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I think it would unbalance things a lot to get rid of her now. Like you said, she's to far down the rabbit hole now. LOL I have to say, that was a nice way to put the situation out there (between Max and Suzy) but to also close the door on it with a good understanding between the three of them. I do think that would have gone down the wrong road a bit but still leaves things open for Suzy with the other girls.

Wow, you weren't kidding about the twists! And so, what is your question about Becca? I actually like the way Max, Emma and Becca fit. Especially with the twins as well. Now waiting for the next chapter even more with another cliffhanger!!!! LOL

My wife is a caregiver and has worked as such for 20+ years. We've both seen how horrible Alzheimer's is for the person going through it (some knowing something's wrong and some not), the family and the caregivers. It truly is a heartbreaking thing. The couple you described could have been any of several that we've met if they had been a bit older. Beautiful work!

Nice!!! Can't wait for either new chapter to get posted! LOL

Actually Magusfang, you've posted up to chapter 6 of Northstar and while it's been covered (in telling the children how Nick and Anna got together) up to Anna's deflowering but, haven't gotten to Amanda's passing or how Anna ended up being the surrogate for Amy. Been waiting and checking for the next chapters of both Girl in the Grass AND Northstar several times a day as the waiting is driving me nuts! LOL

I messed up and now it won't let me delete this post. Ready my next one for the correction! LOL

Guest_Rescue25, I followed Magusfang here as well and have only done a little poking round here while waiting for him to post his next chapters (<-hint, hint Magusfang LOL) but hae read some of BronxWench's stuff and she's a good writer as well! For some reason it won't let me paste a link here so you would need to search fo her in the member directory on the archive side.

I was wondering about that as I was poking round a little bit ago! Thanks DG!!!!

Ah thank you so much for the answer Dragon Wench!!! =) I'm not so much trying to "spark interest among other readers" as hoping to make it easier for other fans to interact with Magusfang as well. His writing (imho) is worthy to be praised (and I'm hoping he doesn't get to big of an ego boost from this. LOL a little is OK but to much and he'll probably will try and see how many cliffhangers he can pack into one chapter as he once joked about ). And you actually answered a question that I hadn't really thought of asking until after you answered it! I happened to registered on both sides as I didn't know that I didn't 'have' to to continue to interact with him. So I was actually thinking of posting a link to his thread in the writers corner. Now that I know that won't help others much unless they too register, I will instead endeavor to post a link to his thread in the reviews side instead. I might just add both but with the sign up disclaimer on the one. Not real sure yet. Thanks again!

I am wondering if it would be against policy or rules for me to post a link in the reviews of a story to one of the topics here on the forums so other fans of the writer can interact with them easier? So far I like both sides of this site. Some things have been interesting to learn but, such is the way in a digital world! LOL And I don't really want to break any rules but feel almost like a stalker being one of very few that have made a point of contacting the author more actively than just posting a review. Thank you!!!

I read chapter 6 of Northstar last night as well but went to bed before posting a review (it was almost 2am and wife was getting upset LOL). Another great chapter! Nice touch letting Becca decide the route of response! Although something in me just has this picture of bitg chapter 22. LOL I sure hope that it's just the bad side that losses this time. Keep up the great work Magusfang! And for crying out loud please quit getting beat up! The suspense between chapters is killing us!!!

Yeah, I didn't think it would be that important. Just thought I'd pass it on just in case I was wrong. ;-)

Oh and not that I think it's that important but, I was poking round (mostly to see if your daughter was still going off on them LOL) and saw that it looks like you might have only been "temporarily" banned. It doesn't say that you're still banned. Just a FYI if you're interested.

Just finished gitg 3. It just keeps getting better! While not your typical trade mark "cliffhanger", it'll still keep readers on the edge waiting for the next chapter!

Well, I can't speak for any others but I thought it was funny! LOL

Sound of Silence b Simon and Garfunkel

You'd think they would figure it out after enough times! ROFL Are you SURE they didn't have you supervised and don't know what happened?

Actually Magusfang, I literally laughed out loud when I read that in your story! The visual I got from it was a hick looking kind of like Larry the cable guy with a straw hat and sounding like Jeff Foxworthy!!! It was just FUNNY to me at the time! LOL que Red Skelton's "The Streak" ROFL

Clearly you didn't tell your wife and daughters that!!! You'd probably still be in (or would be BACK in) the hospital!!! LOL

Yeah, she was certainly going off on them!!! She a spunky one that's for damn sure!!! LOL Maybe you should sick her on whoever got you hurt to the point of going to the hospital. :-P Then again, maybe not.

So, I just found this thread while poking round here (a bit bored waiting for next chapters to be posted). I will try and remember to start posting reviews here. ;-) Glad you did find a new site when you did Magusfang!

Thank you for posting this question as I was wondering about it as well! LOL

Towone1085, if you've found the drop down box to read all five chapters of Northstar you shouldn't have a problem with navigating Boy in the Grass. Boy in the Grass does have a lot more erotic nature to the beginning than Northstar but, Magusfangs writing style and ability to pull you into the story is most definitely present and in good form! And if you didn't already know, Girl in the Grass is "book 2" (the sequel) to Boy in the Grass. I highly recommend his stories! There are errors in wording at times but after messaging the author and finding out that these posts are basically raw (presented as initial drafts, not edited), they are fairly easily overlooked (at least in my opinion).

So, any clue when we might be able to get Girl in the grass chapter 3 or chapter 6 of Northstar?

Well, I guess I'll only be looking here for your stories from now on! At least I can still find them! Wow, what a crock!