spiralbreeze

This is actually happening to me about beginning a story in the first place. Someone on the forums requested a rape fic with Misty, and I got this idea to write it in a poem after I had seen "The Song of Lunch." Hearing Alan Rickman's voice of course would convince anyone they could write a brutal and garish story containing the rape of an 11 year old by a 10 year old. Thus, I have been debating it for some time now, to the point where I open a new document on Pages and chicken out. The sad thing is, it's not necessarily the content, although it probably should be, for me it's capturing the beauty of the poetry within the context of the rape. At least I think that's what I mean. When I post it, I want people to say, wow, that's beautiful, but sick.

Oh my god, I just read this, and I've actually wanted to get someone to do this with my stories! I used to read them to my friends in high school cause we had nothing better to do.

And so, another chapter has been posted for your reading pleasure. And I hope you do find it pleasurable, because it certainly was writing it! Here is the link: http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600052428&chapter=7 Just a reminder that it's chapter 6, cause the first was the prologue. Please read and review, and thanks so much for doing so!

Hi! I just added a new chapter, number 5. I hope everyone likes it. Please review! http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600052428&chapter=6

Wow, what a job description! I can definitely use the information you gave me, thank you so much. Also, I have the perfect scene figured out to use the song in. I had never heard it before, but it was so sweet, and the scene automatically popped into my head. Thanks again, the next chapter will be out tomorrow. Hope you enjoy it!

I can't thank you enough for your review. I was scared that you might not like what I did at all! The other request that I took up never even got reviewed by the person who issued it! So I was so happy that you liked it! Quite honestly you made my whole day yesterday, I was doing laundry, and it was freaking cold out, and then I looked at my iPhone while stuff was drying and check my mail, and bam! I was all smiles. I had honestly forgotten how truly gratifying it is for someone to review and like a story I've written. It's also funny that you said you're a welder, because that's actually kinda the job I was thinking for Ash. I want him to be the dude that builds Pokéballs. In my imagination it would require some type of welding or metal smithing as well as electrical work. I want him it to be a low level position where he's sitting on an assembly line just attaching tops to regular ol'Pokéballs, not even specialty ones! The pay would be shit, and of course all types of I'm-a-teenage-parent-who's-not-ready-for-this crap ensues. Also on a personal level, I'm a young mom who's baby's daddy left. So I find it interesting to explore what would happen if Ash and Misty stay together and what problems they would have, of course the number one being money troubles. Adding Tracey to the mix was something else I decided to do, first off, because I like Tracey, he's the nice guy who's smart, and get's taken advantage of and I've always imagined him as the bisexual guy, who is loved by women, but has a curious/limited experience with them and had mostly taken company with men, who probably to a certain extent use him for sex because he's the nice guy. So Tracey has some demons. Anyway, thanks again and let me know what you think of my ideas and if you can perhaps describe what type of tool would be used to make a round metal electrical device with a shrink ray that would only require a few day's training or learn as you go, and if you can't keep up, you're fired.

Happy New Year everyone! Please enjoy the next chapter of my fic. Thanks in advance for those reviews as well as ratings. Here is the link: http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600052428&chapter=5 Just some info, the first chapter is the prologue, so I'm really up to chapter 4 now. Have fun reading!

Hi, I just figured I'd post this here to let everyone know I have a new Pokémon story. This was in response to a challenge on the forums. The challenger wanted a more true to life Pokémon story where Ash has to get a normal job after getting Misty pregnant. Well, me being me, I had to make it a bit more complicated than that. So please read and find out just what I have in store for our favorite heroes. Author: Spiral Breeze (that's me) Title: It Wasn't Supposed To Be This Way Summary: While Ash is touring the world as a Pokémon Master, Misty finds she is pregnant and must take care of herself, the last thing she wants is to destroy the dream Ash is living. Feedback: Anything you want to say, say it. If you love it, tell me, if you hate it let me know. If you'd like me to fix something, say so. Fandom: Pokémon Pairing: Ash/Misty, Tracey/Misty Warnings: AFFO, Angst, ChallengeFic, Exhib, Fingering, HJ, M/F, Oral, Preg, Solo, Toys, WIP, WS URL: http://anime.adultfa...hp?no=600052428 I've read a few posts from male writers saying that there was a lack of M/F stories, so here you go. Also if you're not a fan of Ash's recent traveling companions, this story is for you too! Thanks in advance to those of you who take the time to read and review. Also I've been posting every Sunday, and I'm going to try to stick to that schedule. Ciao!

I forgot to post the link to it, so here it is, even though it is now several months old, and I think that I have to edit a few typos. http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600051561

Hi, just letting you know that I posted it. http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600052428 Hope you like it, maybe you can let me know what else you'd like to see.

Hi, years ago I had a series of fics about Ash getting Misty pregnant. I never finished them, because I lost the manuscripts (I wrote them all on looseleaf paper during highschool). I actually like your idea, and seeing as I'm stuck on my Harry Potter fic, I'll perhaps see what I can come up with. I've always been partial to Giovanni being Ash's father, just works for me. I also have not watched Pokemon in ages, cause after Misty left I couldn't stand all the character changes.

Wow, Rocky Horror you read my mind... see I've actually wanted to write that for a while because someone directed me to a really bad one, and it was literally the entire script written out as: Snape/Frank N furter ... yadayadayada sweet transvestite. It was awful. See I would write the story, but try and stay true to Harry Potter esk dialogue. Yes, Snape would be Frank, because... well, just because it basically writes itself. Anyway, I'd like to have a go at this... but perhaps you could give me a bit more input and direction as to what exactly you'd like to see.

Hey just letting you know I've done the story, one shot. It's called "There is No I in Team" by Spiral Breeze. Hope you like.

Hi just letting you know that I have begun the story and posted the first part. I hope you like it. It's called Waiting, by Spiral Breeze. It wont let me post the link here. But it's under general Harry Potter. It already have over 200 hits, no reviews though. We'll see what happens in a few days when I post the next part.