BitterNTR

Maybe the promise of money, or popularity amongst classmates? Ino was clearly one of the characters who wanted popularity, and Sakura could apply for both since she comes from an ordinary family. The rest of the girls can join in through peer pressure or because they want to be 'cool' too. They're young so they going to be naive enough to buy those excuses. If you want, you can maybe have a scene where a few don't want to join Naruko and tells her that they're going to tell their parents about this. You can have Naruko go about collecting blackmail on them to ensure their silence. Maybe embarrassing pictures of them? That part's up to you.

Nah. Go ahead and write whatever you want to write. I don’t really care about that.

Yeah, I know. I just don’t want to overwhelm and distract you with too many ideas to the point where it might be hard for you to produce another chapter. I didn’t mean to rush you or the like.

The hooks and stuff aren’t exactly my type of kinks, but if that’s what you want then go right ahead. I was thinking of the punishment as more of allowing people to fuck them over and over again until they’re pretty much unconscious for a really low price. But I think we’ve contributed a little too much in terms of ideas. Maybe you could finish the next chapter whenever and we can carry on from there?

Unless Ino was already having sex at the same time as Naruko I figured it would make more sense to have her train Ino and Sakura first before they decide to branch out from her.

Yeah, I forgot to mention that earlier on. I wanted to add in the fact that she might have some competition in school. I thought of it as more of a betrayal situation though, where Ino (or some other girl) decides to go her own way and takes Sakura with her to start her own company. At first she might do alright, gathering her own group that doesn’t want to work for Naruko. But Naruko still ends up quashing her new business with her Kage Bunshin as well as with superior skills and experience. In the end, Ino has no choice but to submit to Naruko, handing over her business to Naruko, who decides to teach them a lesson in trying to betray her, as well as to get a little revenge in, by having a huge discounted sale for all students or teachers on the girls who had decided to go against her.

You wouldn’t have to really worry about him to be honest. If you wanted to you could have him toy with her hormones in the hopes that she might get pregnant (which won't happen) but all it does is increase her pheromones, making her even more attractive to the average citizen. Maybe she could even learn to harness this ability and use it to her advantage by gathering more customers like married men.

I think it should, but only strong ones. The type that causes near blackouts and uncontrollable shaking.

True, but I was think of it in a more efficient manner. If her goal is to get money, getting knocked out and being unable to continue serving might be a problem. But if her goal is also to get off, then it makes sense I suppose.

If Naruko does become Hokage: If she is going for the seat of Hokage, she could maybe seduce Hiruzen enough that she gets named the next Hokage (unlikely and kinda bullshit tbh but that’s just a possibility) or that her influence as a large part of Konoha secures her the position. Since the seat of the Hokage is either chosen by vote or selected by the previous Hokage, perhaps she could gain the promise of a vote by seducing those on the seat of the council? I mean, it’s pretty unbelievable since a Hokage has to run an entire village, and no one would want to vote for someone who has no idea how to. But this is a smut fic and the suspension of disbelief can be had for this. But I suppose a way to negate that is to perhaps have Naruko beg for lessons from Hiruzen about what a Hokage has to do and everything, leading to some steamy study sessions in the Hokage’s office. Perhaps something like while Hiruzen is tutoring her, he’ll start stripping her on his own, getting her onto his lap and playing with her body, pretending like nothing’s wrong. Naruko could play along with him, whether it be for the information or the pleasure, or both. This will also help out in the first point my other post of if and when she becomes the headmistress of the red light district, which in turn benefits her when she becomes Hokage as she’ll have had experience running a large-scale operation before. Except only with less fucking. Either way, if she does eventually become Hokage you could have it so that she has a list of VIP customers waiting to have sex with her, ranging from Daimyos or Kages. Maybe even lucky devout fans who patronised her when she was younger, willing to pay an arm or a leg for the sake of a lay with the legendary slut of Konoha. Again, these are all ideas and none of them have to even be considered. They’re merely here for discussion, or perhaps assisting in sparking ideas in the future. Perhaps you’ll come up with something new and better than this, branching out from it. And if you ever need help with anything, be it in terms of direction or maybe advice or opinions, I’d be willing to assist you like C_Wade.

Kinda annoyed that I’m writing all of this again because Google crashed but w/e… This is kinda, really, long, but I like to contribute and dump ideas for others so bare with me. I’m not sure if this has been mentioned yet or not, but I’d really like to see Naruko scaling the ranks amongst the prostitutes and the whores, eventually becoming the next boss of the most popular and expensive brothel or even the entire red light district (RLD. This, in turn, gives her influence, a great deal of wealth and heightens her position slightly and can also be the end goal... that is if she isn’t going for the position of the Hokage as well. But that topic is something I’ll cover later in a separate post. Another subject I keep seeing is Hinata being brought up. While I have no problem with that, what I’d really be hooked on seeing is Naruko introducing her female classmates to sex and teaching them the ropes once she’s an intermediate at it. The age they graduated from the academy in canon was around 12 or so, so that leaves plenty of time for her to get trained and to train others if she’s only 7 now. I saw the word ‘pimp’ being thrown about a few times, but I don’t think any of those times referred to Naruko as the one being the pimp. Having her become the academy’s pimp would really be a sight to see. The kids in class performing sexual acts under those long, covered desks while classes go on in exchange for favours, all influenced by Naruko, would be great to see. Naruko could start to collect money and favours in exchange for sex with her or with her friends/colleagues, with them getting a cut from the commissions. Naruko could even have Hinata, Ino and Sakura be her main courtesans when she’s the boss of the RLD later on in the story. Regarding the use of Kage Bunshin, I think it would be a good excuse to have her be knocked out cold once she cancels the technique from the amassed pleasure and mental stress of handling so many customers at the same time. Either that or you could change it that it affects the user physically, but that’s not such a good idea. Or maybe you could remove Mass Kage Bunshin and limit her to only, say, 5 clones or maybe 10.

Sure, it might make sense (in smut fics) for someone like Danzo to try to impregnate Naruko in order for more power, but then what happens afterwards? The plot will find itself confused, trapped by the fact that she has a pointless super-baby. So she gives her kid to Tsunade and wishes that they have a better childhood than she does. The kid becomes powerful and gets their name in the bingo book... Then what? What's going to happen next? What is she going to do with a baby/superchild in the fic? If the answer was that she could get a babysitter to take care of hef child for her while she did her missions and fucked people, then what was the point of even having the baby in the first place if it's just going to be shoved aside, rendering it pretty pointless. As of now, a young girl having a baby and being fucked while pregnant is just a kink at this point and serves no real purpose in the story unless the plot of the story was similar to that of mine in Kotoamatsukami, in which having Kushina be impregnated at any given time would not be a problem at all as Danzo is a main figure in the story. But this fic isn't about Danzo playing the long game in order to become the Hokage behind the scenes. It's about Naruko fucking. A lot. I'm not bashing your idea, but I just want to explain why a baby is such a pointless thing to have in this fic.

To be fair, I’m not exactly obliged to finish anything I start. I’m not getting paid anything to write. I’m just super lazy and I may have lost interest in that story, finding interest in other ones. It’ll probably take some time before I find inspiration and finish it. If someone else wants to finish it, they can make their own rendition and finish it there as a separate story.

I have an interest in the story, but I don’t know if I’ll actually be able to write it. Regardless, I’ve got a few questions. You wrote ‘were all conceived on-camera’ so that means that his sister’s fathers are all people Kushina had been fucked and impregnated by, right? How do you feel about loli? If Naruto’s gonna be the oldest child, and he has 3 or 4 other sisters, some of them are bound to be a little younger. Maybe there could be a few with age gaps. The age of consent in certain parts of Japan is pretty low, so I think that it’d be an alright excuse. They could be around fourteen or so before starring in their own JAV’s, or maybe even younger when they get their first taste of sex from Naruto. Another question I had was if it was possible to bend the rules regarding Hinata. I’d like for her to pursue the same path as Kushina and her daughters but still stay loyal to Naruto. During her tapes, she’ll have sex with other guys, with Naruto joining in or with his permission. Relationships with pornstars do exist in reality, and it’s only fair that she gets to if Naruto keeps having sex with his sisters and mother. What are your thoughts on Naruto becoming a male pornstar? He could do niche, but popular, categories such as actual incest, raking in more money for the family. I really do hope that if I get the chance to write, I’d be able to do write these points with a bit more freedom. But ultimately, it’s your choice to decide if I can or not.

Here’s another idea. Before Hiruzen dies, I’d be interested in a scene where he finally gets tempted by Naruko and ‘collects his debt’ (e.g: Free home, monthly allowance, etc) from her.

While she might be used to being hatefucked, Mizuki is still trying to pretend to be a nice teacher and not a traitor. So he can’t exactly hatefuck her unless he’s willing to express why he’s doing it. Also, I think the hatefuck should expand beyond that of ‘because you’re the Kyuubi’ as it’ll get boring after a while. I think a good way to keep it interesting is to have her vandalise property or cause trouble for the citizens.

I’d also be interested to see a scene between her and Mizuki. I don’t know how you’d make that play out, whether or not he’d hatefuck her and show his true colours or not, but I'd say it would be a good read.

I’d like to see a rich classmate either pay her for sex or be seduced into paying for sex. Either way should be satisfying.

No real restrains that will limit or hinder your writing ability. I’d just prefer there not to be any scat or the like since I don't find those kinks very... pleasant. It doesn't necessarily have to be hate-sex either. But it's honestly up to you.

I may or may not write it. It just depends on my free time. But go ahead and shoot me any questions.

I have a great deal of interest in this story. I’ll see if I can take it on.

She doesn’t think about her death because she doesn’t remember it. It’s basically a restart, or a continue like in the actual game.

I’ve thought about the saving thing and am leaning towards the side of one where she does not remember what she did prior to reaching a bad end, but choosing a good end in her second run. For example, she ends up getting raped to death by something/one and returns to her last save, unaware that she had died. But this time, instead of repeating the same event, she does something differently and lives, proceeding on until the next problem. How does that sound?

Yes, there are babysitting missions which involves having sex with the boys. However, they, much like any other child you encounter in the game, are pretty inexperience or are realistically sized, with the female MC usually dominating them instead. But perhaps I could do one where she, as you have mentioned, babysits a teenager or something, one who just so happens to have been well-endowed. Though if I were to write this, it won’t be for another few more chapters. Any more ideas and contributions would be cool.

Cool. Thanks for the confirmation.