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  4. Using proper anatomical terms over sex slang

    in Writers' Corner

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    I understand your opinion but I just prefer using technical terms although I try to use non vulgar terms like flower, malehood, or seed but thats about it. But you must remember that not everyone reads it to be naughty. I read and write sex scenes with artistic and professional sense like authors who write romantic and erotic literature would use. Now is there a point that sex slang can be overused? Is there a way to do sex scenes well without having to use vulgar terms and still use anatomical terms. Also, when I do nursing scenes I always use breasts and nipples instead of the slang terms

    Allude to what is happening, I use very few slang terms but I don't use very many clinical terms either because than your story starts to sound like an autopsy report. Just write around the terms and let the reader fill in the rest: so instead of "He pushed his hard cock into wet hot cunt..." try "he entered her weeping opening, pushing himself as far into her warmth as he could..."

  6. 'Women can't write male sex scenes...'

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    Hmmmm, if you want to write from the opposite sex's perspective, go find one and talk. That's what I did, I wanted to know what a woman would think about a certain topic so I asked. Someone once asked me why all my female characters are bi, well all my close female friends are bi; including my girlfriend. I know straight women, but aren't close enough friends with them to talk about such a personal matter.

  10. This useless site

    in Archive Tech Support

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    Ok, I read this post like four times, and other than a headache (Followed by a small seizure) I didn't get much out of it. Did this person steal someone else's work and try to pass it off as their own, or just cut and paste a commercial story? Or was it so poorly written it got bumped?

    Oh, is it true you're all leaving? I just got here and I get lonely easily!

  17. Boy in The Grass reviews and comments

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    Hi, I'm starting this thread because I can't figure out how to reply to comments. I would like to say that I apriciate the feedback.

    So, I've had a few questions, so"

    1. There will be a book two in this series called Girls In The Grass, see a pattern yet? I will probably start it in a week or so.

    2. I will be posting a series called Northstar, but that will proceed slowly as I'll probably only deal with when I need a break from Max and the girls

    3. Boy In The Grass is complete, well it needs editing

    4. For those from the other site, I will post stories that conform to the new rules there, I usually don't write a lot of underage stuff (I know, 63 chapters and two more books outlined, so I guess I do!)

    Oh and just a warning, I'm a cruel bastard so expect a lot of cliff hanger. I can't help it, I guess my mother didn't hold me enough as a child.

  18. What's your writing process? Do you write without thought or not?

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    I just start writing, I have know idea where I'm going and don't remember how I got there - could be the seven concussions or maybe I have multiple personalities. My stories are some of the most twisted and conveluted tales you'll ever read, but that's what makes them fun, just when you think you figured it out BAM I give you one from left field...but don't blame me, blame the shrink that let me out!

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