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Review replies for my Celebrity/LotR story, "Improving perfection. Proving imperfection." Here is a link to the photo, that inspired the story: Improving perfection, from Happy Accidents series, by Dominic Monaghan * * * * * Having said that, this story is a reason to visit this subdomain, even for the gun-shy like me. This is a brilliant little gem, an excursion into poetry masquerading as prose, the deft dance of language across the canvas of imagination. You've painted a picture that's beyond vivid, beyond perfection, and I'm completely green with envy over certain turns of phrase. This is honestly one of the most moving flash fics I've ever read, with a world of nuance in such a very few, brilliantly chosen words. This will live in my mind for a very long time, and I'm so glad you decided to share it! * * * * * *SQUEEEEEEEEEEEE* Honestly, I am at a loss for words Thank you so much, Bronxie. I am so happy that I can impress you, and affect you like this with my writing, and I only hope that I will continue to do so in the future.

I made a thing! Author: Darkling Willow. Title: Improving perfection. Proving imperfection. Summary: Short story, inspired by the photo by the same name, Improving perfection, from the Happy Accidents series, by Dominic Monaghan. Feedback: Feedback and constructive criticism very much appreciated. I'll even make a response thread in the forum so I can answer you guys. Fandom: Celebrity/LotR. Pairing: Dominic/Billy. Warnings: AFFO, UST, M/M, Oneshot, Complete, SFW. URL: http://celeb.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094457

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