RogueMudblood: Thank you so much! It was just an incredibly nice way to start my day to read your very detailed and positive review. Your reviews are always so well thought out and your concrit is superb, so I cherish them!
I have to say that I'm often my own harshest critic and when I read older pieces, I do cringe, but this remains one of my favorites, and I'm glad that it was an enjoyable read for you. It's good to know someone else likes my first foray into the realm of flash fiction.
Thanks again!