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Desiderius Price

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  2. Hmmm… I can move this scene from #8 back to #7….. Keeping it in #8 makes for a better cliffhanger, but moving it to #7 makes #7 a tad more complete.  Oh, the debate I’m having with myself.

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    2. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      @Wilde_Guess  Yep, that’s why I’m debating now, before I post.  I’ll need to resolve this before I post either 7 or 8.  Yesterday, I had moved it to #7, however, based on tone it belongs in #8.  So, this morning, I moved it back.  After all, a cliffhanger is typically an incomplete scene.

    3. Wilde_Guess

      Wilde_Guess

      True, that.  Also, the move can “require” another 4k of writing to more fully develop an idea.  That’s not a bad thing, but can confuse the reader if you do it after the chapter(s) were originally posted.

    4. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      That was the #5 debacle, about 2.5k but same thing.  I try to adhere to the principle that a reader shouldn’t have to re-read an episode to understand things, though, of course, that can be unavoidable at times with a work-in-progress.  Thus, I basically want  to be confident in the episode/chapter before I post. 

      Cross my fingers, I’ll get #8 drafted tonight.  (If so, I’d expect #7 to go up next weekend.)

       

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  4. No muse, I’m already involved with another story, stop trying to tempt me with a new one….stop, STOP!  Onward with the struggle.

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  6. Today’s been productive.  Posted Jefferey episode #6, and nearly done with the draft to #7 (along with a dabble or two in #8).  Depending on how productive I am this weekend, I should be confident with posting #7 next weekend, but no guarantees.  (Always, TBD until I actually post it).

  7. Episode #6, “Snowballs” is now posted. (ie, I felt confident enough to post it.)
  8. I like three day weekends, good chance to get some Jefferey episodes finished!  I do have to be careful, some of these episodes are becoming a wee bit penis centric…

  9. I don’t fully work out a character either until I start writing. That’s where backstory is useful. What I tend to do, though, is narrow down an approximate age/gender and use a randomizer to help select some traits. If needed, I’ll figure out relatives too, that’s where the bulk of the characters in my database come from. And I start writing, seeing what traits do and don’t work.
  10. I take it a step (or two) further Avaloyuru, I’ve made a database… has nearly 2,300 characters in it, along with plot points for my series of stories, and family trees.
  11. I’m guessing that I’ll be posting episode six next weekend, but no promises.  (This is to Jefferey.)

    1. Wilde_Guess

      Wilde_Guess

      It’s ready when it’s ready.  I’m looking forward to reading it whenever it shows up.

    2. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      Part of the issue with this weekend is I installed a new game … onthe plus side, I beat it (on the easy setting).

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