BitterNTR

His stories do seem to have disappeared.

Also if you’re not against incest, which you definitely are not judging by your fics, or loli, how about have Naruto rope his daughter into having sex with him by giving her more pocket money.

Is there anything you won’t accept? I’d love to see a chapter in which Hinata, who already has had kids and is married to Naruto, is persuaded into participating into the glory hole/ having paid sex by her husband so she does it with a bunch of different guys and Naruto. If he can have sex with others, then why can’t she, right? But if you don’t want to, that’s cool. Also, is it just limited to glory holes? Could there be more settings like filming an adult film to be sold (technology has advanced after all)?

Anon: I would very much like to see kushina take charge of a rape as in furn the tables Response: She will eventually do the raping herself. But it’ll take a few chapters to get there.

BagelTiger: Damn that was awesome, but I hope kushina gets some stomach bulging from a giant cock. Reponse: Trust me. She will once she meets a certain monster during one of her missions.

From ANON - CLZ on September 25, 2016 Thanks for responding to the review from last chapter! As for how the save works, I think either idea could work. It's more 'logical' if in a RPG and especially in the case of VH to be able to save wherever you want. Though 'reality' and the fact that Kushina is NOT a native to the VH world, means that she might not really understand that and thus only gets a 'save' screen during sleeping periods of time. This could lead to MAJOR screw-ups on her end, but that just means more sexy for us! I wonder how's she'll take to the Doggy side quest and the impreg side quests (aka not having any money for the Innkeeper, Henry, etc. etc.) Only other thing I can think of is will there be New Game Plus where Kushina carries over her stats from dying to the new game, or will she have to start from scratch all over again? To answer the other response, had a Boku No Hero Academia idea I thought you might be interested in. Not sure how much you like Deku (or at all) but I've been seeing a lot of pics lately featuring him and Bakugou's mom. I think it'd make a very interesting NTR if Baku pushes Deku too far and he takes it out on his mom (and Baku is a mommas boy). That's why I wanted to swap e-mails if possible ^^; Response: Thanks again for the review! Always expect me to respond to long reviews. I’ll consider those ideas again. Still unsure of which one to pick since both are kind of decent. The only problem would be in writing it out and how Kushina reacts to it. She definitely won’t be dwelling about dying though. Regarding your BNHA question, I definitely like Izuku. He’s my favourite character of them all! And yeah, I’ve actually been giving it some thought to write (or an idea at the very least) a BNHA fic involving Deku and Baku-mom. If you create an account and respond back, I can message you my email. We can discuss it further then. Again, thanks for the review!

Anon: "Shinobi were different. They were people. And most were weak. They often felt fear, resulting in some battles being easier than others since the enemy would just run away." Bullshit, most would never run away or else there commanders would have them killed, even in Konaha, one group would sacrifice themselfs so they other can live. It seems Kushina is the weak one here Response: What’s your point? One group sacrifices themselves and another gets away. That’s the same concept I literally stated. Once they see that their friends and comrades are dead, some would definitely feel fear and run for it in order to live for another day.

Kushina will meet several ‘BAD ENDS’ through the entirety of this story. I have some of them planned already, but I’m still not too sure on how I would implement a restart or continue or even saving in general. Perhaps saving could occur when she goes to bed? Or would a legitimate save option for Kushina to use be better? Any ideas or contributions would be cool.

Anon: She has got to do some sex act with the kid Response: She will eventually have moments with shota.

C_Wade: Wow. another great story by you! Will this actually be set in the 'Violated Heroine' universe, or just take the 'themes' of it and still use the Naruto universe? Can't wait to read more of it! Response: Thanks for the compliment! But it will be set in the universe of ‘VH’, though Kushina is still the same character as portrayed in the fic.

Anon: Can someone give me a link to this game please would love to try it out Response: http://violatedheroine.referata.com/wiki/Violated_Heroine

Anon – Veodus: This looks to be all kinds of fun. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work and good luck. Thank you for your words. I appreciate them!

Anon – Sensible: I do believe this is the first time I've seen anyone do anything with Violated Heroine. Really doesn't help that the VH project has had so many different lead developers and been strung out over years. On the plus side, it's not hard at all for your story to remain considerably more coherent than its sources! I like that you present Kushina as her own character rather than just being important because of who she's linked to and what she carries in your prologue. Interesting premise, definitely looking forward to more. Response: Thanks! I decided that it would be easier if Kushina was just herself instead of being part of the world. Sort of like a Overlord or Re:Zero type of deal. But yes, I’ll try to integrate parts of quests for Kushina but some of them are still unfinished, buggy or untranslated for me such as the witch’s house in the Hot Spring Town. Hope you stick around.

Anon – Solaris: Great story I love it can't wait for it and your other ones to be updated Response: Thank you for the review! Happy that you like it.

Anon: the first chapter alredy looks great, more please Response: I’m glad you enjoyed it but patience is appreciated.

ANON - woof: so is that the oly time she 'll die or no since i've never even heard of the series your combineing naruto with. Response: No. She’ll definitely die a few more times in this world. She will simply restart from when she last ‘saved’ like any other RPG.

ANON - CLZ : THIS. IS. AMAZING! I LOVE this Hentai Game and to see Kushina go through (hopefully) almost all it's events will be quite a sight to see. I do have a question though in are you going to do this all in one 'playthrough' or are you going to get bad ends for her and she keeps 'restarting' as it were? Also, do you have an email I can contact you on for idea discussion? Response: Thank you. And yes, Kushina will eventually meet bad ends and will have to restart, though not from the beginning. I don’t use email to contact people. Barely use it actually. But here’s the public discussion page anyone can post to.

This thread will be here solely for contributing ideas and plots you'd like to see Kushina go through in the story: Uzumaki Kushina the Violated Heroine, which can be found here: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106012

This thread will be here to respond to reviews left on the story: Uzumaki Kushina the Violated Heroine, which can be found here: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106012

Even if English isn't your first language, you've written an amazing first chapter in great grammar and used an array of words to describe everything in a fantastic manner. I've already posted my review, but I'd just like to thank you for taking on the challenge and starting it off strong.

C_Wade: Hey there again, (this time logged in and not as anon) I'm glad to see that you are still taking things slowly, as you already said, rushing to the naughty bits can be fun but it doesn't really have a place in multi-chapter stories that at least have a semblance of a plot. Although I have to admit that I enjoyed the 'teasing' scene. Just to be clear, Kushina's age should be around 12-13? Or did you change it (or am I wrong)? I also liked Danzou's way of explaining the realities of the shinobi world, and his distaste for 'pampered civilians'. I wonder what he would say to Sakura? Regarding your Idea for Kushina's possible future genin, I already wrote a small post in your discussion thread but I fell like I need to clarify some tings (and since I'm already here I'll just do it in my review). I think I misunderstood the point at first, to me it sounded like you wanted Kushina to train a partner, for herself, but I guess I was wrong about that. Personally, I am still favouring a boy student, now however mostly because I have a thing for Kushina sleeping with her younger male students, instead of anything practical. If you do decide on a female student I would prefer Yuugao or Rin. Yuugao because I think hers and Kushina's skill sets mesh rather well, and Rin because she is a rare character, you barely see any stories with her making more than a guest appearance or a single lemon chapter. Also, don't worry so much about the lazy readers. Most are probably too busy jacking off to reviews idk... or maybe they just lack common courtesy... Anyways I hope you won't be busy for too long, as I am really enjoying your story. Hope to see and update soon. Cheers, C_Wade. Response: I'm happy that you agree with me. I didn't really think many on this site would, but I'm quite pleased to say that I've gotten no flames so far. And yes. Kushina is around that age. Didn't change it. And I'd like to thank you for your contribution to the 'student' question. Always great to get ideas and opinions from readers since it helps with writing future chapters. Long, positive reviews like yours are always great to read. Glad to know that you enjoy it so far, and I hope I can return ASAP to continue.

Anon: Awesome story, can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work and will Kushina get raped in this fic? Response: Thanks for the compliment. And yes, she will be raped. I'll leave you guessing when she will be.

Drake Darkduke: Honestly, I must admit that I never thought to review, simply because I'm accostumed to FF.net where the review bar is immediately accessible once you finish the last sentence, so anything I'd wish to say was still fresh. I am sorry if this has in anyway brought you to believe that I am not interested in reviewing. Still, I am hoping to see more of this, Drake Darkduke. Response: Don't worry about it. I totally get what you mean. I am glad that you took the time to review once you realised this though. Really means a lot. I'll deliver the next chapter as soon as I can.

A new idea I thought of was Kushina continuing the tradition she went through and recruiting her own student like Danzo did with her. Just like the Sandaime in canon, she'll decide to get herself a Genin and train him/her the way Danzo did her. I have a few characters of whom the Genin should be: 1) Anko 2) Yuugao 3) Kurenai 4) Rin There may possibly be others, or even a boy instead of a girl, but that's up for future chapters to decide.

This thread will be here solely for contributing ideas and plots you'd like to see Kushina go through.