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Snake_King

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  1. Like I said, a lot of TV network producers are firm believers in the “Viewers Are Morons” trope. I’ve seen quite a few of mature-minded shows I like replaced or followed up with dumber things. Examples being: Spectacular Spider-Man – Ultimate Spider-Man Young Justice & Teen Titans – Teen Titans Go Disney’s Gargoyles season 3 Transformers: Prime – Transformers: Robots In Disguise. The list goes on.
  2. Yes, a bit of focus on other characters from time to time would do the story some good. If Gwen was a Tsundere, would that mean she’d eventually have romantic feelings for Ben along with the other girls? I haven’t given up, it’s just on hold until I get some things in real life sorted out, and what I have written is a bit lengthy, so I need to find a way to shorten it up. I guess I shouldn’t have said “too much dignity,” but rather I just didn’t want to see another dumbed down reboot. And yes, a back-to-basics route in terms of tone would have done the show some good, and it would’ve been better if they’d just continued with Omniverse.
  3. I see. Would this have an overarching story or would it be episodic? Also, if you could, there is a certain trope typically seen in anime that I'd like to see avoided if possible, one that is rather infamous, as explained by the people behind Anime America on YouTube: The Perceived Pervert - the main character, probably male, is carrying on with his day, when he suddenly slips. And wouldn't you know it? He mistakingly falls onto a young woman. At the same time, he accidentally touches her boobs or brushes up against her crotch, which makes him blush in embarrassment, and makes the girl freak out. From this moment onwards, the girl will beat the living daylights out of him, thinking she's justified from being assaulted by a pervert, and will continue to ruin his days because she believes, without a shadow of a doubt, that he is a pervert. This cliché is stupid and needs to stop. There is nothing original or good about this at all. In some cases, it's the Tsundere who will abuse the guy no matter what he or others say. In other cases, the main character will accidentally see the girl naked, and she will believe she can never remarry since a strange man saw her naked, and that means she's no longer pure. Regardless, whenever the girl's purity is compromised, she must then find a way to punish the man who "assaulted" her, and then mistreat him in order to avenge herself from being molested...EVEN THOUGH IT WAS AN ACCIDENT!!
  4. Sounds about right for how the situation with Max’s death would go, as well as the fallout of the event. Would this anime reboot have sex in it or would it be more PG-13?
  5. Indeed, what would be most important in a more mature series would be the characters undergoing development, both physically and mentally. For Grandpa Max and his death, I’d imagine a story arc where at first he contemplates his life and how he’s been through so much and lived so long, talks to Ben about his future, and then gets involved in a fight with a major villain before dying a heroic death, taking the bad guy with him. It would end his story and give him a dignified and meaningful death, fighting for others and defending his loved ones. This Ben 10 anime reboot, would it be something you’d produce, or is it another fanfic idea where Ben is depicted in the style of anime with a lot of the tropes?
  6. True, though I wouldn’t want it to be dark and gritty just for the sake of it. If it was dark and had a point that it was trying to get across, then it would have quality. And speaking of Ben 10 as an anime, I think a few people noticed that all the girls Ben met up with in Omniverse sort of gave him a harem in a set up similar to anime. Specifically, the “Unwanted Harem” trope, where a single guy suddenly attracts extraordinary women, all of whom want him for their own.
  7. That would certainly help integrate the DC and Marvel ladies better rather than them just being all in the same world. Perhaps the writer could have each DC or Marvel woman be from a universe where they don’t have an obligation to it or can’t go back to it for some reason. That way they would have a better reason for staying as part of the harem. Plus, it might serve as a pervy, smutty follow-up to Ominverse that is satisfying, as all we got after that was a f*cking reboot, one which I have too much dignity to check out.
  8. I’m not sure about the other girls at the moment, but I do at least have one for how Kai could be inducted into the harem: As far as we know, her only family was her grandfather, as we never saw her parents or if she had any siblings or not. So, perhaps her grandfather could’ve died recently as well, though under different circumstances than Max, leaving Kai feeling down and a bit lost. After hearing about it, Ben arrives and gives her comfort, with the two taking solace in the fact that they both know what it’s like to lose a loving grandfather. The two try to make a laugh or 2 to try and lighten up the situation, but it turns downward again when Kai receives mail that the bank will foreclose on hers and her grandfather’s house, and she will soon be without a home. Ben offers to take her in, saying he’s moved into a new place now that could use some new tenants. Kai tries to politely turn him down, but she relents when he helps her realize that she doesn’t have a whole lot of options on where she can go. So, she agrees and he surprises her by bringing her to that palace I mentioned in the Gwen scene by snapping his fingers and teleporting them there. She's even further surprised when she finds Gwen coming up to them dressed in the slave outfit and kisses Ben. Kai asks what's going on, and Ben explains it all to her demonstrating when he needs to. Out of curiosity, Kai asks Ben to do to her what he did to Gwen just to see for herself what it's like. He does, and in the process, rips Kai's shirt and pants, but she's not too bothered by it, since it feels better than she initially thought. Ben offers to reverse it if she wants, but Kai tells him she likes and wants to keep her new assets. Kai thinks it over for a minute, and then decides she wants in on the action as well with Ben and Gwen, as it would give her a new place to call home as well as a new feeling of belonging. Ben then changes her ruined clothes into a version of Gwen's slave outfit, and the three of them have a threesome. Sound good?
  9. Interesting ideas with the reality warping, and I could see Ben doing the measurement-change, although I’m not certain about the gender bending. Why not just have it be a world were female versions of those male heroes exist? After all, all fanfics are alternate universes, aren’t they? I can imagine a scene where Ben is discussing his newfound power with Gwen, and she’s skeptical and thus asks him to prove it, which he does by creating a palace of sorts around them out of seemingly nothing. Then he surprises her again by making her boobs and butt grow, which at first finds shocking and a little unnerving, but then decides to accept it because they feel good. Giving into her own feelings for her cousin, she kisses him and then tells him to show her what he’s got, followed by him changing her clothes into a Leia slave outfit variant, and then revealing his big dick right before he does her on the spot. Think this is to your liking? As for the immortality thing, I brought it up because of a little problem that I don’t often see addressed in slave/master smut fanfiction; what happens to the characters in the long run when the characters age and grow old? Do they still try to go at it, or are they so old and tired that they can’t do it anymore? With immortality and eternal youth in place, that’s not a problem anymore, don’t you think?
  10. I kind of feel like something should really sell Gwen on the idea of being part of her cousin’s harem. Like...maybe some of his sexual thoughts unintentionally rubs off on her, a part of her always liked him in a more-than-cousins way, and perhaps she feels the need to help keep Ben in check after the death of their grandfather. All of those are some interesting choices from the show, DC and Marvel. Maybe Wonder Woman and She-Hulk as well? Another thing to consider is that if Ben essentially does become god-like, wouldn’t that technically make him immortal? And if so, couldn’t he make the members of his harem immortal as well? That way they could screw each other for eternity without having to worry about getting old and decrepit or dying. Also, fun idea, all the members of Ben’s harem wear versions of Leia’s slave outfit from Return of the Jedi.
  11. And would Gwen be part of this harem willingly, or would Ben and all his godly power “coerce” her into joining? Which Marvel and DC babes did you have in mind?
  12. Sounds good, although I’d probably have Max be the one killed off, because it would seem more fitting and we all like having Gwen be part of the harem, don’t you think?
  13. That does have potential, but wouldn't he still face opposition or something? And who would be in this harem? Every woman and girl he’s ever met and known? The mind altering thing just makes the most sense to me for why a hero in a fanfic would suddenly go dark and do questionable things. You actually see the “ultra-powerful dark badass hero” stories a lot in Naruto fanfics.
  14. True, although I think that stories where a character acts differently than normal works better when the change in behavior is given a believable reason, like say… Mind altering Possession And other things like that.
  15. Okay then. It didn't really seem like a situation where you could milk it into a harem anyway. At best, I could imagine the now Wild Gwen using sexual teasing and magical mind altering to make someone like Kai a sex slave, but I don't think you could do more than that.
  16. Also, how would you make it into a harem?
  17. Yes, she can have her breasts and butt enlarged if the writer chooses, and yes, this time it's just them.
  18. New Ben 10 idea if anyone’s interested, though I won’t force it if they’re not. Inspiration: Birth of Catwoman scene from Batman Returns Dexter’s Laboratory episode “Dimwit Dexter” RexFan12345’s bimbofication challenge Any situation where a character experiences something that causes a significant change in their personality and actions Premise: AU where Ben and Gwen go on their summer road trip with their grandfather at the age of 17. Gwen and Ben are being antagonistic towards each other as usual, but then a magical bad guy (whomever the writer chooses it to be) comes in with an ensuing fight, during which Gwen gets hit with a magic blast that knocks her out. Later, after the baddie’s been defeated, Ben checks up Gwen in the Rust Bucket, and when she wakes up, she feels a strong headache at first due to the villain’s magic affecting her own, but then turns into a sex-crazy wild woman and has her way with Ben, ripping her clothes off until she’s in nothing but a thong and bra in the process. From then on, Ben has no choice but to deal with a cousin who both likes him and wants to constantly ride hm. Requirements: With Max and in public Gwen acts normal, but in private with Ben, her inner wild nymphomaniac comes out and she does him on the spot After ripping her clothes the first time, Gwen decides the underwear is the only clothing she wants to wear from then on, but casts an illusion to make it look like she’s wearing her normal attire Ben is at first surprised by this sudden change in Gwen and wants to fix it, but due to Gwen not wanting to change back and him not knowing anyone with the means to do it, he eventually accepts and learns to enjoy this bizarre new predicament The Omnitrix gave Ben a large dick and massive amounts of stamina, both for fighting and in the bed Allowed: Anal Clothes ripping Spanking Dirty Talk Not allowed: Cheating BDSM NTR If you have any thoughts or questions about this idea, let me know.
  19. Spider-Man/Korra harem This time, it's not a dimension-hop crossover, but rather, an in-universe crossover. I saw one guy make an attempt at this concept, but he didn't really go beyond one chapter from what I could tell. Premise: Piandao Parkah, a Republic City non-bender teenaged boy of Fire Nation and Water Tribe descent, has a life that is anything but ordinary. Sure, he has to deal the troubles of school and trying to maintain a low paying job so he can at least support his loving aunt, Mai Parkah, but he has a secret, one that truly separates him from other people; he's the web-slinging, wall-crawling vigilante called Spider-Man! How did this come to be? He came into contact with a spider-like spirit a few months ago when he accidentally broke one of its statues in a temple on the outskirts of Republic City. He tried to make some money off of his newfound abilities with an underground fighting arena, but that fell to the wayside when tragedy struck with the death of his uncle, Bato Parkah, at the hands of a crook he let get away. Now, he takes responsibility and uses his abilities to help people and fight crime. Although, lately that hasn't been easy, what with the triads and street gangs growing more restless, as well as the violent acts committed by the so-called Equalist movement. However, he may not have to content with this madness all by himself, as a certain newcomer to the scene is on the horizon in the form a fiery girl from the southern Water Tribe who has quite a road ahead of her as well. If the title wasn't evident enough, this is a harem story, with this version of Spidey getting together with some of the girls from the Legend of Korra. Here're the girls: Korra Asami Sato Eska You may add more girls and women if you like, but those 3 are must-haves. Other requirements: Build up the romance between Spidey and his ladies, and show them creating a situation for themselves where a harem could work out. I don't want anything rushed. Foreshadow future villains rather than have them randomly pop-up like they did in the show, and perhaps change the order of the main villains from the show. Recreate some of Spidey's villains in a way that is more cohesive with the Avatar world. Adding to the above requirement, don't stick to the typical Spider-Man formula for all of the villains and characters, be creative with it in a way that's cohesive with the Avatar world. Develop the characters, and have a connection between the main Korra villains. Suggestions for the recreation of Spidey villains in Avatar world: Hiroshi Sato as a mechanized version of Doctor Octopus A sand-bender being affected by a spirit and becoming the Sandman The Venom and Carnage symbiotes being dark spirits Electro being a lightning-bender The Kingpin as a boss of bosses for the Triad crime syndicates Shocker as a member of the Equalists A man with only one arm wanders around through a spirit-filled wilderness, and then accidentally disturbs a particularly salty spirit that then curses him into changing into the Lizard The Rhino being a mercenary who stole and retooled the tech from Hiroshi Sato after the fight with the Equalists Allowed: Anal Bisexuality (still willing to do it with Spidey) Some instances of exhibitionism Changes to body proportions, but in a way that is balanced and makes sense. Strap-on lesbian sex (particularly when it’s in a threesome with Spidey) Not allowed: NTR Cheating Bashing Pegging BDSM Yaoi (just not my thing) Futa (just not in the mood for that this time around) If you have any thoughts, ideas, suggestions about this or would like to take this up, please let me know.
  20. Actually, Korra wasn't Aang’s granddaughter. Aside from being the latest reincarnation of the Avatar, she and Aang weren't related by blood. And the setting took place about 70 years after the original series ended, so a lot can happen in that time.
  21. Legend of Korra had lots of potential, and plenty of good moments, but I admit that it is undeniably very flawed.
  22. Sorry, I worded that wrong. I meant do you have any ideas, questions or suggestions for the Spidey/Korra story? Also, I hope that you've been doing well.
  23. Thanks, and out of curiosity, what else would you have with this idea aside from what I’ve listed in it?
  24. Uh, sorry if I offended you guys in any way.
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