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  1. Heart of the Forest discussion/Review thread

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    So... can we talk about this latest chapter...?

    For you to adore Aneurin, your emphasis on his "death" was... well, it was lacking! LOL Then again, it's being told from Val's point of view so she could only describe but so much. Yorwrath's on the other hand was a bit more detailed and therefore more effective and meaningful. I know that she couldn't do anything about her husband's but I can see her want building for Yorwrath, no matter that she basically said she didn't like for people to die on her watch.

    I'm with BW: their budding relationship is definitely intriguing. He's annoying, cocky, demanding, racist... I could go on! But you're peeling away those layers and revealing that there are good reasons for him to be that way. And it's easier for us to see why Val respects him.

    My opinion: she'll probably never love him the way she loves Aneurin. And he's probably fine with that. So, I think that even if the Queen beds all three, it will be purely physical with the others. Maaybe a bit more with Islwyn but you're so contempt with making him untrustworthy... :P

    Great chapter, as always!

  2. Heart of the Forest discussion/Review thread

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    So... no one likes Islwyn but me...? :cry: *takes the druid and sallow elf with her* Fine... we'll be... somewhere with that heavy incense and intoxicating wine if you need us...

    So, I won't lie; the last chapter felt somewhat of a filler but I actually enjoyed reading about Val and Yorwrath sparring. He proved a great point; he's the one with the most experience with a sword. And sorry, BW but I also enjoyed that stabbing! Not like it really hurt him, though...

    The "unicorn" was indeed a surprise unicorn, like you told us in SB! Hmm... did we take a little something from The Last Unicorn...? :thumbsup: I loved that movie!

    Anyway; this is great stuff and you guys are hilarious!

  8. Heart of the Forest discussion/Review thread

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    Oh, I did like how Islwyn treated Valentina. He was so damned reverent, as though he was being allowed to pet his future queen. I still have my reservations about that elf, however. He's Aneurin's, through and through, and I'm not entirely sure I trust him.

    Do you think that his "vision" is a fluke to get both of them out of the camp only to lure them in a more dangerous territory...? Because now that you've mentioned it, it sounds like something he would try to do. Or at the least, get rid of Aneurin so that he could try to have Valentina for himself...?

  9. Heart of the Forest discussion/Review thread

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    Just finished chapter five and it's just... wow!

    I'm still excited over the fact that me and my "elf" made an appearance! :D I'm still not sure how I feel about being made a slave, especially reading on and finding out what that means exactly! A part of me doesn't care, as long as the sallow elf gets more time than the others! :lol:

    I know that I've mentioned that you should just get all of the sex out of the way and then concentrate on the plot. Whether you want to believe it or not, this is actually a good mix of both. It couldn't be helped that the last chapter was basically more about the claiming than anything. The small orgy was a bit surprising but nothing that made me want to gag or not read it, contrary to belief *gives Dirty Angel the evil eye*!

    Soo... am I the only one who took a bit of pleasure in how Islywn treated Valentina...? And I knew that there was more to Yorwrath and him than they both tried to lead on!

  10. Heart of the Forest discussion/Review thread

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    So, I promised you an embarrassing review in here. Don't judge me... wait; you already do. So, it's whatevs... :P

    For the longest, there's never been much writing that... arouses me. I might read a few scenes and be all "ooh, that's kinda hot" but nothing more. Maybe a "I wish that would happen to me" type feeling. And almost always, I end up blushing, anyway!

    This is may have been the second or third time I've read something to where I had to close my legs to calm myself! Dear gods, that was well written! And when I said I could feel what Valentina felt... I meant it! Just... ugh; I hate going into details because I'm blushing just thinking about it! The voyeur scene... loved! The garden scene; holy hell, the garden scene! *flails*

    This is so good; for the first time being on the site, I wouldn't mind it if this story was PWP!

    Valentina is a great character. I really enjoy that she thinks things through and understands the consequences of her actions. While reading, I really wanted her to not get in trouble for what she did but I knew that in reality, something like poisoning forty men and then burning their bodies wouldn't go unnoticed!

    I love elves, now. My God, why have I neglected elven stories?! Not to say that any other story about elves would be like this one but it just makes me think of what all I'm missing!

  11. Review Replies and Discussion for KoKoa B's DC "Verse Stories

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    Awwz! So sweet! Can't wait to see baby Marvins! But does this mean that the future is gonna come true and Doc is gonna die? Or did they stop that?

    Tahn:

    Yes! ^_^ baby Marvins are gonna be SO adorable! Haven't made up my mind as to whether to put a bit of what it's going to be like for Tabs to raise a half Martian. The ideas are there; I just don't want to draw away from the main story-telling.

    As far as the future; the only thing that is now for sure is the fact that Tabitha and J'onn will have children. Now that I think about it, you bring up an excellent question! The only thing that was taken care of was Lord Chronos not taking over the world and getting rid of the Justice League. That was the only thing Batman prevented. The civil war which caused doc and her husband to die may very well still happen. On the somewhat bright side, Tabs did warn her slightly back in Speed of Lyght. We can only hope that she'll listen if the time comes!

  15. AFF's Tales from the Shoutbox 2015

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    KoKoa_B

    Summary/Synopsis: A Halloween party brings a team of superheroes together to celebrate. As a storm brews outside, two individuals attempt to deal with the fireworks between them.

    Title: Right Like Rain

    (I know; I switched, again. And I'm horrible at summaries, especially for this one...)

  18. Review Replies and Discussion for KoKoa B's DC "Verse Stories

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    Tahn-

    Thank you so much for taking the time to read ALL of my DC stuff! You didn't have to do that but it's greatly appreciated! :D So, let me respond!

    1. The Scarlet Tree

    ...There needs to be more of this.

    And there will be... hopefully. Quote honestly, this was a last second Camp NaNoWriMo project so things were being played by ear with this one. It's not my most important work but because it deals with Marvin, rest assured this will be updated in the future!

    2. Last Request

    Oh snap

    LOL! That was just something done for Deviant Art because no one shows Lex Luthor any love. He's my favorite villain and I finally came up with something short. I was supposed to have more shorts and drabbles but O_o...

    3. What Happened Last Night...

    I really wanna know what happened!

    You know: I never figured it out, myself! Did Batman put something in that watermelon...? *evil laughter*

    4. Vacation

    Aww, how cute.

    :D There was so much more I wanted to put in it! This was my first go at a drabble and for someone who isn't used to it, it was so hard to keep things under a certain word count!

    5. Speed of Lyght

    So very much glaring at you Ko. They better be all happy and stuff in the sequel. :P

    Whaddaya think I write; fairy tales?? :P My original ideas didn't call for the breakup but the more I thought about it, the more I wanted to follow more of the Justice League Unlimited story line pertaining to Marvin. Sooo... that's why it ended the way it did!

    6. Beckoning Lyght

    I hope she doesn't get cured, she'll screw up the timeline and probably lose the baby. And when is Marvin gonna stop being so dense?!

    I rather like her as she is, myself; preggo or not! But as we all know, our characters make up their own minds! And there is a reason why he seems dense; that will be covered in the next chapter which I'm halfway working on right now! Two more chapters until the end of this one, however :( But then, it'll be on to the third book in the series!

  20. Review Replies and Discussion for KoKoa B's DC "Verse Stories

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    Posted · Edited by KoKoa_B

    I told you I was going to get back to this, I was closer to the end of the chapter than I realized.

    I like it so far but I can't help but picture the martian as a human. Is there something wrong with my imagination or what? Anyways, so cute him munching on oreos, hope he doesn't get too many crumbs in the bed... :D

    CL Mustafic:

    There is nothing wrong with your imagination! J'onn's earlier features (pretty much pre New 52) are indeed human with the exception of the beetle brow and green skin.

    I tried to provide a link but maybe this will work? 3026607-9939875289-2006M.jpg Let this be a guide as to how he looks. Humanoid but with green skin... half naked....... okay, what were we talking about...?

  23. Danse Macabre - An Original Vampire Story

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    Kendra's the mist and she's coming for payback! Wooooooooo

    I didn't want that to be true (although you meant Kendra is the shadows). But when Estella mentioned Margot, I was like "FUCK"!

    ...... and Vlad knew. Because Kendra would be stalking my Colette... if Colette was within the regular confines of Crimson Hill! But she's not; she's safe and sound in the prison!

    Maybe Colette only snapped a little bit and the rest was somewhat faked so that she would be safe from the shadows. Not to say that she wasn't grieving but I have a feeling that she realized Aleksi wasn't dead earlier than what we're led to believe.

    I have another crackpot theory, though. The shadows are both Kendra and Margot. The kid is one and she's a vampire which should mean that her brain is more advanced than normal, right? So, what if she knew or assumed that Autumn had a hand in her mother's death and is aiding Kendra into torturing her through the shadows? Because why all of the sudden the shadows appear now instead of a bit after her death? Her daughter is of age to understand and manipulate... on top of the notion of her father's "death" as well. Or that Vlad is aiding that as well in Margot.

    That's why Aleksi said to get her away from him.

    The more I think about it, the more it feels like a setup that Vlad planned. If he was truly upset about Niki killing Aleksi, Niki would've been dead instead of turned, no matter what he was promised!

  25. really!?

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    I just want to add that you have no idea why that story was deleted and therefore you are only assuming things. What it basically boils down to is the story and/or author not meeting the terms laid out in the TOS. Definitely not because of the actual content, I can assure you.

    The reason that this site asks for your date of birth is to make sure that you're not a child trying to come into an adult site.

    The admin and the other moderators work hard to ensure that they adhere to the rules that are required for them to run this website. They didn't make up those rules, they only enforce them. However, I am certain that a mod will come by to answer your question although you are being very vague about the situation which makes us assume that it was your own story that was deleted. If that's the case then someone has already contacted you about what needs to be done to correct it. Complaining here will do nothing but make a moderator come by to reiterate.

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