Karategirl422

Added Chapter 30! This chapter has the next kill in it as well as insight on why the other one will be taking place. Harley gets a break this chapter but when I write the party scene, you wont be dissapointed! The next few chapters coming up will be well worth the wait. The next chapter should be added around Friday but maybe sooner depending how much free time I get this week. Please review or leave feedback if you'd like to. ~`~`~`~`~` Karategirl422 `~`~`~`~`~

I second the motion!

(Gives high-five back!) :clap: lol Great topic with great advice.

Chapter 29 is up. its a filler but leads into the next few chapters that will contain the next killings and some interesting events. I got a little stuck at first but i like where it's going now. So check it out if youd like! Leave feedback if you want, always appreciated. The next chapter should be up either Sunday or Monday since i work alot this weekend. Thanks again for your help jackpot! ~`~`~`~`~` Karategirl422 `~`~`~`~`~

Love this! Very well said and great advice! Writing for the fun of it and for yourself is most important, never lose sight of that by getting hung up on reviews or rates.

Thanks, both are very good points. I think I should just wait to see where the story takes me ang go from there. Maybe it will become clear what to do as it get's closer to that point. Thanks for your opinion, its greatly appreciated.

Hi, I find myself in need for the opinions of others since I am torn between what could be an important decision regarding my story, Summoned. Whether you have read the fic or not, I appreciate any adivce. No prior knoweldge of my story should be necessary for what is troubling me. I've just uploaded the latest chapter, Chapter 28 and as my story is getting closer and closer to the main event (Main character being taken to another world), I need to consider where to take the story in terms of it being a part 2/ sequel or just continue to grow the one story in length. I plan to have a few more 'killing scenes' since murder is a big factor in my story before my main character is taken to the other world in my fic. I think I will have around 3 more deaths but maybe less depending how I plant the next one. Since my story is already nearing 30 chapters, 10-15 more should be enough to get to the main event. What troubles me is that I don't want to end it at the main character leaving her world, I want to continue her story for her possibly returning or not. The plot of that is still in development since its a fairly new idea that has come up since a few loyal reviews have mentioned it. I think it would be good to do since I too feel myself wanting to write about it. The thing is though if something like that should have its own story, like posting a part 2, staring from chapter 1, or to contiue the already posted story to grow to 60+ chapters (Estimate)? Would a longer story be better where I treat the main event like the climax or make a part 2/sequel be the better choice since some super long fics can turn off a reader from giving it a go. A good friend has suggested a part two, but he is supportive of any option I take so I want to see what the readers and fellow writers think. While I understand that I can't please everyone, we are human after all, I work hard on my story and want it to bring enjoyment to readers. What do you think I should do since both idead sound appealing to me? ~`~`~`~`~` Karategirl422 `~`~`~`~`~

Just updated chapter 28 so go have a look. A pretty intenses chapter in my opinion, a lot of emotion from both Harley and Jeff. And of course Slaiden enjoying his power of Jeff. The next chapter should be up either Tuesday or Wednesday. Jungle Drum - I commented about your Review in my AN, thanks for you opinion, I really appreciate it and hope you continue to read my story if you want. ~`~`~`~`~` Karategirl422 `~`~`~`~`~

That's great that you finished the chapter! Even if it is a toughie, I'm sure it will turn out great as you get rolling. Also ice tea and rum sounds good, I might have to try that myself. Good luck with the story! -- Karategirl422 --

Well for me, I stick to one story to finish it to the end before starting another because I dont want one to suffer either. Hence why I only have one published on here but I have several new plot ideas just waiting to get down on paper. I get how it's easy to get stuck on one scene, I can get that way for days before I get it thee way i want it. If you have one published already but not done, you should stick to that story only so you can put all your talent and effort into it. The readers notice when an author really spends time on it or just half a**es a chapter. Juggling more then one or two stories is putting alot of pressure on yourself which can easily be avoided. I think that sticking to one is your best option until its finished or developed enough to where you think you can juggle another. If you get ideas for other fics, try writing a summary down about it and just leave it at that so you can go back to it later and focus on it. That way you remember your idea later and can start developing the plot. I do this myself, three new summaries just waiting to be made into stories but i refuse to touch them until i finish what I started. I treat it like my baby, lol. Hope this helps you a bit. Ill keep an eye our for any stories you post. -- Karatefirl422 --

lol, please do! I hope you enjoy it!

Got Chapter 27 up tonight since I'll be gone the rest of the weekend. Go enjoy the next installment! Leave feedback if you wish! The next update will probably be later this coming week so keep an eye out for it. ~`~`~`~`~` Karategirl422 `~`~`~`~`~

I agree with this. This happens alot on my Original Story I have up which makes me happy to know that there are new readers out there. My last update got two reviews but went up five ratings which were over a few days span so I know different ppl are reading. I'd take a good, detailed review over 5 rates any day but all in all if a lot of ppl are reading and seem to be enjoying it then I'm happy. I write as a hobby and because I get enjoyment from it but also beacuse I want to share my creative mind with others and they can shoose to like it or not. If I review a story I will start off with the generic (love it, interesting story, write more...ect.) but then I'll go into detail of what I like about it whether its the characters, plot or character pairing. If the story is still new with only one or two chapters I'll just be generic but interested then go into detail as they update with more chapters to develope the story. I also think that ppl need to actually Review in their Review, dont just be generic all the time where all the reviews by the person look the same, who wants to see "like it, update soon!" 10 times in a row? Give some feedback, thats why the button is there! I'll appreciate any rewview really but I like the rest of us would like a bit more input to help us improve as writers. After all, we are updating for you, the reader, so show us some love, please?

Chapter 26 is finally up! Go check it out and enjoy! Also, leave feedback if you like. Also, chapter 27 is almost done, one more page to go so be on the look out for mynext update. ~`~`~`~`~` Karategirl422 `~`~`~`~`~

Sorry for the long wait, I'm having some issues getting in touch with my beta sadly. I've decided to post the next chapter by the end of this weekend regardless if I hear from her becuause I've gotten several responses from a few readers to update. While I'd perfer to hold out for my beta I also feel bad by keeping you all waiting since I like to update at least once a week for you all. So keep a look out for the update of chapter 26 soon. On a side note i have chapter 27 half way done so another update should come a few days after if all goes well. Post if yiou have any questions or concerns. ~`~`~`~`~` Karategirl422 `~`~`~`~`~

Chapter 25 is up! Sorry for the wait but me or my new beta couldn't control the weather. (See AN) Enjoy it and look for chap 26 during the week! leave feedback if you'd like! ~`~`~`~`~` Karategirl422 `~`~`~`~`~

I like it so far. It's different but hot. Nice scenes, Im looking forward to where the story goes from here.

Hey JP! Glad you popped the cherry. Maybe i can figure out a way to send you a notification when the next chapter is up. It is done but i recently got a Beta and she will be looking over it. So i should have it up sometime tomorrow! I replied to you review in the next chapter but this way i can reply alot quicker. Karategirl422

Chapter 24 is up! it's a little shorter then some of the previous ones but i'm sure you all will like it. Check it out, please! leave feedback if you'd like! ~`~`~`~`~` Karategirl422 `~`~`~`~`~

Update Chapter 23! Please check it out! It has a nice cliffy at the end for the next interesting chapter that i'm working on! leave feedback if you'd like! ~`~`~`~`~` Karategirl422 `~`~`~`~`~

Chapter 22 is now up! Check it out cut the chapter has a very hot scene that I'm sure you'll all enjoy! Next update should be sometime this weekend. leave feedback if you'd like! ~`~`~`~`~` Karategirl422 `~`~`~`~`~

Chapter 21 is up! It's packed with scenes and is very good in my opinion. Check it out please! leave feedback if you'd like! ~`~`~`~`~` Karategirl422 `~`~`~`~`~

Updated Chapter 20! its just a filler untill the next big scene but enjoy. I should have 21 up in a few days. leave feedback if you'd like! ~`~`~`~`~` Karategirl422 `~`~`~`~`~

Chapter 19 is up! Look for chapter 20 in a few days and please give feedback, i'd appreciate it. ~`~`~`~`~` Karategirl422 `~`~`~`~`~

Hi! I been working on this story for a while now and want to promote it so you can check it out. Title: Summoned Author: Karategirl422 Rating: Adult Summary: When Harley’s friend Jeff summons a powerful demon for revenge on bullies, it’s up to her to stop the bloodshed. But a price must be paid. Never deal with a demon is a lesson learned too late. Bond, D/s, Dom, Language, M/F, MiCD, N/C, Oral, Tort, Violence, WIP Feedback: Greatly welcomed! Fandom: Original URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600101991 I hope you check this out and enjoy it! --- Currently working on chapter 19 --- ~`~`~`~`~` Karategirl422 `~`~`~`~`~