Snake_King

Alright, that sounds like a nice outline. Aside from the milking and boobjobs, can the sex scenes involve anal?

I’m sorry, I meant do they do it with Ben and join the harem in the first chapter they appear in or one or two chapters afterwards?

Alright, that sounds fair enough. And as for when the girls join the harem, is it as soon as they appear or shortly afterwards?

Glad you like the ideas for Azula. I thought it might help to throw in some things that help build up to her switching to Ben’s side, as opposed to her just deciding it out of the blue just because the sex was good. As for the names, if we’re going with Sokkara and Zuka, I wonder what would be a good female name for Fem!Aang? Nothing comes to mind at the moment, how about you? That makes sense about keeping things from the show with some changes, although that raises the question of just how changed things are, aside from who switched genders and the like. Namely, when do you think would be good points for when each girl joins the harem, as soon as they appear or a short time after? And who replaces Azula as the one chasing our heroes once she joins?

Unrealistic, huh? In a story where a guy has an alien watch that can change him into a variety of aliens, as well as somehow giving him a huge dick, and he gets sent to another world that is psuedo-medieval and has people with power over the elements, and he gets a harem comprised of multiple, mega-curvy and busty women from this world? “Realistic” isn’t exactly a word that comes to mind in describing this when you think about it. But, putting that aside, I get what you mean. That idea of Azula making a deal with Ben after somehow kidnapping him might just work. Then, during the intercourse, she could get so much pleasure that she decides to devote herself to him and the pleasure she gets from him (assuming that anyone’s capable of being THAT good). After she tells him that she’s with him, Ben’s a bit reluctant, but upon realizing that she won’t take “no” for an answer, decides to just go with it. That sound about right? Although, I think it might not hurt to have some build-up to this change in Azula’s attitude, like say...being bored with the royal life and being unsatisfied with the prolonged conquest the Fire Nation is attempting, and maybe some pent-up sexual frustration? Any thoughts there? As for the bisexual relationships, yeah I think it might be best for the majority of Ben’s harem here, with the guys-turned-girls here being in bisexual relationships with their canon love interests as well as being a part of Ben’s harem. Like: Zuka/Mai Fem!Aang/Katara Fem!Sokka/Suki/Princess Yue I think a good name for Fem!Sokka might be Sokkara or something like that. Also, given the nature of your challenge, would this be a re-telling of the entire Avatar series, or just keeping some key points with some major changes here and there?

Um...wouldn’t Ben using his horse cock to make Azula his slave entail a bit of rape? And didn’t you specifically say that you didn’t want rape or mindbreaking in this story? Although, I suppose an alternative might be to have Azula somehow hold Ben prisoner (not sure how considering the Omnitrix), and she tries to seduce him and make him have sex with her while she has him tied up, but the pleasure she gets from his cock is somehow enough to bend her over to him (no pun intended), but even then, that sounds like a bit of a stretch. Any ideas? As for Zuka and Mai, I think it might make sense for them to be a bit bisexual, given them being in Ben’s harem and having it for each other.

That might work for some of them, but I doubt that it would work for Azula, if we’re sticking with her characterization from the show. She’s a sadistic, manipulative schemer who sees everyone and everything as either her plaything or an obstacle in need removing for what she wants. And, as we saw at the end of Avatar, when her dad betrayed her, she went cuckoo for Coco Puffs. Also, would Mai still have a thing for Zuka?

How would you want the bad girls to join the harem? Considering how serious the show was as well as everybody's stance on things, there'd have to be some changes to personality as well as body in order for the harem you listed to work out.

Not many people seem to want to do this threesome, so I figured I’d lay a challenge for it, but don’t let the title fool you into thinking that this will go the typical route with hypnotism. Premise: The Krew discovers a long-lost technique for being able to bend other people’s minds via hypnosis/mind-bending. Realizing that it’d probably be dangerous if it fell into the wrong hands, the four of them decide to keep it to themselves. Mako, Korra and Asami decide and agree to test it out on each other one night, and as a result, become a threesome, loosening inhibitions around each other. Each one has a fantasy or something they’ve always wanted to try out. Korra: She’s always wanted to try being a nudist/exhibitionist. Asami: She’s always had a secret fetish for getting spanked. Mako: He’s a virgin, but secretly wanted to try anal with a girl, and do it nonstop until they went to bed. All three of them: they have feelings for each other. As a result of learning these things about each other, they decide to all move in together and be a threesome. And because of the mind-bending technique, they are able to fulfill their fantasies: Korra disrobes herself whenever she arrives at their home, Asami wears a thong and gets spanked at any given moment when they’re alone (though never to extreme degrees), and both women happily allow Mako to fill their butts with semen as he alternates between them. And this is all when they’re alone at their home. If you have any questions about this challenge and/or would like to take it up, feel free to respond.

Praetor knows. I said it to him.

In terms of depravity and dirtiness, I think that they were referring to just bigger dirty talk and the like. Things like the girls saying they want the sex everyday and declarations of how slooty they are and the like.

On that anonymous review on Naruko's Pact, I think that that person was actually referring to Hanabi, Hinata's little sister by about three or four years.

I'm not too fond of Yaoi or NTR myself, and I especially hate NTR. Glad you liked the chapter.

I understand, as that does make sense when I think about it.

That it would. I've kind of had this fantasy in the back of my mind where a girl or woman has sex with her lover and afterwards stops wearing clothes. It's a relatively minor one, but still a bit of fun.

Read the latest Omniharem chapter, and it was a good read. It did it's job, and I look forward to when you're able to make and upload the next one. As for ideas and suggestions, I'd still like to offer up the one I made a while back in a review on one of the chapters. Namely, that one of the alien girls that joins the harem (preferably Looma, but I'm not picky) adopts a nudist/exhibitionist lifestyle while living in Ben's home, namely because her culture says for her to do so after mating with her chosen lover. She can still put on clothes if she leaves the house, but once back in, they immediately come off, and she has to be always at the ready for when Ben's raring to go. Sound good? Just a suggestion, but I'd like to see this if at all possible.

Alright, I wish you the best of luck. In the meantime, I've got stuff of my own to write, as well as to get ready for college next week, and I'm hoping that someone decides to take up my challenges.

I don't mean to nag or anything of the sort, but just when do you estimate that you'll be able to post the chapter? I'll understand whatever your answer maybe, as no one is a stranger to waiting.

I guess that should be obvious about it being Gwen. And I was just asking about Looma, but I understand what you mean about the threesome. Oh well, I look forward to it, and I wish you luck.

How about Looma for the next girl? Just throwing it out there as a suggestion, and you don't have to do that if you don't want to. And who's the anal scene with?

On the subject of the locals appearance, I was thinking of something like this: 1. Their bodies are mostly human-like with curves and faces akin to what we consider beautiful. 2. Their skin is colored blue with thin, red, zebra-like stripes up and down their arms, legs, and torso. 3. Their eyes have black sclera, slit pupils, and irises whose colors range from silver to bright red. 4. Their hair is much like that of the Predator 5. On the name of the locals' species, I'm not sure, but perhaps something like the X'Hallegi or something like that. 6. On the name of the planet, how about something like Xenagotha or something like that. (I thought of those last two off the top of my head) As for what happens when they eventually leave, Ben and the gang are provided with a new spaceship, go to find Rook, and return to Earth and establish a new house to live in, as well as open trade and talks between the planet they'd left and the intergalactic community. Sound okay? I'm sorry that you feel you won't be able to do this story, but I'm glad that it piqued your interest. Any other questions or thoughts on it?

Yeah, that's pretty much it. It would make sense for both him and his female companions to undergo changes both physical and mental during his stay on that world and when exposed to the substance in its air. Any other ideas or questions?

That would make sense, as well as probably give him more of a physical build that would compensate for that stamina. Don't you think?

Also, part of the reason I set had it set up this way is because I've always felt that harem works best if it takes place in an environment that allows for that sort of thing to happen.

Yeah, it could do that if the writer chose it. Although, aside from making him horny, what effect do you think it would have on Ben due to his being male?