Yami-Iko-Kami

I was actually thinking about a story by Saiga called King of Molmol. In it a girl genius creates collar and nanobots that let one feel another’s pleasure. I kind of see Lisa doing something like that, wanting to experience and document the act of sex without damaging her immature body. Hmm that would make for an interesting story. It thought thats what you were going for. Are you thinking of doing that?

I could pitch you some ideas fro Sam if you’re interested.

So it is Lucy. Nice, along with the twins she is one of the sisters I like to pair with Lincoln. And “Twist My Arm” kind of reminds me of AbberrantScrpit’s Every Last Drop, a one shot in which Lori forces Lincoln to be more assertive and make her submit to him. It was due to him being such a pushover with Ronnie Anne. Really wish there was a sequel to it detailing the aftermath of Lori’s lessons. BTW aside from Twist My Arm are you planning any other stories involving the twins or Lucy? Or maybe Sam Sharp? The last is due to Aces Wild on FF.Net.

Hmm okay been a bit sick so I haven't really checked the polls. Honestly I set them up to see if people were even interested at all. Right now I'm working on rewriting chapter 21/R 12 to my version and I'll post it in the story to get readers attention and redo the polls. Well most of them. Especially since I forgot to mention that for the last poll you can vote for more than one and I would focus on the top three. But for now I'm looking for suggestions/advice on the story. Please PM what you would like to share with me. I might even share my own ideas with you too. An idea I had was having Naru from Love Hina* be Sakura's older sister/cousin and caretaker/guardian. How else should get a sibling? And from what anime, since I don't want to make/use OCs. (Naruto's sister is already decided, she's from another anime but I might make a poll to decide if he should get another one). *Planning to involve the girls of Love Hina. Plus some other anime.

Some quick polls for later: Ages ago I posted a challenge for a story that crossed CttWR with Pactio (a Naruto and Negima crossover on FF), with CttW Naruto going to Mahora. Should this be a sequel, own story or neither, just have the characters appear in CttW? http://www.strawpoll.me/10956944 Another poll is an idea for a CttWR Special featuring Hinata (or another girl) becoming a slave, set in a different universe, no Imprinted/Slave master Naruto. Should it be Hinata? http://www.strawpoll.me/10956963 Master/Mistress? http://www.strawpoll.me/10957015 Other to suggestions for other option. Polls will stay open until, let's say Oct 1.

Author: Yami-Iko-Kami (new author), originally by Gravemind Title: Chained to the Whirlpool Reboot Summary: (May change) Everybody knows how Naruto and Sakura act toward each other. He loves her and she hates him but what if things were different and two certain girls are going to get sucked into a world of pain, pleasure and slavery. Feedback: Feedback, suggestions and constructive criticism much appreciated. Fandom: Naruto Pairing: Naruto/Harem Warnings: BDSM, SM, Oral, and many more. Chaptered story: URL: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600104808 Thank you all who took the time to read this and now I ask you for some help. I plan to rewrite this story but I'm having some trouble deciding what changes should I make. So I have created a poll post, http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/63607-chained-to-the-whirlpool-reboot-polls/#entry395664 which will have polls to help me decide what to change or keep the same. Keep checking for more polls as well. FYI I'm currently writing an Omaka featuring Hinata and Anko.

Hello my name is Yami Iko Kami or Yami or even Yik if you want and I have adopted Gravemind's Chained to the Whirlpool and I plan to rewrite it. However there are so many possibilities for it that I'm having trouble deciding what to do. So I will use strawpolls.com to have those of you that are interested vote on what changes I should or should not make. There will be a few to several posted at a time depending on what they are and what people voted on previously. The polls will be open for 5 days. Now here are the first polls: Beginning http://www.strawpoll.me/10949599 When should it start? Original with Ino Post Imprint, Naruto wakes up and learns what happened (No slave yet) Post Imprint, Sakura/Hinata/Other/None wakes up in ANBU HQ and is told her fate (Poll later for slave) Pre Imprint Naruto Boy or Girl? (CLOSED) http://www.strawpoll.me/10949605 M F Verdict: Male but with a twist. Parents? (CLOSED) http://www.strawpoll.me/10949615 Dead Both alive Minato alive Kushina alive Verdict: Kushina lives but what happened to her? I have my own ideas but open to suggestions Orochimaru? (CLOSED/New Poll?) http://www.strawpoll.me/10949621 Good Evil Dead Verdict?: Neutral? Spirit? Uchiha Clan (CLOSED) http://www.strawpoll.me/10949626 All alive All dead Only the adults were killed Verdict: Alive but few in number for several reasons. Hinata's fate (CLOSED/NewPoll?) http://www.strawpoll.me/10949634 Mistress, Wife, does not own slave Slave, Naruto's or her mistress will be involved with Naruto. Verdict?: Naruto's slave but trained by Anko or other pet? Rina, RtN Hinata version (CLOSED), http://www.strawpoll.me/10949638 In Out Verdict: Rina is in but a poll will decide her connection. Tsunade in Leaf or traveling? (New Poll) http://www.strawpoll.me/10949642 In Out Verdict: New poll to decide her fate/reason back in Leaf. Give Naruto a sister? (CLOSED) http://www.strawpoll.me/10949652 Yes No Verdict: Naruto will have a sister, from another anime*. Possible new poll to decide to give him more? *Take a guess and if you're right then I'll see about working in one of any suggestions you want to see. Hint: Red and foxes. Anko, Tsume, Kunerai younger? (CLOSED) http://www.strawpoll.me/10949665 All Anko Tsume Kunerai Anko-Tsume Tsume-Kunerai AK No age change Verdict: New Poll? Polls will close on Sunday August 14

Oh okay, need to edit something real quick.

Alright thanks now all I have to do is promote and let people know I've adopted it and look over both Gravemind's original and rewrite for material. That's gonna take a while but at least I have the first chapter all figured/planned out so hopefully that will keep readers happy. BTW it isn't an issue if I posted a notice in place of a chapter to let readers know right?

I accept Pen name: Yami-Iko-Kami Link: http://members.adult...p?no=1296908512 PM me

Okay thanks.

He did and now I'm going to reply to it.

So I just type it up for him and have him post it here? Alright.

Okay so I already asked for help on this but I'm still a little confused on how this works. Now I have Gravemind's permission to adopt so would it be okay if I filled out the info from the top post, email it to Gravemind and then have him email it to the TOS team or DemonGoddess with a link to my acount? Would that work?

I'm adopting a story, I hope so anyway since I don't understand the process of it. Now when I promote it can I also promote a series based on it? Say for example a series of stories of a succubus seducing and whoring out characters from various media?

I'm new here but that doesn't mean I didn't get ideas while reading stories on AFF and what not. Right now I'll just focus on 20 stories, the ones that I keep thinking back to. Some requirements: Open minded, No yaoi please, Okay with BDSM and incest (let me know what is too much for you to read/help with and etc.) Other matters will be discussed depending on what story is being worked on. The 20 included: Darkest Maelstrom (Naruto AU): Hiashi's sudden death has changed Konoha, as spies Sasame, Hokuto, and Shion will discovers while investigating the new Hinata and her secret relationship with Naruto. One that revolves around lust, pain and bonds but can they survive long enough to embrace it? Kunoichi Kitsune Naruko (Naruto/Negima AU): A scandal forces Naruko and Hinata to leave Konoha. And Setsuna will learn first hand what kind of scandal it was. Can she and the rest of the girls survive the fox girl's lust? Nodoka's 3-A Harem (Negima AU): Encouraged by her friends and her own desires Nodoka searches Library Isle for advice on getting Negi's attention. And the book she picks will change her life and everyone else's forever. Chained to the Snake (Naruto AU): Hinata has become Anko’s pet. Just what kind of training will the snake mistress put the poor girl through? Chained to the Whirlpool Spinoff, with Gravemind's permission. Enslaved by the Maelstrom (Naruto AU, FemNaruto): Sakura is sick of Naruko's unwanted affections and jealous of her closeness to Sasuke. Forcing Hinata to help her, Sakura sets out to find something to blackmail the little blonde with. But the secret they find sucks them into a dark world that will never let them go. No matter how much Naruko wishes it. Taming the Maelstrom (Naruto AU, FemNaruto): After a bad school day Naruko goes on a prank spree and ruins Anko's dango lunch. The snake mistress decides to teach the blonde girl a lesson. And Naruko keeps coming back for more. Icha Icha Brothel (Mega Crossover-Naruto): As heir of the Uzumaki demon clan Naruto must take over the family brothel. With the help of his siblings he must gather and train his own batch of slaves and workers. Slave of Zero (Familiar of Zero): Louise summons strange girl who will bring out a dark sadistic side of the Void Mage, a side she'll need to break and train her 12 other familiars. 09 Mitsudomoe Debauchery (Mitsudomoe AU): Mitsuba takes an offer from Marina. Futaba watches a porn with Chiba and Shinya. And Hitaho must deal with a possessed Miyashita and Sakiko. All on the same night and the triplets are send down into the depths of depravity. Koihime Slaves (Koihime Musou AU): Using a demonic contract the Wu Kingdom has conquered China. Now the Son family must fulfill their end of the deal. And they'll need to use the other Koihime girls to do so. Chained to the Magical Whirlpool (NarutoAU-CttW/Negima): An accidental kiss* between two very unique boys will bring worlds to collide. And the Mahora girls will have to endure pain and pleasure at the hands of Negi Springfield and Uzumaki Naruto. Alternate telling of CttW-R with my own twists prior to meeting Negi. (*Might change the event.) Kitsune Ko (Naruto/Digimon X-Over AU): Makino Ruki never really thought much of Uzumaki Naruto until Iruka assigns them as partners on a report. In just a few shorts hours Ruki comes to feel a connection to the boy, stronger than the one she had with her late grandmother. And on sheer impulse she crosses a line from which there is no turning back. To-SLAVE-Ru (To Love-Ru AU): A very different Rito has more experience and confidence when it came to girls prior to meeting Lala. And its all thanks to his sex slave, Mikan. Hentai Inn (Love Hina AU): Keitaro has inherited Hinata Inn now a girls' dorm and is tasked with returning it to its former glory. A sex slave training academy! His first job is to turn the current tetants into his personal harem. And with Haruka's and Nanako's help he can't possibly fail. Mistress Yui and Her Pets (K-ON AU): Underneath Yui's airhead demeanor is a dark sadistic sexual predator. She already has enslave Ui and Nodoka. Now in high school Yui has her eyes on the members of the Light Music Club. A Certain Lucky Bastard Playboy (To Aru Majutsu no Index AU): Touma is a natural playboy, seducing girls with little to no effort on his part. He can't say no to any of them as they keep coming back for more of his love and he comes to take advantage of it. Mama's Girl (Lucky Star AU): Kanata lived to be part of Konata's life but she becomes a worst pervert than Sōjirō by raising Konata as a sex slave. Now she wants to rest of her daughter's friends. Vampire Master Evangeline (Negima AU): After centuries Evangeline is finally freed from her imprisonment by chance. Now the chibi blonde sets out to take over the world. But first she needs an army and what better recruits than the female descendants of the ones that sealed her. And Eva intents to have them serve her in every way possible. Nunnally's Geass of Lust (Code Geass AU): A bored C.C. plays with a lonely Nunnally and grants her a powerful and unique geass. Things spiral out of control as she uses it to change the world with lust and passion. Pet Club (Azumanga Daioh AU): Tomo and Yukari trick Chiyo and Sasaki into joining the secret 'Pet Club' where they'll learn to take care of very unique pet. First hand.

Hello I'm a new writer here and I'm looking for a beta, obviously, for my upcoming stories. The most are Naruto stories with elements of BDSM. *Currently writing right now. The following are the titles with minor summaries: Darkest Maelstrom (Naruto AU): Hinata becomes Naruto's sex slave. Starring Sasame, Hokuto and Shion.* Kunoichi Kitsune Naruko (Naruto/Negima AU): Setsuna goes into heat and the new transfer students, Naruko and Hinata take advantage of her.* Nodoka's 3-A Harem (Negima AU): A magical book changes Nodoka's life forever.* Chained to the Snake (Naruto AU): A spinoff of Chained to the Maelstrom (Rewrite), with Gravemind's permission, about Hinata and Anko.* Enslaved by the Maelstrom (Naruto AU, FemNaruto): A female Naruto (Naruko) enslaves Sakura and Hinata.* Taming the Maelstrom (Naruto AU, FemNaruto): Another Naruko story. Anko gets pranked by Naruko and decides to teach her a lesson. Chained to the Magical Whirlpool (NarutoAU-CttW/Negima): With Gravemind's permission with some changes. Mixing into the Negima world. Kitsune Ko (Naruto/Digimon X-Over AU): Ruki of Tamers, plus other Digimon girls, in Konoha. Ruki/Naruto pairing into a NaruRuki SlaveHarem. . Icha Icha Brothel (Mega Crossover-Naruto): Uzumaki Demon Clan. Naruto inherits the family brothel and must gather some new workers. Slave of Zero (Familiar of Zero): Louise summons strange girl who will bring out a dark sadistic side of the Void Mage, a side she'll need to break and train her 12 other familiars. Mitsudomoe Debauchery (Mitsudomoe AU): Mitsuba takes an offer from Marina. Futaba watches a porn with Chiba and Shinya. And Hitaho must deal with a possessed Miyashita and Sakiko. All on the same night and the triplets are send down into the depths of depravity. Koihime Slaves (Koihime Musou AU): Using a demonic contract the Wu Kingdom has conquered China. Now the Son family must fulfill their end of the deal. And they'll need to use the other Koihime girls to do so. To-SLAVE-Ru (To Love-Ru AU): A very different Rito has more experience and confidence when it came to girls prior to meeting Lala. And its all thanks to his sex slave, Mikan. Hentai Inn (Love Hina AU): Keitaro has inherited Hinata Inn now a girls' dorm and is tasked with returning it to its former glory. A sex slave training academy! His first job is to turn the current tetants into his personal harem. And with Haruka's and Nanako's help he can't possibly fail. Mistress Yui and Her Pets (K-ON AU): Underneath Yui's airhead demeanor is a dark sadistic sexual predator. She already has enslave Ui and Nodoka. Now in high school Yui has her eyes on the members of the Light Music Club. A Certain Lucky Bastard Playboy (To Aru Majutsu no Index AU): Touma is a natural playboy, seducing girls with little to no effort on his part. He can't say no to any of them as they keep coming back for more of his love and he comes to take advantage of it. Mama's Girl (Lucky Star AU): Kanata lived to be part of Konata's life but she becomes a worst pervert than Sōjirō by raising Konata as a sex slave. Now she wants to rest of her daughter's friends. Vampire Master Evangeline (Negima AU): After centuries Evangeline is finally freed from her imprisonment by chance. Now the chibi blonde sets out to take over the world. But first she needs an army and what better recruits than the female descendants of the ones that sealed her. And Eva intents to have them serve her in every way possible. Nunnally's Geass of Lust (Code Geass AU): A bored C.C. plays with a lonely Nunnally and grants her a powerful and unique geass. Things spiral out of control as she uses it to change the world with lust and passion. Pet Club (Azumanga Daioh AU): Tomo and Yukari trick Chiyo and Sasaki into joining the secret 'Pet Club' where they'll learn to take care of very unique pet. First hand. Let me know if anyone is interested.

Okay I've finally requistered with the forum and dealt with a few issues and I have some time to write. So 1st I'm going to finish writing the 1st chapter of this challange which I'll call 'Chained to the Magical Whirlpool'. However Negi wouldn't come into play until a few chapters later, first I'll set things up for how I want Naruto to be. You know his slaves and etc. And I was hoping to make my debut on YFF.com but it was taken down appearantly. It really depressed me. However I do plan on having Naruto, later on, take a class of his own and would like recommendations for girls to be in said class. Like the Digimon girls, Pokemon girls, Love Hina and others.