robot who was identical in appearance to her and who believed she was her. This would allow for vast differences in personality and mannerisms than the actual celebrity. But also, it would allow for some separation from the problem of dealing with actual celebrities. I imagine the story could have fun little problems where the celebrity android’s AI acts up causing them to behave in odd and unexpected ways and the protagonist’s sometimes rough handling of them would require him to occasionally replace pieces of their hardware. Thus the story could focus just as much on them being androids as it does on them being recreations of celebrities.
While I think a story like this could raise some interesting questions, my biggest question is in what archive would a story with these parameters be placed? On the one hand, it features an original character and is set in the real world as opposed to a fictional one. On the other, it does feature “celebrities,” albeit robot ones designed to appear real. So? Original or Celebrity? Discuss.
- Anesor, BronxWench and JayDee
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Becoming Bitch
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Author: Mal
Title: Becoming Bitch
Summary: Dove Cameron is kidnapped by a crazy redneck who also happens to have a particularly sadistic fetish
Feedback: Yes, please, of course.
Fandom: Celebrity
Pairing: Dove Cameron
Warnings: Beast Rape Violence Humil Oral
Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered (5 of 5) Complete
URL: http://celeb.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094798
This is a dark twisted story of a sweet, innocent, girl next door type of celebrity who is degraded and humiliated at the hands of a crazy redneck psychopath. Warning, this story is not for the faint of heart. Chapter 1 deals mostly with her abduction and her early trials at the hands of Carl the redneck and his dog Zeus.