Thank you, I'll admit that my tagline does call attention well, but I think the problem I personally have with it is that its horribly misleading (although with how many chapters I currently have written, it doesn't seem like it.) With the way it is now, it centers the plot on the catalyst (Cielle) rather than the reaction (An unintroduced character and Rosalie). (Forgive the chemistry metaphor.)
I like my tagline, and I like that it draws attention, and I even like how its misleading, it just doesn't sit well with me.