BitterNTR

I have an interest in the story, but I don’t know if I’ll actually be able to write it. Regardless, I’ve got a few questions. You wrote ‘were all conceived on-camera’ so that means that his sister’s fathers are all people Kushina had been fucked and impregnated by, right? How do you feel about loli? If Naruto’s gonna be the oldest child, and he has 3 or 4 other sisters, some of them are bound to be a little younger. Maybe there could be a few with age gaps. The age of consent in certain parts of Japan is pretty low, so I think that it’d be an alright excuse. They could be around fourteen or so before starring in their own JAV’s, or maybe even younger when they get their first taste of sex from Naruto. Another question I had was if it was possible to bend the rules regarding Hinata. I’d like for her to pursue the same path as Kushina and her daughters but still stay loyal to Naruto. During her tapes, she’ll have sex with other guys, with Naruto joining in or with his permission. Relationships with pornstars do exist in reality, and it’s only fair that she gets to if Naruto keeps having sex with his sisters and mother. What are your thoughts on Naruto becoming a male pornstar? He could do niche, but popular, categories such as actual incest, raking in more money for the family. I really do hope that if I get the chance to write, I’d be able to do write these points with a bit more freedom. But ultimately, it’s your choice to decide if I can or not.

No real restrains that will limit or hinder your writing ability. I’d just prefer there not to be any scat or the like since I don't find those kinks very... pleasant. It doesn't necessarily have to be hate-sex either. But it's honestly up to you.

I may or may not write it. It just depends on my free time. But go ahead and shoot me any questions.

I have a great deal of interest in this story. I’ll see if I can take it on.

She doesn’t think about her death because she doesn’t remember it. It’s basically a restart, or a continue like in the actual game.

I’ve thought about the saving thing and am leaning towards the side of one where she does not remember what she did prior to reaching a bad end, but choosing a good end in her second run. For example, she ends up getting raped to death by something/one and returns to her last save, unaware that she had died. But this time, instead of repeating the same event, she does something differently and lives, proceeding on until the next problem. How does that sound?

Yes, there are babysitting missions which involves having sex with the boys. However, they, much like any other child you encounter in the game, are pretty inexperience or are realistically sized, with the female MC usually dominating them instead. But perhaps I could do one where she, as you have mentioned, babysits a teenager or something, one who just so happens to have been well-endowed. Though if I were to write this, it won’t be for another few more chapters. Any more ideas and contributions would be cool.

Cool. Thanks for the confirmation.

His stories do seem to have disappeared.

Also if you’re not against incest, which you definitely are not judging by your fics, or loli, how about have Naruto rope his daughter into having sex with him by giving her more pocket money.

Is there anything you won’t accept? I’d love to see a chapter in which Hinata, who already has had kids and is married to Naruto, is persuaded into participating into the glory hole/ having paid sex by her husband so she does it with a bunch of different guys and Naruto. If he can have sex with others, then why can’t she, right? But if you don’t want to, that’s cool. Also, is it just limited to glory holes? Could there be more settings like filming an adult film to be sold (technology has advanced after all)?

Anon: I would very much like to see kushina take charge of a rape as in furn the tables Response: She will eventually do the raping herself. But it’ll take a few chapters to get there.

BagelTiger: Damn that was awesome, but I hope kushina gets some stomach bulging from a giant cock. Reponse: Trust me. She will once she meets a certain monster during one of her missions.

From ANON - CLZ on September 25, 2016 Thanks for responding to the review from last chapter! As for how the save works, I think either idea could work. It's more 'logical' if in a RPG and especially in the case of VH to be able to save wherever you want. Though 'reality' and the fact that Kushina is NOT a native to the VH world, means that she might not really understand that and thus only gets a 'save' screen during sleeping periods of time. This could lead to MAJOR screw-ups on her end, but that just means more sexy for us! I wonder how's she'll take to the Doggy side quest and the impreg side quests (aka not having any money for the Innkeeper, Henry, etc. etc.) Only other thing I can think of is will there be New Game Plus where Kushina carries over her stats from dying to the new game, or will she have to start from scratch all over again? To answer the other response, had a Boku No Hero Academia idea I thought you might be interested in. Not sure how much you like Deku (or at all) but I've been seeing a lot of pics lately featuring him and Bakugou's mom. I think it'd make a very interesting NTR if Baku pushes Deku too far and he takes it out on his mom (and Baku is a mommas boy). That's why I wanted to swap e-mails if possible ^^; Response: Thanks again for the review! Always expect me to respond to long reviews. I’ll consider those ideas again. Still unsure of which one to pick since both are kind of decent. The only problem would be in writing it out and how Kushina reacts to it. She definitely won’t be dwelling about dying though. Regarding your BNHA question, I definitely like Izuku. He’s my favourite character of them all! And yeah, I’ve actually been giving it some thought to write (or an idea at the very least) a BNHA fic involving Deku and Baku-mom. If you create an account and respond back, I can message you my email. We can discuss it further then. Again, thanks for the review!

Anon: "Shinobi were different. They were people. And most were weak. They often felt fear, resulting in some battles being easier than others since the enemy would just run away." Bullshit, most would never run away or else there commanders would have them killed, even in Konaha, one group would sacrifice themselfs so they other can live. It seems Kushina is the weak one here Response: What’s your point? One group sacrifices themselves and another gets away. That’s the same concept I literally stated. Once they see that their friends and comrades are dead, some would definitely feel fear and run for it in order to live for another day.

Kushina will meet several ‘BAD ENDS’ through the entirety of this story. I have some of them planned already, but I’m still not too sure on how I would implement a restart or continue or even saving in general. Perhaps saving could occur when she goes to bed? Or would a legitimate save option for Kushina to use be better? Any ideas or contributions would be cool.

Anon: She has got to do some sex act with the kid Response: She will eventually have moments with shota.

C_Wade: Wow. another great story by you! Will this actually be set in the 'Violated Heroine' universe, or just take the 'themes' of it and still use the Naruto universe? Can't wait to read more of it! Response: Thanks for the compliment! But it will be set in the universe of ‘VH’, though Kushina is still the same character as portrayed in the fic.

Anon: Can someone give me a link to this game please would love to try it out Response: http://violatedheroine.referata.com/wiki/Violated_Heroine

Anon – Veodus: This looks to be all kinds of fun. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work and good luck. Thank you for your words. I appreciate them!

Anon – Sensible: I do believe this is the first time I've seen anyone do anything with Violated Heroine. Really doesn't help that the VH project has had so many different lead developers and been strung out over years. On the plus side, it's not hard at all for your story to remain considerably more coherent than its sources! I like that you present Kushina as her own character rather than just being important because of who she's linked to and what she carries in your prologue. Interesting premise, definitely looking forward to more. Response: Thanks! I decided that it would be easier if Kushina was just herself instead of being part of the world. Sort of like a Overlord or Re:Zero type of deal. But yes, I’ll try to integrate parts of quests for Kushina but some of them are still unfinished, buggy or untranslated for me such as the witch’s house in the Hot Spring Town. Hope you stick around.

Anon – Solaris: Great story I love it can't wait for it and your other ones to be updated Response: Thank you for the review! Happy that you like it.

Anon: the first chapter alredy looks great, more please Response: I’m glad you enjoyed it but patience is appreciated.

ANON - woof: so is that the oly time she 'll die or no since i've never even heard of the series your combineing naruto with. Response: No. She’ll definitely die a few more times in this world. She will simply restart from when she last ‘saved’ like any other RPG.

ANON - CLZ : THIS. IS. AMAZING! I LOVE this Hentai Game and to see Kushina go through (hopefully) almost all it's events will be quite a sight to see. I do have a question though in are you going to do this all in one 'playthrough' or are you going to get bad ends for her and she keeps 'restarting' as it were? Also, do you have an email I can contact you on for idea discussion? Response: Thank you. And yes, Kushina will eventually meet bad ends and will have to restart, though not from the beginning. I don’t use email to contact people. Barely use it actually. But here’s the public discussion page anyone can post to.