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I’m glad you like the story so far. I didn’t include the stripping because she was unconscious and the chapters are at least semi-Satsuki POV. Just to clarify though, do you want a scene where the Kunoichi is stripped by someone else, strips herself, or both/either?

Yes, I think that would be possible, I planned to use young Kushina anyways. And if I don’t make her a virgin it will be someone else.

I’ll add it to next chapter’s AN

You’re welcome, I think maybe I should have mentioned that somewhere.

That’s not exactly what is happening, each episode is a direct continuation from the prologue. So in the Tenten episode it is as if the Satsuki episode never happened. In the one after that it will be as if the two before never happened. And so on. I think mutually exclusive is the term for that.

both are good ideas, while it was generally always planned to be a mission from the hokage, there is nothing against changing it up from time to time. I also like the Ino idea, public/exhib was always planned for her, but the hot-spring idea is a nice way to get her compliant. She seems like a girl who wouldn’t not mind being spoiled a little.

I think I will keep it pretty much like in canon, except for the gender-bend girls of course. However that may change if I decide on a body-mod chapter.

I’m impartial on tentacles, I just wouldn’t know how to write a lemon with them… well, regardless I added it to ideas. Yes pillories and medieval stocks seem to be the same thing, the enema would have been without scat, I can’t stand it either. The rest was mostly added from tags I found on bdsm pics, and which I wouldn’t have minded to write if a lot of people asked for it. Satsuki episode is coming along well, maybe a bit too well actually. It’s already 5k words and I still haven’t finished the first scene… well I hope to get it done by Wednesday/Thursday so I can get a bit of an headstart on the next chapter. I’d like to keep a weekly update schedule, but I don’t know if I will manage it.

Yes, she kind of seems like the ‘tough’ girl who would be able to take it, while the rest are more ‘girly’. I brainstormed a little list together in a private conversation earlier and thought I might post it here so people could give me their ideas/opinions on it. Not everything is strictly bondage/bdsm but to me it kind of fits together... Things that I know could feature, or could not feature: Possible: ball-gag (with or without holes) wooden horse (stationary or swinging) (or tied rope) rope-bondage/bars toys (including blindfolds, leashes, clasps, etc) (asphyxiation (either through waterboarding or light chocking)) paddling/cropping/whipping (no blood) maybe a public pillory (with or without hood) sensory deprivation Maybe: Speculums Enemas urethral insertions Nose hooks Not Possible: Face masks (like those super tight leather things) ring-gags (just a personal dislike of mine) latex body-suits (the full-body ones) anything with blood, including cutting off blood circulation in things larger than a nipple or clit acupuncture permanent mutilation/marking of any kind (although it’s a maybe on a tattoo/seal, no branding though) pony-girl play I won’t be able to fit everything in the episode but that’s it in general.

I’ll keep it in mind, I already had a similar idea with a swinging wooden horse (those triangle things) which is coated in lotion, but a rope is good as well.

Nothing concrete, just that I wanted to combine food + sex. Like edible sextoys, letting them drink wine from her cleavage, ‘dipping’ food in her own juices etc.

The whole food thing is kinda getting to me, so I think it’s definitely going to feature. The blackmail deal is a possibility, unless I come up with something that I think fits more. As for the whole legalization and the law aspect of that… well I really won’t bother with it. I marked this pwp after all, so there really is no reason to obsess over silly little things like that. One question I have for you though, which Hinata do you imagine in this? I doubt it’s the pre-shippuden one, but do you see this done with the teen- or MILF-Hinata?

Ah, alright. Then yes, Naruko definitely can, and most likely will, get an episode. However the next few episodes are already reserved for other characters, so it will most likely take some time.

I’m sorry, I think I misunderstood your first question, I thought you meant whether it would be possible for Naruko to have her own episode sometime later. Naruko won’t appear in the Satsuki episode, at least not in this one. As for how I would do it, most likely simply retcon it, like I did with Satsuki, or go with the twin/sister route.

Sure, Satsuki is there, so why not Naruko? Anything you want to see done to her?

no sorry, Satsuki will wear one in the 3rd chapter, the one for next sunday

Yup, all planned out, sorry maid outfit won’t be in her first time, but it will be in the next chapter.

That’s an option, noted it down.

Sorry, I have to agree with CuriousWriter, this is not what this story is about. While i’m a huge fan of ntr personally, this story is more about mindbreak and corruption. That doesn’t mean that there won’t be any ntr or cheating in the story, but none of the spouses/boyfriends will feature in it, except for small mentions

sure you can help, was going to ask anyways ;D thank you! yea it won’t take much more, of course i could drag it out longer, but i planned from the beginning to not have more than two chapters per episode

Sure, Thanks for the Idea I always planned on some food play, the nyotaimori is just a little more refined than what I had in mind but that’s even better, I’ll definitely note it down and keep it in mind. However Hinata won’t feature for several episodes yet. The second and third will be Tenten/Tsunade and the fourth and fifth will be Kushina/Ino, no idea which one will be second/third or fourth/fifth yet.

yea we had at least one idea for any of them, just nothing planned out yet

And thanks for the review, I saw it of course. I definitely planned on adding a Hinata episode, I’m quite fond of her as well, although, I do not have anything concrete planned for her yet. Sexual torture/pleasure mind-break etc are going to be big things in this story. I have a list of ideas for almost every character, but most of them are not set in stone, that said there is nothing against gathering more ideas, so just lay them on me.

thanks ;P i wanna give myself some time so I can get ahead with the next episode, this way I hope I can keep my update schedule consistent...let’s see if it works

2nd chapter has been released, the next one will be posted next sunday