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Re: Country Summer
From FlutteringWings on July 02, 2019
Thanks! I started writing this story with absolutely no plan except that I wanted there to be a great variety of sexual activities.
I don't write a lot of m/m stuff, but when I do it's usually furry and always involves young characters. 
Yeah, uber-masculine man fucking young girl does it for me, too.
From the beginning, I was uncertain about whether and how I wanted to involve Maisy in the action. By the time I got to this chapter (the third-to-last), I realized that if I was going to do anything sexual with Maisy, I'd better get to it. And then the idea of her scene with Ben came to me.
FYI, as most country people do, Maisy has mixed feelings about incest. Like Jeph, she's probably only fucked the boys a couple of times each. 
Which is pretty much why Bobby Joe wasn't invited. Can't have anyone competing with the birthday girl for anal attention.
I'm imagining this bit of dialogue:
Earnest: Think we oughta invite Bobby Joe?
Mike: Not unless he’s suddenly learned to ‘preciate the supply side of ass-fuckin', no.
Well, then, stay tuned.
We're done with Bobby Joe, but there might be a teensy bit of Maisy-action in the last chapter. And definitely some Mike + Earnest-action. And a bunch of Mike + Earnest + Geraldine action.
Thank you, and thanks for the review!

Looks like the next thing I’m going to post is chapter 8 of Make It All Better. I’ve been stuck on it for a good while (the last time I posted a new chapter of that story was in December), but I’ve finally figured out how the chapter should end, so I’m hoping to finish it in the next few days. 
Nothing else is all that close to being finished. The next thing I’d like to finish is chapter 3 of Wishful, because after Make It All Better, that’s the story that has gone longest without an update. 
SWP1, hope you had a great Fourth. I actually did once write a Fourth of July story: It’s called “Fireworks,” and it’s a sequel to my Valentine’s Day story, “Some Girl.” 
 

From Trip on July 04, 2019
Thanks! My top priority when writing fanfic is being faithful to the characters. And because the characters are so distinctive on the show, it’s not that hard to make them distinctive on the page.
When I started thinking about writing this story (which was my first Loud House fic), I thought about what kinds of RL issues a boy with ten sisters would have to deal with, and that’s where all of that stuff came from. 
Thanks for the review!

I watched the most recent episode of She-Ra and the Princesses of Power the other night, and I was disappointed to discover that I'm going to have to remove my favorite piece of dialogue from my in-progress fanfic "What Happens on Mystacor." It was written on the assumption that Glimmer and Bow have known each other since childhood, which turns out not to be the case. Stupid canon. :/
In happier news, after finishing two chapters in two days earlier this week, I couldn’t decide what to do next, so I did another cycle through all 20 of my in-progress stories. Whenever I do this, I hope that inspiration will strike and that I’ll suddenly make a huge leap forward on one of the stories, but that didn’t happen this time. But last night, when I was trying to decide what to do next, inspiration suddenly struck like a mofo and I wrote about 2000 words of “Goldilocked,” a one-shot story (about a girl who breaks into the Three Bears’ house and ends up becoming their sex slave) that I’ve been working on very slowly for almost four years. Now it looks like I might finish it in the foreseeable future.
Finally, now that Little Rose is finished, a new story has been added to the List of Twenty. It’s a one-shot called “Day of the Deadly,” and it’s for this year’s Halloween story jam. (Yes, I know it’s only June, but given how slowly I write...) A summary: When the cartel killed Graciela’s brother Enrique, all hope of getting their village out from under the cartel’s thumb died with him. But on the night when the veil between this world and the next grows thin, there may be one more chance.

Re: Little Rose
Glad you liked it.

Re: Little Rose
From FlutteringWings on July 01, 2019
I knew it was a bit of a risk adding two new major characters so late in the story, because it could be seen as jumping the shark. But I felt that in order to give Randy and Rose a direction for the future and a way to live happily ever after, they needed to find some kindred spirits. Plus a bonus dog.
Aw, don’t go putting sequel ideas in my head. I’ve got more story ideas than I can write up as it is.
Me too. Sadly, being their creator doesn’t mean that I get to join in their games.
You’re welcome. Thank you for the review!

It does blow my mind how long it takes me to complete some of these multi-chapter stories. Little Rose took a year – which actually makes it one of the faster ones! I’ve been working on Country Summer since August 2015, and let’s not even get into Delta Delta Delta.
After that bit in one of the earlier chapters where Rose gets excited by the idea of being fucked by men, boys, AND dogs at the beach, I really wanted to pay that off. 
Having additional participants in the sexcapades creates a lot of new opportunities, especially for voyeurism. I wanted them all to be having a good time, and an easy way to do that was to make them all enjoy watching one another while taking breaks from their own sexual activities.
When I wrote this chapter, I had a lot of trouble at first because I couldn’t decide exactly what ought to be in it. Then I asked myself what the essential sex acts in this chapter would be, and I decided on Randy fucking Evie and Rose getting dog-fucked. Everything else was pretty much meant as gravy, because I didn’t want to get so far into it that it made the chapter as long as all eight preceding chapters combined.
Thank you! When I was trying to figure out how this story was going to end (which I did not do before I started writing it), I tried to think of what could give Randy and Rose’s relationship a new direction and new possibilities for the future. Having them meet two kindred spirits – plus a dog – seemed like a good way to do that. Plus I wanted Randy to have another loli to fuck.
In any case, I’m very glad you enjoyed Little Rose, and I thank you for all of your comments. 

Chapter 9 of Country Summer is posted! It’s Franny’s birthday, and her party is gonna get wild – before it even starts.
I can’t believe I have three reviews to respond to – two of the finale chapter of Little Rose, and one of my Steven Universe short story “P. F. A. S. (Post-Fusion Attachment Syndrome).” An embarrassment of riches!

From Lucius-Walker on July 01, 2019
Wow, I never even thought of that. That’s kind of brilliant.
In any case, glad you liked the story, and thanks for the comment!

Just posted chapter 9 of Little Rose. I hope folks who have been following this story find the conclusion satisfying.

Hey, all. All my news falls neatly within the bounds of SWP1’s questions, so I’ll just go ahead and answer them.
1. I had a lovely trip, which included spending quality time with a lot of my family. Hope you had a good trip, too.
2 & 3. I actually finished rough drafts of both chapters while traveling home yesterday. I'm proofing the Little Rose chapter now and expect to post it tomorrow. The next chapter of Country Summer should be ready a day or two after that. Yay, progress!

I have actually written a "pheromones gone wild" story before: It's a Loud House fanfic called "Whoops," in which Lisa accidentally releases a synthetic pheromone in the house, causing all the girls to start madly lusting after Lincoln.

From Thundercloud on June 18, 2019
Yeah, I knew this chapter wouldn't please everyone.
That would have been a fun way to go.
That's fair. Part of why I added the material about the details that Mia wished she could remember was to give readers who are into the rapey stuff a few more tidbits so they wouldn't feel entirely cheated (as well as to give Mia a reason to feel guilty). But I also didn't want to freak out other readers by getting crazy explicit. 
In any case, the next (and final) chapter will come back to Mia's usual brand of naughtiness -- with a bit of a twist. 
Thanks for the review!

I keep thinking that I just have one more thing to do and chapter 9 of Country Summer will be finished, but then there always ends up being one more thing after that, and one more after that...
SWP1:
--Yes, there’s one chapter of Auntie’s Home still  to come. I worked on it a bit tonight, actually, but there’s quite a bit more to do. 
--Chapter 5 of TMTM will have a lot of sex in it, including a grand finale involving all of the characters.
I’m about to go away for a bit, too, to a place that has limited cell service and probably no wifi, so it may be a while before I post again.

From Thundercloud on June 18, 2019
Yeah, I knew this chapter wouldn't please everyone.
That would have been a fun way to go.
That's fair. Part of why I added the material about the details that Mia wished she could remember was to give readers who are into the rapey stuff a few more tidbits so they wouldn't feel entirely cheated (as well as to give Mia a reason to feel guilty). But I also didn't want to freak out other readers by getting crazy explicit. 
In any case, the next (and final) chapter will come back to Mia's usual brand of naughtiness -- with a bit of a twist. 
Thanks for the review!

Thanks! I might have been wishy-washy about using the rape tag for the other content, but because I knew I'd be writing this part of Mia's story at some point, there was no question that it was necessary.
It's very different from everything else. Also, when I realized as I was writing it that Mia's pheromones would affect Skyler as she molested Mia, that enabled me to take things in a hotter direction.
Skyler has that whole "We hate what we don't understand" thing going on. And it's both her hatred and her lack of understanding that lead to her bad end.

I had to give somebody other than Mia the chance to say something amusing.
I wrote that part for two reasons: first, to explain why Mia feels so bad about all this even though it technically was Skyler's fault; and second, to include additional details for, well, pervy reasons.
So glad you liked it. I felt that this chapter was essential to Mia's story, because it explains how she came to be so careful about how she deals with her sex dependency.
Me too. Thanks so much for the beta and the review!

Yeah, it’s pretty different from the other chapters. We’ll be getting back to something more like normal in the 6th and final chapter.
It’s always hard for me to know. The thing that’s closest to finished is chapter 9 of Country Summer, but that doesn’t mean it will be the next thing I finish. That will depend on when and how inspiration next strikes.

I don’t do commissions, but I’ll listen to ideas. No guarantee I’ll do anything with them, though; I’ve got tons of ideas of my own, too.

Thanks! I might have been wishy-washy about using the rape tag for the other content, but because I knew I'd be writing this part of Mia's story at some point, there was no question that it was necessary.
It's very different from everything else. Also, when I realized as I was writing it that Mia's pheromones would affect Skyler as she molested Mia, that enabled me to take things in a hotter direction.
Skyler has that whole "We hate what we don't understand" thing going on. And it's both her hatred and her lack of understanding that lead to her bad end.

I had to give somebody other than Mia the chance to say something amusing.
I wrote that part for two reasons: first, to explain why Mia feels so bad about all this even though it technically was Skyler's fault; and second, to include additional details for, well, pervy reasons.
So glad you liked it. I felt that this chapter was essential to Mia's story, because it explains how she came to be so careful about how she deals with her sex dependency.
Me too. Thanks so much for the beta and the review!

Glad you liked it!
I’m glad you asked, because you’ll find out in chapter 6.

Glad you liked it!
I’m glad you asked, because you’ll find out in chapter 6.

Mike Rapes A Dyke is in a lot of ways the least defensible thing I’ve ever written in terms of themes and content. On the other hand, it gave us Declan who gets a nice minor role in Twinpregnation so maybe it’s not all bad.
Thank you for this review! It’s always cool getting reviews for the old stuff/
Michael is one of the biggest pieces of shit I ever wrote. I always intended to do more stories with him, but never got around it. There isn’t really anybody related to him who isn’t a piece of shit either, except for his poor brother and sister in law. At least with decent parents the baby might grow up ok.
If the girlfriend hadn’t cheated on her she might never have got in that situation. Bad business all round. Lily appeared in a part of a later story having made a deal with a demon to use her inventiveness to punish more minor demons so she’s definitely lacking in some innocence… She definitely didn’t deserve it tho really. I totally get where you’re coming from tho!
Haha! Guy’s boasting about his junk there
Nah, they’re just Declan’s Irish Mafia associates. Sure they’ll make you an offer ye can’t refuse. It’ll be grand.
Thanks for the review! I appreciate it. I’ll re-read Mia’s new part later and post a review for that S’a quality story that one.

Pregnant in Alabama
Thanks for the review! I hope your writing is going well and you’re getting some kickass stuff down. Or fuckass if it’s porn I guess.
Male pregnancies aren’t really my thing either (and since it’s a male pregnancy that didn’t involve two male characters, or lots of angst it isn’t most of the usual Mpreg fans’ thing either ) Sometimes I just have an idea and find it rights out pretty easily and maybe is funny or sick or whatever enough to be worth the while. Like this one!
I’m still not gonna write an ABDL story though. ...crap, both muses just started laughing.

“Hi, we’re a coach full of horny models who don’t believe in birth control. Would you like to come and ride with us?”
~Mia: Cum and Cum ‘er edition...

Chapter 5 of Mia is posted. Be warned, it’s pretty brutal. Big thanks to JayDee for his beta!