mannahpierce

December 1959 Being writing for myself for almost 40 years. Let one friend read one story once. Decided I had to find an audience after passing that '50' milestone. Chose here because I liked some of the fics. Am posting one of my old fics: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600101342 and a new one: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600102093 Enjoying myself greatly.

Topic Title: In the cold of space you find the heat of suns Topic Description: Naruto fanfiction This is my first fanfiction. I have written fiction for myself for forty years (scary thought) but never shared any of it with anyone. Recently I reached my fiftieth birday and decided that I needed to find out if anyone else would want to read it. So I an writing this, which has characters from Naruto in a world that had grown in my head over the last twenty years. I chose this site because I have enjoyed reading so many of the Naruto stories posted here. Title: In the cold of space you find the heat of suns Author: Mannah Pierce Summary: The Uchiha clan was the greatest of the spacer families before they were massarced. To rebuild the clan, the single survivor, Sasuke, must 'walk the way' by starting out with a traditional spacer crew. Can they keep his identity secret long enough for him to survive to adulthood and lead a new Uchiha? How will the fox-boy they inadvertently acquire affect Kakashi's carefully laid plans? Rating: Adult+ Pairings: Various but mainly Kakashi/Iruka and Naruto/Sasuke Spoilers: None – the story shares some plot features with the original but develops differently Feedback: Desired greatly URL: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600102093 Thank you and regards Mannah Pierce

I have posted my first fanfiction on this site over Christmas. I always struggle with titles and this was no exception. One of the reviewers (thank you so much for reviewing) has suggested that the title is putting people off reading the story. It is a Naruto story set in a sci-fi AU. The title I chose was: In the cold of space you find the heat of suns 1. Is the title really bad? 2. Should I change it? I have a few readers who are obviously waiting for updates and I do not want to confuse them. Other questions I have are: 3. Is the Naruto AU/AR category less well frequented? 4. Is a Naruto/Sci-Fi mix always going to appeal to less readers? 5. Does asking people to review help? 6. Do you need to be an established writer on here before lots of people read your fics?