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she will wear a maid outfit in the second chapter, the episode is almost done already but I always want to have one or two chapters as back up before I post

And thanks for that, as for your review, I purposefully never mentioned a name when I was describing the Hokage or Daimyo, so the prologue would fit no matter which time-line I would use. The first episode will be two chapters of Satsuki (f/sasuke) which was ‘requested’ by CuriousWriter who helped me out a lot. Tsunade will either be the second or third episode and Kushina will feature in the fourth. Also, nothing speaks against writing several episode’s of the same character, so if you want to see anything specific you can tell me

This is mainly for sharing/contributing/discussing ideas for my story Daimyo’s Den. Feedback is also very welcome. If you have a wish for a certain Character/Theme this is also the place to ask, I promise I will consider it, however keep in mind that I don’t have the time, or the will, to write everything. Link: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106100

Yes there are lots of things like these that are confusing. Like the difference between into and in to more in general. He dived in to the pool. He drove the car into the garage. For example.

So in the example above it would be change in attitude then? As Frank is pleased because of Bob’s change in attitude. Also, thanks for the explanation, now it really makes sense!

Thanks for clearing that up, its always little issues like this that bother me the most and I get stuck until I resolve them.

I’m not quite certain what the difference between the phrases ‘a change in attitude’ and ‘a change of attitude’ is. I know both of them exist, however the German translations don’t distinguish very well between them. Is there a specific distinction between them? And if yes, what is it? Let’s say we have this very simple (and stupid) example: “You have changed.” said Frank when he noticed Bob’s change in/of attitude. Which one would I use and why?

Not much, still writing the outline and trying to figure out how to avoid the same mistakes that ruined the previous version for me, also I keep getting distracted by other ideas. Don’t expect anything on this anytime soon, but I’ll post here once that changes.

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HI there, I would like to throw in my two cents as well, if thats alright. Personally I think it depends on how the parasite and the man interact with each other. The parasite is inside then man’s brain, and self-aware, but does not actually influence the actions of the man (during sex). → no 3plus tag (maybe a voy tag if you want to be careful?) The parasite is controlling the man’s actions completely, with no input from his host. → again, no 3plus tag (again maybe voy if the man is still conscious and aware of what is happening?) The man and the parasite are working together in some fashion (willingly or not) and both take separate actions while they have sex with the women. → 3plus tag if you want, but personally, I wouldn’t say anything if there wasn’t one…

Yes, I’m rewriting it at the moment. I just wasn’t satisfied with it. Once my exams are over I will start posting again.

ANON – Conrad: You have an estimated time of completion for the next chapter? Excuse my rudeness but finding fanfiction smut with this much quality is incredibly rare. I simply can't have enough. Response: Well first of all, thank you for the compliment, I’m glad you are enjoying it. As for a ‘release date’, I’m afraid that I can’t really say. While I have a lot of time during the holidays, with the exception of Christmas and Silvester, I’m not sure if I’ll be able to finish the next chapter during that time. And afterwards Work and Uni start again so… The only thing I can say is that I already started working on it, and I’ll try my hardest to finish it sooner than the last one. Hopefully much sooner.

ANON – redlox2: chapter 3 great into! Kushina first leap into the sacred art of adultery! Will Kushina be forced to do something a bit more kinky like forced to act like a maid or will italways be "official" missions? Response: Thanks for reviewing! As for your question, Kushina will almost always interact with the foreign politicians in her official capacity as a diplomat, so I guess the missions will always be ‘official’. However, a selected few individuals will find out about the stipulations the fire daimyo has put on her. One of those people might very well force her to act as a maid for him. I’ll see if I can fit it in somewhere. If there is anything specific you would like to see, then just send me a message or something, except for the last 2 chapters the story is still pretty open.

Bageltiger: Great chapter, I just love how she is slowly getting sluttier. Response: Thank you for reviewing, I’m glad you’re enjoying my story.

ANON: 17k words . Definitely worth the wait. Awesome chapter and hope you are able to write the next one faster. Response: Thanks, I will definitely try to write it faster!

Anon - Knowpein: Well so long for the update... make long and detailed.... you can do how kushina gets the position… Next chapter kushina is sent same daimyo for getting job again... who forces her to do strip infront all his servants & crew..... then makes her wear skimpy outfit... so on... again great concept Response: Thanks for the review, and again, sorry it took so long. She will eventually come to meet the old daimyo again, although not for a while I’m afraid. I hope you still enjoy it.

Anon - Midnightson: That was a great chapter the pacing was good and you still left something there for us to enjoy but I wonder if you do another sex omake in the next chapter maybe another time difference where the damiyo drugs kushina can't wait for the next chapter. Response: Thanks for the review, more omakes will definitely come. I actually have an idea for your scenario, but I don’t think it will fit into the next chapter. I will definitely keep it in mind though.

Anon- Swiftrabbit: This is gearing to be one of the best concepts on this website! Keep up the fabulous work! Response: Thank you very much! I’m glad you enjoy it as much as you do.

Anon - Gin: That omake was sexu Response: Thank you!

Anon - Voracious: Hi nice start... Waiting for the update Will you update this? Response: Yes, I will, sorry it took so long.

Bageltiger: This is great, I can't wait for more. Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

BitterNTR: I loved it! All of it! I'm quite glad that we're slowly marching towards well-developed and story-driven lemons instead of just diving right ahead. I'm very glad that you created a scenario where Kushina is forced into performing the fic's challenge since it is smarter than what most people would come up with. I also enjoyed the omake lemon in that alternate timeline. That concept was quite surprising but not unappreciated. Certainly gives us a glimpse into 'what could have been' and leaves us wanting more. Very enjoyable to read and would hope to see more of it in the future Other than a few grammar issues, there's really nothing wrong with it. Can't wait to see more of this story! Update whenever you can. Response: You flatter me. ‘Forcing’ her to complete the challenge seemed like the only logical way to go about it, as I can’t see canon Kushina betraying Minato any other way. I’m glad you seemed to enjoy the omake as much as I did writing it, giving a glimpse of ‘what could have been’ was exactly what I’m trying to achieve with it. The update took a lot longer than I planned but I hope they will come more regular in the future...

snake1980: chap 2 was pretty good looking forward to see were kushina goes next and what will happen now since she cant fail now. and graet job on the omake. Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the next chapter as well.

redlox: chapter 2 is realistic where she doesn't instantly "seduce" her superiors!! so i am guessing there won't be any real lemons for at least 2-3 chapters? just wondering ( i can';t remember if mentioned) how old Kushina is? like early 20's? Response: Thanks, 2 chapters seems realistic, I wanted to stretch it out some more but I botched that up, I think. Early 20’s is right, I don’t know myself if I mentioned it somewhere and I am too lazy to read through it. This takes place just before Minato becomes Hokage, so early twenties seems like the most logical assumption.

Anon22: That omake section was amazing... Too bad there wasn't more; that version of the evening would have been an awesome chapter/story. Response: I’m glad you liked it! After the somewhat ‘dry’ chapter I felt you guys deserved something extra. I always have alternate scenarios for the scenes I write, so it is quite likely that there will be more Omakes in the future.