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magusfang

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  1. Yes, this story has an ending, just gotta get there :P. But summer is here and I have other things vying for my time, though I am updating every 7 to 10 days.

    As things calm down around here I should start updating faster but my goal is to finish this story in about 50 to 60 chapters, but I will finish before I start any other major project. I say that but Northstar needs to be finished and I figure about 20 more chapters on that so that will take precedence next but again I will finish it

    I really hate when a writer just abandons the story and won't do that

  2. How is it that Alice and Director Adams frequency are the same? Sounds a bit fishy to me. Looks like Adams and Alice are using the same network! Maybe someone in the FBI is this "Control". Maybe the nanites can "stretch" the coolant or fix something up so that she does not need much coolant. Alice does not seem to be too worried about the loss of some coolant.

    Remember that thing Alice ripped from the soldiers vest? Sat phone. So she is using the same sat phone as the SG, as for losing her coolant, no she can't run very long without it but she is taking systems off line and she already decided the body is a write off.

    Oh and don't listen to DA, she's just mean!

  3. Sorry its taking so long but I have a real World project monopolizing my time, as well as a budding writer who has my ear. I have most of the chapter written, just trying to piece the end together so it shouldn't be much longer. Thanks for your patience.

  4. Ok, I just dropped in to have a quick look around and I have a quick question. Why have you disrespected Suzi and Becca by naming Max's and Nadi's son Tommy. That was the name of Becca's father. Is it because you have so many characters that you use for fillers that you can't remember who is who?

    Oh shit! It was supposed to be Timmothy, crap....ok, I'll fix that but for now when you see Tommy, it should read Timmy...:blush:

  5. so two guys are standing on a roof arguing about whose penis is bigger (yeah i know) so the inally decide to whip em out and see for themselves. Fist guy whips it out and suddenly looks over the edge, "Damn I think I hit the window washer!" He turns and sees his friend is dancing to and fro, "What the hell are you doing?"

    "Dodging traffic!"

    or

    A guy walks in to the bathroom and up to the urinal and starts whizzing, h decides to be funny so he laughs softly, "Man the water in these things is so cold!'

    The guy next to him nods and replies, "Yeah, don't mind that so much but all the bend in the pipe is a pain!"

    :)

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