Desiderius Price

I’m pretty good at derailing anything off topic, I try to avoid it (usually). Profanity depends on the characterization too… boys in a locker room? That’s likely filled with expletives. A football coach? LIkely. Church? unlikely.

Counted… four orgasms in the last chapter I wrote. Pretty rare to actually get curse words, or even anything sharply worded, in them. Profanity’s kinda like a spice or flavoring, like garlic, cinnamon, or vanilla; a little bit goes a long ways. (Though I do tend to overdo garlic, tend to switch “clove” => “bulb” when I add it in.)

42674 Yeah, figured you’d fix that @Wilde_Guess. I know @Melrick loves getting in those 69s!

If a writer needs to advertise it’s a sex scene in order to be a “sex scene”, then I’d think something is lacking in the writing. Now, in certain contexts, a “fuck me” or “bang me” might be indicative of a character’s personality, or maybe there’s a scenario the two (or more) are roleplaying. (Though, I suppose you could have it be solo, somebody watching a B/C grade porn film.) Now, in the sex scenes I write, if there’s profanity, something’s going seriously wrong for the characters, or a copper’s busting them.

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You typoed… I’ll assume you’ll fix it. 42670

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