KerantliDreamer

I knew she didn't sound right as a shape shifter, as for background story, I'll be going into that in the prologue, when I finally get my brain sorted and running smooth enough to concentrate on stories (and spelling apparently)

As the title says, I need help with this character, main (rather basic) bio is here Name; Female - Amanda Cosgrove Male – Gregory Cosgrove Date of Birth; 3rd April 2088 Age; 22 Star sign; Aries Parents; Sue and James Cosgrove Abilities; Willing able to change into a male Friends; Samantha (Sam), Emily (Em), Joe, Craig Interests; Reading, Dancing, Sports, Computer work, Internet, Shopping, Walking, Woods, Dislikes; Body type; Athletic/thin Clothing Style; Female – Skirts ad strap tops, tights and hoodies Male – Baggy jeans and tees Eye colour; Dark Blue Hair colour/Style; Brown, cut short Race; Reason for change; Natural ability, controlled by a birthstone pendant When Change Started; Age 16, few days after birthday, random trigger However, I'm stuck on a "race" (other than shapeshifter) and wondering if the way her "change" is too "out there" or too Mary-sue-ish. Right now it's rather basic, I know, but its just a small idea that I've had, and want the character to be more developed before I delve into the actual story, and this is my first voyage into this whole area of writing... so yeah, please, Help?

Pen Name: Kerantli Dreamer Story Link: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103274&chapter=8 Length: Twitfic Fandom: Original Pairing: N/A Rating: Adult Warnings; NoSex

Pen name - Kerantli Dreamer Story Link - http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103274&chapter=7 Length – Flashfic – 130 words Fandom – Original Pairing – N/A Warnings – RapeFic, violence, Non-Con Rating - Adult++

Pen Name: Kerantli Dreamer Story Link: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103274&chapter=6 Type of Fic: Drabble Rating: Adult Fandom: Original Pairing: N/A Warnings: NoSex

You think my writing is stupid, you tell me I should get out more, but when I ask do to something I WANT to do, that gets me out of the house, you say no. what the hell do you want from me? there is only so much I can take, I want my writing to improve, I want to be able to at least try to get published one day, but being so against it is making me think I should just give up, same when my voice cracks if I've not sang in a while. last night you said I should play on a game instead of talking to people that are writers, I'm not a big gamer! I play games when I'm feeling stressed, I talk to writers to help me. I talk there as I'm not run out by being different, by being me. you don't care that my depression is getting worse, you never even thought to read up on it til I totally broke down, and even then you didn't even properly read up on it. you want to help me? yeah, okay, stop acting like a twat and listen to me when I say I want to do something. just.. please. Let me do something with a published writer doing a course, please.

Pen Name: Kerantli Dreamer Story Link: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103274&chapter=5 Length: Drabble Rating: Adult Fandom: Original Pairing: n/a Warning: M/F, NoSex

One of my own that I honestly wondered what my brain was doing last night ten points for anyone that can explain that ---------- AND another one that someone pointed out to me earlier Yeah, am really sure that should be flesh..

William Gibson, whom I have never actually heard of before.. and if I put my HP story in, I get JK Rowling. and for two other things an Annie Rice, would that really be Anne Rice?

Pen Name: Kerantli Dreamer Story link: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103274&chapter=4 Length: Twitfic Fandom: Original Pairing: N/A Rating: Adult Warnings: Nosex