Yami-Iko-Kami

This is where I’ll answer reviews and discussion the plot for Sandboy Tales.

I was actually thinking about a story by Saiga called King of Molmol. In it a girl genius creates collar and nanobots that let one feel another’s pleasure. I kind of see Lisa doing something like that, wanting to experience and document the act of sex without damaging her immature body. Hmm that would make for an interesting story. It thought thats what you were going for. Are you thinking of doing that?

I could pitch you some ideas fro Sam if you’re interested.

So it is Lucy. Nice, along with the twins she is one of the sisters I like to pair with Lincoln. And “Twist My Arm” kind of reminds me of AbberrantScrpit’s Every Last Drop, a one shot in which Lori forces Lincoln to be more assertive and make her submit to him. It was due to him being such a pushover with Ronnie Anne. Really wish there was a sequel to it detailing the aftermath of Lori’s lessons. BTW aside from Twist My Arm are you planning any other stories involving the twins or Lucy? Or maybe Sam Sharp? The last is due to Aces Wild on FF.Net.

Hmm okay been a bit sick so I haven't really checked the polls. Honestly I set them up to see if people were even interested at all. Right now I'm working on rewriting chapter 21/R 12 to my version and I'll post it in the story to get readers attention and redo the polls. Well most of them. Especially since I forgot to mention that for the last poll you can vote for more than one and I would focus on the top three. But for now I'm looking for suggestions/advice on the story. Please PM what you would like to share with me. I might even share my own ideas with you too. An idea I had was having Naru from Love Hina* be Sakura's older sister/cousin and caretaker/guardian. How else should get a sibling? And from what anime, since I don't want to make/use OCs. (Naruto's sister is already decided, she's from another anime but I might make a poll to decide if he should get another one). *Planning to involve the girls of Love Hina. Plus some other anime.

Some quick polls for later: Ages ago I posted a challenge for a story that crossed CttWR with Pactio (a Naruto and Negima crossover on FF), with CttW Naruto going to Mahora. Should this be a sequel, own story or neither, just have the characters appear in CttW? http://www.strawpoll.me/10956944 Another poll is an idea for a CttWR Special featuring Hinata (or another girl) becoming a slave, set in a different universe, no Imprinted/Slave master Naruto. Should it be Hinata? http://www.strawpoll.me/10956963 Master/Mistress? http://www.strawpoll.me/10957015 Other to suggestions for other option. Polls will stay open until, let's say Oct 1.

Author: Yami-Iko-Kami (new author), originally by Gravemind Title: Chained to the Whirlpool Reboot Summary: (May change) Everybody knows how Naruto and Sakura act toward each other. He loves her and she hates him but what if things were different and two certain girls are going to get sucked into a world of pain, pleasure and slavery. Feedback: Feedback, suggestions and constructive criticism much appreciated. Fandom: Naruto Pairing: Naruto/Harem Warnings: BDSM, SM, Oral, and many more. Chaptered story: URL: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600104808 Thank you all who took the time to read this and now I ask you for some help. I plan to rewrite this story but I'm having some trouble deciding what changes should I make. So I have created a poll post, http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/63607-chained-to-the-whirlpool-reboot-polls/#entry395664 which will have polls to help me decide what to change or keep the same. Keep checking for more polls as well. FYI I'm currently writing an Omaka featuring Hinata and Anko.

Hello my name is Yami Iko Kami or Yami or even Yik if you want and I have adopted Gravemind's Chained to the Whirlpool and I plan to rewrite it. However there are so many possibilities for it that I'm having trouble deciding what to do. So I will use strawpolls.com to have those of you that are interested vote on what changes I should or should not make. There will be a few to several posted at a time depending on what they are and what people voted on previously. The polls will be open for 5 days. Now here are the first polls: Beginning http://www.strawpoll.me/10949599 When should it start? Original with Ino Post Imprint, Naruto wakes up and learns what happened (No slave yet) Post Imprint, Sakura/Hinata/Other/None wakes up in ANBU HQ and is told her fate (Poll later for slave) Pre Imprint Naruto Boy or Girl? (CLOSED) http://www.strawpoll.me/10949605 M F Verdict: Male but with a twist. Parents? (CLOSED) http://www.strawpoll.me/10949615 Dead Both alive Minato alive Kushina alive Verdict: Kushina lives but what happened to her? I have my own ideas but open to suggestions Orochimaru? (CLOSED/New Poll?) http://www.strawpoll.me/10949621 Good Evil Dead Verdict?: Neutral? Spirit? Uchiha Clan (CLOSED) http://www.strawpoll.me/10949626 All alive All dead Only the adults were killed Verdict: Alive but few in number for several reasons. Hinata's fate (CLOSED/NewPoll?) http://www.strawpoll.me/10949634 Mistress, Wife, does not own slave Slave, Naruto's or her mistress will be involved with Naruto. Verdict?: Naruto's slave but trained by Anko or other pet? Rina, RtN Hinata version (CLOSED), http://www.strawpoll.me/10949638 In Out Verdict: Rina is in but a poll will decide her connection. Tsunade in Leaf or traveling? (New Poll) http://www.strawpoll.me/10949642 In Out Verdict: New poll to decide her fate/reason back in Leaf. Give Naruto a sister? (CLOSED) http://www.strawpoll.me/10949652 Yes No Verdict: Naruto will have a sister, from another anime*. Possible new poll to decide to give him more? *Take a guess and if you're right then I'll see about working in one of any suggestions you want to see. Hint: Red and foxes. Anko, Tsume, Kunerai younger? (CLOSED) http://www.strawpoll.me/10949665 All Anko Tsume Kunerai Anko-Tsume Tsume-Kunerai AK No age change Verdict: New Poll? Polls will close on Sunday August 14

Oh okay, need to edit something real quick.

Alright thanks now all I have to do is promote and let people know I've adopted it and look over both Gravemind's original and rewrite for material. That's gonna take a while but at least I have the first chapter all figured/planned out so hopefully that will keep readers happy. BTW it isn't an issue if I posted a notice in place of a chapter to let readers know right?

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Okay thanks.

He did and now I'm going to reply to it.

So I just type it up for him and have him post it here? Alright.

Okay so I already asked for help on this but I'm still a little confused on how this works. Now I have Gravemind's permission to adopt so would it be okay if I filled out the info from the top post, email it to Gravemind and then have him email it to the TOS team or DemonGoddess with a link to my acount? Would that work?