CloverReef

Could try breaking it up, or start with end and work backwards, or make a lousy write through and revise.

Try writing the scene as if you are telling someone what happens in it, in rudimentary terms.  For example: Hinata does this thing with her arms and hands to generate a shit load of chakra that transforms into a protective wall.  Then go back and transform the text into the actual prose that constructs the scene.

thanks for the tips guys. I’m past the scene now. I tend to just keep starting the scene over and over again when I’m struggling, until it feels right, which is clearly an imperfect strategy. I’ll totally try it your way next time. And there will be a next time lol.