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  1. Wilalot: I enjoy that you've made kushina very true to her personality instead of diverging from it at a fast pace. The restrictions and punishment for failing were a great way of making sure that there isn't any need for anything but "diplomacy" and also making her more likely to do something desperate that first time. I think it'd be interesting if she had to go back to the same guy to finish the negations seeing as how much he'd push her. A side not at the beginning of the omake it was slightly difficult to tell who was doing what and I had to retread once I got a few more sentences down and names were used again. It shaping up to be a great story looking forward to the next chapter Response: Thanks for the review. Real Kushina is the best Kushina, I can make any redhead oc I want, that’s why I try to keep characters as close as possible to their ‘original’ disposition. They will eventually meet again, although not for a long time. Sending her right back seemed to unrealistic in my opinion and I don’t think Kushina would have ‘let her guard down’ around him. I reread the beginning of the omake and see what you mean, I tried to do better this time around, tell me if it worked alright?
  2. genesis: very interesting take on the story specially for kushina being an embasador of sorts since she will be out of her league and at a disavantage the ntr theme will work well as she tries to keep herself alive. i dont know what will be the course going next but im looking foward to see kushina loosing her spirit little by little seeing no other option until her body is the only choice left, though im pretty sure she will be resistant at first making sure her love for minato remains intact. here is a perfect chance to see kushina being introduced to this new world of cheating once she has gotten the chance to embrace it fully to see the benefits it woudl have to her favour while helping the man she loves then she would get more and more adicted to the idea of cheating minato she even joins mikoto on one of those orgies. also i know this is too soon but on the requirements of naruto int he challenge, any chance kushina forced relocation on kumo for some months has nothign to do she appeared pregnant later as minato doesnt remember fuckign his wife around that time.. just saying Response: Thank you for reviewing, I’m glad you are liking it so far. Her corruption will happen a little faster than I have wanted, because of some planning mistakes on my part, but It still will happen at gradual, and (somewhat) reasonable pace, I hope. Yes Kushina will of course go to Kumo later in the story, for how long remains to be seen. She will not get pregnant by anyone else except Minato though, that part is already planned out actually, sorry if that disappoints you.
  3. I was told that a review reply thread might be beneficial, so this thread will be here for that now. Responses to reviews from the first chapter will remain in the second one. The actual story can be found here: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600105993
  4. Hey there, I think the story you are looking for is: Naruto: Shinobi Institute of Performance Analysis https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9145129/1/Naruto-Shinobi-Institute-of-Performance-Analysis there is also a sequel called: Naruto Shippuuden: Botsuraku https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10048303/1/Naruto-Shippuuden-Botsuraku I hope this is the one you were looking for.
  5. Challenge accepted, oh boy. Story can be found at: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600105993 This is my first ever fanfiction, so don't expect a masterpiece. However I hope you, and everyone else, still enjoys it.
  6. I like the idea of Kushina taking a student and continuing the tradition so to speak. Personally, I think a male student would make more sense. As far as I understand Kushinas purpose in Root she is an assassin who gets close to her targets by seducing them, right? So unless her female target is attracted to women herself she is pretty much out of luck. ... I don't really have much of an idea who, though, but in the end, this is an AU, so you could probably make it work with anyone you choose. Edit: Ignore this, I misunderstood the idea. I explained it better in my review.
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