Responses for my story.
Ch. 4
THANK YOU: Alex, kissedbymidnight, and littlemiss76 for reviewing! It made my day!
Kissedbymidnight: This is why I love reviews! They show me where my weak points are.. I meant for Leila to want to meet up again, not go back home. I hope the beginning of the chapter will fix any misconceptions. Thank you again for the feedback!
Alex & littlemiss76: Hehe
Ch. 5
Snow: hehe
littlemiss76: You'll have to wait and see!
missmiakay: YAY! I'm glad I make you excited lol Hope I don't disappoint And thanks for pointing that out.. I noticed it later. When you stare at things for so long, sometimes you don't catch it right away. I think I'm going to go back and do some tweaking when I have time. Thank you for your comment I loved the feedback!
Sunni: Aww... thank you! And yes... yes they did.
addiena saffir: Nope she won't! And you'll have to wait and see! Thanks for reviewing!
Arche De Katze: Thank you! I'm glad you like it
Alex: Thanks for the review! Yup, you'll see more of her one-on-ones in the next few chapters And as for the backgrounds.. you'll see soon! Little plot and a little sex, is what I'm aiming for, hehe
Mrs. Monster: Being a nursing student, I totally feel for you on an entirely different level. I hope it's nothing too serious. I'm really glad I can serve as a bit of entertainment to you Haha.. I write as fast as I can! And thanks for mentioning my other two! Sometimes I wonder if anyone still reads them.
Vixerism: Thanks for the review! And thank you for the compliment! I'm really glad you like it
Ch. 6
littlemiss76: Well yunno.. he was sorta surprised, or aroused, or something o.O Haha.. I changed it a bit after you reviewed. Thanks for the review! I realized I made it seem like she began to shack up in Logan's room completely.. but she's still making the rounds for the most part
Shyann: Let me turn down the lights for you! And welcome! Thanks for the compliment!
Alex: Mayybbeeee, and haha.. I think you must have read it after I tweaked! Cuz it was time-warp weirdness going on there. Thank you for the review!
Kleool: Aww.. thank you! I'm glad I pulled you over to my.. side Thank you for the compliment! I shall attempt to keep the impatience-ness down to a minimum as much as possible.
San59: Thank yoouu for the compliment It made me happy!
Ch. 7
Learia: Thank you for the compliment! I'm really glad you like it. Annndd.. you'll find out in due time!
kissedbymidnight: Thanks for the review!! And that was what I was aiming for As of now, I was kinda leaving Logan more of a mystery on purpose. A bit later on when some stuff is revealed, it will change to being in the boy's POVs more, so you'll get a bit more of their thoughts and personalities... but right now their thoughts would give stuff away.. sooo you'll be stuck in primarily Leila's POV for a while longer.
kain: Thanks for the review! I realize I overdid the time-skips that chapter, lol... but I think if I didn't use them at all, I'd have to shoot myself... and I'd also bore you all to tears! Since her days are pretty much the same, the ones I skipped over anyways But yes.. stories are usually better that follow one timeline. This one is going to likely go over a year though, so sadly, I will be using more.. I'll try to keep em to a minimum
littlemiss: Nooo review allll you want! I won't change it anymore Thanks for the comment! And the daddy mystery won't be resolved for a while!
Shyann: Eep, sorry! I ended where I stopped writing last week for time constraints. I actually didn't realize it was much of a cliffhanger, lol.. Thanks for the review! And sorry for the delay. If I post, it will usually be between Sat-Mon. If I don't get it up on Monday night, it will be another week before I have a chance to do anything. School dominates my week.
San59: Thank you for the review! And haha.. I think it's more to pass the time then for their benefit No worries! Do you google translate my story? I'd be curious how that turns out! lol
Alex: Thanks for the review! And.. silly me I'm glad ya like it!
Luci Matsumoto: Aww.. thank you so much for the compliment. I'm actually really surprised at the reaction I've got from this story. I didn't really think it would go anywhere!
Ch. 8
Vixerism: Thank you for the review!! And yuup I actually really like Cade, I was wondering what people thought of him! Hehe. I love your story too! Been waiting for an update.
Salaphina: Thank you for the review!! I’m really glad you like it and I’m going to try to get back into a habit of regular updates. My life is just so hectic. And yes.. I really like Aaron too Don’t worry! Everything will be resolved in the end… just not sure when that’ll be. As for the lack of enthusiasm, I was just trying to make them sympathetic to her feelings, since she wasn’t too thrilled herself I’ll probably end up going back and doing little edits here and there.. That’s why I love feedback! Shows me where I’m lacking.
Shyann: Working on it! You are one hard one to please.. hehe
Snow: Thanks for the feedback! I’ll work on that, and no offense taken. Please give me more! I’ll never get better if I don’t know what I’m doing wrong.
Anon: Sorry! I posted it but didn’t really like it. So I had to do some edits. Here it is
Ch. 9
San59: Thank you for the review! Here it is!
Shyann: Awww that was super sweet! Thank you so much And Happy early birthday! Hope you like it!
Luci Matsumoto: Thanks for the review! Here it is!
flyingbando: It was all apart of the plan Thank you sooo much for taking the time to review!
Alex: Thanks for the review! Sera will be explained more soon
littlemiss76: Thanks for the review! You'll soon find out
w: Thanks for the review! Here it is!
Learia: Thanks for the review! Awww... thank you so much, it means a lot!
exolove: Thanks for the review! I'm glad I can spread my love of fantasy And I'm glad Cade is getting some love!
Ch. 10
Shyann: Thank you for your compliment!! It was really sweet I’m really sorry for the wait.
flyingbando: Thanks for the compliment! I'm sorry for the wait.
exolove: Thank you for your review!! I apologize for the wait.. and I’m sorry! you’ll have to wait a bit longer to find out who the father is Though I’m curious who everyone thinks it is!
Alex: Thank you for the review! Sorry for the long wait between chapters.
Salaphina: No No.. Thank YOU for reviewing! I looovveee reviews! And I am EXTREMELY appreciative of them Haha.. yeah Cade was a meanie! But I hope I redeemed him. As for Logan, I haven’t done much in-depth characterization with the boys yet… so you’ll haveta wait and see! Sorry for the long wait!
Sienna McLaggen: Thank you for the review!! I tried to come up with my own thing, but a lot has come before me! It’s hard these days to be completely original, but I like my little world And I think it’s my multiple plots that got me stumbling a bit, besides my being busy! I’m sorry for the long wait..
RedQuill: Thanks for the review! I’m glad you find Leila likeable! I was wondering how her portrayal was coming across. And as for the grammar and wording.. I know I have trouble sometimes. And YES! It’s extremely difficult to not overuse phrases. It still needs a lot more edits and changes, and I’ll get around to it eventually.
Anon: Thanks for reviewing!! I wish I had 125 reviews! Lol but 56 are more than I ever thought I’d get! I totally love it! You have to remember, Leila never had any problems with money her entire life, and nor has she ever worked a day in her life, so she doesn’t exactly have an attachment to money the way a normal person might… besides, it was pretty much stolen money, and she never intended to live on her own. She planned to meet up with her family again, so she was just going to live off it until then.. it didn’t have any irreplaceable value to her. Yeah she was angry about it, but it was more the principle of the matter for her. Besides, her grandfather was rather stingy on what he let them spend things on, so she’s used to living on what she gets. Also, they are part animal, with instincts. She's fallen into her innate pack mentality. So the fact they took what was hers doesn't matter anymore, since in a pack setting, everything is shared. Also.. the mating bond is absolute. She knew she was stuck with them either way. As for the five mate thing… and the five potential fathers, you'll have to wait and see. I have plans for it.. Interpret that as you will! But for now, she knows it’s unusual, and she’s not exactly happy about it, but she’s not going to dwell on things that she can’t do anything about.
Ch. 11
Sinfulmind: Thank you so much for the review! I'm very glad you like it! And awww.. thanks! And haha.. yup! She's a lucky girl And I do have it thought-out.. sometimes I just hit some bumps in the road! I have an ending though! Just need to get there
Sienna_McLaggen: Thank you so much for the review! And yes.. Logan has a dark side, but I think we all do to an extent, hehe. And nope, two different stories, two different writers. I don't mind the similarities, I've read it. But thank you SO much for looking out for me! I only post my stories on this site, so if anyone sees them anywhere else, please let me know! I'm soooo paranoid about that.
Vixerism: Thanks so much for the review! Gave a bit more background info.. or a lot, I guess Sorry for the long wait! And your story is fine. Thanks for asking I really enjoy your story.
Alex: Thanks so much for the review! Here are s'more juicy details
NA_Zeno: Thanks so much for the review! And thank you for the compliment. I'm sorry for the long wait! Here it is
Pancreas: Thanks so much for the review! And aww.. I'm really glad you like it. I try to write well, but I know some of my sections are a little awkward.. but my running scenes are areas I'm pretty proud of lol. I know her college goal seems pushed aside for now, but it'll be brought up again soon I'm totally just making up my own pack dynamics.. sorta based off of actual wolf packs and tribal stuff. Thanks for waiting!
Ch. 12
Kain: Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you like it! As for the hunters, yes you will meet them, annndd most likely hate them.
Salaphina: Thanks for the review! I know.. I felt bad doing it. Sorry for making you wait so long!
Dru: Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you like it I guess I did jam a lot in there.. lol
Raven: Thanks for the review! I'm sorry for the long wait.. I honestly don't do it on purpose. My life just sucks right now lol I do this as my stress-reliever, and haven't had much time for it. And yay for Cade having a fan.. I have fun with him lol
Littlemiss76: Thanks for the review! And it was pretty much her only way out, so she took it.
NA_Zero: Thanks for the review!! I've seen you updated, but I haven’t had a chance to read anything yet lol I'm going to try to get to it this week
Jenny: Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you feel connected to it, it's what I was trying for! And aww.. crazy blood moon fan is awesome! Thank you!
Alex: Thanks for the review! Lol that she has.. it's been about a month and a week and a half-ish according to be calculations
Ae: Thanks for the review! Sorry to cut into your sleep schedule.. lol I'm reeaaalllyy glad you feel emotionally connected to all the characters. When I first started this I had no idea what a challenge I made myself with so many main characters. It's a lot easier with just two main characters and then secondary characters but because of the nature of the story, they don't really fall into that category. I'll be switching to more of the boy's POVs from here on out. Thanks again for the review!
Ch. 13
Aj: Thank you for the review!! Did you mean Mezley? Or the girl at the end? (Since that's Leila, just from the boy's POV) Sorry I know I confused some people.. but if you meant Mezley, rest assured.. she's just a once in a while thing Annnddd.. yes, you nailed it, hehe, you'll have to see what happens.
pyonnn: Thank you for the review!! You are so sweet Sorry for the wait! Don't worry.. it may take me a little longer than expected, but I fully intend to finish it.
DewHast: Thank you for the review! I fixed it in that last chapter.. I'll have to go back through the others. Lol I'm not sure why I used that word.. I just let my fingers do the story telling at times
Kain: Thanks for the review! Haha no worries. I take full responsibility.. didn't make a clear distinction. But nope! She's still the only one in her pack at least!
Alex: Thanks for the review! Hehe.. I intended it as a combination of them trying to hide it, and Leila not being observant.. but it's addressed in this chapter! I have a lot of plans for Mezley And you have great insight my friend.
Sienna McLaggen: Thanks for the review!! I'm really appreciative of them I'm so happy you like it! And hehe, I like to hear who people prefer. Not getting much Logan love though! lol
Jenny: Thanks for the review!! Yay! I'm glad you like it Sorry for the wait, I try to get them as quick as I can
Ae: Thanks for the review! And YES! Be my grammar Nazi all you like! I'm terrible with grammar… lol My beta caught those too.. but I had some trouble copying from hotmail and I think I ended up using the draft before she edited on accident. Thanks so much for reading! I'm very glad you like it
MrsMonster: Thanks for the review!!! I shall update now in fact.. haha. I saw your review and decided I may as well update what I have… even though I was gonna try to end on a higher note, but I know it's been a while. I'll save the rest for next chapter. I know I'm waaayyy behind on the Wilds.. I actually am stuck on two scenes that I just can't get satisfied with. But it's SOOO nice to hear people are still interested. Be rest assured! I shall get that story done. I have both this one and that one completely mapped out to the end.. I just need to take it out of outline form.
Sly: I know you reviewed on The Wilds, but you mentioned you read this one too.. so I thought I'd respond here. Like I said with MrsMonster, I'm just kinda stuck.. but I haven't given up! Your review totally made my day.. I really loved those two stories, they were my first two real attempts at writing a story. Don't worry.. they won't be left in limbo. I just got into this funk with it, and nothing that I was writing seemed any good. I started on Blood Moon trying to get out of that funk.. but then I just ended up distracting myself. If I can just get those next few scenes done, the rest of it will be easy to do.. since I have them fully mapped out. After finals I'll be trying to work on both stories.. I can't promise you a time-frame since I'm not sure myself, but I'll definitely be working to get another chapter up. But THANK YOU so much for reviewing it. I can't tell you how much that means to me.