BitterNTR

Anon: Great chapter (and story)! I like that you don't just rush to the 'naughty' parts, there are tons of storys like that already, and instead take the time to develope the plot (which is lacking, or even entirely missing, in 90% of the stories on this site) properly. I wonder though, since kushina was said to have a rather cheery/happy/etc. personality in canon on how it will conflict with the 'darker' aspects of root. Will she be forced to obey because of the command from danzo but hate it, or will she develope a different personality compared to canon? Hope to see an update soon, cheers. Response: I'm glad you enjoy the slow development. Rushing things to get to the naughty bits can be nice and all, but I feel that rushing should only be used for one-shots and such. But I'll be having a few timeskips here and there soon to speed things up. As already mentioned in the first chapter, Kushina will keep her emotions instead of being like a Root robot. However, she will be serious, calm and cold (like a Root robot) when she needs to be. She may even fake her emotions in order to manipulate people as well. But she will have nothing but utter loyalty to Danzo and will love obeying him, especially since he's building relationships with her as well as the Kotoamatsukami still being in effect.

Interesting points. I'll try and see if I can incorporate it into the story as a future chapter after 'Rise to Hokage'. I'll be sure to credit you for your contribution.

Newest chapter of Kotoamatsukami is up, but that's not really the main point of this post. I'm looking for some help in expanding the story further. Plots and scenarios you'd like to see Kushina tackle as Danzo's puppet. Here’s a few important stuff I’ve already plotted out and am going to/will cover since they’re pretty important. -Training and educating Kushina. -Kumo Kidnapping. -Chunin Exams. -Seduction/Assassination Missions. -Third Shinobi World War. There’s more to be added too, but now I’m currently short of ideas. Feel free to contribute your own ideas and situations if you’d like. Each of these story lines will have sex of some kind in them. Anyone willing to give ideas, suggestions or their opinions on expanding the story? Credit will be given where credit is due.

Yuuya26: At the plot points you stopped at Rise to hokage, are you going to finish the story after that or are you going to write some of the things from the anime?? Response: Not too sure as of yet. There can still be plenty of thing in-between and after that arc, which is why I'm asking for ideas and contributions from fans who would like to see more. Even if I do end things off there, I can still add more chapters afterwards detailing parts of her past or perhaps missions I made hints to but never really delved deep into. Not exactly sure just what else I can incorporate into the story when you say 'write some of the things from the anime'. So if you can, responding to this and telling me what you mean would be great.

Shadowdragon1580: One hell of an awesome story mate Response: Thanks. I'm glad to see that you enjoy it.

Anon: The preg tag implies Kushina will get pregnant. What role will Naruto (or Naruko) have in your story ? Response: Well, as of yet, I haven't exactly planned out if it will either be Naruto or Naruko. Nor who their father will be. Hoping to see if anyone wants to contribute any ideas regarding this and their opinions. If she does get impregnated by someone else (ie, Danzo), they'll have red hair. If it is Naruko, she'll be trained just like Kushina. If she is Danzo's daughter, I guess I'll add an incest tag since he'll be breaking and educating her like he will for Kushina. If it's Naruto, he'll just go through the standard procedures as a Root Shinobi.

BROODWARRIOR : I have to say I like where this is going when Kumo does kidnap Kushina is she going to fight them off and not get taken or will she be taken and most likely be raped by them before she is saved by Root. Response: Thank you. Well, when Kumo does eventually kidnap Kushina, she'll be prepared for them but she may not be strong enough to take on all of them by herself when she's all bound up. Let's just say that she'll have to somehow get their guards down.

Hello all. BitterNTR here. I'm currently quite busy with real life and am in the midst of writing 'Kotoamatsukami', so I don't really have much time to work on other stuff. This is simply one of a few ideas I've come up with. Pussy Diplomacy Involves Kushina, Minato (optional), OC/Male Characters, Summary: An era without war and bloodshed can only start when diplomacy works. And what better way to secure peace than through sex? As the official delegate of Konoha, Uzumaki Kushina swears that she will get your signatures, no matter what! Tags: Cheating (Depends if Minato is alive or not), Group (optional), Blackmail (optional) General gist of the story: Kushina accepts a job given to her by the ruling Hokage as a delegate or diplomat of Konoha. Her job is basically to obtain signatures to treaties and to ensure that peace is secured. She eventually finds out that collecting signatures through words and kind gestures is harder than it seems. (After all, she ain't no Ghandi or MLKJ) Realises that most of the people she meets are horny, depraved men and are susceptible to her womanly features. Has sex with them in order to gain their signatures (For the good of the world and peace and shit, or something. Or if she's horny. Write whatever's convenient to you.) Main points (Most can be chosen by you unless explicitly stated otherwise): Kushina MUST be alive (No shit). This can take place at any time you want it to so long as Kushina is adult-ish. From when Kushina and Minato start dating and the Sandaime is still in power, all the way to when Naruto's 12 at the start of the series. Hell, you can it write it so that Minato and Kushina never got together in the first place. The choice is yours. Whether or not you leave Minato alive/dead is purely up to you. If he's dead, Sandaime's in charge. Naruto will have to be born at some point in time, or later on. Whether or not he's the son of Minato or one of the people who have fucked Kushina is up to you. Not so important points (that may still matter): Kyuubi's Jinchuuriki is also up to you. Obito doesn't really matter in this fic since it's supposed to be focused on Kushina. The Akatsuki really is just a non-factor unless you're starting off at when Naruto's 12. If Kushina is strong or not. Up to you too. The story is really flexible. Like, fucking flexible. I've given you some points you can follow to a certain degree, but can be bent and changed however you see fit. If you're not in the mood to write that Minato is alive? Fuck it. Now he's dead and the Sandaime's back in business. Simple as that. In the end, this really is just an idea. Anyone can tackle it if they wish and can do whatever they want with it. If no one takes it, I might do it in the future. If someone does take it, I might do another version of it... Unless mods consider it plagiarism. Anyways, I'll be here to give more ideas and to provide support. If you're taking on this challenge, then by all means, tell me what you need help with and I'll try to help you as best as I can or advise you on it. Also, I have no idea how to remove this yellow shit that's stuck to the background. My bad.

If you need any help whatsoever, feel free to ask. I wouldn't mind lending a hand to a project I'm interested in.

Just like to say that the newest chapter (3) has been put up. http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600105962&chapter=3 Review and tell me what you think of it. Any meaningful advice is always welcome. Also, I'm kind of wondering if more people are willing to contribute more ideas to my story. I've already got a few chapters planned out that are vital to Kushina's growth as a character in this story, but more would be better. Any ideas at all would be fantastic and could possibly even help me write an even better story. Who knows? Maybe your idea is better than mine. I'll be sure to credit you in the chapter if I do take your idea though. Here's a few main plot points that I will cover eventually. -Training and educating Kushina. -Kumo Kidnapping. -Chunin Exams. -Seduction/Assassination Missions. -Third Shinobi World War. -Rise to Hokage

Grammar and punctuation could definitely use work. But as it is, I'm glad that it's comprehensible. I really hate it when I have no idea what the authors are writing in their stories. One good thing I would like to point out is that you had a small part of the story in one of the latest chapters where Minato actually has sex with Kushina, which was quite surprising to me since most writers wouldn't even do so, stating that Minato was too tired or he wasn't in the mood, thus leaving Kushina lustful. So props on doing the opposite of what I thought you would do. Glad that you did that. While I didn't exactly like the fact that Kiba beat Naruto, I did appreciate that you made him use some kind of drug to enhance his physical qualities instead of doing it purely by himself. I do agree that it comes off as quite forced since almost every chapter has sex of some kind in it and he won because of the reward from Kushina. I personally would've found it more funnier if he had lost, getting nothing more than a tease from Kushina since he failed. Not every chapter has to have smut, y'know? One thing I would like to have an update on in the next chapter is about Anko and the 'twelve-inch' man. Even if it was fake, I'd like to see Anko lie to Kushina about it to see her reaction. Would be interesting to see what she would do if the biggest size she knows is Kiba's six incher. Last thing I'd like to say is to not let any of the hate comments get you down or cause you to write poorly. Just take the criticism from their comments and move on, improve your works and make it better with every chapter.

I've been gone for quite some time since real life takes priority over writing smut for strangers on the internet (especially without getting paid), so please understand why I haven't updated in so long. Work has kept me quite busy and I've been rewriting the next chapter of Kotoamatsukami for quite a while. Didn't like how it was flowing before but now I've got around 2K words down. It's about (I would say almost halfway) done and I'll post it when it's done. Tell me how many words you guys would like to see in a chapter, or how much words you'd like a chapter to be. It could be useful for me to format my stories.

Hello all. Unfortunately this is not an update. Currently busy with work and have very little time to write or plan my story. This post is just here to tell you lot that I have started a response thread for all reviews as well as updates. http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/63397-kotoamatsukami-responses-to-reviews/?p=394426

Anon: A good start! The writing is solid, it doesn't rush and it features Kushina! There is never enough Kushina! Response: Thank you for your compliments. And I agree wholeheartedly with your last sentence.

Anon: Your timeline is messed up for one, plus a Byakugan can see past the Kotomatsukami and the Kotomatsukami can be shaken off quite easily when the user finds out Response: Firstly, AU. Secondly, read the post above regarding the Byakugan. Thirdly, it is not outright stated that it is easily shaken off once the victim finds out. Perhaps Danzo turned it off on Mifune when he got caught. You don't know. Itachi was under the effect of Kotoamatsukami as well. And he knew he was under the effect of it since he was the one who implanted the crow with Shisui's eye into Naruto and was the one who gave the command, but why didn't he snap out of it? He was clearly aware of it. I hope that's enough of a compelling defence to change your mind.

Anon: I have a question, since Kushina has the Kyuubi sealed in her, doesn't that mean it will notice the Kotoamatsukami? Or is it under the effects too? Because if it is then Danzo will have his very own Tailed Beast wrapped around his finger. Response: I'd like to think of it this way. If Madara outright challenged the Kyuubi and hypnotised him with the Sharingan, surely he'd know. But since Kotoamatsukami is a subtle Genjutsu, he might be on guard after sensing the Sharingan being used but calms down afterwards since he and Kushina are not under hypnosis, not even realising that Kotoamatsukami has taken place. So yes. I'd like to think of him as being under the influence of the Sharingan as well.

Anon: The byakugan can see through it as it is conformed in cannon Response: And what's your point? The Byakugan only saw through it because it saw behind Danzo's bandages and Aoi recognised Shisui's chakra signature. If Danzo didn't get caught even once while in the village with Hyuuga members, why would this matter? David15: great update any posobility that we can have a sceen where Danzo deflowers one of the Root girls? Response: Chances are high. But I wouldn't hold my breath since I tend to rewrite most things if I feel that it doesn't flow right.

Anon: I'm kind of hoping that Danzo whores Kushina out to a nobleman for political capital, at some point. I'm not sure why, but it just seems like it's be really hot. Response: I intend on making it happen however chances are that it will only occur when she is much older.

Original thread from which Kotoamatsukami came from: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/62675-older-man-lover-kushina/ This thread will be here to respond to reviews left on the story: Kotoamatsukami, which can be found here. http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600105962

Second chapter to 'Kotoamatsukami' is up. http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600105962&chapter=2 Review and what not if you enjoyed it.

My bad. Was in a rush to get sleep. Here it is. http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600105962

The first chapter of the challenge Ichigo sent to me in private has been made. No smut as of yet. Check profile for link. Challenge description: A nice story would be, Kushina survived the kyuubi attack because Minato sealed half of it in her and the other half on Naruto (or a female Naruto, your choise).While she was recovering Danzo using Shisuis sharingan (or some other way) made Kushina think that she was loyal only to him and she was to help him take over the village from the shadows (after all the shinobi and the civilians would accept her easier as Hokage when the time came).Her first mission was to seduce the Third Hokage so she could manipulate him to do what Danzo wanted.Most of her missions were seduction missions.

I wish I could understand you. But you're going to need to have to be a bit more coherent for me to do so.

Give me a character you want to see with Kushina and a plot or setting and I can try to write one out.