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23 hours ago, Guest Your Biggest Fan said:
Ch 16- hahahaha, that Logan was IN ON THE BET!! And that he felt awkward when he was caught. We never do see him playful with the rest of his brothers. Little Leila was kind of cute, but I much prefer her as an adult. I believe it’s settled later that Gregor was using magic to try and track Leila? Hehe “they aren't as uptight as you seem to think they are” It’s kind of hard to get a read on Joss. He’s the youngest and friendliest, and he’s not obnoxious like Cade, but there’s gotta be something missing that I haven’t gotten about him. It would be interesting to have a section of a chapter (he doesn’t deserve a whole one) in Gregor’s perspective, in a humane sort of way. Just to mess with our minds before we go back to hating him, you know? Play on our heartstrings a little. Maybe he was besties with Sylar and there’s some unspeakably dark betrayal that undid them. Mmm poor Joss. It seems like he tries really hard to do the right thing. By Leila and not just the boys’ side of the pack. Love that Leila could command Cade to put Logan on the phone with such immediate results. Bravo.
Joana’s story will reveal quite a bit about his mindset, so he won’t be as much a mystery with his motives and why he’s the way he is. It will be kinda dark though... I’m going to get around to it since I have it all laid out… I’m just struggling with writer’s block and some other personal stuff in my life right now.
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On 7/29/2018 at 4:02 AM, Guest Charamel said:
So, I will say you good luck with your story, since I can’t read it anymore.
Wattpad is the worst plateform for reader, I can’t read it unlog, and I can’t create an account.
I will be using inkitt too after doing some editing.
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HideAndGoSeek: Again.. thank you SO much for reviewing! I love seeing your comments! I’m sorry for my timing lol Bad girl! Not paying attention to the bride. Sounds like you had some fun though :p Sorry for the delay.. lots happened in the past few weeks, but I’m getting better at getting them up quicker! I’ll have a few more chapters hopefully up this month.
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15 hours ago, Guest CatWhip said:
Hi FHelly,
I’ve been trying to login to the AAF sight to leave you a review but it’s not allowing me to :/ so I thought I would leave you one on here instead!
I started reading Blood Mood last Thursday and I haven’t been able to get myself away from it! I’ve been sucked right in by all the characters and have even been dreaming about them and what may be coming up next for them! I am a massive Logan fan <3 but I also love all the other personalities- Cade is hilarious! Please keep up your awesome work as I am waiting with baited breath for your next chapter
Thanks,
CatWhip
Thank you for taking the time to comment! I love comments! And YAY for some Logan love! Lol I was beginning to wonder if I did something horribly wrong in his character development since most people don’t seem to like him o.o I promise I will finish this! It’s just slow going due to a busy life.
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33 minutes ago, Guest Random Noob said:
Just as a side note, I have reread your story many times (mainly because I discover more each time) but I did notice some spelling errors (affect instead of effect) in some chapters. I really do hope you intend to publish this at some point, the typos are not common but definitely have someone look at it before sending out for publication.
I rarely fall in love with fanfiction in the last few years but you’ve snagged my attention.
Though plot wise part of me wonders if Leila and Quinn’s bond is going to be broken, I actually would hate to see that but seeing her in love with multiple mates would be interesting as well. The one thing that I am curious about: aren’t they due for another Blood Moon soon? It has been around 7 months and it happens twice a year, no? It is going to be interesting what happens this time...
Oh believe me I know there are lots of grammar/spelling errors. I would definitely need someone to look through everything and correct where I messed up on my tenses too. Every once in a while, I try to go to earlier chapters and edit/try to smooth things out that was bad writing. And yuuuupppp Cade mentioned it a few chapters ago, she was pregnant during the December one so she was immune to its affect. Story wise.. this chapter would make it around February 25th, the next Blood moon would be in May/June range. This is how crazy I am with my notes…
Chapter 1: May 17
Chapter 2: Arrived May 20
Chapter 3: May 21
Chapter 4: May 21
Chapter 5: May 21 - May 22
Chapter 6: May 28 - June 9 | 3 weeks pregnant
Chapter 7: June 9 - June 16 | 4 weeks pregnant
Chapter 8: June 16 - June 19 | 4.5 weeks pregnant
Chapter 9: June 19 | 4.5 weeks pregnant
Chapter 10: June 20 - June 23 | 5 weeks pregnant
Chapter 11: June 23 - June 26 | 5.5 weeks pregnant
Chapter 12: June 29 - July 1 | 6 weeks pregnant
Chapter 13: July 1 - July 3 | 6.5 weeks pregnant
Chapter 14: July 2 - Aug 16 | 13 weeks pregnant (3 mo)
Chapter 15: August 16 | 13 weeks pregnant
Chapter 16: August 16, 17 | 13 weeks pregnant
Chapter 17: August 17, 18 | 13 weeks pregnant
Chapter 18: August 22, 23 | 14 weeks pregnant
Chapter 19: August 23 | 14 weeks pregnant
Chapter 20: August 23 | 14 weeks pregnant
Chapter 21: August 23 | 14 weeks pregnant
Chapter 22: August 23 | 14 weeks pregnant
Chapter 23: August 23, 24 | 14 weeks pregnant
Chapter 24: August 24, 25 | 14 weeks pregnant
Chapter 25: August 25 | 14 weeks pregnant
Chapter 26: August 27 | 14 weeks pregnant
Chapter 27: August 31 –September 2 | 15 weeks pregnant
Chapter 28: September 2 | 15 weeks pregnant
Chapter 29: September 4 | 15 weeks pregnant (4 months)
Chapter 30: September 4 | 15 weeks pregnant
Chapter 31: September 4 | 15 weeks pregnant
Chapter 32: September 7 | 15 weeks pregnant (111 days)
Chapter 33: September 14 | 16 weeks pregnant
Chapter 34: December 13 | 30 weeks (7 months pregnant)
Chapter 35: December 13
Chapter 36: December 13 - Birth chapter
Chapter 37: December 13 - December 19
Chapter 38: December 20 - 22
Chapter 39: December 22 - January 5
Chapter 40: January 5 - January 12
Chapter 41: February 12 – February 14
Chapter 42: February 14 – February 17
Chapter 43: February 21
Chapter 44: February 21
Chapter 45: February 21 – February 24
Chapter 46: February 24
Chapter 47: February 24
Chapter 48: February 24 - February 25
Chapter 49: February 25
Chapter 50: February 25
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HideAndGoSeek: THANK YOU so much for your reviews. I love them! Keep them coming
I decided I’m just gonna post when I can, I’m not constricting myself to a certain amount of pages just so I can get some updates up faster. More answers to questions now!
Charamel: THANK YOU for your review! They mean SO much :) I’m flattered you took the time to make one just to review! Thank you. Aaron seems to get a lot of love, I’m going to try to throw his POV in more! And your English was perfect!
Polars: THANK YOU for your review! I’m trying to get them out fast!
Random Noob: Thanks for replying! I am definitely going to throw some more Aaron POVs in, you aren’t the only one asking! Hehe.. i also started posting my stories on Wattpad, so I could enter contests, and the viewers/reviewers there have all collected called for more Aaron, so I see it’s a common theme.
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Hideandseek: Thank you for reviewing! Your question shall be answered now!
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On 5/18/2018 at 11:15 PM, Guest Random Noob said:
I am actually more of an Aaron fan and would love to see more Leila/Aaron interaction but that is just me.
He’s one of my favorites.. but hard to portray how I picture him in my head, as he’s a bit flat-personality wise, more the silent type! But I will try to put some more snippets in his POV. Thanks for your response
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On 5/11/2018 at 11:59 AM, Guest GelaGela said:
Hi~ (⁎⁍̴̆Ɛ⁍̴̆⁎)❤️Love your work... I don’t read fan fiction all too often.. and I am not good at leaving reviews.. I am so glad I came across your work… I just finished reading all of the chapters you have posted so far~ (Blood Moon) and I want you to know that it’s wonderfully written and I am hooked. It’s bad.. It’s past 3:30am.. I just couldn’t stop reading.. and I am devastated there isn’t any more. (´༎ຶོρ༎ຶོ`) I can’t imagine how long the other readers have waited in order to read the next chapter.. ahh.. I know life is hard.. and you must be busy… same here ughh... Anyway, I want you to know you’ve got another fan! And I really hope you’re still writing- I’m in love with everything- the characters, the plot, the craziness… Quinn…Logan… Lots of love!! xoxoxo
I’m sorry I’ve been bad about checking my forum lately. It seems everytime I don’t I get people leaving stuff. I’ve been out of the country. Thank you for your review!! They always make me happy
I really wish I could write faster, but I’m very slow.. I will get this story done though dammit! I have everything mapped out.
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Caserly: Thank you for your review! And omg I would LOVE to read that fanfiction! I don’t think any writing is bad! Lol we all started somewhere, I’ve been writing stupid little stories since kindergarten. I guess I just always had a crazy imagination. I can’t believe it’s been that long! Jeesh, time just gets away from you. I hate that I couldn’t just crank this story out faster, so thank you so much for sticking with me and my busy life! I can’t seem to just make side characters, I have to have whole stories for them as well! And I have a very detailed notepad with all their info lol I’m glad you like them all! Aaron seems to be getting a lot of love lately, I’m glad since he kinda is hard for me to write, as I imagine him to communicate more non-verbally which can be hard to express in type and sometimes I have to make him speak when I don’t want to. I kinda expected my reviews would taper with my lengthy time between posts, but it’s always disheartening anyways, so thank you so much for giving me some feedback
I’m hoping to have the next one out soon
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BabyRacoon91: Thank you for your review!! I’m hoping to have more for you by Thursday.
HideAndGoSeek: THANK you for both your wonderful reviews! I’m sorry for the cliffhangers, I honestly don’t mean to do them, but I try to keep my chapters similar lengths, and when I get to a stopping point, it ends up there. I don’t do it on purpose, I promise I’m no sadist! I’m reading some ongoing stories of my own that torture me too.. so I’m trying! And don’t worry.. now that she isn’t resisting, you will get some fluff! Thank you for sticking with me over the years… since I started writing this thing I’ve got my BSN in nursing, started working full time as a hospital, got married, and now working on my MSN o.O dear lord I didn’t realize how long this has dragged out. It started as a side hobby to help me relax. Those other two stories I know are pretty rough, they were my first attempts lol When I got stuck in the Wilds is when I came up with Blood Moon, and it was always meant to be a short story.. but things kept changing as I wrote and it became the beast that it is. It’s a ridiculous amount of pages in word. It’s at 645 now.
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6 hours ago, Guest Sarah said:
Wanted to poke my head in and say that I also can’t review on the site anymore
, but I check several times a month for updates and am always so ecited to read Blood Moon! Quinn fan over here who has strange Aaron feelings developing, haha, but I’m also so on board with Leila/Logan 
. Love all the pack politics and action happening. Thank you for your lovely writing!
YAY! Some Logan love for once! Haha. I know not a lot of people love him, I don’t know why >.> he’s my little literary baby Thank you for reviewing!
I’m doing my best to get these stories done. I think Blood Moon will have 10-15ish chapters left at tops.. depending on how my brain wants to drag things out.
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Alex,
No problem! Thanks for still reading! It seems a lot of people are having weird stuff happen with their accounts. But use this whenever! I’m doing my darndest to finish my ongoing stories, as the others I want to work on are bugging me too.
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Kylee: Thank you for your review! It really means a lot. I’m flattered by the compliment
Shelley: Thank you for all your reviews! And GAH! I wish I could answer all your questions! I know it’s slow going, but they will be answered! I promise.
Catz33: Thanks for your review! Hehe a Quinn lover. I like him too
Axxm/Your biggest fan: Thank you for your review! I’m sorry its taken so long. Thank you for taking the time to review! Haha.. I like the Emil hate.
Charlie-Bear: Thank you for the review! I’m so glad you liked it!
NLOVE: Thank you for the review! I loved your comments. 1) Lol I know Logan is an ass, but to me.. he’s a lovable ass! 2) Well, you MIGHT be onto something there, buuuuttttt slightly off at the same time
3) She’ll be making an appearance soon 4) Yup, he’s a non-lovable ass 5) Hopefully you’ll like this little snippet in this chapter, I pretty much did it because of your review! He’s just very hard to portray correctly, because I imagined him as having a rather flat personality. There have been times I put things in his perspective but had to delete it because it just didn’t work the way I wanted it to.
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Thirdly: THANK YOU for the review! You made my days when you reviewed J And I had been feeling pretty down those days too. My hubby is from a small town in VA and they had like.. no rules for graduation haha.. so that’s what I was basing it off of! Granted, he graduated a while ago. So things most likely changed. And men never think it’s their fault! Lol. Rapey bastard is a good term for him *nod* I’m glad you liked the content of my strange smutty mind! And that is a great description of Aaron
Thank you for the reviews!
XalicatX/Ali: THANK YOU for the review! They make me so happy. Everything in my life is busy but good! I really don’t leave you hanging on purpose, I’m trying to write as quickly as I can, but I also don’t want to put out writing I have to force. I like your interesting insight J
Shelley: THANK YOU for the review! On both Blood moon and the Wilds. The last part of your review sounded kind of like those trailers for ‘next week’s episode’ I loved it. As for the Wilds, I’m working hard to get it done! I figured you’d like a bit of Synael’s demise
I should have the next chapter out soon.
ETERNALLOSTLOVE: THANK YOU for the review! I’m really flattered J Reviews make me so happy, thank you for taking the time to do so. Sometimes I know I kind of get carried away with characters, my brain just pops em out and I shove em into the story somewhere, though I do it mostly to try to further the story, some being more important than others.. and some are kind just there to be sacrificed in my mind lol. I’ll try to add reminders, I’ve been slowly going back and editing each chapter and trying to smooth out parts that are awkward. And I am so happy that everything that was in my head came together in your insight. As far as the Atarn, thank you for pointing that out! I realized I never explained ‘Atarn’ is ‘grandfather.’ And as far as pairings.. I’d love to know who you’re interested in knowing about!! I actually have an alternative universe with these characters (well.. not so much ‘alt’ as original, since before I got obsessed with Spartacus I had a different version) that I have been working on, on and off to finish. It involves one character’s death changing the fate of nearly everyone in the story, including Equeo never losing his wings. Honestly, I could write and write and write until you’re sick of seeing the characters lol I have so much stuff pop into my head during sleepless nights. I wouldn’t be opposed to doing lil single chapters dedicated to certain characters after the fact in an ‘epilogue’ style. As far as publishing, I am actually working on a sci-fi novel I really want to publish. It’s slow going though, but someday! The last part of your review almost had ME crying J Thank you. I pour a lot of myself into my stories and I try really hard to make them relatable even in a fantasy setting. I’ll be honest, sometimes I make myself cry too lol My husband thinks I’m nuts. ‘Why are you crying?’ *As I type* ‘Cuz I’m being mean to my character right now,’ ‘well then.. don’t?’ ‘I have to’ ‘why?’ ‘just cuz’ à real convo hahahaha. Anywho.. I appreciated your review! Thank you! I promise I will get this darn story done this year. No more taking so long.
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Thirdly: Sooo.. I cannot tell you how much entertainment you are giving me lol! I was working last night (I’m a night shift nurse) and I was exhausted, checked my email and got a huge kick out of your reviews. They made my night! Rapey bastard.. lol. THANK YOU for that!! Please keep it up! I LOVE the feedback!
Also, I shall elaborate my response when I’m not half dead from sleep deprivation.
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Shelley: THANK YOU for your review! I appreciate you sticking with me. I’m really going to try to get back into writing, been kind of crazy busy and nothing I wrote was worth anything.. but feeling a little more into it lately. Going to try to take advantage
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Anon: THANK YOU for your review!
Ali: THANK YOU for your review! I appreciate them so much
I love hearing your feedback! I am sorry again for how long it takes me to update, but I have a lot of things on my plate right now. I’m trying to get the next one out soon!
JheneJhene: THANK YOU for your review! Reviews mean so much to me
It really does help inspire me to keep going. I have the next chapter mostly written, so I will definitely have to fit your Cade request in on the next one! I am flattered you made an account just to review Thank you!
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Ali: Thank you for the review! Gosh.. it took me some time to catch up on responding. About the sex thing, it hurts my head trying to do those scenes now, especially cuz of the jealousy thing! And the punch was oddly satisfying to write
Kelldell: Thank you for your review! I am impressed you read it all in one day lol it's like.. 549 pages narrow margins in word. O.O Never realized it had got so big. I'm really trying to finish it, I promise I will!
Woot-Wooting: Thank you! And yup, still kicking for now! Thank you for all the wonderful compliments.. as for publishing, still not so sure. I have been kinda looking into it though.
Shelley: Thank you for your review! Hopefully this chapter will do some good for your frustrations! Lol Oi, it frustrated me plenty getting it to the point I could at least post. Dunno why it gave me so much trouble. I have way too much fun doing flashbacks. I can't tell you how many I've had to cut just cuz it ruined the flow.. then I just keep trying to find places to put them lol. Anyways, thank you for hanging in there.. i know it takes me forever.
Your biggest fan: I know! I'm so sorry. Thank you for your review. I'm really going to try to finish this story, it's been hanging in my head for far too long and I keep thinking of more stuff to do with it but I just need to cut myself off and focus on what I originally had planned. Blah, easier said than done! But I shall have more soon.
AE: Thank you! It's going.. though I dunno about well lol I'm trying though! I really am.
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Thank you to those who have reviewed, I will respond when I get the next chapter up! I’m sorry for my absence, it’s been a kind of an unfortunate few months for me. After getting married, had a family emergency ontop of going through some health issues myself, plus working as my first year as a nurse. It hasn’t done well for creativity. I have been having serious writer’s block, but I’m back to working on it again, so don’t worry.. I’m still here.
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Woot-Wooting: Thank you for your review! I will give you an ending! I promise.. it just might take a while! Having a full time job + part time job is rough!
Quinn fan: Thank you for the review! And I know I have to spread the love around more.. sometimes, it’s just hard, but I shall try!
Amazed: Thank you for the review!
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So sorry for my hiatus. I got married last Thursday and my life up until the wedding was kind of nuts. I’m glad it’s over! But I’m back now and will be trying to get these next chapters out quickly.
Shelley: Thank you for your review! I’m hoping to get more of her story out there soon
Ali: Thank you for your review! I love it when I see one pop up
Especially when I’m having trouble.
And to all my anonymous reviewers.. thank you!
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NIV: THANK YOU so much for your flattering review! It definitely made my day
And yes, I am in the states! California in fact, so Happy Fourth to you too!! I'm working tonight, tomorrow and Tues, so can't do much (night shift) but YAY for time in a half! So I'm not complaining too much lol Believe me, I know how auto correct is
I have my fair share of fights with it, I knew whatcha meant!I was kind of wishy washy whether or not to post that.. sometimes I literally have scenes in my head and just type them out for my own sanity, all my side stories are basically just that.. me typing out scenes as they randomly come into my head. Some of that chapter was written back in 2012, and other bits and pieces all along the way. The second part is a little dark, but I got to wait a bit before posting it because it has some spoilers for later chapters in the main story.
As for Castel.. I'm glad he came across how I wanted! A good daddy. I actually have a good amount of his story mapped out too.. lol Ugh, I think I can keep pumping side stuff out until the end of time. My brain doesn't let me just make some random side character, I have to have their whole life story in my head as well!
As for the writer's block, I don't know what it is with me. Sometimes it flows like crazy, other times I am literally forcing each sentence, and then I hate it all and scrap it. It's happening now with this next chapter in the main story. I can't seem to focus on it.. so I'm taking a break and working on side story stuff for a bit, since that seems to help.
It means so much as an author when someone says they can relate to your characters, so thank you! I'm so happy that is coming through the way I intended
I try to be as close to real life (with the werewolfy supernaturally stuff) as possible lol I'll be honest, a lot of Cade's material in particular, along with a bit of Joss and Quinn's and a few other male characters have come from things my brothers and fiance have said lol especially while their gaming or fighting with each other. -
Shelley: THANK YOU for the review!! Sorry for the late response. I'm trying my best to kind of give some closure to things before moving on, so I'm glad it's coming across that way
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I’m so sorry for the late reply! I’ve been kinda crazy busy with home life/work stuff. 2018 was not a good year for my family. I’m glad to be leaving it behind. I’m really determined to get this story finished this year. Thank you so much for all the comments… I actually think I might start posting it all here again. I kinda overreacted to a stupid thing from a friend and also didn’t want to have to deal with multiple sites… I have been updating on wattpad.